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13Ghosts:Evil Shall Never Die
A Ghostly Game!!!
Kayla just stared at the scary lookin ghost and he resembled the one called The Jackal...She then heard Susan scream she turned around to see Susan get shoved into the Bloody Water and A.P smiling creepy and she then look towards the Jackal who was staring Lustfully at Kayla...Kayla tried to be brave and she said J-Jackal or Ryan Kuhn Im not afraid of you!! The Jackal simply laughed and Said Really Now? then why are you shaking he said getting closer to her...STAY AWAY!!! Kayla screamed and made a dash for the door and A.P tried to go after her while Jackal grabbed her arm and said If that girl wants to play Cat and Mouse she can be my guest...A.P why dont you locate the others and tell them we have a little game to play..then as that was said they both flickered out of site..Susan quickly got up she was holden her breath under that nasty Bloody pool she was stuck under and Susan then ran out to look for her best friend.
Meanwhile Jake somehow got drunk(Tucker and them had cans of beer and sum other stuff) and was walking clumsy away from the others and into the bathroom and said to the mirror Bloody Mary 5 times and he laughed and turned around to see her she grinned evil at him he laughed because in a way she resembled Kayla or Susan he walk toward her she smiled and said Follow Me Jakey..Of course being drunk he does and she leads him to an empty room where she kissed him and had a bottle of wine and he drank it all and passed out...when he woke up he was tied to a table(operating) and he saw the utensils around knifes axes needles and he nearly pissed his pants!!! he then saw B.M and she had gloves on and said hello Jakey!! were going to play a game called Doctor Tortures his/her Patient!!hahaha..what? never heard of that game? well Jakey todays your lucky day oh i bet ur wonderin why i have gloves on huh? well thats simple i dont want to get my hands dirty hahahaha.......Jake screamed but noone could hear him because he was in her glass room...
Kayla meanwhile got downstairs screaming her head off and the others looked confused and Jack went towards her and asked whats wrong and she told him and if you were exspecting him to hug and hold her saying it's all right well then ur readin the wrong story right now!!! he to her surprise threw his head back and laughed so did Tucker... Gaz just stood there daydreaming or deep in thought...Kayla then shouted ARENT U LISTENING TO ME?!? THOSE GHOSTS ARE GODDAM KILLERS!!!WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE!!!! Jack then said Kayley...It's quite easy to tell that you had way to much to drink..While Kayla got mad and Said You know I dont drink asshole!!! Well Then ur Hallusinating..it is a scary ass house...then Susan ran downstairs screaming and Tucker said WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!? and Susan screamed GHOSTS!!! and Jack was like oh god no this again..Tucker-- what do u mean man?!? theres blood all over her!! then Jack walked over and said it has to be paint or corn syrup or sumthin..he walked over and licked her face and nearly puked ew gross ur right it is blood...Kayla--Wheres Mark and Sara?!? Susan--or Jake?
Jake looked horrified because she now brought in a pair of scissors hair spray a lighter..all kinds of scary torturing stuff....B.M--All Right Jakey Lets Begin My Lil. Game and grabbed a knife and carved her name into his stommach with him yelling and protesting...aww you made me messed up B.M said Laughing and she gravved a needle scissors and began jabbing him ignoring his screams of agony and began spilling and smearing his blood on the wall....While The others decided to split up Tucker and Gaz ..Jack,Kayla and Susan were together and Kayla and her group went upstairs while Tucker and Gaz went Downward...When Kayla ans Co. were walking Kayla was deep in thought when she saw blood on the floor...she bent downward and she heard susan and Jack Scream she turned around only tro see nuthing..when she turned around.....BOO!!!! The Jackal Suddenly appeared and she screamed and fell off the stairs and fell on her side she started to crawl away in pain crying thinking why are we here? is this my punishment for wanting to have fun...? she then suddenly managed to get up and didnt see Jackal anywhere.
