Hey people, Sorry about not posting, I've been ill. I got my drama exam
tomorrow, SO scared, wish me luck!
Also, I decided to put this chappie as chappie 13. the old chappie 13 is now chappie 14 8)
Chapter 13= A annoying Dad
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TJ walked away from Spinelli's, still thinking of what had happened.
It had been an interesting day, it went from him and Spinelli being civilised, to another argument, to her nearly dieing –and to them now being friends.
"TJ! There you are, where HAVE you been?!" cried Mrs Detweiler.
"Sorry Mum, I've been round Spinelli's all day" said TJ, getting ready to explain what had happened, but being interrupted by Mr Detweiler.
"That's my son!" he said, patting TJ's shoulder.
"DAD!" shouted TJ, losing his temper. "I wish you would stop it! Spinelli almost drowned, I was looking after her."
TJ walked out the room before anyone could say anything. He'd just reached his room, when Becky knocked on his door.
"Oh god, what do you want? Coz I'm really not in the mood for you going on –you're as bad as Dad"
"I was just coming to ask what happened" she said, coming and sitting near me –not asking if she come even come in.
"Well, we were eating, she noticed I was staring at her and got annoyed. She went to swim in the lake, I heard splashing, and looked up, I just saw her going under the water. I dived in, and nearly didn't find her, when I did, she wasn't breathing. After many attempts, she woke up, I carried her into her's, and stayed with her until her parents returned home."
Becky sat in silence, stunned by the story.
"So, you mean you saved her life?"
"Yes. But don't act like I'm some great hero, because it was my fault she went in there anyway."
"You made a mistake, but you corrected it. Does she know you're sorry?"
"Yea, I think we're friends now, I just don't know if its just because she's thankful."
"Well, I suggest you make sure you know if you are really friends" said Becky, before getting up and leaving the room.
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Spinelli gathered her quilt, and began to slowly walk upstairs.
"Ashley, are you okay?" asked Mrs Spinelli.
"Yea Mum, I'm fine."
"Well I hope you thanked TJ"
"Of course I did mum"
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Well, I cant say much, feeling ill at the moment.
I GOT SO MANY REVIEW –THANKS PEOPLE! IT'S MADE ME WELL CHUFFED (Even if I am ill)
Mistress of Balmoral: it sux when you only get deeper –your like, erm let me shut up lol!
angel9220042004: thanks 4 reviewin, soz it took so long to update 8)
beckhans babe: lol, your obsessed with that song now –aint ya? Lol! sorry, but gobbledygook is my 1st language!
Shadw: lmao! Well I hope you don't send them after me for not posting, I would have posted if I was well!
LockDown: who actually does that tho? Lol I should have made him dig himself deeper! Lmao –we love to stand and watch, we laugh at your misfortune! Y ea I know its old, that why I aint really making her suffer, or going into detail. I knew you wouldn't rob the job from me! Yea lol, I know that, I still got upset tho lol!
Becky Lucinda a TJ protecter: Yea, I know what ya mean, I hope your comp gets fixed soon!
spinelli woods, esquire: Glad you liked it, now, finally, I can ready 4 2moz and go bed! lol
Also, I decided to put this chappie as chappie 13. the old chappie 13 is now chappie 14 8)
Chapter 13= A annoying Dad
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TJ walked away from Spinelli's, still thinking of what had happened.
It had been an interesting day, it went from him and Spinelli being civilised, to another argument, to her nearly dieing –and to them now being friends.
"TJ! There you are, where HAVE you been?!" cried Mrs Detweiler.
"Sorry Mum, I've been round Spinelli's all day" said TJ, getting ready to explain what had happened, but being interrupted by Mr Detweiler.
"That's my son!" he said, patting TJ's shoulder.
"DAD!" shouted TJ, losing his temper. "I wish you would stop it! Spinelli almost drowned, I was looking after her."
TJ walked out the room before anyone could say anything. He'd just reached his room, when Becky knocked on his door.
"Oh god, what do you want? Coz I'm really not in the mood for you going on –you're as bad as Dad"
"I was just coming to ask what happened" she said, coming and sitting near me –not asking if she come even come in.
"Well, we were eating, she noticed I was staring at her and got annoyed. She went to swim in the lake, I heard splashing, and looked up, I just saw her going under the water. I dived in, and nearly didn't find her, when I did, she wasn't breathing. After many attempts, she woke up, I carried her into her's, and stayed with her until her parents returned home."
Becky sat in silence, stunned by the story.
"So, you mean you saved her life?"
"Yes. But don't act like I'm some great hero, because it was my fault she went in there anyway."
"You made a mistake, but you corrected it. Does she know you're sorry?"
"Yea, I think we're friends now, I just don't know if its just because she's thankful."
"Well, I suggest you make sure you know if you are really friends" said Becky, before getting up and leaving the room.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::Meanwhile:::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Spinelli gathered her quilt, and began to slowly walk upstairs.
"Ashley, are you okay?" asked Mrs Spinelli.
"Yea Mum, I'm fine."
"Well I hope you thanked TJ"
"Of course I did mum"
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Well, I cant say much, feeling ill at the moment.
I GOT SO MANY REVIEW –THANKS PEOPLE! IT'S MADE ME WELL CHUFFED (Even if I am ill)
Mistress of Balmoral: it sux when you only get deeper –your like, erm let me shut up lol!
angel9220042004: thanks 4 reviewin, soz it took so long to update 8)
beckhans babe: lol, your obsessed with that song now –aint ya? Lol! sorry, but gobbledygook is my 1st language!
Shadw: lmao! Well I hope you don't send them after me for not posting, I would have posted if I was well!
LockDown: who actually does that tho? Lol I should have made him dig himself deeper! Lmao –we love to stand and watch, we laugh at your misfortune! Y ea I know its old, that why I aint really making her suffer, or going into detail. I knew you wouldn't rob the job from me! Yea lol, I know that, I still got upset tho lol!
Becky Lucinda a TJ protecter: Yea, I know what ya mean, I hope your comp gets fixed soon!
spinelli woods, esquire: Glad you liked it, now, finally, I can ready 4 2moz and go bed! lol