Hell has Returned
Disclaimer: I do not own dbz it belongs to the brilliant mind of Akira Toriyama and funimation
Well I'm back with what I believe is the best of the three. (Prequel completed, to be posted as soon as this is complete.) As you know this is my second story, and yes this is the sequel to my first story, The Showdown in the Heavens, if you are reading this one first you may be a little lost but I will try to recap the first story for those whom do not wish to read the first. This is the most action filled and tragic/dramatic of the three. And for those whom love main characters be warned, MANY WILL DIE!
R: For language, graphic descriptions and violence. Some chapters may be down graded to PG-13.
So without any further interruption I give you a new chapter of Hell has Returned.
Thank you for the reviews of the last story and hopefully this one, and please don't be lazy and not review, they really mean a lot. Thank you.
I am truly sorry for the five month absence of my stories, so much crap has been going on its just insane, I actually somewhat forgot the main plots of some stories but soon I'm sure they'll come back to me, check out my bio for the apology.
The Z-Fighters have regrouped with the unexpected addition of Goku. All accounted for except for Tien to which Gurjal has already put his life to an end.
Chapter Four: The will of Gohan
Gurjal soon let go of Tien's limp neck and dropped him onto the mountain snow.
"The World lives, the worlds breaths with the life these creatures thrive on. But soon the dark bloody hands of death will overcome all and soon turn this entire goddamn world into a feasting hell like no living creature has ever seen. And the hell for those who smut my ruins on the moon will be ten times as bad, those assholes will pay dearly for what they have done to me. They will witness no mercy, no pity, not one will live to see another day the last thing that they will see will be their limbs in my hands as the rest of their bodies lay on the ground." Gurjal soon lifted from the air and took off in to the distance.
Gohan and the rest soon locked on the location of Tien's last power level signal. The gang dreaded the thought of loosing a fighter, and more than that a friend.
"Oh god I really am not liking this, I'm not feeling anything that resembles Tien's power level, I don't even sense a power level in this direction. It as if he's been wiped off the face of the earth." Yamcha's words angered Gohan further he then turned to Yamcha in a rage as if he were Gurjal him self, all halted as Gohan approached Yamcha.
"NO, don't even think that way about another one of us, we never give up on one another." Gohan then powered back up and continued to the location. The gang continued their fast pace race to Tien's location.
"Hey Goku why don't you just instant transmission to get to Tien?" Yamcha looked at Goku, and then he stopped.
"Hey I never thought of doing that, I guess with all the tension and yelling I just forgot. I'll do that now, see you there." Goku then disappeared into the wind, soon his faded image was soon far into the distance as the gang continued to speed towards Tien.
Soon Goku appeared to the point where Tien was felt last. He looked towards his left, then his right, all he saw were the white-mountain tops looming over the low clouds from above. He then began to lower his altitude and finally hit the mountainside. He began to walk in the snow looking for what the one thing they dredged, the dead limp body of Tien.
Goku was not successful the first couple of minutes until he began to see red drops and spots of blood staining the pure white snow. He began to follow the trail of the spots and finally he was lead to the pieces remaining that was Tien. His eyes began to water, his good friend of so many years now laying in the snow. He soon could not bare the weight to his knees and finally dropped onto the cold surface of the snow. He crawled onto the limp cold body of his good friend and look down upon it. Frozen blood was on his face, his cheeks bruised heavily and soon he began to grip his friend hard and soon let out a cry and took his anger onto the mountain floor hitting it with a deep rage he has not felt in such a long time.
Tien's body lay in two main pieces, the main large portion his main body and torso. The other part lay in the snow in a frozen pool of blood, it being his legs. Bones visible and blood still trickling out. Goku wept at the sit of this
He then began to pull himself together as he began to feel the other close in the area. He then got on up from his knees and said a final farewell to his friend.
"Farewell Tien, may the fortunes of the next life be much greater to you." He then nodded his head and stood tall as the others landed.
Gohan was the first to land soon running towards his father soon to scream in rage as he soon came into view of the remains of Tien.
"Goddamn it, god, no Gurjal you son of a bitch! I'm going to kill you, you bastard." Screams of rage soon turned to screams of sorrow as all came to grips of the lost they had just endured.
All reacted similar yet had a different outcome of it. Many now determined to slay the individual of Gurjal responsible of the carnage before them.
"I want him dead Dad. I want his blood on my hands along with his head." Gohan stated this with out any remorse for Gurjal, he was going to show him no mercy what so ever. Goku never saw this side of his son, he was like a blood thirsty lion awaiting a meal as if he has had one in a long time.
