Redo of chapter 9
Chapter 9: Kill him Aelita!!! Betrayal Xana?! The dark curse
"I said, I wouldn't him Xana! I won't kill Jeremy!!!!!!!!!!!" Aelita shouts.
"You will him or I'll kill them." Xana treasons. "You wouldn't?!!!" Aelita says. "Try me." Xana says. "No one diverse this Xana, no one!" Aelita shouts. "You think I kind? I do as my Master commands and nothing more." Xana says. "Your nothing but his dog now." Aelita says. "You think? No I want Shiroi yami no ken just as bad to kill my Master." Xana says. "Betrayal Xana?" Naraku's voice asks. "NO!!! Never Master Naraku!!!" Xana stammers. "Hehehahaha, hmm, yeah right. Like Tsubaki, yourself want the great power to destroy your emeries Xana!" Naraku shouts. "I would never betray you Master Naraku." Xana says. "Liar!" Naraku shouts. Xana laughs, "Hahaha Hahaha, Hahaha hmm your right Master!" Xana laughs again. "So you do betray me Xana?" Naraku asks. "I do Master Naraku." Xana says, "Now Aelita kill Jeremy!" Xana shouts. "I won't kill him Xana!" Aelita shouts. "You will kill him Aelita, you will kill him!" Xana shouts. "Xana calm yourself." Naraku says.
"What? I don't work for you anymore Naraku, so stay out of this!" Xana shouts. "Very will then Xana, and only some advice Shiroi yami no ken, can and will give you the power to control minds." Naraku hisses. "Now Tsubaki curse them!" Naraku shouts in his mind. "Yes Master Naraku." Tsubaki says back as she says a few words in Japanese, The curse translations,
"...Odaigte, Odaigte, Odaigte, ODAIGTE...!!!!!!!!! Of the dark and darker and darkness, Fall under my spell ladies, Fall away from your man, your true loves and Servor me as you do them." Tsubaki chanes. Suddenly the girls go white as if under a spell, Aelita faints 'again'. "AELITA!" Jeremy shouts. "Jeremy...auhh Jeremy..." Aelita says with her last breath. "AAAEELLLLIIIITTTTAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jeremy shouts.
Meanwhile in boys' dorn everyone are watching movies like 'Scream' and other horrer moives, "No don't go in there." Says a character in a moive a earth-shattering scream is heard "AHHH!" the character screams.
All of the guy look down at their girlfriends or wibes as the case may be and kiss them, but as the kisses end something befalls the girls in the room as it did Aelita, Tsubaki's take hold of them all, the guys hear in the air a cold voice chaning,
"...Odaigte, Odaigte, Odaigte, ODAIGTE...!!!!!!!!! Of the dark and darker and darkness, Fall under my spell ladies, Fall away from your man, your true loves and Servor me as you do them."
"KKAAGGOOMMEE!!!!! YYUUMMIIIII!!!!!! RRUUTTOO!!!!!!! KKAAOORRUUU!!!!!!!" Inuyasha, Ulrich, Link and Kenshin shouts. "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" all the guys shouts, "XANA!!!" Inuyasha, Link and Kenshin shouts it the same time, "No.... NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" they all shouts again into the air, as the shouts ehco in the night.
Chapter 9: Kill him Aelita!!! Betrayal Xana?! The dark curse
"I said, I wouldn't him Xana! I won't kill Jeremy!!!!!!!!!!!" Aelita shouts.
"You will him or I'll kill them." Xana treasons. "You wouldn't?!!!" Aelita says. "Try me." Xana says. "No one diverse this Xana, no one!" Aelita shouts. "You think I kind? I do as my Master commands and nothing more." Xana says. "Your nothing but his dog now." Aelita says. "You think? No I want Shiroi yami no ken just as bad to kill my Master." Xana says. "Betrayal Xana?" Naraku's voice asks. "NO!!! Never Master Naraku!!!" Xana stammers. "Hehehahaha, hmm, yeah right. Like Tsubaki, yourself want the great power to destroy your emeries Xana!" Naraku shouts. "I would never betray you Master Naraku." Xana says. "Liar!" Naraku shouts. Xana laughs, "Hahaha Hahaha, Hahaha hmm your right Master!" Xana laughs again. "So you do betray me Xana?" Naraku asks. "I do Master Naraku." Xana says, "Now Aelita kill Jeremy!" Xana shouts. "I won't kill him Xana!" Aelita shouts. "You will kill him Aelita, you will kill him!" Xana shouts. "Xana calm yourself." Naraku says.
"What? I don't work for you anymore Naraku, so stay out of this!" Xana shouts. "Very will then Xana, and only some advice Shiroi yami no ken, can and will give you the power to control minds." Naraku hisses. "Now Tsubaki curse them!" Naraku shouts in his mind. "Yes Master Naraku." Tsubaki says back as she says a few words in Japanese, The curse translations,
"...Odaigte, Odaigte, Odaigte, ODAIGTE...!!!!!!!!! Of the dark and darker and darkness, Fall under my spell ladies, Fall away from your man, your true loves and Servor me as you do them." Tsubaki chanes. Suddenly the girls go white as if under a spell, Aelita faints 'again'. "AELITA!" Jeremy shouts. "Jeremy...auhh Jeremy..." Aelita says with her last breath. "AAAEELLLLIIIITTTTAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jeremy shouts.
Meanwhile in boys' dorn everyone are watching movies like 'Scream' and other horrer moives, "No don't go in there." Says a character in a moive a earth-shattering scream is heard "AHHH!" the character screams.
All of the guy look down at their girlfriends or wibes as the case may be and kiss them, but as the kisses end something befalls the girls in the room as it did Aelita, Tsubaki's take hold of them all, the guys hear in the air a cold voice chaning,
"...Odaigte, Odaigte, Odaigte, ODAIGTE...!!!!!!!!! Of the dark and darker and darkness, Fall under my spell ladies, Fall away from your man, your true loves and Servor me as you do them."
"KKAAGGOOMMEE!!!!! YYUUMMIIIII!!!!!! RRUUTTOO!!!!!!! KKAAOORRUUU!!!!!!!" Inuyasha, Ulrich, Link and Kenshin shouts. "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" all the guys shouts, "XANA!!!" Inuyasha, Link and Kenshin shouts it the same time, "No.... NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" they all shouts again into the air, as the shouts ehco in the night.