Gaz and Tucker were looking around and Tucker couldny beleive How Gaz could remain so calm sure she was an expert in ghosts but still you'd think even an expert could get scared coming face to face an encounter with a ghost..but with Gaz you never know...They were walking when Gaz stopped said Oh No!!What? Tucker asked and he look foward and saw The Juggernaut..and The Hammer Standing their with wicked grins on their face and Before Gaz could do anything Tucker Grabbed her arm and they ran up stairs as the two ghosts vanished out of site and Jack opened his eyes to see Kayla crying and he say Susan was gone the last thing he remember was some Teenage looking boy partly burnt and he had a baseball bat he kinda resembled James Dean..or sumthin...Jack-Kayla..u alright? Kayla--Jack...ur alive?!? Jack--ya..Kayla--Jack..I dont know where the kids are or anyone..its like everyone suddenly vanished before my eyes Kayla said sobbing well Lets get out of here..Suddenly Gaz and Tucker appeared Tucker-- we have to leave now...!! I dont think so...what? The 4 teens looked toward the doorway to see EVERY single ghost standing their with evil smiles(Dennis and the good ghosts arent there they got locked up by the Jackal and Juggernaut because they thought Ap's evil plan was stupid and wouldnt help them in succseeding it) A.P laughed as The Jackal smirked and Said Why leave now when OUR Party and Games are just about to begin!!!!Kayla-y-you mean its not over why not!!!?!! Jackal-Of course it isnt over We still have lots to play!! Jackal and the ghosts laughed evilly We'll have a ghostly goul time!! !! The 4 teens sighed thinking this is going to be the longest and perhaps last night of their lifes.....
Ok..I know it's short but i couldnt think..but uh...Should I Continue or Not...Oh and Who Wants to be in the story I just need 8 (guy) 2.Detective(girl or guy) 3.Evil Girl in the mirror 4.Jackals ghostly g.f 5.Jackal and the ghost Slave Girl 6.Funny Teenage kid(girl or guy 7.Susans older Sister 8.Susan or Kaylas ex b/f
ya..I decided Jackal needed a Ghostly chick!! and it is if i get more reviews I'll Update and Stuff....But Who's ur Fav. Ghosts? and Characters I've created? Human character and Ghost character? uh...so Update Soon and If ya like this ask me to make more and my next one will have a Casting Call...and if you want me to write a story about you dont hesitate to ask I LUVVVV Writing so uhh...Bye
13Ghosts:Evil Shall Never Die
A Ghostly Game!!!
Kayla just stared at the scary lookin ghost and he resembled the one called The Jackal...She then heard Susan scream she turned around to see Susan get shoved into the Bloody Water and A.P smiling creepy and she then look towards the Jackal who was staring Lustfully at Kayla...Kayla tried to be brave and she said J-Jackal or Ryan Kuhn Im not afraid of you!! The Jackal simply laughed and Said Really Now? then why are you shaking he said getting closer to her...STAY AWAY!!! Kayla screamed and made a dash for the door and A.P tried to go after her while Jackal grabbed her arm and said If that girl wants to play Cat and Mouse she can be my guest...A.P why dont you locate the others and tell them we have a little game to play..then as that was said they both flickered out of site..Susan quickly got up she was holden her breath under that nasty Bloody pool she was stuck under and Susan then ran out to look for her best friend.
Meanwhile Jake somehow got drunk(Tucker and them had cans of beer and sum other stuff) and was walking clumsy away from the others and into the bathroom and said to the mirror Bloody Mary 5 times and he laughed and turned around to see her she grinned evil at him he laughed because in a way she resembled Kayla or Susan he walk toward her she smiled and said Follow Me Jakey..Of course being drunk he does and she leads him to an empty room where she kissed him and had a bottle of wine and he drank it all and passed out...when he woke up he was tied to a table(operating) and he saw the utensils around knifes axes needles and he nearly pissed his pants!!! he then saw B.M and she had gloves on and said hello Jakey!! were going to play a game called Doctor Tortures his/her Patient!!hahaha..what? never heard of that game? well Jakey todays your lucky day oh i bet ur wonderin why i have gloves on huh? well thats simple i dont want to get my hands dirty hahahaha.......Jake screamed but noone could hear him because he was in her glass room...
