Alright I haven't put the first chapter on the net yet but I'm going to
start... I will be putting it on tonight or tomorrow and I will watch to see
what you all will say but I don't want to get behind.
This is my second posting on fanfiction.net and I want as many reviews as you can give. I will truly appreciate this because without advice no one will learn. I have noticed that I'm not so much as a humorous writer I'm more of a serious writer. Is that all right? Geez I'm such a nervous wreck... LOLOLOL I just need to do the best I can and yall just give me what yall think. Well see you on the flip side.
(((((((((((((((((( Slandered disclaimer I do not own any character of Trigun... like the owner of Trigun would come on fan-fiction and start writing fan-fiction about his own story.... . however the character Hope is mine. (((((((((((((((((
(( ïï²ï©ï§âï® ((
Chapter 2: Hope's Ultimate Crush!
Vash had been walking for a little while before realization hit him and he thought, "What if this is a trap?"
Hope turns slightly and gave him a kind smile
Vash grins back as he then again realizes, "I at least owe her she's done a lot for me." Tears came down his cheek as he stopped and nodded in agreement to himself.
Hope laughs as she watched him and she takes his hand a blush slowly creeps up both of their cheeks. She shakes her head and chuckles, "Come on! We are almost there!"
Vash laughs as he gets yanked forward.
Hope runs to an old building and unlocks it. Then she opens the door and walks in and watches with curious eyes as Vash walks in without a worry in the world. Then she starts to wonder again, "Can this be Vash the Stampede? If he is he sure is too trusting?"
Vash walks in slowly and he winces when the door gets shut behind him.
Hope notices this and she nods her approval as she looked around the small dingy office but she didn't want anything up there, with that she walked to the bookshelf and opens a hidden pathway.
Vash ignored the warning signs as he noticed Hope descend some stairs and then he started but of course him being he hits his head on top of the entrance. Hope shakes her head and laughs softly as she jogs back up and takes him by the hand and makes slowly starts back down the stairs. This settled him down slightly and he grinned scratching his nose as he followed her nervously.
Hope hears the passageway door close then she saw her lab.
Vash was starting to get cold feet when he saw all the needles and medical supplies that you would see at a doctor's office but also a huge table in the middle with straps and a huge light above it. He was starting to get cold feet... Alright more then cold feet he was on the edge of panic, "Are you sure this is safe?"
Hope sighs as she led him to a chair, "I'm doing this for you." She looked hurt as she led him to a chair to have him sit down. "I have done this to no one else and let no one else know I could do this... Your lucky you know." She sat him down and gave him another smile and she took out a knife and slowly started to cut around her wrist.
Vash gasps in horror and he started to move to stop her but something in the glare she gave him made him stop and then he mutters in terror, "Won't you kill yourself?"
Hope shakes her head as she tears the flesh off just like it had been a glove. She stifles a cry but watches as Vash's eyes widen when he sees the metal hand moving.
Vash slowly moves his hand out and his fingers slowly moves across the metal fingers and true understanding came to his eyes, "This is amazing!" Then he brought his hand back and rubbed his fingers together his eyes going wide, "W . . What... Is this blood?"
Hope nods her head with understanding, "Yes that's the reason why you can't really see the difference. My arm looks just as real as any other person because the skin is alive." She reaches over and picks up the knife showing him the blade was hot. "That stops the blood flow."
Vash blinks slowly because he didn't understand this next question, "Then how do you grow it back? It's difficult is it not?"
Hope blinks and shakes her head as she walks over to the counter and grabs a syringe with the red saline solution. Then just above the skin she gives herself the shot and the skin regenerates over the metal exoskeleton. With tears going down her cheeks she looked up from her hand, "Do you have any guns built in your arm?"
Vash's eyes go soft as he reaches forward and wraps his arms around her and pulls her close. She wanted so badly to just cry into his shoulder from the pain she just caused herself but she didn't allow herself the luxury but she did blush.. She slowly backed away as she wet her lips and looked to Vash with a questioning look, "Now do you or do you not?" Vash nods his head as he switches into his sub gun.
Hope looks blankly at the hand and she realizes thinking to herself, "This is Vash the Stampede!" Her eyes harden slightly but she kept that same easy smile as she moves him to lay on the table and then she moves the mask over to his face. "This is going to be a long process. I promise to add a few things you will like... Also a new sub gun!"
Vash nods with a kind smile and her heart just melts... she couldn't keep that steel gaze and she realized that she was blushing she felt like a teenager girl again out with the boy that her father told her not to be with. Then she realized she had a crush on this person and she shook her head as she put the mask over his mouth and watch him slowly slip under and during that whole time with his kind blue eyes on hers.
Hope smiles when she saw them go blurry and then slowly close. She brushes his hair away from his forehead and she kisses it with a dreamy look in his eyes as she taps her wrist twice and a thin screwdriver comes out... She takes it out and puts it in a tray and she also grabs a scalpel. She puts it on a table and she slowly cuts Vash's shirt off and when she saw his scars her eyes softens more she could fix that. When she got the shirt off she got on the shoulder and started to unscrew the arm and when she finally got it off she threw it to the side with no problem. She got some more syringes and a blue solution and started to get to work.
