I change the like you guys requested. I need more people to review my
story. This is the turning point in it when... (Oops almost spoiled it
sorry.) Any ways I also changed the chapter title to this new one, because
I thought it fits the chapter better. Im also making this and the future
chapters like a story format (I'll try, but it is soo hard)
I am also work-in under serious time constraints (plyin games PS2, reading, and the lot). So don't worry when the next chapter is up cause I'll get to it. Also I trying to write 3 chapters per day (or at least per week since im BUSY).
Well let's get on to the story shall we...
Chapter 4: Sibling Rivalry
Place: Jin's House
The calm tranquil sky and the crisply crackle of the wind blew. The flowers all around the air of that where Jin lives was blowing, some almost breaking when suddenly. A space bus came and dropped Rain, Allen, and the impatient Shion off.
Meanwhile....
Jin had just finished dancing when he had a sudden sense that Shion was almost home. So Jin took off as fast as he could, while Shion got closer to the house each time. Soon enough Jin made it but when he came home Shion had already greeted Jin outside.
"There you are!" exclaimed Shion in an unsettling tone. Jin just bowed his head.
"Is that all you can do!!" Said Shion. "I can't believe you brother!
Jin raises his head and puts his hand through his thick braid-like hair and says:" Sis where were you I might ask?
Shion breaths and just replies: "I asked first!"
Jin then is enraged and his head gets big like Ryoko's from Tenshi Muyo and yells: "SIS, BRING IT ON NOW!!!!!"
They then both walk to this dojo-like place.
Shion says: "Hey Punk! Same rules as before?
Jin replies coolly: "Ya!" "Let's go!!"
They then get on there Jujitsu Robes and fight (the same robe Jin had in the end of Episode I).
They fight. First Shion does a 180 kick off the nearest wall and Jin lands safely on the ground. Then Jin burst out this beam from his hands knocking Shion on the wall face first (ouch).
Shion says in a crackling voice: "Uhhhhh. Jin No Fair!!
Jin then lifts her up (ala T3) and knocks her deep in the ground (ala DBZ).
Shion fly's up and lands back on the ground.
Meanwhile....... Place: Vector Industries Room building: #12: Second Division Handling Room
Male#1:(in a odd funny voice) "Looks like where ready to get started on upgrading KOS-MOS armor to the new one (I think that's why she has that new face and armor since they said she was supposed to get her new armor I think its reasonable to say that's why her design is different).
A female then comes in and says: "Get the new designs complete".
Male#2: "Yes, Miyuki we will get them finished by tonight!!!
Miyuki (brushes her hair with her nails) "Okay good job."
Back at the Fight....
Shion uses strange Ether it is....Erde Kaiser!!!!
Jin uses a shield to cover his whole body, but it doesn't hold for long.
Oooh a cliffhanger sorry guess you got to wait for Chapter 5: Battle Arena or side chapters 1-4. It's a long chapter. Well did I make it easier to read or what? Keep reviewing please Welll so long.
I am also work-in under serious time constraints (plyin games PS2, reading, and the lot). So don't worry when the next chapter is up cause I'll get to it. Also I trying to write 3 chapters per day (or at least per week since im BUSY).
Well let's get on to the story shall we...
Chapter 4: Sibling Rivalry
Place: Jin's House
The calm tranquil sky and the crisply crackle of the wind blew. The flowers all around the air of that where Jin lives was blowing, some almost breaking when suddenly. A space bus came and dropped Rain, Allen, and the impatient Shion off.
Meanwhile....
Jin had just finished dancing when he had a sudden sense that Shion was almost home. So Jin took off as fast as he could, while Shion got closer to the house each time. Soon enough Jin made it but when he came home Shion had already greeted Jin outside.
"There you are!" exclaimed Shion in an unsettling tone. Jin just bowed his head.
"Is that all you can do!!" Said Shion. "I can't believe you brother!
Jin raises his head and puts his hand through his thick braid-like hair and says:" Sis where were you I might ask?
Shion breaths and just replies: "I asked first!"
Jin then is enraged and his head gets big like Ryoko's from Tenshi Muyo and yells: "SIS, BRING IT ON NOW!!!!!"
They then both walk to this dojo-like place.
Shion says: "Hey Punk! Same rules as before?
Jin replies coolly: "Ya!" "Let's go!!"
They then get on there Jujitsu Robes and fight (the same robe Jin had in the end of Episode I).
They fight. First Shion does a 180 kick off the nearest wall and Jin lands safely on the ground. Then Jin burst out this beam from his hands knocking Shion on the wall face first (ouch).
Shion says in a crackling voice: "Uhhhhh. Jin No Fair!!
Jin then lifts her up (ala T3) and knocks her deep in the ground (ala DBZ).
Shion fly's up and lands back on the ground.
Meanwhile....... Place: Vector Industries Room building: #12: Second Division Handling Room
Male#1:(in a odd funny voice) "Looks like where ready to get started on upgrading KOS-MOS armor to the new one (I think that's why she has that new face and armor since they said she was supposed to get her new armor I think its reasonable to say that's why her design is different).
A female then comes in and says: "Get the new designs complete".
Male#2: "Yes, Miyuki we will get them finished by tonight!!!
Miyuki (brushes her hair with her nails) "Okay good job."
Back at the Fight....
Shion uses strange Ether it is....Erde Kaiser!!!!
Jin uses a shield to cover his whole body, but it doesn't hold for long.
Oooh a cliffhanger sorry guess you got to wait for Chapter 5: Battle Arena or side chapters 1-4. It's a long chapter. Well did I make it easier to read or what? Keep reviewing please Welll so long.