Author's Note: I'm going to start to ask for two reviews for the next
chapter because only one person so far has reviewed my chapters. And I
won't count an anonymous review, sorry! So this story will be continued
after two reviews. Thanks! ^_^
[~Benji of Redwall-Chapter IV~]
A story addition by [~Shadow of Silver~] on FanFiction.net
It was dawn when Riverrung and his small band moved out towards Redwall.
"Sah! 'Ow long t'Redwall?" one of the corsairs asked.
"We'll be there when oi says we will, vermin! You just worry 'bout walkin'
along the path and obeyin' orders!" Riverrung said.
[_*~*~*_]
Meanwhile, the seven warriors were on their way to witness the battle that
would come before them. Martin was the first to speak up. "Everybeast,
stop! I hear corsairs about..." he warned. They all looked to the nearest
hill on the path, and could see Riverung's band of corsairs coming up the
hill. At this time, Wavetail spoke up. "That's Riverrung! He's leading a
band towards Redwall!" he said.
"Riverrung is the only beaver corsair in all the land around here, and he's
part of Rangbad's band. One of the elite warriors of his band, actually."
Bowstring informed.
They all pulled out their weaponry, and ran towards the evil band,
screaming their war cries: "Redwall!! Eulalia!!"
Riverrung saw the seven warriors running to them, and yelled out in
warning. "Corsairs! Attack!" All the vermin and corsairs ran down the hill,
ready for attack.
[_*~*~*_]
Back at Rangbad's camp, they packed up and moved on, putting out the fire
and folding up their tents, some fighting over which tent was whose.
Eventually the band started to walk along the path, armor clinging and
weaponry and tents on their backs.
Rangbad at the front, the three elite warriors of the band devised a plan
for the slaves. "Three days 'ence, Riverrung'll be ready. If 'e won't..."
Rangbad showed a finger going across his neck, "'E'll be finished like a
fish caught by an 'ungry seal! That'll teach 'im to disobey orders from
Rangbad the Rat!" And they all laughed, until Rangbad stopped, who peered
at the others, who immediately went silent.
"But sah, what'll we do until then?" an unwise Redpaw asked. "Well, what
d'ya think we'll do?! Get more slaves, ya filthy vermin!!" Rangbad yelled.
They spoke among themselves, until the meeting was finally adjourned,
returning to their usual tasks as they walked along the path, some catching
unfortunate woodland creatures into shackles.
There was also a meeting of the rebellion of Rangbad in progress. One of
the corsairs happened to be spying on them, and realized after listening
for a moment that they were going to rebel against Rangbad.
The corsair, Sharptooth, walked ahead of the band to find Rangbad. "Sah!
Excuse me, sah!" he said, getting Rangbad's attention. He obviously wasn't
in a good mood. "Whaddaya want, filthy scum?!" he yelled. At this point,
Sharptooth felt intimidated. "Um...sah, oi'm greatly sorry t'interrupt ya
orderin' around, but there are rebels about! They're plannin' to slay yer
and take ova!" he informed.
"Slay me, eh! I'll take none o'that! Where are they, the vermins! Tell me,
quickly!" he said, "Redpaw! How's yer archery?"
"Very good, sah! Oi could shoot a python in the dark!" Redpaw responded.
"Well then get ready tonight, we're going on an ambush! No corsair will
defy the wrath of Rangbad the Rat!"
[_*~*~*_]
At the Abbey, there was great rejoicing over the next coming season,
including the Great Autumn Feast that would come with it. Unfortunately,
Father Abbot was under the weather in the sick bay, with Sister Lavender
comforting him. "But...I'm supposed to name the next season! I must go down
to see Matti and devise a great name!", the old Abbot said, and coughed
harshly.
"Not after that abrupt coughing, Father Abbot, I'm sorry. You must stay
here until you get better." Sister Lavender said.
Downstairs in the kitchens, there were rustling as the new fire was made to
cook the bread from the wheat fields. The smell of fruits and pies were
running through the Abbey, and could be even smelt outside in the
Mossflower Wood. The Dibbuns were outside by the window, waiting to sneek a
taste of the pies.
"Boi, wudd oi likes the tastin' of that thurr poie! Deeper 'n' ever, hurr!"
one of them said. Lightfeather the owl, watching the Dibbuns secretly,
landed silently behind them, listening to what they were saying. He felt
that it was finally time, and scared them. "Boo!" he said, and the Dibbuns
screamed, running away into the building. Lightfeather laughed.
[_*~*~*_]
The battle between the band of Riverrung and Martin's group went on to
night, until finally Redarrow took out the arrow that was the ticket to the
Dark Forest for Riverrung, and launched the arrow that seemed to grow out
of Riverrung's chest. He fell, killed by the poisoned arrow. Suddenly, all
the corsairs stopped. Their leader was killed.
"Off with ye, y'filthy vermin! Oi neva wanna see ya 'round these parts ever
again!" Benji yelled, and the corsairs from Riverrung's band scrambled,
defeated by the elite warriors.
