Hell has Returned
Disclaimer: I do not own dbz it belongs to the brilliant mind of Akira Toriyama and funimation
Well I'm back with what I believe is the best of the three. (Prequel completed, to be posted as soon as this is complete.) As you know this is my second story, and yes this is the sequel to my first story, The Showdown in the Heavens, if you are reading this one first you may be a little lost but I will try to recap the first story for those whom do not wish to read the first. This is the most action filled and tragic/dramatic of the three. And for those whom love main characters be warned, MANY WILL DIE!
R: For language, graphic descriptions and violence. Some chapters may be down graded to PG-13.
So without any further interruption I give you a new chapter of Hell has Returned.
*Check out my new fic, "Tears of a Prince" a drama, tragedy story about the Briefs family.
*Thank you for the reviews of the last story and hopefully this one, and please don't be lazy and not review, they really mean a lot. Thank you.
*Goku now begins to depart for his mission on earth, while Gurjal has now begun to hunt down those who brought shame to him. Now he goes after Tien!
*Sorry it took so long, I was studying for midterms, all this week and I was busy with other things, and not to forget about writing four other stories. This chapter is kind of short; I really didn't want it to go further than it did, I wanted the suspense to continue, sorry if the shortness is disappointing.
Chapter Three: The Casualties begin
The men at other world saw him vanish as soon those on earth saw him appear.
Piccolo and Dende were going about their business at the lookout as they began to feel a familiar power level. Mr. Popo then felt it as well the three looked at one another and soon went to discover what it could be.
"Piccolo, do you feel that?"
"Yes Dende, it seems very familiar. It feels like something I haven't felt in a while. It feels like, no it can't be."
"Maybe it is!" They continued to run to the front of the lookout and soon came upon the feet of an old friend.
"Are my eyes playing tricks on me?"
The two began to blink and soon it became apparent that Goku has returned. With that they approached him as quickly as possible and soon they were face to face with the one that they thought they had lost.
"Goku it's good to see you old friend." Piccolo embraced his long time friend and soon the two meet up with the arriving others.
"Hey Gohan, can you feel that power level? You know who that is?" Krillin now had a grin on his face and soon
"Krillin hurry, now come on." Gohan was like a child again, awaiting some present, or something like it.
"Good to see you Goku, I had a feeling we would see you." Dende then shook Goku's hand and soon felt Krillin and Gohan arrive. They rushed over back to the front of the lookout and say a very excited Gohan.
"Dad? Dad I can't believe its you!" Gohan rushed and soon embraced his father, and it brought tears to his eyes.
"Hey son how you holding up?" Gohan wiped his tears and looked at his father.
"Good considering what we're facing." Piccolo and Dende looked at one another somewhat confused; slowly they walked towards the two.
"What do you mean, what are we up against?" Piccolo began to embrace for one of his worst fears.
"Piccolo, Gurjal has returned, and he is on earth right now." Goku kept his face of seriousness.
"Gurjal? Is that the threat I have felt for years? I had thought it was Cell, yet when he was killed this power level still plagued my mind! Goku how did he acquire so much power?" Goku sighed and walked over to his friend of many years.
"He has been using his draining technique to feed off of the moon's life and mineral, he never was defeated Piccolo." Piccolo's eyes widened and he soon sat on the steps to the time chamber.
"What does he want?" Piccolo asked that already known answer, but he just wanted certainty.
"What does every defeated warrior want? Revenge that's what, King Kai and Shadow told me what his plans were, and quite frankly I'm nervous." So what Goku told Gohan, he told Piccolo, Gurjal's power level, what his intensions were, and what he could do if not stopped. And this frightened Piccolo, and it still gave chills to Gohan and Krillin as well.
Piccolo soon took it all in and walked back to the gang; he looked into their eyes now with determination and pride.
"Okay Goku, I suppose there is no escaping from this, do any of the others know about this?" Goku began to think and now felt a sick pain in his stomach.
"Oh crap I forgot all about them! Gurjal could be anywhere! He could be killing them, damn it we have to warn the others!" Goku began to run off and soon disappeared, the remaining at the lookout try to find Goku, and as soon as they found his location they flew there as quick as possible.
It seemed Goku led them to Capsule Corp. home of both Vegeta, and for some reason Yamcha still lived there.
"Vegeta! Yamcha!" Goku yelled as loud as he could, until guards along with Bulma stopped him.
"Oh man Goku, can you scream any louder?" Bulma approached with now crying Trunks.
"Bulma, have you seen Vegeta?" Bulma began to think.
"Oh yeah, as usual he's in the gravity room training."
"What about Yamcha, have you seen him too?" Bulma now became a bit frustrated.
"Hey Goku am I their secretaries that I know where they are, all I know is that my husband is in the gravity room! That Yamcha is probably in the city hitting on women."
Goku was a bit shocked at the amount of stress Bulma was carrying.
"Man Bulma, just wanted to know, relax take a vacation, you need one."
"Vacation, oh that sure sounds nice." Bulma soon went back inside just as the rest of the gang arrived.
"Hey Goku where are they?"
"Well Vegeta is inside, but Yamcha is in the city, but if Gurjal was here I think he'd make his presence known."
