Wow this is the most review I ever got for one chapter thanks
guys. I'll try to check my spelling, and a huge thanks to shanelover1 I
can't believe I spelled love wrong.
I fixed all the mistakes I picked up on and the ones readers picked up on. Well now on with chapter two.
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How Did I Fall in Love With You?
Over the years Will and I grew to be quite good friends. As for my sister and I, we grew quite distant from each other. I only spoke to her when needed avoided her other wise.
Today Will is going to stop by. I couldn't wait to see him maybe he could stop me from having to go to Norrington's promotion. Norrington has taken a strange fondness to Elizabeth and a likely hatred for me. I'm an out cast thanks to my sister, but I don't mind as long as Will is here, but all that could change for Will too has that strange liking for her.
I heard a nock on the door so I ran down stairs almost tripping because of the bloody dress. A servant had beaten me to the door and answered it.
"H-Hullo Will." I greeted him gasping for breath.
"Hullo to you too," He said with an amused expression.
"It's not funny the dress is out to get me."
"As is every thing else in this little world of ours,"
"Ay love," I smiled.
"Where is your father? I came to see him about this sword I made for Captain Norrington's Ceremony." He asked.
"I'll get for you, but before I go is there any way for you to get me out of going to this ceremony?" I pleaded.
"Sorry Natasha, nothing I could I'm simply the black smith,"
"Oh well, I guess I'll Just have to go." I mumbled while making my way upstairs to find my father. I checked he's room but it was empty except for a servant who was cleaning then I looked in Elizabeth's room, there he was.
"Father," I interrupted them.
"What do you need Natasha?" He asked absent mindedly.
"Mr. Turner is here to see you about a sword." I said quietly.
"I'll be going now." He said excusing him from me an Elizabeth.
I was making my way out side when Elizabeth stopped me. She dismissed the servants, and then walked up to me.
"What do you want?" I asked irritated, not really wanting to speak to her.
"Can't a younger sister just want to talk to her older sibling?" She asked giving me a fake smile.
"Not in our case," I said heading out the door to my own room. She stopped me by closing the door.
"Why do you do this?" She asked.
"Do what?" I asked dumbfounded.
"You distance your self from me from every one the only person you talk to is Will. I can't take it any more your of Nobel birth you should act like it at least once a week." She screamed. "You don't know how embarrassing it is to hear from friends that you go around dressed as a pirate."
"It's always about social status for you isn't. Maybe I want to be a pirate not a, a, a, spoiled Nobel." I left slamming the door on my way out. I got to my room and gathered a few cloths I couldn't take it any more. I wrote a letter to my father and left. I didn't know where I was going all I knew was that I was going to get out of this place. On my way out the back door I grabbed an apple and left. I walked out the gate my head bowed down that's when I ran into a tall figure.
"Natasha?" It was Will.
"Yes?"
"What are you doing here?"
"Running away from home,"
"Why?"
"Cause."
"Is that an answer?"
"It could be." I smiled while looking up at him.
"Could it?"
"Yes. What with all these questions?"
"I care."
"Well that's one in a billion." There was a moment of silence.
"Nat there is millions of people that for you?" He said putting a hand on my shoulder.
"Yeah sure," I said sarcastically.
"I'm sure your father cares.."
"About Elizabeth.." I finished his sentence.
"And about you too,"
"He cares more about Norrington." I said running away from Will. He knew not to follow me.
I walked not knowing where I should go, where I would be welcomed. Just keep walking, where ever my feet would lead me.
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Thanks for reading please review.
I fixed all the mistakes I picked up on and the ones readers picked up on. Well now on with chapter two.
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How Did I Fall in Love With You?
Over the years Will and I grew to be quite good friends. As for my sister and I, we grew quite distant from each other. I only spoke to her when needed avoided her other wise.
Today Will is going to stop by. I couldn't wait to see him maybe he could stop me from having to go to Norrington's promotion. Norrington has taken a strange fondness to Elizabeth and a likely hatred for me. I'm an out cast thanks to my sister, but I don't mind as long as Will is here, but all that could change for Will too has that strange liking for her.
I heard a nock on the door so I ran down stairs almost tripping because of the bloody dress. A servant had beaten me to the door and answered it.
"H-Hullo Will." I greeted him gasping for breath.
"Hullo to you too," He said with an amused expression.
"It's not funny the dress is out to get me."
"As is every thing else in this little world of ours,"
"Ay love," I smiled.
"Where is your father? I came to see him about this sword I made for Captain Norrington's Ceremony." He asked.
"I'll get for you, but before I go is there any way for you to get me out of going to this ceremony?" I pleaded.
"Sorry Natasha, nothing I could I'm simply the black smith,"
"Oh well, I guess I'll Just have to go." I mumbled while making my way upstairs to find my father. I checked he's room but it was empty except for a servant who was cleaning then I looked in Elizabeth's room, there he was.
"Father," I interrupted them.
"What do you need Natasha?" He asked absent mindedly.
"Mr. Turner is here to see you about a sword." I said quietly.
"I'll be going now." He said excusing him from me an Elizabeth.
I was making my way out side when Elizabeth stopped me. She dismissed the servants, and then walked up to me.
"What do you want?" I asked irritated, not really wanting to speak to her.
"Can't a younger sister just want to talk to her older sibling?" She asked giving me a fake smile.
"Not in our case," I said heading out the door to my own room. She stopped me by closing the door.
"Why do you do this?" She asked.
"Do what?" I asked dumbfounded.
"You distance your self from me from every one the only person you talk to is Will. I can't take it any more your of Nobel birth you should act like it at least once a week." She screamed. "You don't know how embarrassing it is to hear from friends that you go around dressed as a pirate."
"It's always about social status for you isn't. Maybe I want to be a pirate not a, a, a, spoiled Nobel." I left slamming the door on my way out. I got to my room and gathered a few cloths I couldn't take it any more. I wrote a letter to my father and left. I didn't know where I was going all I knew was that I was going to get out of this place. On my way out the back door I grabbed an apple and left. I walked out the gate my head bowed down that's when I ran into a tall figure.
"Natasha?" It was Will.
"Yes?"
"What are you doing here?"
"Running away from home,"
"Why?"
"Cause."
"Is that an answer?"
"It could be." I smiled while looking up at him.
"Could it?"
"Yes. What with all these questions?"
"I care."
"Well that's one in a billion." There was a moment of silence.
"Nat there is millions of people that for you?" He said putting a hand on my shoulder.
"Yeah sure," I said sarcastically.
"I'm sure your father cares.."
"About Elizabeth.." I finished his sentence.
"And about you too,"
"He cares more about Norrington." I said running away from Will. He knew not to follow me.
I walked not knowing where I should go, where I would be welcomed. Just keep walking, where ever my feet would lead me.
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Thanks for reading please review.