BLL: It's Blade Lord Lyn, signing in for another chapter of The Land's Beyond.
Soma Krusu: You know what?
BLL: What?
Soma Krusu: How come you get a nickname and I don't?
BLL: Because. I do. I'll give you a nickname if you want.
Soma Krusu: Go for it.
BLL: ... How about Soma?
Soma K- oops, I mean, Soma: OK.
BLL: You are officially... SOMA!
Soma: It's no big deal.
BLL: On to the reviews!
Sword of Seals: I agree, I had to make it dramatic. Oak will be back again, later... *thunder in background*
Angel of Fate 1: I'll keep that in mind, becuase living seems to be a good course of action. *writes in notepad*
JaceanPrime: Don't worry, your character will be here soon. Ethan Windflame is a dragon to, he just hasn't revealed his dragon form. Look at THAT spoiler! But maybe it was a bit obvious, because his SKIN WAS GREEN!
Bunder Black: Because of you, I'm gonna be like J-Lo and P-Diddy, and call myself BLL! Awesome! It's all his fault everybody!
I DO NOT OWN FIRE EMBLEM, AND IF I DID, THERE WOULD BE A ROY'S STORY AFTER YOU BEAT ELIWOOD'S STORY, AND A LILINA'S STORY AFTER HECTOR'S STORY, AND I'D BE RICH, AND THIS PROBABLY WOULDN'T BE A FANFIC BUT ACTUALLY A PART OF THE GAME AND MY VOICE IS STARTING TO HURT SO THIS IS ALL I'M GOING TO SAY!
Also....
I'm glad that people are actually listening to me! Props goes to the creators of the characters DellaSangrae, and Aiden. But for you stubborn people, here it is again:
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And if you do, you'll be in a lot of trouble with... SOMA!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OK? Got it? Good.
Chapter 5: Traveling: Emporer Kez Ch'in, a Saint of Swords
And then, she reemerged. From the green storm, the new Lyndis stepped out.
She had two sheaths now, one for each Katti blade. Her top was also different - instead of just the shirt, she had a samurai like top, with the same black shirt under, but still the slit in her pants as she had before.
The pair walked out together to a ready camp, before Ethan looked at the newly promoted lord.
"It-it's a Blade Ronin!" He exclaimed. (FOOTNOTE:SEE BOTTOM)
"That's what she is now?" Steve asked the Sage.
"Yes, it is a power given to the masters of the sword, and are extremly fast." Replied Ethan.
"I see." Lyn said.
"How do you feel?" Hitomi asked the newly promoted Blade Lord.
"It's really hard to describe," she responded. "My body feels really... light. It's easier for me to move, I feel light on my feel."
"How did you get stronger so suddenly?" asked the cheerful archer, Lalira.
Steve stepped in the middle of the small group. "About a year ago, there was a Dark Druid by the name of Nergal. He would kill people to get their innate energy and grow stronger, taking a person's 'quintessence'."
"What's quintessence? Is it like someone's aura?" Asked Vyper questionly.
"You could say so." replied Steve. "But certain people have massive amounts of quintessence. Such as that dragon. He willingly gave his quintessence to Lyn, to make her more powerful."
The group then proceeded to eat their meal before they began to eat.
As dawn approached, the group packed up, and prepared to head to the Hearth, the city of oriental flames.
"Hey Steve."
"What is it Lalira?"
"Look at my bow."
The bow seemed to be way overused, the string was disconnected, and she was out of arrows. Vyper then approached the tactician.
"Steve, my daggers broke." She said tersely.
"Steve, my daggers broke to." said Hitomi.
"I'm running out of Fimbulvetr." said Micheal.
"So am I." Ethan said.
"OK then, everyone. When we get to the next town, we'll buy some equipment, won't we." said an exasperated Steve.
The company traveled through the massive plain throughout the day. During the early hours of evening, however, an eerie shadow passed through the camp that was set up.
"Did you hear that Steve?" Asked Vyper.
"No. I didn't hear a thing." he replied.
"I heard something too." Said Micheal.
"Look around camp then." Said the tactician.
Micheal and Vyper wandered around the camp, searching for signs of the sound.
"C'mere Micheal."
"What is it?" he asked her.
"Look at that. Is that a hammer?"
Micheal stared at the object inquisitively, not sure at what the item was. "It must be. Maybe someone, or something, dropped it." His ears perked up at another sound.
"Did you hear that, Vyper? That sounded like a whimper."
"It came from over here!" She exclaimed.
The pair walked over to a large underbush, seeing footprints leading to it.
"We know you're in there, whoever you are." Said Vyper.
They watched as they watched a boy, about 14 years old step out from the bush.
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"So, your name is Aiden?" Asked Lyn.
"Yes."
"Why were you here?" asked Steve.
"Because, I needed food. And then I heard you needed help with your broken weapons." he replied.
