Alright I'm going to try to get back on tonight but I highly doubt it...
beside from it being a really good day to write it has been a stinky day
emotionally. I have been having no fun and it seems everyone is bent on
trying to get me in some kind of anger. My sisters been nagging me... Get it?
I couldn't finish it that day so I'm continually later... I'm terribly excited to see that people are enjoying my story! SOOOOOOOOO... Here are some reviews!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 1) Icy AngelWings: told ya i'd review in return! this is SO much like the series, excellent job! you did vash as he is in the series, it's totally perfect!
-icy angelwings XX
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 2) Amy(): Cool fic, continue! I love it so far, it's very written.
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 3) Arika(): Um...I don't see any M/V fluffiness... --
Well...I have to say This is kind of original.No one ever fix vashes arm and scars in a fic.But...I still don't like Hope...and well..I hope you don't make them fall in "love" really quick...then that would be kind of annoying.Once again I like the way it's written ...
On to the next chapter.
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 4) Arika(): Hm...Now it's getting interesting.I like it even more then before.Please continue...and Update soon before you make me bring out my bazookas and flame throwers.Oh and remember don't make H/V fall in "love" to fast...not only because that would be annoying to me because I don't like Hope yet...but...it's not good for the story.Things like that shouldn't happen so fast.For people who do like Hope and Vash you will keep them in despense when you have a close fuffy moment and yet at the last moment something interups them...or well...you get it right.or I don't know...It's your story but...I believe you ask for advise...anyways...I am going to play video games now.
Ja Ne!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 5) Crystal-da-demon: gives the author an evil look how dare u? how dare u make vash,my fav. bishonen, fall in love this gurl named hope starts to cry wat a cruel cruel world. continues to cry y my vash? why o why o why?
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 6) Icy AngelWings: told ya i'd review, i like this even more...Vash naked? (evil thoughts, evil grin...) if only bishies like him were real to drool over. well, i still love this story and congrats on getting more reviews!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 7) Icy AngelWings: good chappie once again, you can capture vash really good too, you're not the only i'll admit. too bad legato and her husband are real bastards, hope there's more fluff between hope and vash!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 8) Icy AngelWings: so close to fluff...NO! well, most of it satfisfied me for now, keep it up though! i'll keep going and make you get more reviews, you deserve them!
I thought I'd take at least one from each chapter! LOL! Icy AngelWings and ArikaD. You two have been my two most devoted readers. Without you I wouldn't have as many reviews as I do now! Thank yall!
Well as you see they're not all positive but that's all right. I would be lying if I said that I only got positive reviews so I decided to show diversity.
(((((((((((((((((( Slandered disclaimer I do not own any character of Trigun... like the owner of Trigun would come on fan-fiction and start writing fan-fiction about his own story.... . however the character Hope is mine. The three new characters named Thorn, Janeba, Talon and Jake are all made up from my mind including Hope. Please do not mess with or steal any of these characters. Thank you. (((((((((((((((((
Trigun
Chapter 9: Bounty Hunter Hope
Hope sat in the medical bay looking at some papers while another woman with light brown skin and wings walked around her right arm working on it. "Mercy should we get the bound papers canceled?"
Mercy stopped and then thought a bit, "Yea it would be the most legal way."
Hope sighed and then looked up, "It's going to be hard to find everyone to get their signatures." She wanted Vash out of the heat of this all and if she didn't get him out of the legal end Talon was going to pin them down.
Mercy looks at her with curiosity, "You really do like him!" She laughed teasingly as she watched Hope's face go red. "Oh my gosh! The big bad bounty hunter, the one Aunt Liska thought would never fall in love..."
Hope blushes even more but couldn't help but grin, "Oh shut up Mercy!" She said shaking her head, "Oh how is Aunt Sapphire?"
Mercy laughs as she shakes her head, "Mom's alright.. Oh don't you dare change the subject! So... tell me..." Grins as she looks up from Hope's arm... "What's he like in bed?"
Hope's eyes widen, "I haven't had sex with him!"
Mercy rolls her eyes, "Ya.... Right...." She finishes up and gives her a few shots looking pleased with herself, "Please come on! I bet his good... Or is it kinda awkward with him being that tall?"
Hope closes her eyes and then shakes her head, "What part of I haven't had sex with him don't you understand."
Mercy grins and then stands up straight... She is a beautiful woman with long light brown hair and light brown skin. She has light blue eyes that seemed to always laugh with kindness and she seemed to be wearing some kind of tunic. "Alright... ALRIGHT! Don't have a cow!"
