Well, things have very well for the story so far. I'm very happy with
everyone's reactions to it. I'm glad that so many people are enjoying it.
This story has gotten the best result of all the ones I've written so far.
Also, I just want to comment of this story briefly. The humor isn't as strong in this one because I wanted to focus the romantic elements more in chapter, but don't worry, there will be more humor in the up coming chapters.
Also, I'm so amazed and honored that you people have sent me so many reviews for my story. And, I'd just like to say that "Tokyo20003000" meant to write "played" not "[layed". He was here at my house when he wrote that review and he accidentally pressed the "bracket" key. So, he's not kind of weirdo.
-Bojack
BREATH OF FIRE 3: UP IN SMOKE!
Chapter Three: We finally made it to the Tower!
Rei had tied up the bag full of their "secret stash" and slung it over his shoulder. They would have to get this stuff back to the Tower for analysis in the labs. With any luck, Momo could crack the cell structure of the plant and figure out what made it work so well (?). Science-Paving the way of the future!
Did the plant work as some kind of stimulant. or what was that other word? .Aphrodisiac? (That was it!) Or, was the unexpected "encounter" a simple side effect. not to say that he minded what they had done.
"Hey, Momo, how do you think that stuff affected us like that?" Rei asked her. The Engineer looked at him. "I don't know exactly, it probably has some sort of chemical in it that lowers our minds ability for logical thinking. that makes us act so weird." She said, sighing out loud. "But, no matter what happens, I will never stray from my duties as a scientist and pioneer of the never ending search for knowledge!" She exclaimed, striking a dramatic pose as miniature fireworks set off behind her. As this happened, she became all starry-eyed.
Rei couldn't help but smiled at the unusual display of enthusiasm. "Very moving." Rei said with his eyes closed and his hand at the back of his head.
"You bet it is!" Momo said, striking another pose.
***
And so they went on through the woods till they came to a small stream were they set up the tent they were sharing (no longer minding one another's company at all.).
Momo looked down at the running water, watching the stream trickle by slowly. She smiled as the water moved past her crimson colored eyes. The wind felt good, she no longer had on her long robe on.
Up in the sky, the horizon was turning from blue to burning reddish orange as the sun sank into the ground.
Rei sat down next to her and looked down at the water with her. "What's happening?" He asked her.
Momo looked at him and smiled. "Nothing much really, just enjoying the scenery." She answered him with a smile.
Rei looked deep into her eyes for a moment. "The 'scenery' looks good to me." He remarked, looking into Momo's crimson colored eyes. He then leaned in and kissed her gently on the lips.
Momo trembled as she felt fur on Rei's mouth brushed up against her soft lips. She gasped as she let him slip his tongue into her mouth and explore it. Momo slid in her tongue and could feel his fangs as she did. Rei finally lifted his lips slowly away from hers as he began trailing his lips down her neck.
Momo undid her color to let him get better access to the sensitive skin near her collarbone. Momo let out a rasping breath as she felt his sharp teeth just slightly glide over his soft, pale skin. Her eyes began to water.
Rei mumbled something as he ran his lips and fangs sensuously down her soft, pale skin. Eliciting a strained moan from Momo as he worked her over. Rei slid a hand under the simple blouse she was wearing and began to massage the sensitive mounds underneath the fabric. (Momo, having rolled up and put away her large robe earlier that day.)
"Rei." Momo managed to say through her moans.
"Yeah?" He said in irritation.
"It's going to get cold tonight; the cold front will be coming back." She said oddly.
"So what?" He said in frustration while he ran his clawed fingertips down the soft flesh of he flat stomach.
"I want _YOU_ to keep me 'warm' tonight." She told him with a longing look in her eyes.
"Hell yeah!" He said, picking her up and carrying her off.
***
The Droid clicked and beeped as it communicated with the other robots in the Tower. Then, off in the distance, it saw the "Mistress", Momo.
The array of Robots watched as Momo and her "accomplice" approached them.