Steve looked him up and down. He seemed to be a bit younger than he was, 13 or maybe 14 years old. He had chestnut hair and chocolate eyes. He was leanly muscular, and lightly built, not seeming to have much physical strength.
"Help us with our broken weapons?" asked the tactician. "How? Are you a blacksmith?"
"I am but an apprentice, sir, but I still can fix many weapons. I was trained by Piros the blacksmith himself." he boasted.
"Piros!!! The guy who made the legendary Basilikos! The man who made the Ookazi and the Nirvana Blade! You're HIS apprentice!?" exclaimed Vyper, who was extremly excited. This was Piros' apprentice, he HAD to be good. He should be able to fix stuff like a Killing Edge and a Fimbulvetr easily.
"Yes. I'm hoping to make custom weapons of my own." said the apprentice.
"Steve, this Piros must be amazing if he made the Basilikos." Lyn said.
"Yes. Hm... would you like to come with us? We're heading toward Hearth." Said Steve.
"I would," began Aiden, "but there is a problem."
"What is it?" asked Micheal.
"There's a conflict in Hearth right now. The government is fighting an extremly well known and powerful gang, called the DarkSwords. Their leader is known as 'Emporer' Kez Ch'in, who is a Saint of Swords." Aiden said solemnly.
"Saint of Swords is a class?" said Lyn.
"Yes. It's the final stage of a Myrmidon's training." said Ethan.
"Show-off." Micheal said, angry at the Sage for constantly stealing the spotlight.
"We'll do anything we can to help." said Steve.
Thus, the party began to head to the warring city of Hearth....
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Yup, this chapter was a bit shorter than usual, but I need to think of some more ideas. I'll update soon!
Please read AND review!!!
FOOTNOTE: I've decided to change Blade Marquess into Blade Ronin for several reasons.
1) Lyn gave Caelin to Ostia/Hector.
2) How would you describe the female marquess?
3) It made more sense because she's wandering Ryuukusai (THE NAME OF THE CONTINENT) right now
4) It rolls off the tounge easier.
Please, another way you can help is by telling me some 3rd class ideas besides the obvious Archsage, Dark Druid, Blade Lord and Saint of Swords. Maybe it can branch off different ways into the 3rd class. Like a SwordMaster can become a Saint of Swords or a Sword Demon, or a Paladin can either become a Regal Knight or a Champion Rider, or a Nomad Trooper can become a Khan or a Master Horseback, ANYTHING WILL HELP!!!!!!!!
Soma Krusu: You know what?
BLL: What?
Soma Krusu: How come you get a nickname and I don't?
BLL: Because. I do. I'll give you a nickname if you want.
Soma Krusu: Go for it.
BLL: ... How about Soma?
Soma K- oops, I mean, Soma: OK.
BLL: You are officially... SOMA!
Soma: It's no big deal.
BLL: On to the reviews!
Sword of Seals: I agree, I had to make it dramatic. Oak will be back again, later... *thunder in background*
Angel of Fate 1: I'll keep that in mind, becuase living seems to be a good course of action. *writes in notepad*
JaceanPrime: Don't worry, your character will be here soon. Ethan Windflame is a dragon to, he just hasn't revealed his dragon form. Look at THAT spoiler! But maybe it was a bit obvious, because his SKIN WAS GREEN!
Bunder Black: Because of you, I'm gonna be like J-Lo and P-Diddy, and call myself BLL! Awesome! It's all his fault everybody!
I DO NOT OWN FIRE EMBLEM, AND IF I DID, THERE WOULD BE A ROY'S STORY AFTER YOU BEAT ELIWOOD'S STORY, AND A LILINA'S STORY AFTER HECTOR'S STORY, AND I'D BE RICH, AND THIS PROBABLY WOULDN'T BE A FANFIC BUT ACTUALLY A PART OF THE GAME AND MY VOICE IS STARTING TO HURT SO THIS IS ALL I'M GOING TO SAY!
Also....
I'm glad that people are actually listening to me! Props goes to the creators of the characters DellaSangrae, and Aiden. But for you stubborn people, here it is again:
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And if you do, you'll be in a lot of trouble with... SOMA!
DO NOT SIGN UP IN THE FORM OF A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OK? Got it? Good.
Chapter 5: Traveling: Emporer Kez Ch'in, a Saint of Swords
And then, she reemerged. From the green storm, the new Lyndis stepped out.
She had two sheaths now, one for each Katti blade. Her top was also different - instead of just the shirt, she had a samurai like top, with the same black shirt under, but still the slit in her pants as she had before.
The pair walked out together to a ready camp, before Ethan looked at the newly promoted lord.
"It-it's a Blade Ronin!" He exclaimed. (FOOTNOTE:SEE BOTTOM)
"That's what she is now?" Steve asked the Sage.
"Yes, it is a power given to the masters of the sword, and are extremly fast." Replied Ethan.
"I see." Lyn said.