"We'll get him son, that I can promise you. But to return the carnage that he has done here is just wrong we would become him. A merciless killer, just out for blood." Gohan then lowered his head in a bit of shame.
"Well I'm already a merciless killer, so I will go after him, I will hunt him down until I have no more thirst to do so, and I find that to be impossible. It is our nature Kakorot, it is apart of your son as well, let us just go by our nature and do what our race did, hunt. We wiped out his people, let's finish the job with this lingering asshole." Vegeta then ended his speech and returned to the back of the group with his usual crossing of the arms.
"Vegeta I just don't find that to be the way to solve any of thing, attacking in a blinding emotion of rage will just weaken you."
"Then how the hell do we all become super saiyans genious?" all stopped and somewhat wondered, Vegeta was in a way right. But none had the guts to also stand up to Goku's voice.
"We are not going after him now, we're not even ready, lets just all go up to the lookout. Piccolo do you think.." Just then Gohan took off towards the west in speeds unlike no other.
"Goddamn it Gohan no!" All looked at the blinding light created by Gohan's blast off.
"He's going after him Karkorot, and there is nothing you can do about it. Try and stop him he'll probably put you down in the process, remember he still has that power you and I don't possess."
"No I will not allow my son to face him alone. I don't know about the rest of you but I'm going after him."
"After who Goku, Gohan or Gurjal?"
"If Gohan gets to Gurjal before I get to my son, I guess I have no choice but to confront him as well." Goku then powered up and blasted off. Vegeta then lifted from the ground with a smirk.
"Well the nature of the saiyan never fails. Well are the rest of you pansies coming along, or are you just going to be spectators?" After that little comment they all powered up and blasted off into the west.
The entire gang was now approaching Gurjal, and he soon had his own grin on his face.
"Yes, that's it, come to me you pieces of shit. You will all be in as many pieces as your weak friend." He then took cover in the mountain shades.
Gohan soon arrived and still was at his incredible speed but as soon as he past by Gurjal, Gurjal leaped from the shadows and tackled Gohan's small body into the mountain face.
He swung his fists into Gohan's gut, then another to his face as he continued to pound on the small super saiyan. But as soon as he was beaten the living hell out of him Goku took Gurjal by the neck and threw him onto the base of the mountain to where he followed.
He then turned so his legs were as torpedoes headed towards Gurjal still recovering from the attack from behind. Goku's impact shook the ground as if a giant had just fallen from the sky. And soon the sound of constant barrages of hits was present but soon Goku's offensive turned into a defensive as Gurjal got onto his feet and tossed him aside.
"Saiyan, I have waited many years for this pleasure to put an end to your life."
"He's already dead you dumbass." And with that remark Vegeta pounded Gurjal's face forcing him to release Goku from his grip. Vegeta soon went behind Gurjal kicking his spine and hurtling him back towards an awaiting Gohan.
"Thanks for the assist Vegeta." Gohan powered up and kneed Gurjal's face into the snowy surface of the mountain.
"This is for Tien!" with that said Gohan began taking Gurjal's face and thrusting it onto the rocky surface under the snow. Little by little spots of blood were appearing on the surrounding snow. But then finally Gurjal awakened and took Gohan's hand and twisted it, then throwing him at an approaching Vegeta.
"Yamcha, Krillin you guys check on Goku, make sure he doesn't die.....again. I'm going to go help the others." Piccolo then kicked Gurjal in the face and began to attack. Soon after Vegeta and Gohan recovered and joined Piccolo, soon the three began a great offensive on him and it seemed as if they were about to achieve victory when somehow Gurjal broke free from the offensive of the three. And soon did something that was very unexpected. He soon extended all fingers placed them by his face and shouted the words,
"Solar Flare!" soon the great flash of light blinded all around and soon Gurjal escaped free, from a certain defeat.
Minutes later the gang finally recovered their sight and began to search for their prey.
"Where the fuck did he learn that goddamn technique." Piccolo was raged with anger.
"We had him, we had his blood on our hands, he was as good as dead and he took the chickens way out, what honor is there in that!" Vegeta soon took his anger on the near by cliff side.
"Damn, hey Krillin, Yamcha is my dad okay?" Krillin then flew up into view.
"He's pretty banged up but he'll manage."
"Good, lets go up to the lookout." And with that said they all started to head up.
Well this was my first chapter in a long long time. Hope it still feels like the same story, and as always please review. I will try to update when possible, again I apologize.
