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This is going to be short because originally this and the first chapter were going to be 1 chapter but I changed it.
Chapter 2
Finally 7:30 rolled around and he arrives. He comes to the door. He greets her with a kiss, that although she has experienced this kiss many times before still makes her knees go weak. He takes her down to the car, a white stretch, although she has been in many limos because of her career, no-one has ever gotten her one for a date before.
They finally arrive at Alexandro's, where they had their first date as a 'serious couple'. He leads her up to the roof, where there is a table set up for 2. "It is so romantic sweetie", she tells him. "I thought you like it", he replies. She smiles.
Later on in the evening, after dessert, the string quartet is playing, "I love this", she tells him. "Good" he replies, "Would you like to dance" she nods her head in agreement. So they end up doing around 3 dances, they are all slow. They stop dancing, and clap for the musicians then he turns to her and says as he slowly drops to one knee, "I have loved you since before I could remember, so Elizabeth Brooke McGuire will you do me the greatest honour by marrying me?".
Ok I have two questions and I am not going to post another chapter till I have at least three answers if not more, I am not trying to be mean but I need answers. Ok first should he be Gordo or someone else? Second should Lizzie faint Or answer? My email is lizzie_mcguire_is_weird@yahoo.com if you want to email me. Also sorry about it being so short. Sorry I posted this chapter Before I had saved the end so I had to repost it Soz :-P
This is going to be short because originally this and the first chapter were going to be 1 chapter but I changed it.
Chapter 2
Finally 7:30 rolled around and he arrives. He comes to the door. He greets her with a kiss, that although she has experienced this kiss many times before still makes her knees go weak. He takes her down to the car, a white stretch, although she has been in many limos because of her career, no-one has ever gotten her one for a date before.
They finally arrive at Alexandro's, where they had their first date as a 'serious couple'. He leads her up to the roof, where there is a table set up for 2. "It is so romantic sweetie", she tells him. "I thought you like it", he replies. She smiles.
Later on in the evening, after dessert, the string quartet is playing, "I love this", she tells him. "Good" he replies, "Would you like to dance" she nods her head in agreement. So they end up doing around 3 dances, they are all slow. They stop dancing, and clap for the musicians then he turns to her and says as he slowly drops to one knee, "I have loved you since before I could remember, so Elizabeth Brooke McGuire will you do me the greatest honour by marrying me?".
Ok I have two questions and I am not going to post another chapter till I have at least three answers if not more, I am not trying to be mean but I need answers. Ok first should he be Gordo or someone else? Second should Lizzie faint Or answer? My email is lizzie_mcguire_is_weird@yahoo.com if you want to email me. Also sorry about it being so short. Sorry I posted this chapter Before I had saved the end so I had to repost it Soz :-P