Wow...Ok, when I opened my email, I was kinda afraid of this review I got. Let me post it (for security reasons, I'm going to keep the author of the review anonymous)

"What the hell was Paul thinking! Wait what the hell were you thinking. Paul and Suze? No way. Jesse and Suze natural pick of the month but you had to twist up the whole story and for me at the begining I think it's crap but the nineth chapter I'll give you credit on and the fact that she's always sleeping or hurt that crap is not working for me. I'm a jersey girl and Suze is from New York she will not act like that or even sleep that long until that idiot ghost thing is at rest. You have ripped the skin off of the story and made it bones and muscle. But we need the whle body the nice protective outter layer and Jesse is pretty much it for Suze if you get my drift."

Ok...I'm somewhat afraid of this review. Seriously. And, that fear made me write the final chapter! Hahaha!!! However, I'm going to review to some of the stuff in the review:

"What the hell was Paul thinking! Wait what the hell were you thinking. Paul and Suze? No way. Jesse and Suze natural pick of the month but you had to twist up the whole story and for me at the begining I think it's crap"

I'm sorry! I really am! Ok, maybe I'm not. Hints of sarcasm abound!! I am sorry that you think it's crap though. The whole Paul/Suze aspect was one of the main points of the story.

" the fact that she's always sleeping or hurt that crap is not working for me"

I'm sorry. (more sarcasm, are you getting it?) I didn't get the memo that I was supposed to make you happy. Someone wanna pass that on?

Ok...enough sarcasm. Really. And now, the story: Also: I'm really not usually so sarcastic when it comes to flames. This is just my first big one, wanted to make it special!

Suze's POV:

I stomped home, trying not to put my fist through any bricks. It was really hard though. I mean, everything made me think of Paul and how mad he was when he saw me and Jesse kissing. Not that I was willingly kissing him, he kissed me, I pushed him off, blah blah blah. I got home, and threw myself on my bed, about to cry until my eyes fell out because I am a girl, and just because I act all tough doesn't mean I don't occasionally wanna cry because the guy I'm majorally into thinks I cheated on him when I didn't.

Damn life sucks.

So anyways, my plan was to cry. What I did, however, was go home and get dragged out into public with my mom and Andy for some business dinner thing Andy made us go to. We got to meet his new co workers- Ricardo De friggin' Silva!- who brought his kids as well!

Damn. Damn, damn, DAMN!!!

It got worse as the night went on, and Jesse and I found ourselves walking around outside. He tried to be all nice and apologize for earlier, but I smacked him. "What the hell, Susannah?"

"That was for making me and Paul fight!" I smacked him again. "That was for wishing for me!" I smacked him again. "And that was for every other mean thing you've done!" Then I started to storm off to a pay phone or something and call Paul and make him listen, when De Silva grabbed my arm, pulled me roughly to him, and kissed me again.

This time, I wasted no time is pushing him off. "GET AWAY FROM ME!" I shrieked.

"Suze?" I heard Paul yell. Jesse was still yanking on my arm, and it looked like he was attacking me, I guess, under the streetlamp. "Get off her, prick!"

Paul came running up and popped Jesse in the eye. Jesse stumbled back and Paul asked me, in a gentle voice, "Are you alright?"

It all came out, in this big rush. "I'm Ok. I was going to go call you and make you listen and believe me, I'm not cheating on you, I don't love Jesse, I don't even like him a little bit, I love you! I was going to call or come over or something, and he just grabs my arm, and pulls me up to him, and then you came along and-" Paul silenced me with a finger to my lips.

He grinned and said, "Wanna repeat that a little slower?"

I laughed slightly and repeated my ramblings. Paul grinned, kissed me and then said, "I believe you."

"Then what was your deal earlier?"

"I don't know. I was just...Pissed, and Rico said some stuff to me at lunch, about you wanting him, and I thought it was true-"

"Hey, rambling's my specialty." I cut in. "And he said the same thing to me, right before he kissed me, except that you were cheating on me."

"You know what? Let's not worry about it right now." Paul said, linking hands with me. "Let's just get back to wherever it is you were, and deal with it later."

"Works for me."

And we walked off, leaving Jesse on the sidewalk to fume.

OK THIS IS THE END OF THE STORY!!! Originally, it was ended at Chapter 7, but I added 8-10, and I kinda wish I hadn't cuz it sucks...but anyways, happy reading!