Next Chapter: Gurjal's strategy
Disclaimer: I do not own dbz it belongs to the brilliant mind of Akira Toriyama and funimation
Well I'm back with what I believe is the best of the three. (Prequel completed, to be posted as soon as this is complete.) As you know this is my second story, and yes this is the sequel to my first story, The Showdown in the Heavens, if you are reading this one first you may be a little lost but I will try to recap the first story for those whom do not wish to read the first. This is the most action filled and tragic/dramatic of the three. And for those whom love main characters be warned, MANY WILL DIE!
R: For language, graphic descriptions and violence. Some chapters may be down graded to PG-13.
So without any further interruption I give you a new chapter of Hell has Returned.
Thank you for the reviews of the last story and hopefully this one, and please don't be lazy and not review, they really mean a lot. Thank you.
I am truly sorry for the five month absence of my stories, so much crap has been going on its just insane, I actually somewhat forgot the main plots of some stories but soon I'm sure they'll come back to me, check out my bio for the apology.
The Z-Fighters have regrouped with the unexpected addition of Goku. All accounted for except for Tien to which Gurjal has already put his life to an end.
Chapter Four: The will of Gohan
Gurjal soon let go of Tien's limp neck and dropped him onto the mountain snow.
"The World lives, the worlds breaths with the life these creatures thrive on. But soon the dark bloody hands of death will overcome all and soon turn this entire goddamn world into a feasting hell like no living creature has ever seen. And the hell for those who smut my ruins on the moon will be ten times as bad, those assholes will pay dearly for what they have done to me. They will witness no mercy, no pity, not one will live to see another day the last thing that they will see will be their limbs in my hands as the rest of their bodies lay on the ground." Gurjal soon lifted from the air and took off in to the distance.
Gohan and the rest soon locked on the location of Tien's last power level signal. The gang dreaded the thought of loosing a fighter, and more than that a friend.
"Oh god I really am not liking this, I'm not feeling anything that resembles Tien's power level, I don't even sense a power level in this direction. It as if he's been wiped off the face of the earth." Yamcha's words angered Gohan further he then turned to Yamcha in a rage as if he were Gurjal him self, all halted as Gohan approached Yamcha.
"NO, don't even think that way about another one of us, we never give up on one another." Gohan then powered back up and continued to the location. The gang continued their fast pace race to Tien's location.
"Hey Goku why don't you just instant transmission to get to Tien?" Yamcha looked at Goku, and then he stopped.
"Hey I never thought of doing that, I guess with all the tension and yelling I just forgot. I'll do that now, see you there." Goku then disappeared into the wind, soon his faded image was soon far into the distance as the gang continued to speed towards Tien.
Soon Goku appeared to the point where Tien was felt last. He looked towards his left, then his right, all he saw were the white-mountain tops looming over the low clouds from above. He then began to lower his altitude and finally hit the mountainside. He began to walk in the snow looking for what the one thing they dredged, the dead limp body of Tien.
Goku was not successful the first couple of minutes until he began to see red drops and spots of blood staining the pure white snow. He began to follow the trail of the spots and finally he was lead to the pieces remaining that was Tien. His eyes began to water, his good friend of so many years now laying in the snow. He soon could not bare the weight to his knees and finally dropped onto the cold surface of the snow. He crawled onto the limp cold body of his good friend and look down upon it. Frozen blood was on his face, his cheeks bruised heavily and soon he began to grip his friend hard and soon let out a cry and took his anger onto the mountain floor hitting it with a deep rage he has not felt in such a long time.
Tien's body lay in two main pieces, the main large portion his main body and torso. The other part lay in the snow in a frozen pool of blood, it being his legs. Bones visible and blood still trickling out. Goku wept at the sit of this
He then began to pull himself together as he began to feel the other close in the area. He then got on up from his knees and said a final farewell to his friend.
"Farewell Tien, may the fortunes of the next life be much greater to you." He then nodded his head and stood tall as the others landed.
Gohan was the first to land soon running towards his father soon to scream in rage as he soon came into view of the remains of Tien.
"Goddamn it, god, no Gurjal you son of a bitch! I'm going to kill you, you bastard." Screams of rage soon turned to screams of sorrow as all came to grips of the lost they had just endured.
All reacted similar yet had a different outcome of it. Many now determined to slay the individual of Gurjal responsible of the carnage before them.
"I want him dead Dad. I want his blood on my hands along with his head." Gohan stated this with out any remorse for Gurjal, he was going to show him no mercy what so ever. Goku never saw this side of his son, he was like a blood thirsty lion awaiting a meal as if he has had one in a long time.