"How do you feel?" Hitomi asked the newly promoted Blade Lord.
"It's really hard to describe," she responded. "My body feels really... light. It's easier for me to move, I feel light on my feel."
"How did you get stronger so suddenly?" asked the cheerful archer, Lalira.
Steve stepped in the middle of the small group. "About a year ago, there was a Dark Druid by the name of Nergal. He would kill people to get their innate energy and grow stronger, taking a person's 'quintessence'."
"What's quintessence? Is it like someone's aura?" Asked Vyper questionly.
"You could say so." replied Steve. "But certain people have massive amounts of quintessence. Such as that dragon. He willingly gave his quintessence to Lyn, to make her more powerful."
The group then proceeded to eat their meal before they began to eat.
As dawn approached, the group packed up, and prepared to head to the Hearth, the city of oriental flames.
"Hey Steve."
"What is it Lalira?"
"Look at my bow."
The bow seemed to be way overused, the string was disconnected, and she was out of arrows. Vyper then approached the tactician.
"Steve, my daggers broke." She said tersely.
"Steve, my daggers broke to." said Hitomi.
"I'm running out of Fimbulvetr." said Micheal.
"So am I." Ethan said.
"OK then, everyone. When we get to the next town, we'll buy some equipment, won't we." said an exasperated Steve.
The company traveled through the massive plain throughout the day. During the early hours of evening, however, an eerie shadow passed through the camp that was set up.
"Did you hear that Steve?" Asked Vyper.
"No. I didn't hear a thing." he replied.
"I heard something too." Said Micheal.
"Look around camp then." Said the tactician.
Micheal and Vyper wandered around the camp, searching for signs of the sound.
"C'mere Micheal."
"What is it?" he asked her.
"Look at that. Is that a hammer?"
Micheal stared at the object inquisitively, not sure at what the item was. "It must be. Maybe someone, or something, dropped it." His ears perked up at another sound.
"Did you hear that, Vyper? That sounded like a whimper."
"It came from over here!" She exclaimed.
The pair walked over to a large underbush, seeing footprints leading to it.
"We know you're in there, whoever you are." Said Vyper.
They watched as they watched a boy, about 14 years old step out from the bush.
___________________________________
"So, your name is Aiden?" Asked Lyn.
"Yes."
"Why were you here?" asked Steve.
"Because, I needed food. And then I heard you needed help with your broken weapons." he replied.
Steve looked him up and down. He seemed to be a bit younger than he was, 13 or maybe 14 years old. He had chestnut hair and chocolate eyes. He was leanly muscular, and lightly built, not seeming to have much physical strength.
"Help us with our broken weapons?" asked the tactician. "How? Are you a blacksmith?"
"I am but an apprentice, sir, but I still can fix many weapons. I was trained by Piros the blacksmith himself." he boasted.
"Piros!!! The guy who made the legendary Basilikos! The man who made the Ookazi and the Nirvana Blade! You're HIS apprentice!?" exclaimed Vyper, who was extremly excited. This was Piros' apprentice, he HAD to be good. He should be able to fix stuff like a Killing Edge and a Fimbulvetr easily.
"Yes. I'm hoping to make custom weapons of my own." said the apprentice.
"Steve, this Piros must be amazing if he made the Basilikos." Lyn said.
"Yes. Hm... would you like to come with us? We're heading toward Hearth." Said Steve.
"I would," began Aiden, "but there is a problem."
"What is it?" asked Micheal.
"There's a conflict in Hearth right now. The government is fighting an extremly well known and powerful gang, called the DarkSwords. Their leader is known as 'Emporer' Kez Ch'in, who is a Saint of Swords." Aiden said solemnly.
"Saint of Swords is a class?" said Lyn.
"Yes. It's the final stage of a Myrmidon's training." said Ethan.
"Show-off." Micheal said, angry at the Sage for constantly stealing the spotlight.
"We'll do anything we can to help." said Steve.
Thus, the party began to head to the warring city of Hearth....
_________________________________
Yup, this chapter was a bit shorter than usual, but I need to think of some more ideas. I'll update soon!
Please read AND review!!!
FOOTNOTE: I've decided to change Blade Marquess into Blade Ronin for several reasons.
1) Lyn gave Caelin to Ostia/Hector.
2) How would you describe the female marquess?
3) It made more sense because she's wandering Ryuukusai (THE NAME OF THE CONTINENT) right now
4) It rolls off the tounge easier.
Please, another way you can help is by telling me some 3rd class ideas besides the obvious Archsage, Dark Druid, Blade Lord and Saint of Swords. Maybe it can branch off different ways into the 3rd class. Like a SwordMaster can become a Saint of Swords or a Sword Demon, or a Paladin can either become a Regal Knight or a Champion Rider, or a Nomad Trooper can become a Khan or a Master Horseback, ANYTHING WILL HELP!!!!!!!!