Well, I seemed to be getting so really good reviews for my story, so far,
except for the one from "ryan", I have to say that there are some things
that don't match up perfectly with the way the characters normally are, but
then this is a comedy, you have to remember that I'm not going for some
kind of deep realism here.
I hope that you are all enjoying this story because I am real enjoying writing it and I'll keep at if you all want me to.
Oh yeah, special thanks to everyone who reviewed my fic and told me what they thought; especially Rio Tank P- who's fic inspired me to get off my but and write this. And to Shannon, who was nice enough to talk at length about my story; as for your request of having Queen Shelia in it, consider it done, I was thinking of putting her in, and since you would like to see that, I'll go on ahead with it. And also to everyone one else who left me a review-
Thanks,
Bojack727
BREATH OF FIRE 3: UP IN SMOKE!
Chapter Two: Typical Morning after scenario.
Well, here he was, the Worren was lying there naked, under the covers, with the last person he ever would have expected- Momo. He glanced down at her sleeping form- her long hair was hanging down around her, cascading in copper-colored strands across her body, the dark red a startling contrast against the pail, smooth skin of her slender body, hanging down over the curves of her form. It was surprising to him, realizing that he actually found her physically attractive.
Yet, for all that it was worth, it was still more then likely too good to be true, and this would probably only serve to further estrange their relationship. But Rei know that he had to do, he had to fess up to her and take what ever the outcome was.
He reached down and gently shook her shoulders. "Momo?" He said to her softly as she gently nudged her
She eventually began to react, the first thing that she did was to yawn and then make a very contented sigh as she started to stretch, showing off the small fangs in her mouth as she yawned again. She then smiled, without opening her eyes, and rolled onto her back. "Hmm." She mumbled as she finally started to open her eyes. She looked at him, and didn't react for a few moments, but once the various wheels and gears got up to speed in her mind, she started looking confused. She looked even more confused when she saw that Rei wasn't wearing his head band or vest. She then peeked under the blanket at her naked body and her pale cheeks suddenly stained a dark crimson color.
Rei didn't have a chance to move out of the way of her fist and his turned to the side, causing him to rub his cheek where the stinging impression was under his fur.
Momo sat up, but then saw that the blanket fell off of her, showing off her chest to Rei. She scooted back against the side of the tent and rapped herself in the blanket.
Rei noticed that Momo stared at him just briefly and then turned her head away from him. He looked down and realized he was naked and quickly grabbed his boxers and slipped them on.
Momo cringed and looked down at the ground. "Oh god, what does this all mean, how could I do something like this.?" She exclaimed. "What kind of person am I?" She wailed out load and started crying. But, then, she looked up and Rei and her eyes narrowed. "You, how could you take advantage of me?!" She exclaimed.
Rei scratched the back of his head. "I'd tell you if I could remember how." He replied. "Wait. maybe that wasn't the best way to phrase it." He stated, making a stupid grin in an attempt to appease her.
But then, Momo just started crying. "What kind of person am I?" She said to herself out loud, through sobs.
Momo's tears slowed down as she noticed that someone was holding her. Rei? He had his arms around her and had pulled her up against him. Momo sobbed for a moment longer and then stopped and looked up into Rei's green eyes. She hadn't expected this; he was being so sweet to her. it was kind of confusing for her. Momo blushed slightly at being so close to Rei when she was naked like this. and feeling kind of vulnerable...
Rei soothed her and finally spoke. "Momo, you're not a bad person." He said, looking into her crimson eyes with his green ones. "We both made a mistake. but. we shared something. special, and I don't want to just walk away and act like nothing happened." Rei informed her.
Momo looked up at him, she was speechless. She just leaned her head against his chest for a moment. "Rei. you're never what you seem to be, just when I think I know you." She began. "You surprise me, with something like this." She said, smiling as she looked up into his eyes. She smiled and kissed him gently. She then got up, her long copper-colored hair poured down as she stood up, the long dark strands hanging around her body.
