Alright I know I will be having a good deal of people made at me for starting a story then leaving for Europe for 3 weeks and not updating, but I just couldn't wait on posting this story and I promise once I get back it will be updated as much as I can update. Hopefully 2-3 times a week which to me seems reasonable.
Anyways that is beside the point. I wanted to at least give you the first chapter so here it is I hope it works up to what people were expecting.
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Quick Notes: - I may have miss spelt some planets names - Please note no character is really at the actual age they really are
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Title: Disgruntled Visions Disclaimer: I do not own either movie but I wish I did Rating: PG-13 (may change)
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Chapter 1:
"Success is counted sweetest by those who ne'er succeed." -Emily Dickinson
The large marble concaved room stood dimly lit by the sunlight as the new adult males scurried into their classrooms.
Sitting amongst large array of males was the brilliant mind of Bail Orgona, transfer student from the planet of Alderain. The silent un-sociable Obi- Wan Kenobi, transfer student from...no one knows he doesn't speak much. And finally Anakin Skywalker, who was given the opportunity to attend this prestigious University in Theed by the Governor; none knew anything else.
Anakin placed his elbow inclining it to the side resting his head against it, waiting in already a form of disapproval for their supposable professor, for the Ethics of the Force and What Co-insides Beneath Them.
Just as Anakin's eyes began to drift off thinking of the equation he was so longing to complete inside his dormitory that he did not notice Bail turned around and speaking to him. "Hey, hey...you guy who just came here because the Government said he could," said Bail laughing at his joke.
Anakin closed his eyes then opened them again, and when gaining his composer answered Bail back. "Unfortunately, ones like you of the lesser mind and stature will never understand why I am here and why classes of these sorts are pointless for the mind" Anakin rose from his seat walked towards the door as their professor entered.
"Well I see I do not even have to be present in the room for a student of mine to want to go else where" carried the Professor as he set his things down amongst his desk.
"You can't be serious...your going to just let him walk out like that..." retorted Bail in disbelief as he looked from one of the windows out at Anakin who was now out in the court yard pacing back and forth form side to side thinking as his face contorted. "The guy is crazed he leaves to just walk around in a circle."
Obi-Wan still quiet looked outside into the courtyard. He wondered in disbelief on why he would leave the classroom...it just seemed unethical to him.
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As the daily two-hour brake commenced and the leaden schoolboys sat at their benches doing what ever was going to please them at the time. Anakin Skywalker was at it again. He walked along the paved walkways then back along the grass and only to repeat that same movement another three times jotting down on his holo board a random notion that came to him.
"What in the devil are you doing Skywalker?" it was Bail he was sitting at a close bench tossing up and down one of the holo players to his disheveled death match battle game.
"I un-like you, am trying to create something" answered Anakin.
"Oh really now? And what might that be?"
"I am not quite sure yet."
Bail began to laugh in hysterics. "Your spending so much time on something you don't know?"
"That would be the point would it not? To find out the answer to what I don't know so that I many know what it is in the future. For the man who knows is the man remembered."
"Well then...Skywalker if you know so much. You must know how to beat me?" Bail tossed the figure again placing it on the board as the other players began to appear.
"I am mortified...Stupefied at your challenge and I do except." Anakin walked over to him placing his notes in his pockets and began the game.
"To except the challenge of the game you don't know so well is quiet hard to master." Bail placed his last piece as the game began to fade forming the letters of opponent 1 is the winner.
Anakin frustrated in this had no idea of what to do. "this game is not mathematically stabile and should not be played again by anyone with the brains to notice it..." He rose form his seat in anger and frustration. He lifted his leg a bit to high only allowing him to trip and then hear the loud laughter of the boys that surrounded them, but it quickly subsided.
"Who is that...Wow look...She is amazing" whispered the boys, and Anakin lifted himself up with his arms so that he may see what had changed the boys cruelties.
It was a young woman she looked to be in her late teens, sixteen at the most. His brains functions could not stop calculating on why she moved the way she did why her hair was the color of dark brown satin, why she wore such beaded gowns out in the public air. Then just like the other boys' minds drifted form him to her, his drifted from her to the voice that was speaking to them all form behind.
"That's Padme Amidala, She is said to be the new Queen of Naboo." It was Obi-Wan the man could actually speak.
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Anakin sat at his desk jotting down symbols and notations that only he in his right mind would ever what to learn about. He later climbed onto the desk and started to write along the wall so that he may have a bigger place to solve what needed to be solved when the door quickly opened from the dormitory hall and shut again.
"Finally, your periodical roommate has come."
"But I didn't..." Anakin turned around to view a young man. He was tall and lean; his hair was at his shoulders and pulled back only half way. He watched in disbelief as the man set his things down and sat on Anakin's bed.
"Names Qui-Gon...yours?"
"Anakin Skywalker..." Anakin turned back to his studies hoping he was a figment of his imagination and that he was just stressed form lack of food.
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Alright that Chapter is done. Remember please READ and REVIEW. Also I wont be here for 3 weeks so I will be coming up with a good chapter to make up for all that lost time.