Momo smiled and ran over to the two robots and called out happily. "Drucus! Tiberius! Are you happy to see me?" He exclaimed. The two Tower Droids clicked and beebed as Momo talked with them.
"How can you understand them?" Rei asked in confusion.
"All 'mothers' understand their 'children'." Momo replied with a smiled as she hugged the robots.
"I suppose I should do something with our stash." Rei suggested.
"Right." She replied. She then turned to the robots. "Go tell the others that we're home and to prepare the lab." She instructed the Robots. "WE can use one of the old safes in the lab, it'll be safe there." She replied.
The two Robots beebed and hovered off.
Rei walked over to Momo. "Your 'kids'?" He asked her quizzically.
"I built them and raised them, they're mine." She replied possessively.
"Well, at least I know you'll be a good mother." Rei replied as the two of them walked inside of the Tower and down the main entryway.
"What, what made you think of that?" She asked quizzically. The two of them found their way to an elevator.
"Nothing in particular. It's just that if we keep 'going at it', then I might end up getting you pregnant." Rei said, semi-seriously. He stepped back to let Momo press the buttons for the right level.
"Well, that wouldn't be the end of the world." Momo said, stepping back from the closing door, beside Rei. "If I did have a child with someone, then it would only be with you." She remarked, not looking away from the door.
Rei reached out and took hold of her by the shoulders, causing her to turn around. "Do you mean that, Momo?" He asked her seriously.
She looked deep into his green eyes. "Rei, I feel strongly that I can trust you. I don't know why, but something about you is very genuine; I feel good around you, I feel safe." She said, leaning her head against his chest, causing her ears to stick up in front of his face and tickle his sensitive nose slightly.
Rei looked at her ears as they stood up in front of his face, twitching slightly as Momo stood there, with him. "Momo," He began, while holding her against him. "Whatever happens, I won't leave you, _EVER_." Rei told her while rubbing her on the back gently.
"Thanks." Momo replied, closing her eyes.
***
Meanwhile, back in Windia, a certain princess was completely in the dark about as to what was happening with her two friends. namely, a certain tiger-striped man and a certain bunny-eared woman.
Nina frowned; she was worried about her friends. The damnable silence was unnerving; it could mean any sort of bad omen. They could have gotten in trouble or one of them could have killed the other, it certainly wasn't beyond the scope of possibilities, knowing those two. She began to regret making Rei go with her.
She looked up her favorite blue haired dragon appeared in front of her. "Ryu, what do you think happened to those two?" She asked him.
Ryu shrugged. "Why not contact the Tower; they might know something about their location there." Ryu suggested.
"That's a great idea!" Nina exclaimed, getting up and running off to get the two-way radio she had in her room.
***
Dark Knight Raven looked down at the spot where the Mimerlia Bushes had been. "They're gone." He said to something that couldn't be seen.
"Find them, Raven, find them! The Mimerlia plants can't fall into the wrong hands."
"I know, Master Lore." Raven replied.
~End of Chapter Three~
Well, this one was kind of "limey" if I say so, but it's still in good tastes. Anyway, I am glad that this story is going so well. I hope that I did well with the scenes. I try hard to do well with the romantic elements. I also think that it's important that I am writing this because I want to show a guy can be romantic, as it is that I am a guy who likes to write romantic stories.
Anyway, I'd like to thank Tio, Shannon, Boko, Khoran, and all the others who are supporting me with such wonderful reviews. I just want you all to know that it means a lot to me to be able to read these. Thanks, again
In regards to the next chapter, well it'll be kind of crazy because it will bring Ryu and Nina back into the story. And I suspect that you guys can guess that that will have some surprising results. The cast will also be expanding as the story goes on.
I've also really enjoyed the suggestions that some of you have sent. I may be able to use some of them, so just keep reading and see if any of your ideas appear. (Though I can't promise that I will be able to use them.)
Also, the story will really start picking up in the next two or three chapters. But, I can't say anymore at the time.
And, I'd just like to say that I can't wait for the next chapter of "Untouchable" to be posted. Please hurry up Tio Rank P! I love your story.