"We'll get him son, that I can promise you. But to return the carnage that he has done here is just wrong we would become him. A merciless killer, just out for blood." Gohan then lowered his head in a bit of shame.
"Well I'm already a merciless killer, so I will go after him, I will hunt him down until I have no more thirst to do so, and I find that to be impossible. It is our nature Kakorot, it is apart of your son as well, let us just go by our nature and do what our race did, hunt. We wiped out his people, let's finish the job with this lingering asshole." Vegeta then ended his speech and returned to the back of the group with his usual crossing of the arms.
"Vegeta I just don't find that to be the way to solve any of thing, attacking in a blinding emotion of rage will just weaken you."
"Then how the hell do we all become super saiyans genious?" all stopped and somewhat wondered, Vegeta was in a way right. But none had the guts to also stand up to Goku's voice.
"We are not going after him now, we're not even ready, lets just all go up to the lookout. Piccolo do you think.." Just then Gohan took off towards the west in speeds unlike no other.
"Goddamn it Gohan no!" All looked at the blinding light created by Gohan's blast off.
"He's going after him Karkorot, and there is nothing you can do about it. Try and stop him he'll probably put you down in the process, remember he still has that power you and I don't possess."
"No I will not allow my son to face him alone. I don't know about the rest of you but I'm going after him."
"After who Goku, Gohan or Gurjal?"
"If Gohan gets to Gurjal before I get to my son, I guess I have no choice but to confront him as well." Goku then powered up and blasted off. Vegeta then lifted from the ground with a smirk.
"Well the nature of the saiyan never fails. Well are the rest of you pansies coming along, or are you just going to be spectators?" After that little comment they all powered up and blasted off into the west.
The entire gang was now approaching Gurjal, and he soon had his own grin on his face.
"Yes, that's it, come to me you pieces of shit. You will all be in as many pieces as your weak friend." He then took cover in the mountain shades.
Gohan soon arrived and still was at his incredible speed but as soon as he past by Gurjal, Gurjal leaped from the shadows and tackled Gohan's small body into the mountain face.
He swung his fists into Gohan's gut, then another to his face as he continued to pound on the small super saiyan. But as soon as he was beaten the living hell out of him Goku took Gurjal by the neck and threw him onto the base of the mountain to where he followed.
He then turned so his legs were as torpedoes headed towards Gurjal still recovering from the attack from behind. Goku's impact shook the ground as if a giant had just fallen from the sky. And soon the sound of constant barrages of hits was present but soon Goku's offensive turned into a defensive as Gurjal got onto his feet and tossed him aside.
"Saiyan, I have waited many years for this pleasure to put an end to your life."
"He's already dead you dumbass." And with that remark Vegeta pounded Gurjal's face forcing him to release Goku from his grip. Vegeta soon went behind Gurjal kicking his spine and hurtling him back towards an awaiting Gohan.
"Thanks for the assist Vegeta." Gohan powered up and kneed Gurjal's face into the snowy surface of the mountain.
"This is for Tien!" with that said Gohan began taking Gurjal's face and thrusting it onto the rocky surface under the snow. Little by little spots of blood were appearing on the surrounding snow. But then finally Gurjal awakened and took Gohan's hand and twisted it, then throwing him at an approaching Vegeta.
"Yamcha, Krillin you guys check on Goku, make sure he doesn't die.....again. I'm going to go help the others." Piccolo then kicked Gurjal in the face and began to attack. Soon after Vegeta and Gohan recovered and joined Piccolo, soon the three began a great offensive on him and it seemed as if they were about to achieve victory when somehow Gurjal broke free from the offensive of the three. And soon did something that was very unexpected. He soon extended all fingers placed them by his face and shouted the words,
"Solar Flare!" soon the great flash of light blinded all around and soon Gurjal escaped free, from a certain defeat.
Minutes later the gang finally recovered their sight and began to search for their prey.
"Where the fuck did he learn that goddamn technique." Piccolo was raged with anger.
"We had him, we had his blood on our hands, he was as good as dead and he took the chickens way out, what honor is there in that!" Vegeta soon took his anger on the near by cliff side.
"Damn, hey Krillin, Yamcha is my dad okay?" Krillin then flew up into view.
"He's pretty banged up but he'll manage."
"Good, lets go up to the lookout." And with that said they all started to head up.
Well this was my first chapter in a long long time. Hope it still feels like the same story, and as always please review. I will try to update when possible, again I apologize.
Next Chapter: Gurjal's strategy