Author's Note: I will stop here, because then if I didn't, there'd be seven
pages! So here it is, and I need two reviews before I start the fifth
chapter. Thanks! ^_^
chapter because only one person so far has reviewed my chapters. And I
won't count an anonymous review, sorry! So this story will be continued
after two reviews. Thanks! ^_^
[~Benji of Redwall-Chapter IV~]
A story addition by [~Shadow of Silver~] on FanFiction.net
It was dawn when Riverrung and his small band moved out towards Redwall.
"Sah! 'Ow long t'Redwall?" one of the corsairs asked.
"We'll be there when oi says we will, vermin! You just worry 'bout walkin'
along the path and obeyin' orders!" Riverrung said.
[_*~*~*_]
Meanwhile, the seven warriors were on their way to witness the battle that
would come before them. Martin was the first to speak up. "Everybeast,
stop! I hear corsairs about..." he warned. They all looked to the nearest
hill on the path, and could see Riverung's band of corsairs coming up the
hill. At this time, Wavetail spoke up. "That's Riverrung! He's leading a
band towards Redwall!" he said.
"Riverrung is the only beaver corsair in all the land around here, and he's
part of Rangbad's band. One of the elite warriors of his band, actually."
Bowstring informed.
They all pulled out their weaponry, and ran towards the evil band,
screaming their war cries: "Redwall!! Eulalia!!"
Riverrung saw the seven warriors running to them, and yelled out in
warning. "Corsairs! Attack!" All the vermin and corsairs ran down the hill,
ready for attack.
[_*~*~*_]
Back at Rangbad's camp, they packed up and moved on, putting out the fire
and folding up their tents, some fighting over which tent was whose.
Eventually the band started to walk along the path, armor clinging and
weaponry and tents on their backs.
Rangbad at the front, the three elite warriors of the band devised a plan
for the slaves. "Three days 'ence, Riverrung'll be ready. If 'e won't..."
Rangbad showed a finger going across his neck, "'E'll be finished like a
fish caught by an 'ungry seal! That'll teach 'im to disobey orders from
Rangbad the Rat!" And they all laughed, until Rangbad stopped, who peered
at the others, who immediately went silent.
"But sah, what'll we do until then?" an unwise Redpaw asked. "Well, what
d'ya think we'll do?! Get more slaves, ya filthy vermin!!" Rangbad yelled.
They spoke among themselves, until the meeting was finally adjourned,
returning to their usual tasks as they walked along the path, some catching
unfortunate woodland creatures into shackles.
There was also a meeting of the rebellion of Rangbad in progress. One of
the corsairs happened to be spying on them, and realized after listening
for a moment that they were going to rebel against Rangbad.
The corsair, Sharptooth, walked ahead of the band to find Rangbad. "Sah!
Excuse me, sah!" he said, getting Rangbad's attention. He obviously wasn't
in a good mood. "Whaddaya want, filthy scum?!" he yelled. At this point,
Sharptooth felt intimidated. "Um...sah, oi'm greatly sorry t'interrupt ya
orderin' around, but there are rebels about! They're plannin' to slay yer
and take ova!" he informed.
"Slay me, eh! I'll take none o'that! Where are they, the vermins! Tell me,
quickly!" he said, "Redpaw! How's yer archery?"
"Very good, sah! Oi could shoot a python in the dark!" Redpaw responded.
"Well then get ready tonight, we're going on an ambush! No corsair will
defy the wrath of Rangbad the Rat!"
[_*~*~*_]
At the Abbey, there was great rejoicing over the next coming season,
including the Great Autumn Feast that would come with it. Unfortunately,
Father Abbot was under the weather in the sick bay, with Sister Lavender
comforting him. "But...I'm supposed to name the next season! I must go down
to see Matti and devise a great name!", the old Abbot said, and coughed
harshly.
"Not after that abrupt coughing, Father Abbot, I'm sorry. You must stay
here until you get better." Sister Lavender said.
Downstairs in the kitchens, there were rustling as the new fire was made to
cook the bread from the wheat fields. The smell of fruits and pies were
running through the Abbey, and could be even smelt outside in the
Mossflower Wood. The Dibbuns were outside by the window, waiting to sneek a
taste of the pies.
"Boi, wudd oi likes the tastin' of that thurr poie! Deeper 'n' ever, hurr!"
one of them said. Lightfeather the owl, watching the Dibbuns secretly,
landed silently behind them, listening to what they were saying. He felt
that it was finally time, and scared them. "Boo!" he said, and the Dibbuns
screamed, running away into the building. Lightfeather laughed.
[_*~*~*_]
The battle between the band of Riverrung and Martin's group went on to
night, until finally Redarrow took out the arrow that was the ticket to the
Dark Forest for Riverrung, and launched the arrow that seemed to grow out
of Riverrung's chest. He fell, killed by the poisoned arrow. Suddenly, all
the corsairs stopped. Their leader was killed.
"Off with ye, y'filthy vermin! Oi neva wanna see ya 'round these parts ever
again!" Benji yelled, and the corsairs from Riverrung's band scrambled,
defeated by the elite warriors.
Author's Note: I will stop here, because then if I didn't, there'd be seven
pages! So here it is, and I need two reviews before I start the fifth
chapter. Thanks! ^_^