So, please send me some reviews and tell me what you thought about this.
By,
-Bojack
Also, I just want to comment of this story briefly. The humor isn't as strong in this one because I wanted to focus the romantic elements more in chapter, but don't worry, there will be more humor in the up coming chapters.
Also, I'm so amazed and honored that you people have sent me so many reviews for my story. And, I'd just like to say that "Tokyo20003000" meant to write "played" not "[layed". He was here at my house when he wrote that review and he accidentally pressed the "bracket" key. So, he's not kind of weirdo.
-Bojack
BREATH OF FIRE 3: UP IN SMOKE!
Chapter Three: We finally made it to the Tower!
Rei had tied up the bag full of their "secret stash" and slung it over his shoulder. They would have to get this stuff back to the Tower for analysis in the labs. With any luck, Momo could crack the cell structure of the plant and figure out what made it work so well (?). Science-Paving the way of the future!
Did the plant work as some kind of stimulant. or what was that other word? .Aphrodisiac? (That was it!) Or, was the unexpected "encounter" a simple side effect. not to say that he minded what they had done.
"Hey, Momo, how do you think that stuff affected us like that?" Rei asked her. The Engineer looked at him. "I don't know exactly, it probably has some sort of chemical in it that lowers our minds ability for logical thinking. that makes us act so weird." She said, sighing out loud. "But, no matter what happens, I will never stray from my duties as a scientist and pioneer of the never ending search for knowledge!" She exclaimed, striking a dramatic pose as miniature fireworks set off behind her. As this happened, she became all starry-eyed.
Rei couldn't help but smiled at the unusual display of enthusiasm. "Very moving." Rei said with his eyes closed and his hand at the back of his head.
"You bet it is!" Momo said, striking another pose.
***
And so they went on through the woods till they came to a small stream were they set up the tent they were sharing (no longer minding one another's company at all.).
Momo looked down at the running water, watching the stream trickle by slowly. She smiled as the water moved past her crimson colored eyes. The wind felt good, she no longer had on her long robe on.
Up in the sky, the horizon was turning from blue to burning reddish orange as the sun sank into the ground.
Rei sat down next to her and looked down at the water with her. "What's happening?" He asked her.
Momo looked at him and smiled. "Nothing much really, just enjoying the scenery." She answered him with a smile.
Rei looked deep into her eyes for a moment. "The 'scenery' looks good to me." He remarked, looking into Momo's crimson colored eyes. He then leaned in and kissed her gently on the lips.
Momo trembled as she felt fur on Rei's mouth brushed up against her soft lips. She gasped as she let him slip his tongue into her mouth and explore it. Momo slid in her tongue and could feel his fangs as she did. Rei finally lifted his lips slowly away from hers as he began trailing his lips down her neck.
Momo undid her color to let him get better access to the sensitive skin near her collarbone. Momo let out a rasping breath as she felt his sharp teeth just slightly glide over his soft, pale skin. Her eyes began to water.
Rei mumbled something as he ran his lips and fangs sensuously down her soft, pale skin. Eliciting a strained moan from Momo as he worked her over. Rei slid a hand under the simple blouse she was wearing and began to massage the sensitive mounds underneath the fabric. (Momo, having rolled up and put away her large robe earlier that day.)
"Rei." Momo managed to say through her moans.
"Yeah?" He said in irritation.
"It's going to get cold tonight; the cold front will be coming back." She said oddly.
"So what?" He said in frustration while he ran his clawed fingertips down the soft flesh of he flat stomach.
"I want _YOU_ to keep me 'warm' tonight." She told him with a longing look in her eyes.
"Hell yeah!" He said, picking her up and carrying her off.
***
The Droid clicked and beeped as it communicated with the other robots in the Tower. Then, off in the distance, it saw the "Mistress", Momo.
The array of Robots watched as Momo and her "accomplice" approached them.
Momo smiled and ran over to the two robots and called out happily. "Drucus! Tiberius! Are you happy to see me?" He exclaimed. The two Tower Droids clicked and beebed as Momo talked with them.