"Yeah Goku, I agree, I think I'll go in and get Vegeta."
"Okay Piccolo, hurry right back, just tell him, if he wants to come with us then that's a big bonus." Goku began to search of Yamcha's power level and soon locked it in the heart of West City.
(Inside Capsule Corp.)
All looked with fear at Piccolo, this just pissed him off until he finally made it to the gravity room.
"Vegeta? Hey Vegeta." The computer turned off as the door began to open up.
"What, what is it? Oh the namek, what business do you have here?"
"The gang is just here to make sure Gurjal doesn't get you." Vegeta stopped Piccolo at the word Gurjal.
"Gurjal? But Karkorot killed him, on the moon!"
"Look Vegeta, it's a long story if you want to hear it, come with me." Vegeta sighed and opened the door completely.
"Okay, just let me get my things." Vegeta soon emerged with his armor, and soon the two meet with the others.
"What the hell is that?" Vegeta gasped at the sight of Goku, without knowing anything about his return.
"Oh yeah I forgot to tell you Vegeta, Goku is here until we win this thing." Vegeta's mouth still opened wide, but soon came to grips with it.
"Gohan is getting Yamcha, he should be here soon." Gohan soon arrived with Yamcha.
"I still don't know why you didn't let me stay to get her number?"
"That doesn't matter Yamcha." Yamcha then saw Goku.
"Goku?" Piccolo then got angry.
"Not this crap again! Okay Goku is here to stop Gurjal now lets find, wait who's left?" Soon it dawned on all that Tien was alone.
"Oh god it's Tien!" soon they all rushed there to his location.
(Meanwhile at Gurjal's location)
"Well if it isn't the human that was apart of my humiliation." Tien and Chaozu continued their barrage of fire, yet it had no affect to him at all.
"Oh damn it, we can't stop his Tien."
"I know Chaozu, I know." Tien and Chaozu soon came to grips that this was their end, and there was nothing to be done.
"Just give up."
"Never!" Chaozu charged Gurjal just to be blasted into bits in front of Tien's eyes.
"No, Chaozu, Chaozu! You bastard, you'll pay for that, you good for nothing piece of shift!" Tien charged Gurjal at full power, and as soon as he charged his neck was in the hands of Gurjal.
"One down, five to go." Tien's eyes widened as he heard those words, and with one snap of the neck, Tien was dead.
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Hope this chapter was to your liking the next one will be longer; it's the first fight! So look around for updates.
Next Chapter: The will of Gohan
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Hope this chapter was to your liking the next one will be longer; it's the first fight! So look around for updates.
Disclaimer: I do not own dbz it belongs to the brilliant mind of Akira Toriyama and funimation
Well I'm back with what I believe is the best of the three. (Prequel completed, to be posted as soon as this is complete.) As you know this is my second story, and yes this is the sequel to my first story, The Showdown in the Heavens, if you are reading this one first you may be a little lost but I will try to recap the first story for those whom do not wish to read the first. This is the most action filled and tragic/dramatic of the three. And for those whom love main characters be warned, MANY WILL DIE!
R: For language, graphic descriptions and violence. Some chapters may be down graded to PG-13.
So without any further interruption I give you a new chapter of Hell has Returned.
*Check out my new fic, "Tears of a Prince" a drama, tragedy story about the Briefs family.
*Thank you for the reviews of the last story and hopefully this one, and please don't be lazy and not review, they really mean a lot. Thank you.
*Goku now begins to depart for his mission on earth, while Gurjal has now begun to hunt down those who brought shame to him. Now he goes after Tien!
*Sorry it took so long, I was studying for midterms, all this week and I was busy with other things, and not to forget about writing four other stories. This chapter is kind of short; I really didn't want it to go further than it did, I wanted the suspense to continue, sorry if the shortness is disappointing.
Chapter Three: The Casualties begin
The men at other world saw him vanish as soon those on earth saw him appear.
Piccolo and Dende were going about their business at the lookout as they began to feel a familiar power level. Mr. Popo then felt it as well the three looked at one another and soon went to discover what it could be.
"Piccolo, do you feel that?"
"Yes Dende, it seems very familiar. It feels like something I haven't felt in a while. It feels like, no it can't be."
"Maybe it is!" They continued to run to the front of the lookout and soon came upon the feet of an old friend.
"Are my eyes playing tricks on me?"
The two began to blink and soon it became apparent that Goku has returned. With that they approached him as quickly as possible and soon they were face to face with the one that they thought they had lost.
"Goku it's good to see you old friend." Piccolo embraced his long time friend and soon the two meet up with the arriving others.
"Hey Gohan, can you feel that power level? You know who that is?" Krillin now had a grin on his face and soon
"Krillin hurry, now come on." Gohan was like a child again, awaiting some present, or something like it.
"Good to see you Goku, I had a feeling we would see you." Dende then shook Goku's hand and soon felt Krillin and Gohan arrive. They rushed over back to the front of the lookout and say a very excited Gohan.
"Dad? Dad I can't believe its you!" Gohan rushed and soon embraced his father, and it brought tears to his eyes.
"Hey son how you holding up?" Gohan wiped his tears and looked at his father.