Rei looked up at her. "Do you want me to leave while you get dressed?" He asked her uncertainly. Momo looked over her shoulder as she kneeled down to retrieve her clothes. She smiled at thought. "That's okay, Rei, after what happened. it would be _illogical_." She said with a smiled as she slipped on her "underwear" and the grey top on.
***
Rei stepped outside and walked over to Momo, who was sitting in front of the fire with her legs crossed. He handed Momo her Scholar's Hat and sat down behind her. He placed his hands on her shoulders. "What are you doing?" He asked her.
"Well," She began. "I was giving some thought to everything that's happened and I think there was something that caused us to. well, do you get what I mean?" She asked, changing subjects.
"Hmm," He said, scratching his head. "Something else?" He asked her in a confused tone of voice.
"Well, as appealing as your _animal charm_ is, I don't think that it's enough to get me in bed with you." She said to him with a smile on her face.
"Hmm, maybe it'll be enough the second time." He replied, smiling and showing off his sharp teeth as he did.
Momo turned around and smiled at him. "Beast, you only think of one thing." She remarked. "But, seriously, do you remember anything unusual at all last night?" She asked him.
"Like what?" He asked.
"Did you pick up anything when you were in the woods, anything different?" She asked him directly.
Rei thought for a while and then remembered something. "Oh yeah, I'd almost forgot, I found this weird plant in woods. I put in the fire." He stated.
"What? That's it; the smoke from the fire did seem weird!" She exclaimed.
"Yeah, I felt all light headed and funny. high.?" Rei remarked.
"Take me to it!" She exclaimed, and then grabbed Rei and kissed him hard.
***
Momo fondled the leaves of the plant and observed the texture and smell of it. "Hmm, powdery consistency, we'd better take this back to the Tower." She said as she looked closely at the green-leafed stem in her pale hand. "Rei, help me carry this stuff, I want to take as much as we can back to the Tower with us so that I can analyze this stuff." Momo instructed him.
"Okay." Rei said, as he ran back to the camp to get something to carry it with.
Rei came back with one of the blankets and they bound it up and filled it up with the plants.
~End of Chapter Two~
So, did you like the fic? Please send me some reviews and let me know what you think. Thanks, bye
-Bojack
I hope that you are all enjoying this story because I am real enjoying writing it and I'll keep at if you all want me to.
Oh yeah, special thanks to everyone who reviewed my fic and told me what they thought; especially Rio Tank P- who's fic inspired me to get off my but and write this. And to Shannon, who was nice enough to talk at length about my story; as for your request of having Queen Shelia in it, consider it done, I was thinking of putting her in, and since you would like to see that, I'll go on ahead with it. And also to everyone one else who left me a review-
Thanks,
Bojack727
BREATH OF FIRE 3: UP IN SMOKE!
Chapter Two: Typical Morning after scenario.
Well, here he was, the Worren was lying there naked, under the covers, with the last person he ever would have expected- Momo. He glanced down at her sleeping form- her long hair was hanging down around her, cascading in copper-colored strands across her body, the dark red a startling contrast against the pail, smooth skin of her slender body, hanging down over the curves of her form. It was surprising to him, realizing that he actually found her physically attractive.
Yet, for all that it was worth, it was still more then likely too good to be true, and this would probably only serve to further estrange their relationship. But Rei know that he had to do, he had to fess up to her and take what ever the outcome was.
He reached down and gently shook her shoulders. "Momo?" He said to her softly as she gently nudged her
She eventually began to react, the first thing that she did was to yawn and then make a very contented sigh as she started to stretch, showing off the small fangs in her mouth as she yawned again. She then smiled, without opening her eyes, and rolled onto her back. "Hmm." She mumbled as she finally started to open her eyes. She looked at him, and didn't react for a few moments, but once the various wheels and gears got up to speed in her mind, she started looking confused. She looked even more confused when she saw that Rei wasn't wearing his head band or vest. She then peeked under the blanket at her naked body and her pale cheeks suddenly stained a dark crimson color.
Rei didn't have a chance to move out of the way of her fist and his turned to the side, causing him to rub his cheek where the stinging impression was under his fur.
