Hello! I just want to thank everyone who reviewed. I really appreciated
the criticism and made some changes. Now, for those who have been
wondering what happened in the last episode, here it goes. Roger was
fighting Big Fowl, who was piloted by Rosewater. Rosewater was trying to
become Big Fowl's dominus. Roger tells him that megaduces chose their
masters. Big Fowl destroys Rosewater( a bunch of wires "devour" him).
Then Big Venus comes out and touches Big Fowl, destroying him. Then you
see Big O and Big Venus walking towards each other. As they do this, you
see this scene on a monitor in a television station. Angel is sitting
there watching this when Dorothy and Roger come up behind her. Next thing
it goes back to the beginning of the first episode, but one major
difference is that as he's driving he stops. Dorothy and Angel are
standing in a corner under an umbrella and get in the car with him. I
guess that this means that Paradime City was a stage and soap opera where
they got to play with the lives of their "creations". I also think it
means that the show will keep going until all of the characters are picked
up in the beginning??? I really hope this answered questions.
If it is still a little confusing, review and I'll be glad to e-mail you an explanation
Disclaimer: I do not own Big O. {}= character's thoughts
Ch. 2 Hints of Light
"Hello, I'm home!" said Dorothy as she walked into the kitchen and put up the vegetables. Since no one answered her, she went up to the living room to see if Roger was still there. But to her surprise, he was asleep on the couch. {He looks so cute just laying there}, she thought as she put a blanket over him. She hesitantly left the room, but then she came back and gave him a kiss on the cheek. "Well, I guess I better go and take a nap too since Norman is also gone." As Dorothy fell asleep, sweet dreams followed.
As she woke up, Dorothy could tell that it was raining outside. Loud thunder crashes could be heard and everytime they hit, the whole sky would light up. As she wondered how long she had been asleep, she heard some loud crashes downstairs. "I'll only tell you this one more time, Negotiator, give the android up and I'll spare you forever of the headache you get everytime you have to see me." {Oh no}, she thought, {it's that annoying scumbag, Beck.} "For the last time," she heard Roger yell, " She isn't going anywhere with you!!"
" Oh come on, Roger! Or do I sense that you and that android are something more?" This question opened up new doubts for Roger, so he answered " Don't be ridiculous Beck. I am merely her protector." As he said this, Dorothy felt a sting and tried to keep her face from showing pain. {He thinks he's only my protector.} As she felt her circuits start to slow down, she made her way downstairs. "Dorothy, stay back!" yelled Roger. "Don't you tell me what to do, you louse!!" she said as her words were interrupted by the sound of gunfire.
In the next instant, they saw Beck fall down to a bloody puddle on the floor. They were both equally surprised to see that it had been Norman who had fired the shots. "Forgive me, Master Roger, but I had to do it . He has done enough damage to Miss Dorothy and frankly, he was getting on my nerves." Roger was still too speechless to answer when he saw that Dorothy was on the verge of fainting. She only heard Roger calling out her name as she fell to the floor.
I'm sorry about making it short, but it is nice to end in a cliff hanger. What is wrong with Dorothy? Will she recover? And when will they finally express their feelings toward each other? But lastly, is Beck really dead?J Please review! ( smile)
If it is still a little confusing, review and I'll be glad to e-mail you an explanation
Disclaimer: I do not own Big O. {}= character's thoughts
Ch. 2 Hints of Light
"Hello, I'm home!" said Dorothy as she walked into the kitchen and put up the vegetables. Since no one answered her, she went up to the living room to see if Roger was still there. But to her surprise, he was asleep on the couch. {He looks so cute just laying there}, she thought as she put a blanket over him. She hesitantly left the room, but then she came back and gave him a kiss on the cheek. "Well, I guess I better go and take a nap too since Norman is also gone." As Dorothy fell asleep, sweet dreams followed.
As she woke up, Dorothy could tell that it was raining outside. Loud thunder crashes could be heard and everytime they hit, the whole sky would light up. As she wondered how long she had been asleep, she heard some loud crashes downstairs. "I'll only tell you this one more time, Negotiator, give the android up and I'll spare you forever of the headache you get everytime you have to see me." {Oh no}, she thought, {it's that annoying scumbag, Beck.} "For the last time," she heard Roger yell, " She isn't going anywhere with you!!"
" Oh come on, Roger! Or do I sense that you and that android are something more?" This question opened up new doubts for Roger, so he answered " Don't be ridiculous Beck. I am merely her protector." As he said this, Dorothy felt a sting and tried to keep her face from showing pain. {He thinks he's only my protector.} As she felt her circuits start to slow down, she made her way downstairs. "Dorothy, stay back!" yelled Roger. "Don't you tell me what to do, you louse!!" she said as her words were interrupted by the sound of gunfire.
In the next instant, they saw Beck fall down to a bloody puddle on the floor. They were both equally surprised to see that it had been Norman who had fired the shots. "Forgive me, Master Roger, but I had to do it . He has done enough damage to Miss Dorothy and frankly, he was getting on my nerves." Roger was still too speechless to answer when he saw that Dorothy was on the verge of fainting. She only heard Roger calling out her name as she fell to the floor.
I'm sorry about making it short, but it is nice to end in a cliff hanger. What is wrong with Dorothy? Will she recover? And when will they finally express their feelings toward each other? But lastly, is Beck really dead?J Please review! ( smile)