"Good considering what we're facing." Piccolo and Dende looked at one another somewhat confused; slowly they walked towards the two.
"What do you mean, what are we up against?" Piccolo began to embrace for one of his worst fears.
"Piccolo, Gurjal has returned, and he is on earth right now." Goku kept his face of seriousness.
"Gurjal? Is that the threat I have felt for years? I had thought it was Cell, yet when he was killed this power level still plagued my mind! Goku how did he acquire so much power?" Goku sighed and walked over to his friend of many years.
"He has been using his draining technique to feed off of the moon's life and mineral, he never was defeated Piccolo." Piccolo's eyes widened and he soon sat on the steps to the time chamber.
"What does he want?" Piccolo asked that already known answer, but he just wanted certainty.
"What does every defeated warrior want? Revenge that's what, King Kai and Shadow told me what his plans were, and quite frankly I'm nervous." So what Goku told Gohan, he told Piccolo, Gurjal's power level, what his intensions were, and what he could do if not stopped. And this frightened Piccolo, and it still gave chills to Gohan and Krillin as well.
Piccolo soon took it all in and walked back to the gang; he looked into their eyes now with determination and pride.
"Okay Goku, I suppose there is no escaping from this, do any of the others know about this?" Goku began to think and now felt a sick pain in his stomach.
"Oh crap I forgot all about them! Gurjal could be anywhere! He could be killing them, damn it we have to warn the others!" Goku began to run off and soon disappeared, the remaining at the lookout try to find Goku, and as soon as they found his location they flew there as quick as possible.
It seemed Goku led them to Capsule Corp. home of both Vegeta, and for some reason Yamcha still lived there.
"Vegeta! Yamcha!" Goku yelled as loud as he could, until guards along with Bulma stopped him.
"Oh man Goku, can you scream any louder?" Bulma approached with now crying Trunks.
"Bulma, have you seen Vegeta?" Bulma began to think.
"Oh yeah, as usual he's in the gravity room training."
"What about Yamcha, have you seen him too?" Bulma now became a bit frustrated.
"Hey Goku am I their secretaries that I know where they are, all I know is that my husband is in the gravity room! That Yamcha is probably in the city hitting on women."
Goku was a bit shocked at the amount of stress Bulma was carrying.
"Man Bulma, just wanted to know, relax take a vacation, you need one."
"Vacation, oh that sure sounds nice." Bulma soon went back inside just as the rest of the gang arrived.
"Hey Goku where are they?"
"Well Vegeta is inside, but Yamcha is in the city, but if Gurjal was here I think he'd make his presence known."
"Yeah Goku, I agree, I think I'll go in and get Vegeta."
"Okay Piccolo, hurry right back, just tell him, if he wants to come with us then that's a big bonus." Goku began to search of Yamcha's power level and soon locked it in the heart of West City.
(Inside Capsule Corp.)
All looked with fear at Piccolo, this just pissed him off until he finally made it to the gravity room.
"Vegeta? Hey Vegeta." The computer turned off as the door began to open up.
"What, what is it? Oh the namek, what business do you have here?"
"The gang is just here to make sure Gurjal doesn't get you." Vegeta stopped Piccolo at the word Gurjal.
"Gurjal? But Karkorot killed him, on the moon!"
"Look Vegeta, it's a long story if you want to hear it, come with me." Vegeta sighed and opened the door completely.
"Okay, just let me get my things." Vegeta soon emerged with his armor, and soon the two meet with the others.
"What the hell is that?" Vegeta gasped at the sight of Goku, without knowing anything about his return.
"Oh yeah I forgot to tell you Vegeta, Goku is here until we win this thing." Vegeta's mouth still opened wide, but soon came to grips with it.
"Gohan is getting Yamcha, he should be here soon." Gohan soon arrived with Yamcha.
"I still don't know why you didn't let me stay to get her number?"
"That doesn't matter Yamcha." Yamcha then saw Goku.
"Goku?" Piccolo then got angry.
"Not this crap again! Okay Goku is here to stop Gurjal now lets find, wait who's left?" Soon it dawned on all that Tien was alone.
"Oh god it's Tien!" soon they all rushed there to his location.
(Meanwhile at Gurjal's location)
"Well if it isn't the human that was apart of my humiliation." Tien and Chaozu continued their barrage of fire, yet it had no affect to him at all.
"Oh damn it, we can't stop his Tien."
"I know Chaozu, I know." Tien and Chaozu soon came to grips that this was their end, and there was nothing to be done.
"Just give up."
"Never!" Chaozu charged Gurjal just to be blasted into bits in front of Tien's eyes.
"No, Chaozu, Chaozu! You bastard, you'll pay for that, you good for nothing piece of shift!" Tien charged Gurjal at full power, and as soon as he charged his neck was in the hands of Gurjal.
"One down, five to go." Tien's eyes widened as he heard those words, and with one snap of the neck, Tien was dead.
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Hope this chapter was to your liking the next one will be longer; it's the first fight! So look around for updates.
Next Chapter: The will of Gohan
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Hope this chapter was to your liking the next one will be longer; it's the first fight! So look around for updates.