Meryl looks around the apartment with questioning eyes as she sat down on her bed, "I wonder where Vash is? I hope he didn't already skip town." She felt annoyed because she didn't want Vash to see them so early.
Millie sat next to her and gave her a hopeful smile, "Oh Meryl Mr. Vash is alright you saw so yourself. Isn't that what you were most worried about?"
Meryl smiles and slowly nods but quickly put on a stern face, "Well we must find him soon... The bartender saw him leaving yesterday with the doctor so he might of gotten hurt."
Millie looked down at her with suspicious eyes but she didn't say anything as she puts an arm over Meryl shoulder, "It's alright Meryl I was going by their yesterday coming back from getting pudding and I saw him going down a staircase with that doctor."
Meryl blinks, "What do you mean a staircase?"
Millie shrugs, "I might have been dreaming because I was eating the pudding cause I couldn't wait to get home because I was having a real sweet tooth, but I could of sworn that I saw them going down a staircase through the book shelf."
Meryl nods her head with understanding, "As soon as it gets dark again we are going to check her office out... I don't want to disturb anything that is going on." Meryl was honestly starting to get jealous.
Millie gets determined, "No Meryl we are going now!"
Meryl blinks, "You gotta be kidding me it's in the middle of the night and we haven't slept."
Millie gets a determined look on her face, "We haven't gone all this way to worry about Vash and not see if his alright."
Meryl nods her head as they both get up and grin, "Alright let's go make sure Vash is alright!"
Millie laughs as she starts to get ready.
Meryl smiles warmly at her friend... there was no closer friend out there and she really loved Millie a lot and then she looked outside and wondered what Vash was doing.
Liyalai Lindor,
The following review has been submitted to: Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 2
From: Hungry()
EVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVIL!
BURN IN MY LOVE/VASH/MERYLLOVE STORIES FLAMESS !
A/N Such happiness... Great... You sure gave me a confidence boost. Sighs sadly Mean people... Well anyway! SMILES BIG I'm giving Meryl Jake.. You'll understand later... and It's a match made in heaven honestly!
Liyalai Lindor,
The following review has been submitted to: Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 1
From: Ruler of was great for your first story, Ms. Mel. GREAT JOB!
A/N THANKS! At least someone appreciates a creative mind!
Alright that was the second Chapter of Vash Meets Hope The Third Chapter of Vash Meets Hope issssss
Meryl's Jealously
This is my second posting on fanfiction.net and I want as many reviews as you can give. I will truly appreciate this because without advice no one will learn. I have noticed that I'm not so much as a humorous writer I'm more of a serious writer. Is that all right? Geez I'm such a nervous wreck... LOLOLOL I just need to do the best I can and yall just give me what yall think. Well see you on the flip side.
(((((((((((((((((( Slandered disclaimer I do not own any character of Trigun... like the owner of Trigun would come on fan-fiction and start writing fan-fiction about his own story.... . however the character Hope is mine. (((((((((((((((((
(( ïï²ï©ï§âï® ((
Chapter 2: Hope's Ultimate Crush!
Vash had been walking for a little while before realization hit him and he thought, "What if this is a trap?"
Hope turns slightly and gave him a kind smile
Vash grins back as he then again realizes, "I at least owe her she's done a lot for me." Tears came down his cheek as he stopped and nodded in agreement to himself.
Hope laughs as she watched him and she takes his hand a blush slowly creeps up both of their cheeks. She shakes her head and chuckles, "Come on! We are almost there!"
Vash laughs as he gets yanked forward.
Hope runs to an old building and unlocks it. Then she opens the door and walks in and watches with curious eyes as Vash walks in without a worry in the world. Then she starts to wonder again, "Can this be Vash the Stampede? If he is he sure is too trusting?"
Vash walks in slowly and he winces when the door gets shut behind him.
Hope notices this and she nods her approval as she looked around the small dingy office but she didn't want anything up there, with that she walked to the bookshelf and opens a hidden pathway.
Vash ignored the warning signs as he noticed Hope descend some stairs and then he started but of course him being he hits his head on top of the entrance. Hope shakes her head and laughs softly as she jogs back up and takes him by the hand and makes slowly starts back down the stairs. This settled him down slightly and he grinned scratching his nose as he followed her nervously.
Hope hears the passageway door close then she saw her lab.
Vash was starting to get cold feet when he saw all the needles and medical supplies that you would see at a doctor's office but also a huge table in the middle with straps and a huge light above it. He was starting to get cold feet... Alright more then cold feet he was on the edge of panic, "Are you sure this is safe?"
Hope sighs as she led him to a chair, "I'm doing this for you." She looked hurt as she led him to a chair to have him sit down. "I have done this to no one else and let no one else know I could do this... Your lucky you know." She sat him down and gave him another smile and she took out a knife and slowly started to cut around her wrist.
