Ok I couldn't wait for anyone else to review aso I decided to just put chapter 2 up, pritty sure no one reviewing is a bad thing but oh well. at least one person likes my story :)
I'd like to give an extra special thanks to romantic shade for being my first reviewer for the second time in a row lol, how ironic is that? here is the well waited second chapter.

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Chapter # 2

" and we're here".

" thank god, I really have to go pee".

" yeah, thanks for sharing that with us Steven. Alright, Michael and I were gonna take my parents room since it has a better view.But I dumped him so Eric, you and Donna can have it. I'll take my room, it has a king size bed anyway".

" nice, Eric lets go check out our room!".

" right behind you Donna....oh nice! It has a water bed!".

" where do me and Fez get to sleep?".

" well....the couch does pull out you know, so I guess there".

" I'm not sharing a couch with Fez, there's no way Jackie".

" oh why not Hyde? I'm not a cover hog, come on it'll be fun buddy".

".....right, once again I AM NOT sharing a couch with Fez".

" well maybe now I don't wanna share a couch with you, you son of a bitch! Now I say good day".

" but Fez...".

" I said good day!!".

"...whatever, why do you get a king size bed to yourself anyway?".

" because, I'm heart broken and it's MY bed. Thats why Steven".

" well, I'm bunking with you whether you like it or not Jackie".

" oooooh no, no no no-NO your not".

" um, yes I am".

" urrrgh!, fine! But you had better stay on your own side of the bed Steven Hyde".

" trust me Jackie, I definitely will".--

" what are you doing out here all by yourself Berkhart?".

" what in the hell does it look like I'm doing?".

Sitting down next to Jackie on the back porch, Hyde frown over at her when he notices a liquor bottle by her side," Jackie, what the hell are you doing with that? How did you get a bottle of whiskey?".

Taking a sip from the bottle in her hand, Jackie just snickers to herself," well, my dad had and liquor cabinet and I sorta stole the key for it".

" nice going, mind if I have some of that?".

" sure, go ahead Steven....I thought for a second you were gonna yell at me".

Taking a long swig from the bottle, Hyde pats his chest as he coughs slightly," wow this is some strong stuff, well I should yell at you...but I'll give you a break since you know how to pick your drinks".

Unbuttoning her t-shirt and shimmying out of her shorts, Jackie slowly climbs into the jacuzzi," oh well gee thanks Steven, your so kind. Wanna join me?".

".....yeah, ok. Whatever".

" cool, you know for a second I thought that you were Fez when I heard you come out".

Climbing into the bubbling pool of water, Hyde settles down next to Jackie with a laugh," no, Fez is passed out from downing that entire bottle of jack danial's".

Laying back in the jacuzzi relaxed, Jackie close her eyes with a sigh," pffft, lucky him. Wish I could drown my sorrows like that".

"...you deserve better then Kelso you know".

" hmmm, you really think so Steven?".--

" well, yeah. I mean come on, Kelso's been a total jerk to you Jackie".

" he really can be a jerk I guess".

" you know what you need to do Jacks? You need to start aiming higher, thats what you need to do".

" you know, maybe I should. But there are no rich guys in Point Place though".

" they don't have to be rich guys Jackie, just someone who will treat you right".

" yeah, you know your right. They should be smart and respectful of me....and not cheaters also".

" see? There you go Jackie, now you know what to look for".

" I'm never giving a cheater a second chance again Steven, and if I do please knock some sense into me".

" believe me, it'll be my pleasure to. Thats the kinda spirit you need, thats my Jackie".

" thanks for helping me set things straight Steven, your the best".

"....what was the kiss on the cheek for?".

" for cheering me up the way that you did".

" oh, well don't let it happen again ok?".

" oh, um right. Sorry, I forgot".

" thats cool".

" your the best Steven, no matter what happens I know that I can always count on you to be there for me-granted its unwillingly but still. I'm glad that I can count on you anyway".

" no hugging me either".

" right, again sorry Steven".--

well that concludes chapter two you guys, so? tell me what you think of it! :) as always your reviews are appreciated, I'm aiming for at least five so I can continue. But I'll be happy with three also :)