Hi um thanks everyone for reviewing. oh and thanks Riley for the paragraph
advice but here's the thing.
I do separate the paragraphs and stuff just like you showed it (unbelievably amazing how exact it was) but when I upload it onto Fanfiction.net it totally screws up my story! I have no idea why it does this and if anyone knows how to fix it PLEASE tell me!!! (By the way I left a message asking about this problem on the end of my last chapter!!!)
Another question and I'm actually hoping for a reply this time. -_- does anyone actually read my massages & questions or am I just wasting space? ( ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
60 SECONDS OF FAME.
"Alright then if it brings on the ladies I'll do the dare." It would help him hopefully.
"Max come on boo, it's a dare and you aint got a choice anyway!" Max took a deep breath "Ok count me in, two weeks isn't even long!" "I can make it 3 if you want boo" OC decided to bring the mood up.
"Whoa no no twos heaps!" Max's mouth was going to get her in trouble one of these days!
"Kids. your dare starts the day after tomorrow."
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The four friends met outside Saperkeyz Bar the next night. Luckily for them it was a fine evening and the storm from yesterday was completely over. Although Sketchy had passed out yesterday and didn't have a clue what the others did the rest of the night, he knew about Alec's dare and that he was suppose to complete today. He didn't know what it was but it sounded interesting since it was in public.
The bar they went to was easily unnoticeable. It was hidden between two run down cafes and all that was showing was a door with stairs leading somewhere. Most people ignored such rough looking places as it usually led to unwanted new friends or unwanted injuries.
As they went up the stairs they finally stated hearing some music. At the entrance, to the main part of the building there was a bouncer. Once they'd entered Alec was surprised. The place looked so shabby from the outside, but inside it was as if the pulse never hit. The place wasn't marvelously beautiful or anything. It just had the comforting necessities of a pre pulse club. It had good design inside too. The owners had good taste and good managing skills. This was very rare these days. Alec was thrilled about this club because when he'd first decided to stay in Seattle he checked out every bar and club in this place picking up ladies here and there but he'd never even heard about this one, a new place was always exciting and full of new action.
There was a small stage up the front of the bar/club. On it was a tough looking girl who was singing some old song of Alanis Morissette's with a guitar. Interestingly enough it didn't sound pathetic and some people did seem to enjoy her song. Although she was up there doing a musical performance, there was light music on in the background.
Once they were comfortable Max told Alec his dare "Ok Alec, your dare is to do a 60 second strip in this club."
"Hmmm that isn't that hard, and check out the hotties in this place! These sugars are going to love me!" he said while inspecting the occupants of the place. At that comment Max just grinned.
"Yep Alec, you're absolutely right" OC said while also looking around. "Especially these ones!"
"One more thing Alec, you get to wear a lovely cowboy costume." Max said cheekily "it's already in the back waiting for you. And when you're in the back ask for Ally, she'll tell you when to go on"
"Sure thing Maxie" and with that he was gone.
"What's the deal Max? Your only making him do it for a minute? That's easy" Sketchy commented
"Sketch, you've never been here before have you?" asked Max
"Nah man didn't even know it existed!"
"Exactly, you want to know why?" Max smiled delaying her answer. "Because this is a Gay and lesbian bar"
Sketchy gasped with his mouth wide open. "But then Alec." without finishing his sentence he burst out laughing. After a little while when he finally finished laughing Sketch asked "Does he know?"
"Nope!" OC and Max said in unison. They smiled at each other humbly.
Meanwhile when Alec had entered the backstage area a gorgeous girl greeted him and introduce herself as 'Ally". He began flirting with her until he noticed she seemed completely uninterested. That's odd thought Alec. Must have a boyfriend or something.
He was given his cowboy costume and a room to change in.
10 minutes later he came out looking VERY western. Ally started giggling when she saw him. "Yeah laugh it up! It's only for a minute though" he said annoyed
"Oh don't worry Alec, I'm sure the occupants will love it!" Ally said.
