Well, here you are, the seventh chapter of "Up In Smoke!". As I promised to
you all, the main plot has begun. So, by the power vested in me as an
Author-I hereby declare "let the games begin!" Everything goes now; I want
feed back and plenty of fan suggestions to use in the story. I have used
some of the suggestions that the fans have sent me.
-Bojack
Breath of Fire 3: Up in smoke
Chapter Seven: A Short Reprieve
Momo walked down the halls of the Tower, the early morning sun cast bright a pink and orange glow through the windows, brilliantly illuminating the pale stone walls and floor. She was wearing a black satin robe and her hair was hanging down her back and beside her face. She yawned and rubbed the sleep out of her eyes.
She stepped into the large room that served as a pantry and kitchen in the Tower, and was surprised to see someone else there already.
Ash turned around and looked at Momo, slightly surprised to see her up so early. He was wearing a long house coat to fight the slight morning chill that pervaded the inner walls of the Tower. He quickly pulled his coat shut when he realized that it was hanging open, exposing his long thing torso and pale skin to the red-head in front of him. "Sorry." He said as he tightened the sash around his coat. "I see I'm not the only one up early." He went on. Setting down the glass he was holding.
Momo made sure to tighten her robe and blushed slightly. "Do you always get up so early?" She asked, trying to get over her embracement.
Ash smiled. "I like to start my day off as soon as possible." He replied. "I thought you might like to know that I was able to convert the some of the samples into powder form. I think that in that state, it can be even more effective. I've also converted some of it into a liquid form." He added.
"What do you plan to do with them now?" Asked Momo, brushing a few strands of copper-colored hair out of her eyes.
"I believe that the in these two new forms, they can be even more powerful, I just need test subjects to try them on." He went on, scratching chin as he finished his sentence.
Momo smiled as he finished his last statement. "What do you think those people that we hired were for?" She asked with a mischievous grin.
Ash smiled. "I like the way you think." He replied.
***
Later that morning.
Ginorelli looked up as the door to his office swung open. He watched as his flunky walked. "What is it?" He asked abruptly.
The room was dark and filled with old furniture and weapons, as well as several paintings and a coat of arms on one spot. There was an inscription at the bottom that read "The World For the Taking".
The man flinched and stepped back. "Don Ginorelli, I am sorry to disturb you, but I have some news that may be of interest to you." He replied.
"Speak up." He instructed him.
"Yes sir, we received a letter stating that someone is setting up operations in the area." He informed him.
"Run that by me again, what did you just say?" He shot back, leaning forward. "Someone is setting up oper-"
"I heard that, you chump!" He shouted. "I was just making sure!" He went on. "Are you sure?" He demanded.
"We can't be sure just yet." He replied, shifting on his feet uncomfortably.
Ginorelli stood up. "Send out our in the area, I wasn't pictures, visual confirmation!" He exclaimed.
"Yes sir, Don Ginorelli!" The man replied obediently as he left the room.
Ginorelli turned around and took out a cigar from his desk. "No one moves in on my turf and gets away with it." He said as he lit the cigar and stuck it in his mouth.
***
Rei was dressed and standing out on the balcony of the room, looking out at the forest beyond the grounds of the Tower. He looked over his shoulder to see Momo come walking up to him.
The two of them began talking about continuing tests with the plants, unaware of the fact that they were being watched.
***
Stan put down his camera and moved along; he had to get photos that proved that this Tower place had a working lab, and that they were actually making something. In all honesty, he had no problem with being a spy. or a peeping tom if necessary. There were some benefits to spying on people.
"That rabbit lady was not a bad looker." He thought to himself with a smile. He'd got some nice pictures of her and that tiger guy.
***
Biggs and Gary lit the fuse to the cannon and ran off to get behind a pile of sand bags with Momo. They had to get back because they didn't know how well the cannon would work. let alone weather or not it would explode!
*BOOM!!!*
The dust cleared and the three of them poked their heads up and looked up over at the giant bull's-eye, and saw that the thing had been blown into hundreds of singed pieces.
Momo smiled and yelled out in happiness and hugged the two of them. She yelled again with out letting go of them. "The Chrysm Cannon Works!" She yelled out, finally letting go of them.
The two of them stumbled back. "Dose this mean that the Ballistics program is ago?!" Asked Garry.
"It sure does!" Momo called out.
~End of Chapter Seven~
From this point on, anything goes. I've got a lot of ideas in mind; including a huge shoot out, countless fight scenes, and even a moving vehicle battle sequence. Also, drop me a line and let me know what you think of this story.
I also realize that this story has taken a while to actually get to the main point of the plot. I hope you guys still enjoy reading this.
Please send me your reviews so that I can know what you guys think of my work. I love feedback and I have been able to use some of the suggestions you guys have set me, so keep trying and your might be used.