"How can you understand them?" Rei asked in confusion.
"All 'mothers' understand their 'children'." Momo replied with a smiled as she hugged the robots.
"I suppose I should do something with our stash." Rei suggested.
"Right." She replied. She then turned to the robots. "Go tell the others that we're home and to prepare the lab." She instructed the Robots. "WE can use one of the old safes in the lab, it'll be safe there." She replied.
The two Robots beebed and hovered off.
Rei walked over to Momo. "Your 'kids'?" He asked her quizzically.
"I built them and raised them, they're mine." She replied possessively.
"Well, at least I know you'll be a good mother." Rei replied as the two of them walked inside of the Tower and down the main entryway.
"What, what made you think of that?" She asked quizzically. The two of them found their way to an elevator.
"Nothing in particular. It's just that if we keep 'going at it', then I might end up getting you pregnant." Rei said, semi-seriously. He stepped back to let Momo press the buttons for the right level.
"Well, that wouldn't be the end of the world." Momo said, stepping back from the closing door, beside Rei. "If I did have a child with someone, then it would only be with you." She remarked, not looking away from the door.
Rei reached out and took hold of her by the shoulders, causing her to turn around. "Do you mean that, Momo?" He asked her seriously.
She looked deep into his green eyes. "Rei, I feel strongly that I can trust you. I don't know why, but something about you is very genuine; I feel good around you, I feel safe." She said, leaning her head against his chest, causing her ears to stick up in front of his face and tickle his sensitive nose slightly.
Rei looked at her ears as they stood up in front of his face, twitching slightly as Momo stood there, with him. "Momo," He began, while holding her against him. "Whatever happens, I won't leave you, _EVER_." Rei told her while rubbing her on the back gently.
"Thanks." Momo replied, closing her eyes.
***
Meanwhile, back in Windia, a certain princess was completely in the dark about as to what was happening with her two friends. namely, a certain tiger-striped man and a certain bunny-eared woman.
Nina frowned; she was worried about her friends. The damnable silence was unnerving; it could mean any sort of bad omen. They could have gotten in trouble or one of them could have killed the other, it certainly wasn't beyond the scope of possibilities, knowing those two. She began to regret making Rei go with her.
She looked up her favorite blue haired dragon appeared in front of her. "Ryu, what do you think happened to those two?" She asked him.
Ryu shrugged. "Why not contact the Tower; they might know something about their location there." Ryu suggested.
"That's a great idea!" Nina exclaimed, getting up and running off to get the two-way radio she had in her room.
***
Dark Knight Raven looked down at the spot where the Mimerlia Bushes had been. "They're gone." He said to something that couldn't be seen.
"Find them, Raven, find them! The Mimerlia plants can't fall into the wrong hands."
"I know, Master Lore." Raven replied.
~End of Chapter Three~
Well, this one was kind of "limey" if I say so, but it's still in good tastes. Anyway, I am glad that this story is going so well. I hope that I did well with the scenes. I try hard to do well with the romantic elements. I also think that it's important that I am writing this because I want to show a guy can be romantic, as it is that I am a guy who likes to write romantic stories.
Anyway, I'd like to thank Tio, Shannon, Boko, Khoran, and all the others who are supporting me with such wonderful reviews. I just want you all to know that it means a lot to me to be able to read these. Thanks, again
In regards to the next chapter, well it'll be kind of crazy because it will bring Ryu and Nina back into the story. And I suspect that you guys can guess that that will have some surprising results. The cast will also be expanding as the story goes on.
I've also really enjoyed the suggestions that some of you have sent. I may be able to use some of them, so just keep reading and see if any of your ideas appear. (Though I can't promise that I will be able to use them.)
Also, the story will really start picking up in the next two or three chapters. But, I can't say anymore at the time.
And, I'd just like to say that I can't wait for the next chapter of "Untouchable" to be posted. Please hurry up Tio Rank P! I love your story.
So, please send me some reviews and tell me what you thought about this.
By,
-Bojack