At this moment I would like to thank everybody for reading and reviewing
keep it up.
O and thanks Exiled Knight for helping me with that quote(below)
Efficiut Daemones, ut quae non sunt, sic tamen quasi sint, conspicienda bominibus exhibeant (Devils so work that things that are not, appear to men as if they were real)
-Lactantius
Chapter 5. Lights flashed before the titans eyes as they were sucked into a vortex. Strange sounds assaulted there ears while a growing blackness engulfed them(like in willy wonka in the chocolate factory) Robin hit the ground hard knocking the wind out of him, as he twisted around on the ground trying to catch his breath he could tell that he was laying on a pure whit platform. Slowly Robin worked his way up into a standing position catching his breath, Robin scanned the surrounding area noticing that the rest of the titans were sprawled out on the same platform "they must have had a worst landing than I had" Robin said scratching at his hair, slowly one by one the rest of the titans got up.
Circle 5 "Virgil" Raven said looking down at a black boiling spring where thousands of bubbles came up and wraiths in the muck beat and clawed at each other mixing there blood with the dirty black water. "Sister, these are the sullen they did not enjoy Gods gift to them of life and now they are stuck in the marsh of the river Styx with nothing to live for and to be endlessly tortured by there fellow men and burning water, listen and here what they cry" Virgil said answering Ravens question with out her even answering it.
"Sullen were we in the air made sweet by the Sun: in the glory of his shining our hearts pored a bitter smoke. Sullen were we begun sullen we lie in this ditch forever. The tortured wraiths cried there voices gargling in there throats from the muck that clogged them.
Raven and Virgil made there way around the muck until Virgil stopped them at the base of a great stone tower. And at the top of the tower a flame shown.
Chapter 5
"this is different from last time we were here" Cyborg said now standing upright. "Guess Raven decided to redecorate" Beastboy said cracking a joke but only getting evil looks in return from the other Titans. "What is this place" Robin said staring up at the sky which was also a pure white with no flaws. Suddenly a barrage of words hit the titans ears or maybe rather there minds so words as "witch, heathen, evil". "what the" Cyborg yelled stumbling backwards "get out" a commanding voice boomed from the sky "I Joshua Rogers command you to leave interfere not you devils" Suddenly the scenary around them began to change and they were back at Titans tower clutching Ravens mirror.
Hoped you like the fifth chapter ill be continued the fifth circle in the next chapter it's a fairly large circle . O and at this point im guessing this story is going to be around fourteen chapters twenty at most . Happy reading
Mat
Efficiut Daemones, ut quae non sunt, sic tamen quasi sint, conspicienda bominibus exhibeant (Devils so work that things that are not, appear to men as if they were real)
-Lactantius
Chapter 5. Lights flashed before the titans eyes as they were sucked into a vortex. Strange sounds assaulted there ears while a growing blackness engulfed them(like in willy wonka in the chocolate factory) Robin hit the ground hard knocking the wind out of him, as he twisted around on the ground trying to catch his breath he could tell that he was laying on a pure whit platform. Slowly Robin worked his way up into a standing position catching his breath, Robin scanned the surrounding area noticing that the rest of the titans were sprawled out on the same platform "they must have had a worst landing than I had" Robin said scratching at his hair, slowly one by one the rest of the titans got up.
Circle 5 "Virgil" Raven said looking down at a black boiling spring where thousands of bubbles came up and wraiths in the muck beat and clawed at each other mixing there blood with the dirty black water. "Sister, these are the sullen they did not enjoy Gods gift to them of life and now they are stuck in the marsh of the river Styx with nothing to live for and to be endlessly tortured by there fellow men and burning water, listen and here what they cry" Virgil said answering Ravens question with out her even answering it.
"Sullen were we in the air made sweet by the Sun: in the glory of his shining our hearts pored a bitter smoke. Sullen were we begun sullen we lie in this ditch forever. The tortured wraiths cried there voices gargling in there throats from the muck that clogged them.
Raven and Virgil made there way around the muck until Virgil stopped them at the base of a great stone tower. And at the top of the tower a flame shown.
Chapter 5
"this is different from last time we were here" Cyborg said now standing upright. "Guess Raven decided to redecorate" Beastboy said cracking a joke but only getting evil looks in return from the other Titans. "What is this place" Robin said staring up at the sky which was also a pure white with no flaws. Suddenly a barrage of words hit the titans ears or maybe rather there minds so words as "witch, heathen, evil". "what the" Cyborg yelled stumbling backwards "get out" a commanding voice boomed from the sky "I Joshua Rogers command you to leave interfere not you devils" Suddenly the scenary around them began to change and they were back at Titans tower clutching Ravens mirror.
Hoped you like the fifth chapter ill be continued the fifth circle in the next chapter it's a fairly large circle . O and at this point im guessing this story is going to be around fourteen chapters twenty at most . Happy reading
Mat