Meryl in runs in from the other room with Millie hot on her tall and she points at Hope, "What the hell is all this."
Hope blinks and then looks at the envelopes. "Case files... Payments... Information...!" Screams and then jumps up ignoring the pain in her arm "Don't look in there!"
Suddenly a hologram pops out of a box in the corner and a scrawny man looks down at her with a raised brow. He has green hair with yellow eyes and he actually looked very crazy and he started to laugh as he saw Hope, "HOPE DARLING! I haven't seen you in so long."
Hope standing up giving Meryl and Millie the death glare, "Hi Molly!"
Vash walks in and looks up at the hologram with a raised brow and then over at Mercy and then just looked around with confusion.
Thorn came in after him and sighed as he saw the person, "Molly!"
Vash starts to laugh, "His names Molly!"
Hope's hands wave really quick in front of Vash's face and then she covers his mouth, "sorry Molly... what can I do for you?"
Thorn annoyed sat down in a chair and smiled at Mercy.
Millie and Meryl bit back their laughter and turned away so they looked like they were embarrassed because their faces were red.
Molly was shaking his head sending his green dread locks to move around his shoulders, "People these days just don't have any manners!" He then turns his attention back to Hope with an understanding, "Hope darling. I need you to get something back for me..."
Hope nods and then smiles, "Sure Molly just send me the normal papers."
Molly nods and then winks "will do... Bye my Bounty Hunter Hope!" Blows her a kiss and then disappears.
Hope rolls her eyes and then turns to them. "Well looks like we might take a little longer to get to Little Jersey."
Millie turns around feeling guilty, "I hope it wasn't any of our fault."
Meryl rolls her eyes and then shakes her head as she turns to face Hope, "It wasn't our fault.." but she knew that she was being overly noisy.
Thorn nods his head and then shrugs, "Well it doesn't matter now."
Vash.... Was actually still very confused.
Mercy sits down on a very small stool with Lib in her lap, "No we can't do anything about it but we can get some papers done. I can get the names together that can cancel Vash's papers!"
Hope nods in agreement, "While Mercy and Lib are doing that. The rest of you just... Wait..."
(A/N I'm stuck at school... I woke up late so I didn't go to the 8:00 AM math course so I'm going to go to the 10:00 AM math course... isn't that just peachy? Come on... one more hour... one more hour... What did you think of this chapter... Personally I hated it, but who knows you might like it.)
I couldn't finish it that day so I'm continually later... I'm terribly excited to see that people are enjoying my story! SOOOOOOOOO... Here are some reviews!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 1) Icy AngelWings: told ya i'd review in return! this is SO much like the series, excellent job! you did vash as he is in the series, it's totally perfect!
-icy angelwings XX
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 2) Amy(): Cool fic, continue! I love it so far, it's very written.
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 3) Arika(): Um...I don't see any M/V fluffiness... --
Well...I have to say This is kind of original.No one ever fix vashes arm and scars in a fic.But...I still don't like Hope...and well..I hope you don't make them fall in "love" really quick...then that would be kind of annoying.Once again I like the way it's written ...
On to the next chapter.
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 4) Arika(): Hm...Now it's getting interesting.I like it even more then before.Please continue...and Update soon before you make me bring out my bazookas and flame throwers.Oh and remember don't make H/V fall in "love" to fast...not only because that would be annoying to me because I don't like Hope yet...but...it's not good for the story.Things like that shouldn't happen so fast.For people who do like Hope and Vash you will keep them in despense when you have a close fuffy moment and yet at the last moment something interups them...or well...you get it right.or I don't know...It's your story but...I believe you ask for advise...anyways...I am going to play video games now.
Ja Ne!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 5) Crystal-da-demon: gives the author an evil look how dare u? how dare u make vash,my fav. bishonen, fall in love this gurl named hope starts to cry wat a cruel cruel world. continues to cry y my vash? why o why o why?
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 6) Icy AngelWings: told ya i'd review, i like this even more...Vash naked? (evil thoughts, evil grin...) if only bishies like him were real to drool over. well, i still love this story and congrats on getting more reviews!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 7) Icy AngelWings: good chappie once again, you can capture vash really good too, you're not the only i'll admit. too bad legato and her husband are real bastards, hope there's more fluff between hope and vash!
(Vash Meets Hope Chapter: 8) Icy AngelWings: so close to fluff...NO! well, most of it satfisfied me for now, keep it up though! i'll keep going and make you get more reviews, you deserve them!
