Chapter 4~Dragonlady & Eliza: Dragonlady has a great Tamora Fic. Check it
out!
Eliza~ look @ your response to your review. Thanx for coming forward.
Zakyu: Disclaimer: We don't own anything but nouns (person, places or things) we made up!
Muslima: He knows grammar. . . nouns, um? A lot better than I do.
Note: There's something wacko with Fanfiction.net it messed up my whole chappie-no wonder you people got confused. I tried to fix it but then it won't let me upload my doc. Grr. . .
Also I lost like half of the reviews-but never fear! They were emailed to me but they just never showed up! Only three reviews showed up for chapter 13 Grrr. . . .
Chapter 14
"Enahar," Tris revealed contemptuously.
A hooded figure came up behind Enahar, carefully hiding in the shadows. The Reaper of Eclipse. "Lord Musya orders he be revived and to see the redhead. . . the others. . . take them to the Hall of Nightmares." His voice was a mix of a rasping predator tangled with the hiss of a snake.
"I thought we were to take the blood to brake the last disc and then they were to be taken to the Chamber of Desidemona," Enahar said.
"You question lord Musya's plans?" The Reaper inquired dangerously with a hoarse hiss. Sandry could see the hidden scythe's blade suddenly point at Enahar.
"No, of course not Hooded Master," He appealed. Shade smiled wider; clearly pleased.
"You leave the Plant Mage and Trader magic to the shadowed unmagic in The Hall. Take the noble's magic to break the disc, though. We wouldn't want her to flash a light at the shadowed unmagic-she has a resistance against them," The Reaper ordered within a cautiousness hiss.
Daja and Briar were taken by Shade who split himself into two beings. He spread a potion on them with a flick of a wrist that made them unconscious.
Struggling, Sandry was brought to the dais. Her hands were forced before the last disc. Enahar took a dark blade that indicated it had been used for similar proceedings.
"I swear by The Bookkeeper, The Green Man and any other Imperial god that if you hurt Sandry you bastard--!" Tris had started to flare, hair sparking but The Reaper snapped his fingers and she couldn't open her mouth to continue her threats.
He made her sleep against her will by some invisible force. The last thing she saw was Lionel unconscious and oblivious to what was happening around him. Would she give him a piece of her mind (more like magic)!! (Even though he was possessed).
"Amusing," he said with that strangely high-pitched voice that was as cold as a suddenly blast of icy wind.
So Sandry, helpless, had let Enahar slice her palms and take her few drops of blood that represented her magic and allowed it fall to the disc. Enahar recited words that she cringed to hear, over the stained disc.
It loudly shattered and like the others a jagged crack-like a bolt of lighting-tore from top to middle. The dark room was suddenly filled with woe. Enahar gasped at something invisible to Sandry's eyes with awe. "The Gates of Death are fully opened. . ."
He sat something in the middle of the dais; the end of the ritual. That queer object that was covered with unmagic: Eclipse.
A third eye, on it's forehead opened. It was the god of Death and Eclipse: Musya.
With a silent scream Sandry fell to the floor-as would the bravest of people in the realm. Yet, Enahar, The Reaper of Eclispe and Shade didn't- they were already dead, in a sense, undead.
"Enahar," it said in a voice that made The Reaper's voice laughable. "You have served me well, my physical form in this realm is regained because of you."
Silently with it's odd limp, Shade dragged Sandry to where her other friends dwelt: The Hall of Nightmares.
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Silverwitch~LOLz, I updated!& Thanks for the happy b-day wish. No, I'm not old! Thought I kinda felt it. No wonder people try to make birthdays as pleasant as possible. Well, I'm 14 now-lol. stargirl2004~ YES! YES! YES!
Lady Sandrilene~Oh, that's not your fault-it's Fanfiction.Net's. I can't explain because I plan to explain during the last chapter, in a way you should be confused. Pretended it's Harry Potter or something.
Storm Mage~Thanx! Your making my ego huge. ^_* Eliza~ Mindlinking: in the story they talked in each other's head. But the whole sentence was ruined because I used "" -those to indicate the mindlinking but in story format-- it erased it, it never happened before. About the whole past tense thing, yeah, I agree. I just getting use to the writing style again and I wrote it within an hour and didn't reread it so mostly it's my fault (and fanfiction really messed it up). So I'm not a total failure. I rewrote some of the chappie so it makes @ least SOME sense. But I thrilled you came up and told me so-(I'm also gald you were surprised. I am looking forward to seeing what you think of this chapter ^__^ Keladry of Queenscove~ I am ssssooo happy your into the story!!! Do you have any ideas about what's going to happen? Clearbrook~LOLz. Thanx, all I did was read Garth Nix. Oh how I miss you!!! Did you know I am going to Islamic summer school, Insh-Allah? How did you like the chapter? Priestess of the Storm~ Ohhhhhh! I'm so thrilled at this moment-I can't tell you how much!!!! Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOU!!! Were you surprised by the whole Musya thing? Confused? EloraCooper4~ Enahar is the pirate dude in book 2 (Tris's book). ^__* It's alright. I'm 14!! You updated!? I'm running right now (2 Fanfiction.net and FictionPress.net)! Rachel~ Ah, damn it. I thought I fixed it. I'm terrible in spelling you know. Thanx for reviewing! Dragonlady~ Wow I'm happy to know new readers also enjoy this. *Happy me, Happy me!* ^_______^ Thanx for reviewing.
