thanks for all the reviews, you guys are so kick ass! and yet another
special thanks to romantic shades for saying that I nailed the dialog of the characters right on target, that was my aim and it made my day to
hear that lol. :)
Disclaimer: I still don't own anything, so really the only thing you can
sue me for is the unmentionable things that I would do to Danny Masterson if I were to ever meet him. then again whose to say he wouldn't enjoy it? :D
Chapter #5
" what's with you anyway Steven? Most guys would enjoy seeing me in this bathing suit".
" nothing, I just don't like to see you dressed like that- that's all
Jackie".
" oh....why not?".
" because any other guy- like Kelso would've been all over you, and I'd
of had to kick their ass!".
" awwww, Steven you really do care about me!".
".....no I don't".
" yes you do, don't try to deny it either".
" oh I'm gonna, because I don't".
" can I give you a hug?".
"....yeah, I'm gonna have to go with no".
" well to bad, I'm going to anyway Steven".
" Jackie, cut it out! Get off of me!".
" relax, I'm just showing a little bit of affection".
" well don't".
" but that's what I do".
" well I don't Jackie".
" obviously".--
" what is that suppose to mean exactly?".
" it means you hide behind your zen, and these damn sunglasses".
Staring over at Jackie, Hyde shakes his head and with a frown replies," no I don't, you don't know what your talking about".
With a simple shrug of her shoulders, Jackie looks at the bubbling
water," oh right, of course not. I forgot, what would I know?....So can I tell you a secret?".
" whatever".
" cool, promise not to laugh or EVER tell anyone?".
Glancing over at Jackie, Hyde nods his head in agreement," I promise not to tell anyone, but I can't promise that I won't laugh".
Biting her bottom lip hesitantly, Jackie lets out a long huff," I've had
a tiny crush on you ever since we were kids and you beat up that boy for taking my doll".
" ok...when was this again?".
" you don't remember Steven?".
With a shake of his head, Hyde lets a grumble in response," no, so
enlighten me".
Wrinkling her nose in thought, Jackie bites her bottom lip again," ok,
well we were bickering like we usually do when Tommy Larkson took my doll. I started crying so you kicked his ass".
" I did, really?".
" yeah, and then you gave me my dolly back".
Sitting up slightly in his seat, Hyde tenses when Jackie scoots toward
him," oh, and since then you've had a tiny crush on me?".
Tracing the lines on Hyde's chest, Jackie smiles shyly at him," yeah...I
actually don't know why I just told you that".--
" I can't believe you actually have a crush on me".
" me either Steven, kinda freaky hu?".
" hey, I'm not that bad looking".
" I know your not, I think that you look cute with your curly fro".
" is that so?".
" well yeah, I like how they just bounce back into place".
" I see".
" and I also think that you have the most piercing blue eyes".
" hey, give those back Jackie".
" no way, why do you hide your eyes Steven?".
" because, I like wearing sunglasses".
" but you have really gorgeous eyes though".
" that's nice, can I have my sunglasses back now?".
" fine, here".
" thank you".
" I don't get you Steven".--
special thanks to romantic shades for saying that I nailed the dialog of the characters right on target, that was my aim and it made my day to
hear that lol. :)
Disclaimer: I still don't own anything, so really the only thing you can
sue me for is the unmentionable things that I would do to Danny Masterson if I were to ever meet him. then again whose to say he wouldn't enjoy it? :D
Chapter #5
" what's with you anyway Steven? Most guys would enjoy seeing me in this bathing suit".
" nothing, I just don't like to see you dressed like that- that's all
Jackie".
" oh....why not?".
" because any other guy- like Kelso would've been all over you, and I'd
of had to kick their ass!".
" awwww, Steven you really do care about me!".
".....no I don't".
" yes you do, don't try to deny it either".
" oh I'm gonna, because I don't".
" can I give you a hug?".
"....yeah, I'm gonna have to go with no".
" well to bad, I'm going to anyway Steven".
" Jackie, cut it out! Get off of me!".
" relax, I'm just showing a little bit of affection".
" well don't".
" but that's what I do".
" well I don't Jackie".
" obviously".--
" what is that suppose to mean exactly?".
" it means you hide behind your zen, and these damn sunglasses".
Staring over at Jackie, Hyde shakes his head and with a frown replies," no I don't, you don't know what your talking about".
With a simple shrug of her shoulders, Jackie looks at the bubbling
water," oh right, of course not. I forgot, what would I know?....So can I tell you a secret?".
" whatever".
" cool, promise not to laugh or EVER tell anyone?".
Glancing over at Jackie, Hyde nods his head in agreement," I promise not to tell anyone, but I can't promise that I won't laugh".
Biting her bottom lip hesitantly, Jackie lets out a long huff," I've had
a tiny crush on you ever since we were kids and you beat up that boy for taking my doll".
" ok...when was this again?".
" you don't remember Steven?".
With a shake of his head, Hyde lets a grumble in response," no, so
enlighten me".
Wrinkling her nose in thought, Jackie bites her bottom lip again," ok,
well we were bickering like we usually do when Tommy Larkson took my doll. I started crying so you kicked his ass".
" I did, really?".
" yeah, and then you gave me my dolly back".
Sitting up slightly in his seat, Hyde tenses when Jackie scoots toward
him," oh, and since then you've had a tiny crush on me?".
Tracing the lines on Hyde's chest, Jackie smiles shyly at him," yeah...I
actually don't know why I just told you that".--
" I can't believe you actually have a crush on me".
" me either Steven, kinda freaky hu?".
" hey, I'm not that bad looking".
" I know your not, I think that you look cute with your curly fro".
" is that so?".
" well yeah, I like how they just bounce back into place".
" I see".
" and I also think that you have the most piercing blue eyes".
" hey, give those back Jackie".
" no way, why do you hide your eyes Steven?".
" because, I like wearing sunglasses".
" but you have really gorgeous eyes though".
" that's nice, can I have my sunglasses back now?".
" fine, here".
" thank you".
" I don't get you Steven".--