He walked onto the stage seemingly a very secure guy. "Next will be a newbie" Ally announced.
No one really noticed at first, but when the music started everyone turned to look at him.
Sexy, everything about you so sexy
You don't even know what you got
You really hit my spot
Oh yeah, yeah
Alec started swaying his hips in a cowboy-ish way with his hands on his hips. He followed that by the removal of his cowboy vest very slowly.
And you're so innocent
Please don't take this wrong cos it's a compliment
I just wanna get with your flow
You've gotta learn to let go
He followed that verse with some random cowboy actions, and him pretending to spin an invisible rope. He had a very slick face and he seemed completely un-embarrassed.
In the background you could hear Max, OC and Sketchy laughing for all its worth. They were laughing so hard it almost overtook the music.
Work it a little (oh yeah)
Get hot just a little
Meet in the middle
Let go, just a little bit more (just a little bit)
Gimme just a little bit more
(Just a little, just a little)
Than the chorus came and Alec seductively removed his black and white t- shirt to reveal his perfectly chiseled chest. He got many whistles but couldn't pin point them.
Although his minute was up Alec decided to keep going as the crowd seemed to love him. He could finally get into the groove properly as before he was only trying to do it without looking so uncomfortable in front of Max and giving her the satisfaction she wanted! In fact he could maybe make this backfire on her.
Let me, I'll do anything if you just let me
(Come on baby)
Find a way to make you explore
I know you wanna break down those walls
Alec was still going for some unknown reason which surprised the whole gang. Max showed her confusion by holding up her wrist and pointing to where her watch was as if to emphasis the fact that he didn't need continue. He replied by giving her a slick smile. Then the gang realized he was enjoying it and he hadn't figured out the secret of this place. They shared their conclusion with each other and burst into another fit of laughter.
Yeah yeah
And its so challenging
Getting close to you, what I'm imagining
I just wanna see you get down
You gotta let it all out
Alec was currently onto the task of removing his belt with all the pockets from his waist when he noticed something was a little off. Most of the men in this place were enjoying his performance while the females looked uninterested. In fact they looked disgusted. Then it dawned on him. The furniture, the decoration, the way everyone was acting around here, Why he'd never heard of this place before and finally what OC meant by "Especially these one!"
HE WAS IN A GAY AND LESBIAN BAR!!! And stripping! He stood still like a deer in headlights and for him it was like the whole world went in slow motion.
As the chorus came again he ran into backstage as if hours were passing by panting, with fear evident on his face. Shit Shit I've got to get changed was all he could think. He was already in jeans so he just removed the accessorized cowboy gear and shoved on the T-shirt he was wearing before.
He walked out from backstage hiding his head. Unfortunately for him the males noticed his arrival. They cornered him and started asking for his autograph and his phone number. Max, OC and Sketchy saw him and his new friends and continued laughing. Through the questions and hands tugging on him, Alec somehow managed to make his way over to the gang with the crowd following behind him.
He put his arms around Max, "Sorry guys I'm with her.. Aren't I sweetie?" he asked with a cuddly voice Max was momentarily stunned at the contact but quickly recovered. "Actually."
Alec spoke to her in a voice un-audible to the human ear. "I swear Max, go along with this and I'll let this one go!" Max gave a short laugh and resumed her reply. "Actually. yes he is, sorry people."
The crowd began leaving and returning to their previous spots. While they were leaving you could hear murmurs like "What a waste" and "hmmm and he was cute too".
The other three started laughing again while Alec ushered them out of the door. Once outside he just remained silent. The walked about a block while OC, Max and Sketchy just continued laughing. When they finally settled down they started complaining about sore stomachs from all the laughing. "Serves you right!" Alec commented, apparently still shaken from the night's events.
Sketchy had to turn into a street so left them with one last painful laugh.
One he was gone OC reminded them "You guys remember. My dare starts tomorrow for the two of you." Alec grunted and also went off into a separate street leading to his home. Max and OC also went home, too happy to worry about what tomorrow may bring.
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So this chapter was up a little quicker. woo hoo! Hope the text turns up right this time.