Momo sat up, but then saw that the blanket fell off of her, showing off her chest to Rei. She scooted back against the side of the tent and rapped herself in the blanket.
Rei noticed that Momo stared at him just briefly and then turned her head away from him. He looked down and realized he was naked and quickly grabbed his boxers and slipped them on.
Momo cringed and looked down at the ground. "Oh god, what does this all mean, how could I do something like this.?" She exclaimed. "What kind of person am I?" She wailed out load and started crying. But, then, she looked up and Rei and her eyes narrowed. "You, how could you take advantage of me?!" She exclaimed.
Rei scratched the back of his head. "I'd tell you if I could remember how." He replied. "Wait. maybe that wasn't the best way to phrase it." He stated, making a stupid grin in an attempt to appease her.
But then, Momo just started crying. "What kind of person am I?" She said to herself out loud, through sobs.
Momo's tears slowed down as she noticed that someone was holding her. Rei? He had his arms around her and had pulled her up against him. Momo sobbed for a moment longer and then stopped and looked up into Rei's green eyes. She hadn't expected this; he was being so sweet to her. it was kind of confusing for her. Momo blushed slightly at being so close to Rei when she was naked like this. and feeling kind of vulnerable...
Rei soothed her and finally spoke. "Momo, you're not a bad person." He said, looking into her crimson eyes with his green ones. "We both made a mistake. but. we shared something. special, and I don't want to just walk away and act like nothing happened." Rei informed her.
Momo looked up at him, she was speechless. She just leaned her head against his chest for a moment. "Rei. you're never what you seem to be, just when I think I know you." She began. "You surprise me, with something like this." She said, smiling as she looked up into his eyes. She smiled and kissed him gently. She then got up, her long copper-colored hair poured down as she stood up, the long dark strands hanging around her body.
Rei looked up at her. "Do you want me to leave while you get dressed?" He asked her uncertainly. Momo looked over her shoulder as she kneeled down to retrieve her clothes. She smiled at thought. "That's okay, Rei, after what happened. it would be _illogical_." She said with a smiled as she slipped on her "underwear" and the grey top on.
***
Rei stepped outside and walked over to Momo, who was sitting in front of the fire with her legs crossed. He handed Momo her Scholar's Hat and sat down behind her. He placed his hands on her shoulders. "What are you doing?" He asked her.
"Well," She began. "I was giving some thought to everything that's happened and I think there was something that caused us to. well, do you get what I mean?" She asked, changing subjects.
"Hmm," He said, scratching his head. "Something else?" He asked her in a confused tone of voice.
"Well, as appealing as your _animal charm_ is, I don't think that it's enough to get me in bed with you." She said to him with a smile on her face.
"Hmm, maybe it'll be enough the second time." He replied, smiling and showing off his sharp teeth as he did.
Momo turned around and smiled at him. "Beast, you only think of one thing." She remarked. "But, seriously, do you remember anything unusual at all last night?" She asked him.
"Like what?" He asked.
"Did you pick up anything when you were in the woods, anything different?" She asked him directly.
Rei thought for a while and then remembered something. "Oh yeah, I'd almost forgot, I found this weird plant in woods. I put in the fire." He stated.
"What? That's it; the smoke from the fire did seem weird!" She exclaimed.
"Yeah, I felt all light headed and funny. high.?" Rei remarked.
"Take me to it!" She exclaimed, and then grabbed Rei and kissed him hard.
***
Momo fondled the leaves of the plant and observed the texture and smell of it. "Hmm, powdery consistency, we'd better take this back to the Tower." She said as she looked closely at the green-leafed stem in her pale hand. "Rei, help me carry this stuff, I want to take as much as we can back to the Tower with us so that I can analyze this stuff." Momo instructed him.
"Okay." Rei said, as he ran back to the camp to get something to carry it with.
Rei came back with one of the blankets and they bound it up and filled it up with the plants.
~End of Chapter Two~
So, did you like the fic? Please send me some reviews and let me know what you think. Thanks, bye
-Bojack