Also, I'd just like to think the readers: especially Tio, who has been such a great and loyal fan of work (just as I am such a huge fan of hers). Also, I want to think Shannon, Kohran, Zinic, Mia Elf, Boko, and my newest fan- LilDoro, and all the others.
-Bojack
-Bojack
Breath of Fire 3: Up in smoke
Chapter Seven: A Short Reprieve
Momo walked down the halls of the Tower, the early morning sun cast bright a pink and orange glow through the windows, brilliantly illuminating the pale stone walls and floor. She was wearing a black satin robe and her hair was hanging down her back and beside her face. She yawned and rubbed the sleep out of her eyes.
She stepped into the large room that served as a pantry and kitchen in the Tower, and was surprised to see someone else there already.
Ash turned around and looked at Momo, slightly surprised to see her up so early. He was wearing a long house coat to fight the slight morning chill that pervaded the inner walls of the Tower. He quickly pulled his coat shut when he realized that it was hanging open, exposing his long thing torso and pale skin to the red-head in front of him. "Sorry." He said as he tightened the sash around his coat. "I see I'm not the only one up early." He went on. Setting down the glass he was holding.
Momo made sure to tighten her robe and blushed slightly. "Do you always get up so early?" She asked, trying to get over her embracement.
Ash smiled. "I like to start my day off as soon as possible." He replied. "I thought you might like to know that I was able to convert the some of the samples into powder form. I think that in that state, it can be even more effective. I've also converted some of it into a liquid form." He added.
"What do you plan to do with them now?" Asked Momo, brushing a few strands of copper-colored hair out of her eyes.
"I believe that the in these two new forms, they can be even more powerful, I just need test subjects to try them on." He went on, scratching chin as he finished his sentence.
Momo smiled as he finished his last statement. "What do you think those people that we hired were for?" She asked with a mischievous grin.
Ash smiled. "I like the way you think." He replied.
***
Later that morning.
Ginorelli looked up as the door to his office swung open. He watched as his flunky walked. "What is it?" He asked abruptly.
The room was dark and filled with old furniture and weapons, as well as several paintings and a coat of arms on one spot. There was an inscription at the bottom that read "The World For the Taking".
The man flinched and stepped back. "Don Ginorelli, I am sorry to disturb you, but I have some news that may be of interest to you." He replied.
"Speak up." He instructed him.
"Yes sir, we received a letter stating that someone is setting up operations in the area." He informed him.
"Run that by me again, what did you just say?" He shot back, leaning forward. "Someone is setting up oper-"
"I heard that, you chump!" He shouted. "I was just making sure!" He went on. "Are you sure?" He demanded.
"We can't be sure just yet." He replied, shifting on his feet uncomfortably.
Ginorelli stood up. "Send out our in the area, I wasn't pictures, visual confirmation!" He exclaimed.
"Yes sir, Don Ginorelli!" The man replied obediently as he left the room.
Ginorelli turned around and took out a cigar from his desk. "No one moves in on my turf and gets away with it." He said as he lit the cigar and stuck it in his mouth.
***
Rei was dressed and standing out on the balcony of the room, looking out at the forest beyond the grounds of the Tower. He looked over his shoulder to see Momo come walking up to him.
The two of them began talking about continuing tests with the plants, unaware of the fact that they were being watched.
***
Stan put down his camera and moved along; he had to get photos that proved that this Tower place had a working lab, and that they were actually making something. In all honesty, he had no problem with being a spy. or a peeping tom if necessary. There were some benefits to spying on people.
"That rabbit lady was not a bad looker." He thought to himself with a smile. He'd got some nice pictures of her and that tiger guy.
***
Biggs and Gary lit the fuse to the cannon and ran off to get behind a pile of sand bags with Momo. They had to get back because they didn't know how well the cannon would work. let alone weather or not it would explode!
*BOOM!!!*
The dust cleared and the three of them poked their heads up and looked up over at the giant bull's-eye, and saw that the thing had been blown into hundreds of singed pieces.
Momo smiled and yelled out in happiness and hugged the two of them. She yelled again with out letting go of them. "The Chrysm Cannon Works!" She yelled out, finally letting go of them.
The two of them stumbled back. "Dose this mean that the Ballistics program is ago?!" Asked Garry.
"It sure does!" Momo called out.
~End of Chapter Seven~
From this point on, anything goes. I've got a lot of ideas in mind; including a huge shoot out, countless fight scenes, and even a moving vehicle battle sequence. Also, drop me a line and let me know what you think of this story.
I also realize that this story has taken a while to actually get to the main point of the plot. I hope you guys still enjoy reading this.
Please send me your reviews so that I can know what you guys think of my work. I love feedback and I have been able to use some of the suggestions you guys have set me, so keep trying and your might be used.
Also, I'd just like to think the readers: especially Tio, who has been such a great and loyal fan of work (just as I am such a huge fan of hers). Also, I want to think Shannon, Kohran, Zinic, Mia Elf, Boko, and my newest fan- LilDoro, and all the others.
-Bojack
