I am back from my 3 week leave don't worry I worked on how this story was going to and how I was going to continue it, on those fun 8 hour bus rides (it was a senior trip). It took me a while to get used to the time zone but I think I'm good now along with having other issues that I had to take care of.
But that is all beside the point. The point is I have the 2nd chapter up and will have the next and so on hopefully every 3 days.
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Some last things to know:
-Jedi are not taken as children it is more of a Army situation in this story where they can be recruited because 'The Jedi' feel that to be able to handle the force you must be of a certain age.
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Title: Disgruntled Visions Disclaimer: I do not own either movie but I wish I did Rating: PG-13 (may change)
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Chapter 2:
"Don't walk behind me, I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." –Albert Camus
A few weeks had past, Anakin was now skipping his fifth class of the week as he sat at his desk still pondering over his problem. "If they say 'The Force' has two different but equal sides...why wouldn't either side want to merge with the other?" he thought aloud.
"Because, Anakin neither side can give each other the 'equal' state, that both must obtain to be whole" said a voice.
Anakin let out an annoyed sigh. He places the white liquid pen he was using on his desk. "What makes you so sure that...that is even the correct answer?" he said turning so that he was face to face with Qui Gon. "Oh, its just you Qui Gon."
"Yes, it's just me, and I am here to tell you...you need to get out. Staying in this room for all the time that you do would make a man go insane."
"Well, then I am not a normal man."
"Who ever said I was talking about you. Just looking at you is making me go insane so let this normal man keep what sanity he has."
Anakin began to laugh. "Alright, I will go out. Where would you like to go?"
"Me? I am fine...I said you needed to go out. So you go out. I will be fine." Qui Gon let his body fall onto the bed and go to sleep.
Anakin shook his head and laughed as walked out of the room and down to the dormitory lobby.
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When Anakin had made his way down to the lobby of his dormitory, he bought the newest Holo of the Theed News Times, and finally when he was on his way out the door he spotted Obi-Wan "On your way out too?"
"Yes actually I was."
"You don't mind if I join you? My roommate seems to think I need to get out." Anakin laughed a bit.
Obi-Wan looked over at him, he was about to ask him a question on that statement, but he kept it to himself. "No, more the merrier you know."
They both walked threw the twenty foot marble archway. The streets were not as full today as they were normally. There would be an occasional speeder or a cluster of people but nothing to big to make hard to get to their destination.
"So Anakin tell me what exactly is it that you do in that room of yours?"
"Trying to clear roomers?"
"You could say that." Obi-Wan laughed a bit to himself.
"I am like I have told many before, trying to find out something that no one else in the Galaxy in fact has ever found out. Something that will put me down in History."
"Ok." Obi-Wan looked at him as they walked along the marble stoned streets. "What would that be exactly?"
"The reason we have 'The Force', and if we have this 'wonderful' thing why would there be a group using it for evil. So my theory is if both good and evil want to use and can use it there is something that can take it way from both or be used by either to take it away from the apposing force itself." Anakin looked a bit confused as he scanned over Obi-Wan's horror stricken face.
Obi-Wan cleared his throat readying himself for his comeback on Anakin's statement. "'The Force' I believe is here for its own reasons. None to be tampered with because it sets its own course." He looked at Anakin slightly but then continued, "I myself have actually thought of persuading myself in the ways of the Jedi. I hope to be able to become at some time. Hopefully they will let me recruit."
Anakin looked at his friend. He was bewildered by this statement, but at the same time understanding in the fact that people do want to become 'One with The Force.' "Go ahead that type of thing isn't for me but if you want to go right ahead" Anakin shrugged.
Both began walking again carrying on another conversation as they made their way to the most popular bar in Theed when both just stopped in their tracks.
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Across the way two young women were walking from the large gardened gates of the Theed Place. The two women looked similar in age and height the only draw back into their identical appearance and mannerisms was their dress.
The one of the women had on what looked to be a dark red silk over top underneath some breathable satin that matched the silk to help with the heat of mid-day. Her hair was done up in a tight bun with small braids falling from it draping her back.
The other had on a simple dress covered by a light blue silk over top just as the other woman; except her head was covered by a hood with the same light blue silk.
Both were being closely fallowed by a tall dark-skinned palace guard, who was in an assortment of breathable cottons that were covered by leather armor plates. He walked up close and whispered something to the woman in red then turned and went back to the safe distance he was in before.
"Wait so your Parents' both denied you attending the University again?"
"Yes, and their excuses this time was that I can not study to be a queen when I am out in the publics eye so I must be instructed by a private tutor.
"Now what number will this Tutor be Padme?"
"Oh, this is number...Hm... You know I lost count Sabe." She began to giggle, and Sabe joined.
The two walked up to the street intersection; stood waiting as the sleek metallic green speeder sped by and the overhead like turned green to cross. They began walking on their way when they were stopped by to men. "Excuse Me," said Padme as she tried to maneuver without ruining her cloths.
"Oh...Sorry miss my fault" said one of the men.
She turned back to him and walked over as Sabe and the guard stood waiting for her. She extend her hand. "What is your name? If you don't mind me asking?"
The man took it kissing it gently then shaking it a bit. "Anakin Skywalker."
