Kay guys this is gonna be short cause I am sorta in the middler of writing a play for skool, thinking of my pd projest and writin the draft for my 2 page essay which is new in 1 week and 2 days. I knowe that may not seem like a long essay but is on a rainforest for sobbing out loud. Also my b- day is in 2 days and I am excited cause I am like the youngest in my grade so I am the only person my age in my grade at the moment. I got a comment saying my story isn't got anything in it that should be PG- 13, but I probably will lata and if it doesn't then guess what the solution is simple I change the rating :-P. Any way I also got a comment that it was predictable. Hello it is a fluff. Of course it is predictable. Give the example of a fluff that isn't. Someone also mentioned about the fact that my grammer wasn't very good and I use an advanced vocab. Get a life there are stories with worse grammer out there at least mine is readablr and the reason it isnt so good is that. I want to get the chapter up for u guys cause at the moment a cant post much so yeah. And the vocab is just the way I speak. I mean how old r u to think that thet is advaced vocab. Kay bai babi For now. I will update definatly by the end of the month Keep on reading Luv u guys when u review