Well review all. Cya
I do separate the paragraphs and stuff just like you showed it (unbelievably amazing how exact it was) but when I upload it onto Fanfiction.net it totally screws up my story! I have no idea why it does this and if anyone knows how to fix it PLEASE tell me!!! (By the way I left a message asking about this problem on the end of my last chapter!!!)
Another question and I'm actually hoping for a reply this time. -_- does anyone actually read my massages & questions or am I just wasting space? ( ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
60 SECONDS OF FAME.
"Alright then if it brings on the ladies I'll do the dare." It would help him hopefully.
"Max come on boo, it's a dare and you aint got a choice anyway!" Max took a deep breath "Ok count me in, two weeks isn't even long!" "I can make it 3 if you want boo" OC decided to bring the mood up.
"Whoa no no twos heaps!" Max's mouth was going to get her in trouble one of these days!
"Kids. your dare starts the day after tomorrow."
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The four friends met outside Saperkeyz Bar the next night. Luckily for them it was a fine evening and the storm from yesterday was completely over. Although Sketchy had passed out yesterday and didn't have a clue what the others did the rest of the night, he knew about Alec's dare and that he was suppose to complete today. He didn't know what it was but it sounded interesting since it was in public.
The bar they went to was easily unnoticeable. It was hidden between two run down cafes and all that was showing was a door with stairs leading somewhere. Most people ignored such rough looking places as it usually led to unwanted new friends or unwanted injuries.
As they went up the stairs they finally stated hearing some music. At the entrance, to the main part of the building there was a bouncer. Once they'd entered Alec was surprised. The place looked so shabby from the outside, but inside it was as if the pulse never hit. The place wasn't marvelously beautiful or anything. It just had the comforting necessities of a pre pulse club. It had good design inside too. The owners had good taste and good managing skills. This was very rare these days. Alec was thrilled about this club because when he'd first decided to stay in Seattle he checked out every bar and club in this place picking up ladies here and there but he'd never even heard about this one, a new place was always exciting and full of new action.
There was a small stage up the front of the bar/club. On it was a tough looking girl who was singing some old song of Alanis Morissette's with a guitar. Interestingly enough it didn't sound pathetic and some people did seem to enjoy her song. Although she was up there doing a musical performance, there was light music on in the background.
Once they were comfortable Max told Alec his dare "Ok Alec, your dare is to do a 60 second strip in this club."
"Hmmm that isn't that hard, and check out the hotties in this place! These sugars are going to love me!" he said while inspecting the occupants of the place. At that comment Max just grinned.
"Yep Alec, you're absolutely right" OC said while also looking around. "Especially these ones!"
"One more thing Alec, you get to wear a lovely cowboy costume." Max said cheekily "it's already in the back waiting for you. And when you're in the back ask for Ally, she'll tell you when to go on"
"Sure thing Maxie" and with that he was gone.
"What's the deal Max? Your only making him do it for a minute? That's easy" Sketchy commented
"Sketch, you've never been here before have you?" asked Max
"Nah man didn't even know it existed!"
"Exactly, you want to know why?" Max smiled delaying her answer. "Because this is a Gay and lesbian bar"
Sketchy gasped with his mouth wide open. "But then Alec." without finishing his sentence he burst out laughing. After a little while when he finally finished laughing Sketch asked "Does he know?"
"Nope!" OC and Max said in unison. They smiled at each other humbly.
Meanwhile when Alec had entered the backstage area a gorgeous girl greeted him and introduce herself as 'Ally". He began flirting with her until he noticed she seemed completely uninterested. That's odd thought Alec. Must have a boyfriend or something.
He was given his cowboy costume and a room to change in.
10 minutes later he came out looking VERY western. Ally started giggling when she saw him. "Yeah laugh it up! It's only for a minute though" he said annoyed
"Oh don't worry Alec, I'm sure the occupants will love it!" Ally said.
He walked onto the stage seemingly a very secure guy. "Next will be a newbie" Ally announced.