Kayla meanwhile got downstairs screaming her head off and the others looked confused and Jack went towards her and asked whats wrong and she told him and if you were exspecting him to hug and hold her saying it's all right well then ur readin the wrong story right now!!! he to her surprise threw his head back and laughed so did Tucker... Gaz just stood there daydreaming or deep in thought...Kayla then shouted ARENT U LISTENING TO ME?!? THOSE GHOSTS ARE GODDAM KILLERS!!!WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE!!!! Jack then said Kayley...It's quite easy to tell that you had way to much to drink..While Kayla got mad and Said You know I dont drink asshole!!! Well Then ur Hallusinating..it is a scary ass house...then Susan ran downstairs screaming and Tucker said WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!? and Susan screamed GHOSTS!!! and Jack was like oh god no this again..Tucker-- what do u mean man?!? theres blood all over her!! then Jack walked over and said it has to be paint or corn syrup or sumthin..he walked over and licked her face and nearly puked ew gross ur right it is blood...Kayla--Wheres Mark and Sara?!? Susan--or Jake?
Jake looked horrified because she now brought in a pair of scissors hair spray a lighter..all kinds of scary torturing stuff....B.M--All Right Jakey Lets Begin My Lil. Game and grabbed a knife and carved her name into his stommach with him yelling and protesting...aww you made me messed up B.M said Laughing and she gravved a needle scissors and began jabbing him ignoring his screams of agony and began spilling and smearing his blood on the wall....While The others decided to split up Tucker and Gaz ..Jack,Kayla and Susan were together and Kayla and her group went upstairs while Tucker and Gaz went Downward...When Kayla ans Co. were walking Kayla was deep in thought when she saw blood on the floor...she bent downward and she heard susan and Jack Scream she turned around only tro see nuthing..when she turned around.....BOO!!!! The Jackal Suddenly appeared and she screamed and fell off the stairs and fell on her side she started to crawl away in pain crying thinking why are we here? is this my punishment for wanting to have fun...? she then suddenly managed to get up and didnt see Jackal anywhere.
Gaz and Tucker were looking around and Tucker couldny beleive How Gaz could remain so calm sure she was an expert in ghosts but still you'd think even an expert could get scared coming face to face an encounter with a ghost..but with Gaz you never know...They were walking when Gaz stopped said Oh No!!What? Tucker asked and he look foward and saw The Juggernaut..and The Hammer Standing their with wicked grins on their face and Before Gaz could do anything Tucker Grabbed her arm and they ran up stairs as the two ghosts vanished out of site and Jack opened his eyes to see Kayla crying and he say Susan was gone the last thing he remember was some Teenage looking boy partly burnt and he had a baseball bat he kinda resembled James Dean..or sumthin...Jack-Kayla..u alright? Kayla--Jack...ur alive?!? Jack--ya..Kayla--Jack..I dont know where the kids are or anyone..its like everyone suddenly vanished before my eyes Kayla said sobbing well Lets get out of here..Suddenly Gaz and Tucker appeared Tucker-- we have to leave now...!! I dont think so...what? The 4 teens looked toward the doorway to see EVERY single ghost standing their with evil smiles(Dennis and the good ghosts arent there they got locked up by the Jackal and Juggernaut because they thought Ap's evil plan was stupid and wouldnt help them in succseeding it) A.P laughed as The Jackal smirked and Said Why leave now when OUR Party and Games are just about to begin!!!!Kayla-y-you mean its not over why not!!!?!! Jackal-Of course it isnt over We still have lots to play!! Jackal and the ghosts laughed evilly We'll have a ghostly goul time!! !! The 4 teens sighed thinking this is going to be the longest and perhaps last night of their lifes.....
Ok..I know it's short but i couldnt think..but uh...Should I Continue or Not...Oh and Who Wants to be in the story I just need 8 (guy) 2.Detective(girl or guy) 3.Evil Girl in the mirror 4.Jackals ghostly g.f 5.Jackal and the ghost Slave Girl 6.Funny Teenage kid(girl or guy 7.Susans older Sister 8.Susan or Kaylas ex b/f
ya..I decided Jackal needed a Ghostly chick!! and it is if i get more reviews I'll Update and Stuff....But Who's ur Fav. Ghosts? and Characters I've created? Human character and Ghost character? uh...so Update Soon and If ya like this ask me to make more and my next one will have a Casting Call...and if you want me to write a story about you dont hesitate to ask I LUVVVV Writing so uhh...Bye