Vash gasps in horror and he started to move to stop her but something in the glare she gave him made him stop and then he mutters in terror, "Won't you kill yourself?"
Hope shakes her head as she tears the flesh off just like it had been a glove. She stifles a cry but watches as Vash's eyes widen when he sees the metal hand moving.
Vash slowly moves his hand out and his fingers slowly moves across the metal fingers and true understanding came to his eyes, "This is amazing!" Then he brought his hand back and rubbed his fingers together his eyes going wide, "W . . What... Is this blood?"
Hope nods her head with understanding, "Yes that's the reason why you can't really see the difference. My arm looks just as real as any other person because the skin is alive." She reaches over and picks up the knife showing him the blade was hot. "That stops the blood flow."
Vash blinks slowly because he didn't understand this next question, "Then how do you grow it back? It's difficult is it not?"
Hope blinks and shakes her head as she walks over to the counter and grabs a syringe with the red saline solution. Then just above the skin she gives herself the shot and the skin regenerates over the metal exoskeleton. With tears going down her cheeks she looked up from her hand, "Do you have any guns built in your arm?"
Vash's eyes go soft as he reaches forward and wraps his arms around her and pulls her close. She wanted so badly to just cry into his shoulder from the pain she just caused herself but she didn't allow herself the luxury but she did blush.. She slowly backed away as she wet her lips and looked to Vash with a questioning look, "Now do you or do you not?" Vash nods his head as he switches into his sub gun.
Hope looks blankly at the hand and she realizes thinking to herself, "This is Vash the Stampede!" Her eyes harden slightly but she kept that same easy smile as she moves him to lay on the table and then she moves the mask over to his face. "This is going to be a long process. I promise to add a few things you will like... Also a new sub gun!"
Vash nods with a kind smile and her heart just melts... she couldn't keep that steel gaze and she realized that she was blushing she felt like a teenager girl again out with the boy that her father told her not to be with. Then she realized she had a crush on this person and she shook her head as she put the mask over his mouth and watch him slowly slip under and during that whole time with his kind blue eyes on hers.
Hope smiles when she saw them go blurry and then slowly close. She brushes his hair away from his forehead and she kisses it with a dreamy look in his eyes as she taps her wrist twice and a thin screwdriver comes out... She takes it out and puts it in a tray and she also grabs a scalpel. She puts it on a table and she slowly cuts Vash's shirt off and when she saw his scars her eyes softens more she could fix that. When she got the shirt off she got on the shoulder and started to unscrew the arm and when she finally got it off she threw it to the side with no problem. She got some more syringes and a blue solution and started to get to work.
Meryl looks around the apartment with questioning eyes as she sat down on her bed, "I wonder where Vash is? I hope he didn't already skip town." She felt annoyed because she didn't want Vash to see them so early.
Millie sat next to her and gave her a hopeful smile, "Oh Meryl Mr. Vash is alright you saw so yourself. Isn't that what you were most worried about?"
Meryl smiles and slowly nods but quickly put on a stern face, "Well we must find him soon... The bartender saw him leaving yesterday with the doctor so he might of gotten hurt."
Millie looked down at her with suspicious eyes but she didn't say anything as she puts an arm over Meryl shoulder, "It's alright Meryl I was going by their yesterday coming back from getting pudding and I saw him going down a staircase with that doctor."
Meryl blinks, "What do you mean a staircase?"
Millie shrugs, "I might have been dreaming because I was eating the pudding cause I couldn't wait to get home because I was having a real sweet tooth, but I could of sworn that I saw them going down a staircase through the book shelf."
Meryl nods her head with understanding, "As soon as it gets dark again we are going to check her office out... I don't want to disturb anything that is going on." Meryl was honestly starting to get jealous.
Millie gets determined, "No Meryl we are going now!"
Meryl blinks, "You gotta be kidding me it's in the middle of the night and we haven't slept."
Millie gets a determined look on her face, "We haven't gone all this way to worry about Vash and not see if his alright."
Meryl nods her head as they both get up and grin, "Alright let's go make sure Vash is alright!"
Millie laughs as she starts to get ready.
Meryl smiles warmly at her friend... there was no closer friend out there and she really loved Millie a lot and then she looked outside and wondered what Vash was doing.
Liyalai Lindor,
The following review has been submitted to: Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 2
From: Hungry()
EVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVIL!
BURN IN MY LOVE/VASH/MERYLLOVE STORIES FLAMESS !
A/N Such happiness... Great... You sure gave me a confidence boost. Sighs sadly Mean people... Well anyway! SMILES BIG I'm giving Meryl Jake.. You'll understand later... and It's a match made in heaven honestly!
Liyalai Lindor,
The following review has been submitted to: Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 1
From: Ruler of was great for your first story, Ms. Mel. GREAT JOB!
A/N THANKS! At least someone appreciates a creative mind!
Alright that was the second Chapter of Vash Meets Hope The Third Chapter of Vash Meets Hope issssss
Meryl's Jealously