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All right its finished. The next one should be up soon maybe next week if not just E-mail me something nasty about how I'm horrible at updating and I will update as fast as I can.
Read & Review please!
But that is all beside the point. The point is I have the 2nd chapter up and will have the next and so on hopefully every 3 days.
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Some last things to know:
-Jedi are not taken as children it is more of a Army situation in this story where they can be recruited because 'The Jedi' feel that to be able to handle the force you must be of a certain age.
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Title: Disgruntled Visions Disclaimer: I do not own either movie but I wish I did Rating: PG-13 (may change)
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Chapter 2:
"Don't walk behind me, I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." –Albert Camus
A few weeks had past, Anakin was now skipping his fifth class of the week as he sat at his desk still pondering over his problem. "If they say 'The Force' has two different but equal sides...why wouldn't either side want to merge with the other?" he thought aloud.
"Because, Anakin neither side can give each other the 'equal' state, that both must obtain to be whole" said a voice.
Anakin let out an annoyed sigh. He places the white liquid pen he was using on his desk. "What makes you so sure that...that is even the correct answer?" he said turning so that he was face to face with Qui Gon. "Oh, its just you Qui Gon."
"Yes, it's just me, and I am here to tell you...you need to get out. Staying in this room for all the time that you do would make a man go insane."
"Well, then I am not a normal man."
"Who ever said I was talking about you. Just looking at you is making me go insane so let this normal man keep what sanity he has."
Anakin began to laugh. "Alright, I will go out. Where would you like to go?"
"Me? I am fine...I said you needed to go out. So you go out. I will be fine." Qui Gon let his body fall onto the bed and go to sleep.
Anakin shook his head and laughed as walked out of the room and down to the dormitory lobby.
--:::--
When Anakin had made his way down to the lobby of his dormitory, he bought the newest Holo of the Theed News Times, and finally when he was on his way out the door he spotted Obi-Wan "On your way out too?"
"Yes actually I was."
"You don't mind if I join you? My roommate seems to think I need to get out." Anakin laughed a bit.
Obi-Wan looked over at him, he was about to ask him a question on that statement, but he kept it to himself. "No, more the merrier you know."
They both walked threw the twenty foot marble archway. The streets were not as full today as they were normally. There would be an occasional speeder or a cluster of people but nothing to big to make hard to get to their destination.
"So Anakin tell me what exactly is it that you do in that room of yours?"
"Trying to clear roomers?"
"You could say that." Obi-Wan laughed a bit to himself.
"I am like I have told many before, trying to find out something that no one else in the Galaxy in fact has ever found out. Something that will put me down in History."
"Ok." Obi-Wan looked at him as they walked along the marble stoned streets. "What would that be exactly?"
"The reason we have 'The Force', and if we have this 'wonderful' thing why would there be a group using it for evil. So my theory is if both good and evil want to use and can use it there is something that can take it way from both or be used by either to take it away from the apposing force itself." Anakin looked a bit confused as he scanned over Obi-Wan's horror stricken face.
Obi-Wan cleared his throat readying himself for his comeback on Anakin's statement. "'The Force' I believe is here for its own reasons. None to be tampered with because it sets its own course." He looked at Anakin slightly but then continued, "I myself have actually thought of persuading myself in the ways of the Jedi. I hope to be able to become at some time. Hopefully they will let me recruit."
Anakin looked at his friend. He was bewildered by this statement, but at the same time understanding in the fact that people do want to become 'One with The Force.' "Go ahead that type of thing isn't for me but if you want to go right ahead" Anakin shrugged.
Both began walking again carrying on another conversation as they made their way to the most popular bar in Theed when both just stopped in their tracks.
--:::--
Across the way two young women were walking from the large gardened gates of the Theed Place. The two women looked similar in age and height the only draw back into their identical appearance and mannerisms was their dress.
The one of the women had on what looked to be a dark red silk over top underneath some breathable satin that matched the silk to help with the heat of mid-day. Her hair was done up in a tight bun with small braids falling from it draping her back.
The other had on a simple dress covered by a light blue silk over top just as the other woman; except her head was covered by a hood with the same light blue silk.
Both were being closely fallowed by a tall dark-skinned palace guard, who was in an assortment of breathable cottons that were covered by leather armor plates. He walked up close and whispered something to the woman in red then turned and went back to the safe distance he was in before.
"Wait so your Parents' both denied you attending the University again?"
"Yes, and their excuses this time was that I can not study to be a queen when I am out in the publics eye so I must be instructed by a private tutor.
"Now what number will this Tutor be Padme?"
"Oh, this is number...Hm... You know I lost count Sabe." She began to giggle, and Sabe joined.
The two walked up to the street intersection; stood waiting as the sleek metallic green speeder sped by and the overhead like turned green to cross. They began walking on their way when they were stopped by to men. "Excuse Me," said Padme as she tried to maneuver without ruining her cloths.
"Oh...Sorry miss my fault" said one of the men.
She turned back to him and walked over as Sabe and the guard stood waiting for her. She extend her hand. "What is your name? If you don't mind me asking?"
The man took it kissing it gently then shaking it a bit. "Anakin Skywalker."
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All right its finished. The next one should be up soon maybe next week if not just E-mail me something nasty about how I'm horrible at updating and I will update as fast as I can.
Read & Review please!