~Birthdays: Sliverwitch's was on April 30th
Eliza~ look @ your response to your review. Thanx for coming forward.
Zakyu: Disclaimer: We don't own anything but nouns (person, places or things) we made up!
Muslima: He knows grammar. . . nouns, um? A lot better than I do.
Note: There's something wacko with Fanfiction.net it messed up my whole chappie-no wonder you people got confused. I tried to fix it but then it won't let me upload my doc. Grr. . .
Also I lost like half of the reviews-but never fear! They were emailed to me but they just never showed up! Only three reviews showed up for chapter 13 Grrr. . . .
Chapter 14
"Enahar," Tris revealed contemptuously.
A hooded figure came up behind Enahar, carefully hiding in the shadows. The Reaper of Eclipse. "Lord Musya orders he be revived and to see the redhead. . . the others. . . take them to the Hall of Nightmares." His voice was a mix of a rasping predator tangled with the hiss of a snake.
"I thought we were to take the blood to brake the last disc and then they were to be taken to the Chamber of Desidemona," Enahar said.
"You question lord Musya's plans?" The Reaper inquired dangerously with a hoarse hiss. Sandry could see the hidden scythe's blade suddenly point at Enahar.
"No, of course not Hooded Master," He appealed. Shade smiled wider; clearly pleased.
"You leave the Plant Mage and Trader magic to the shadowed unmagic in The Hall. Take the noble's magic to break the disc, though. We wouldn't want her to flash a light at the shadowed unmagic-she has a resistance against them," The Reaper ordered within a cautiousness hiss.
Daja and Briar were taken by Shade who split himself into two beings. He spread a potion on them with a flick of a wrist that made them unconscious.
Struggling, Sandry was brought to the dais. Her hands were forced before the last disc. Enahar took a dark blade that indicated it had been used for similar proceedings.
"I swear by The Bookkeeper, The Green Man and any other Imperial god that if you hurt Sandry you bastard--!" Tris had started to flare, hair sparking but The Reaper snapped his fingers and she couldn't open her mouth to continue her threats.
He made her sleep against her will by some invisible force. The last thing she saw was Lionel unconscious and oblivious to what was happening around him. Would she give him a piece of her mind (more like magic)!! (Even though he was possessed).
"Amusing," he said with that strangely high-pitched voice that was as cold as a suddenly blast of icy wind.
So Sandry, helpless, had let Enahar slice her palms and take her few drops of blood that represented her magic and allowed it fall to the disc. Enahar recited words that she cringed to hear, over the stained disc.
It loudly shattered and like the others a jagged crack-like a bolt of lighting-tore from top to middle. The dark room was suddenly filled with woe. Enahar gasped at something invisible to Sandry's eyes with awe. "The Gates of Death are fully opened. . ."
He sat something in the middle of the dais; the end of the ritual. That queer object that was covered with unmagic: Eclipse.
A third eye, on it's forehead opened. It was the god of Death and Eclipse: Musya.
With a silent scream Sandry fell to the floor-as would the bravest of people in the realm. Yet, Enahar, The Reaper of Eclispe and Shade didn't- they were already dead, in a sense, undead.
"Enahar," it said in a voice that made The Reaper's voice laughable. "You have served me well, my physical form in this realm is regained because of you."
Silently with it's odd limp, Shade dragged Sandry to where her other friends dwelt: The Hall of Nightmares.
________________________________________________________________________
R2R
Silverwitch~LOLz, I updated!& Thanks for the happy b-day wish. No, I'm not old! Thought I kinda felt it. No wonder people try to make birthdays as pleasant as possible. Well, I'm 14 now-lol. stargirl2004~ YES! YES! YES!
Lady Sandrilene~Oh, that's not your fault-it's Fanfiction.Net's. I can't explain because I plan to explain during the last chapter, in a way you should be confused. Pretended it's Harry Potter or something.
Storm Mage~Thanx! Your making my ego huge. ^_* Eliza~ Mindlinking: in the story they talked in each other's head. But the whole sentence was ruined because I used "" -those to indicate the mindlinking but in story format-- it erased it, it never happened before. About the whole past tense thing, yeah, I agree. I just getting use to the writing style again and I wrote it within an hour and didn't reread it so mostly it's my fault (and fanfiction really messed it up). So I'm not a total failure. I rewrote some of the chappie so it makes @ least SOME sense. But I thrilled you came up and told me so-(I'm also gald you were surprised. I am looking forward to seeing what you think of this chapter ^__^ Keladry of Queenscove~ I am ssssooo happy your into the story!!! Do you have any ideas about what's going to happen? Clearbrook~LOLz. Thanx, all I did was read Garth Nix. Oh how I miss you!!! Did you know I am going to Islamic summer school, Insh-Allah? How did you like the chapter? Priestess of the Storm~ Ohhhhhh! I'm so thrilled at this moment-I can't tell you how much!!!! Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOU!!! Were you surprised by the whole Musya thing? Confused? EloraCooper4~ Enahar is the pirate dude in book 2 (Tris's book). ^__* It's alright. I'm 14!! You updated!? I'm running right now (2 Fanfiction.net and FictionPress.net)! Rachel~ Ah, damn it. I thought I fixed it. I'm terrible in spelling you know. Thanx for reviewing! Dragonlady~ Wow I'm happy to know new readers also enjoy this. *Happy me, Happy me!* ^_______^ Thanx for reviewing.
~Birthdays: Sliverwitch's was on April 30th