I thought I'd take at least one from each chapter! LOL! Icy AngelWings and ArikaD. You two have been my two most devoted readers. Without you I wouldn't have as many reviews as I do now! Thank yall!
Well as you see they're not all positive but that's all right. I would be lying if I said that I only got positive reviews so I decided to show diversity.
(((((((((((((((((( Slandered disclaimer I do not own any character of Trigun... like the owner of Trigun would come on fan-fiction and start writing fan-fiction about his own story.... . however the character Hope is mine. The three new characters named Thorn, Janeba, Talon and Jake are all made up from my mind including Hope. Please do not mess with or steal any of these characters. Thank you. (((((((((((((((((
Trigun
Chapter 9: Bounty Hunter Hope
Hope sat in the medical bay looking at some papers while another woman with light brown skin and wings walked around her right arm working on it. "Mercy should we get the bound papers canceled?"
Mercy stopped and then thought a bit, "Yea it would be the most legal way."
Hope sighed and then looked up, "It's going to be hard to find everyone to get their signatures." She wanted Vash out of the heat of this all and if she didn't get him out of the legal end Talon was going to pin them down.
Mercy looks at her with curiosity, "You really do like him!" She laughed teasingly as she watched Hope's face go red. "Oh my gosh! The big bad bounty hunter, the one Aunt Liska thought would never fall in love..."
Hope blushes even more but couldn't help but grin, "Oh shut up Mercy!" She said shaking her head, "Oh how is Aunt Sapphire?"
Mercy laughs as she shakes her head, "Mom's alright.. Oh don't you dare change the subject! So... tell me..." Grins as she looks up from Hope's arm... "What's he like in bed?"
Hope's eyes widen, "I haven't had sex with him!"
Mercy rolls her eyes, "Ya.... Right...." She finishes up and gives her a few shots looking pleased with herself, "Please come on! I bet his good... Or is it kinda awkward with him being that tall?"
Hope closes her eyes and then shakes her head, "What part of I haven't had sex with him don't you understand."
Mercy grins and then stands up straight... She is a beautiful woman with long light brown hair and light brown skin. She has light blue eyes that seemed to always laugh with kindness and she seemed to be wearing some kind of tunic. "Alright... ALRIGHT! Don't have a cow!"
Meryl in runs in from the other room with Millie hot on her tall and she points at Hope, "What the hell is all this."
Hope blinks and then looks at the envelopes. "Case files... Payments... Information...!" Screams and then jumps up ignoring the pain in her arm "Don't look in there!"
Suddenly a hologram pops out of a box in the corner and a scrawny man looks down at her with a raised brow. He has green hair with yellow eyes and he actually looked very crazy and he started to laugh as he saw Hope, "HOPE DARLING! I haven't seen you in so long."
Hope standing up giving Meryl and Millie the death glare, "Hi Molly!"
Vash walks in and looks up at the hologram with a raised brow and then over at Mercy and then just looked around with confusion.
Thorn came in after him and sighed as he saw the person, "Molly!"
Vash starts to laugh, "His names Molly!"
Hope's hands wave really quick in front of Vash's face and then she covers his mouth, "sorry Molly... what can I do for you?"
Thorn annoyed sat down in a chair and smiled at Mercy.
Millie and Meryl bit back their laughter and turned away so they looked like they were embarrassed because their faces were red.
Molly was shaking his head sending his green dread locks to move around his shoulders, "People these days just don't have any manners!" He then turns his attention back to Hope with an understanding, "Hope darling. I need you to get something back for me..."
Hope nods and then smiles, "Sure Molly just send me the normal papers."
Molly nods and then winks "will do... Bye my Bounty Hunter Hope!" Blows her a kiss and then disappears.
Hope rolls her eyes and then turns to them. "Well looks like we might take a little longer to get to Little Jersey."
Millie turns around feeling guilty, "I hope it wasn't any of our fault."
Meryl rolls her eyes and then shakes her head as she turns to face Hope, "It wasn't our fault.." but she knew that she was being overly noisy.
Thorn nods his head and then shrugs, "Well it doesn't matter now."
Vash.... Was actually still very confused.
Mercy sits down on a very small stool with Lib in her lap, "No we can't do anything about it but we can get some papers done. I can get the names together that can cancel Vash's papers!"
Hope nods in agreement, "While Mercy and Lib are doing that. The rest of you just... Wait..."
(A/N I'm stuck at school... I woke up late so I didn't go to the 8:00 AM math course so I'm going to go to the 10:00 AM math course... isn't that just peachy? Come on... one more hour... one more hour... What did you think of this chapter... Personally I hated it, but who knows you might like it.)