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Without furtho ado...on w/ the show! Erm...story...


Simply Sixteen – CHAPPIE 5 - "Right Place, Wrong Time"

"BLOODY HELL!" James yelled, now fully awake, pacing and running his hands furiously through his hair and making it look even messier than usual, if that was physically possible, "HOW COULD WE HAVE FORGOTTEN?!"

"Shhh!" Sirius hissed, "You'll wake up the girls! Moony's a big boy. He can take care of himself. I'm sure everything's fine -"

"Oh, and look whose talking, Padfoot!" James growled back, "You're the kind of guy who could jump off Hogwarts' highest tower, and halfway down yell 'So far so good!'"

Peter had woken up and was now muttering incoherently to himself and looking for shiny things about the kitchen.

Kaye was sitting up against the wall and rubbing her eyes. "What the bloody hell am I down here for?" she lifted an eyebrow and looked quizzically at Sirius and James. Then she tilted her head and wrinkled her nose, remembering, and said, "Oh yeah..."

Her eyebrows knitted together and she frowned as she spoke to Sirius, "We didn't...erm...nothing better not have happened..." Sirius just winked at her.

"Get over yourself!" James rolled his eyes at Sirius, "We've got to find Lily!"

"...And Remus..." Sirius reminded James, annoyed.

"Lily?" Kaye stood up and looked around, "Where's Lily? What did you do to her?"

"Ha! James, you seriously need some hair gel!" Sasha was now partly awake, and yawning. She started laughing at her own joke, "Ha! Get it? Sirius-ly, seriously..."

"Shut it, Sasha," Kaye glared at her best friend, "Lily and Remus are gone."

Sasha looked at the guys, "Gone? What do you mean gone? Where to?"

James looked resignedly at Sasha, and sighed, "That's just it. We don't know."


After arriving in the kitchen, and seeing that everyone was getting a bit tipsy, Remus and Lily had decided to go for a walk around the lake. They were halfway around the lake when the silence was finally broken.

"So...err...great night isn't it." Remus said. Lily nodded as Remus mentally hit himself for saying that.

It's the same as talking about the weather! He thought.

Oh god He's talking about the weather, Lily thought.

"A bit cloudy though... you can't see the moon." She said looking up.

Oh god now I'm talking about the weather too! She thought to herself.

Well, it mustn't have been that bad if she's talking about the weather too, Remus half grinned.

They sat down under a tree after walking around the lake in silence for about 20 minutes. Remus, who was sitting with his arms crossed, opened his mouth to talk when he could feel his arm growing. He looked down and saw himself begin to turn brown. His eye's darted to the sky where the full moon was unveiling itself from the clouds.

"Oh shit." He said loudly.

Lily looked at him. "Remus what---- " Lily screamed.

Remus had finished his transformation into a werewolf and Lily jumped back.

"Nice doggy... n-nice..." She whimpered.

It crept closer to her; she looked around looking for some place to run. She decided that the closest place would be the forest and she ran, she was almost there when suddenly she fell onto the hard ground. She rolled over to see the giant brown wolf drooling over her. It was about 6 inches in front of her; about to hurt her or worse when she did the only thing she could think of - she slapped it. The wolf looked away for a moment, and Lily tried to get up. She winced in pain at what she had put her arm down on, a sharp rock. She picked it up and threw it towards the forest with all her might. To her luck, the wolf heard it and ran after it.

Lily took a breath of relief that the wolf was gone. She got up quickly and tried to run but only got out a limp. She moaned in pain of her leg then sat back down. She began to cry, knowing that if she yelled for help she could risk having the wolf come back and also get in trouble for being out of bed.

She looked at the castle doors for what seemed like eternity, hoping they would open, until to her surprise they did. A clump of people stood in front of it.

TEACHERS! She thought. She tried to move away but her leg wouldn't allow her too.

"LILY! REMUS!" She heard them call from a distance.

"Lily, if you want to live, this is your only chance." She said out loud to herself.

"HELP!" she screamed.

The figures began to run towards her, they had almost reached her when she found out who they were. "Kaye, Sasha, Sirius, James!" She smiled.

James ran to her and tried to help her up. She shook her head. "I can't stand." She moaned. Kaye and Sasha came to her next and hoisted her up.

"Where's Remus?" James asked.

Lily looked at her housemates. "He... he's... I don't know. We were sitting and talking when suddenly he said, 'Oh, shit," and he disappeared. I was running to find him when I fell." She lied.

"Hehe, sitting and talking – that's a new name for it," Sirius grinned at James. James shot him an evil glare. Lily was too shaken to notice.

"Erm...well, we'd better get you back up to the castle," Sasha said, glancing at the guys.

"This should be interesting to explain to the nurse tomorrow," James said to Lily, concerned.

Lily shrugged, "I fell off my broom. The pain didn't set in till later, so that's why I didn't come in earlier."

Sirius grinned.

"Good thinking," James said, smiling at Lily and running his hand through his hair.

The girls made their way back up to the castle, and Sirius and James silently watched them till they disappeared through the entrance doors.

Peter was still in the kitchen in the pursuit of shiny things.

James turned to Sirius, "D'you reckon Lily's alright?" he said, worried.

Sirius rolled his eyes at James, "Don't get your knickers in a twist over Lily, Prongs. I promise she'll still be snog-able when she gets out of the hospitable wing." Sirius grinned, "Although seems to me she and Moony have rather hit it off..."

It took all of James' self-restraint not to hex Sirius into oblivion for the last comment. He glowered at the ground as he and Sirius made their way back to the castle, serenaded by Sirius humming to himself a song which sounded oddly like the one he and Kaye had been singing earlier.


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