A/N: OK, deal is, I'm not really happy with this story. It's not going the
way I wanted it. It doesn't help that this isn't usually the kind of stuff
I write so it's hard. I'll still keep writing it, but I'm gonna start over
and think it through more before I continue. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Rora Kuusou-Onaga
WickedSilence: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I shall be fixing it. The reason that the murder is so...bleh...is because I'm not very fond of writing scene's like that, though I love reading them. I guess I'm kinda afraid that I wont live up to everything I've read. Stupid, I know, to think like that. And the part with Cay talking to his father was really hard and I got writers block and found myself just trying to get away from that scene. Thanks again for reviewing.
RiverNeverCeasing: lol, thanks for the tips. I shall work on them
songwithoutwordz: Thanks, I'm really glad someone liked my idea. It always bugged me that no one thought to write something like this. I've seen stories with Cecilia but never with the brothers. Most people forget that Char mentions brothers in his letter to his father. Thanks again.
JediSpirit: Thanks. As I say, you gotta be a Newbie before you can be anything else. I'm really glad you like my characters. Making characters is my favorite part of writing and I'll spend hours coming up with details that are never even mentioned in my stories. It's just so much fun.
EllaFreak: Hey, thanks for reviewing my story. I was afraid no one would like it. I'm not sure if there will be much of Char or Ella. I still don't know much about the story. I'm sure they'll make some cameos though. I'm waiting for the characters to decide. lol. Thanks again for reviewing.
Thanks again everyone. Your reviews have really made my day. I will take into consideration all your tips. And I hope that this story will keep going. Thanks You.
Rora Kuusou-Onaga
Rora Kuusou-Onaga
WickedSilence: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I shall be fixing it. The reason that the murder is so...bleh...is because I'm not very fond of writing scene's like that, though I love reading them. I guess I'm kinda afraid that I wont live up to everything I've read. Stupid, I know, to think like that. And the part with Cay talking to his father was really hard and I got writers block and found myself just trying to get away from that scene. Thanks again for reviewing.
RiverNeverCeasing: lol, thanks for the tips. I shall work on them
songwithoutwordz: Thanks, I'm really glad someone liked my idea. It always bugged me that no one thought to write something like this. I've seen stories with Cecilia but never with the brothers. Most people forget that Char mentions brothers in his letter to his father. Thanks again.
JediSpirit: Thanks. As I say, you gotta be a Newbie before you can be anything else. I'm really glad you like my characters. Making characters is my favorite part of writing and I'll spend hours coming up with details that are never even mentioned in my stories. It's just so much fun.
EllaFreak: Hey, thanks for reviewing my story. I was afraid no one would like it. I'm not sure if there will be much of Char or Ella. I still don't know much about the story. I'm sure they'll make some cameos though. I'm waiting for the characters to decide. lol. Thanks again for reviewing.
Thanks again everyone. Your reviews have really made my day. I will take into consideration all your tips. And I hope that this story will keep going. Thanks You.
Rora Kuusou-Onaga