No one really noticed at first, but when the music started everyone turned to look at him.
Sexy, everything about you so sexy
You don't even know what you got
You really hit my spot
Oh yeah, yeah
Alec started swaying his hips in a cowboy-ish way with his hands on his hips. He followed that by the removal of his cowboy vest very slowly.
And you're so innocent
Please don't take this wrong cos it's a compliment
I just wanna get with your flow
You've gotta learn to let go
He followed that verse with some random cowboy actions, and him pretending to spin an invisible rope. He had a very slick face and he seemed completely un-embarrassed.
In the background you could hear Max, OC and Sketchy laughing for all its worth. They were laughing so hard it almost overtook the music.
Work it a little (oh yeah)
Get hot just a little
Meet in the middle
Let go, just a little bit more (just a little bit)
Gimme just a little bit more
(Just a little, just a little)
Than the chorus came and Alec seductively removed his black and white t- shirt to reveal his perfectly chiseled chest. He got many whistles but couldn't pin point them.
Although his minute was up Alec decided to keep going as the crowd seemed to love him. He could finally get into the groove properly as before he was only trying to do it without looking so uncomfortable in front of Max and giving her the satisfaction she wanted! In fact he could maybe make this backfire on her.
Let me, I'll do anything if you just let me
(Come on baby)
Find a way to make you explore
I know you wanna break down those walls
Alec was still going for some unknown reason which surprised the whole gang. Max showed her confusion by holding up her wrist and pointing to where her watch was as if to emphasis the fact that he didn't need continue. He replied by giving her a slick smile. Then the gang realized he was enjoying it and he hadn't figured out the secret of this place. They shared their conclusion with each other and burst into another fit of laughter.
Yeah yeah
And its so challenging
Getting close to you, what I'm imagining
I just wanna see you get down
You gotta let it all out
Alec was currently onto the task of removing his belt with all the pockets from his waist when he noticed something was a little off. Most of the men in this place were enjoying his performance while the females looked uninterested. In fact they looked disgusted. Then it dawned on him. The furniture, the decoration, the way everyone was acting around here, Why he'd never heard of this place before and finally what OC meant by "Especially these one!"
HE WAS IN A GAY AND LESBIAN BAR!!! And stripping! He stood still like a deer in headlights and for him it was like the whole world went in slow motion.
As the chorus came again he ran into backstage as if hours were passing by panting, with fear evident on his face. Shit Shit I've got to get changed was all he could think. He was already in jeans so he just removed the accessorized cowboy gear and shoved on the T-shirt he was wearing before.
He walked out from backstage hiding his head. Unfortunately for him the males noticed his arrival. They cornered him and started asking for his autograph and his phone number. Max, OC and Sketchy saw him and his new friends and continued laughing. Through the questions and hands tugging on him, Alec somehow managed to make his way over to the gang with the crowd following behind him.
He put his arms around Max, "Sorry guys I'm with her.. Aren't I sweetie?" he asked with a cuddly voice Max was momentarily stunned at the contact but quickly recovered. "Actually."
Alec spoke to her in a voice un-audible to the human ear. "I swear Max, go along with this and I'll let this one go!" Max gave a short laugh and resumed her reply. "Actually. yes he is, sorry people."
The crowd began leaving and returning to their previous spots. While they were leaving you could hear murmurs like "What a waste" and "hmmm and he was cute too".
The other three started laughing again while Alec ushered them out of the door. Once outside he just remained silent. The walked about a block while OC, Max and Sketchy just continued laughing. When they finally settled down they started complaining about sore stomachs from all the laughing. "Serves you right!" Alec commented, apparently still shaken from the night's events.
Sketchy had to turn into a street so left them with one last painful laugh.
One he was gone OC reminded them "You guys remember. My dare starts tomorrow for the two of you." Alec grunted and also went off into a separate street leading to his home. Max and OC also went home, too happy to worry about what tomorrow may bring.
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So this chapter was up a little quicker. woo hoo! Hope the text turns up right this time.
Well review all. Cya