A/N: I decided it would be easier to tell the story from Beni's POV. Just so you know.... I Have Changed This Chapter Very Slightly I suggest you read it again before you carry on with the story!
I blew it again. She stormed off and left me there on in the sand. I don't know why, I mean it was a compliment! I had had worse! It was obviously her first time she seemed to be expecting something to happen. Oh well my luck with the lady's hasn't changed. I'm sure something else has though. I feel kinda strong and powerful. I always wondered what that was like. She seemed nice, shame I'd tricked her here in the first place...
By some miracle or another I'd made into heaven, I tell you it's easier to get into than a whore's knickers. I had never been so bored in my life, all these saint's and angels floating around making the place all holy and shit. Anyways I was sitting by the gates, (those pearly ones really exist) and there was this little red thing that appeared out of nowhere (Yeah the devil) and offered me a way out. I could have another shot at life! Just one catch, next time I die straight to hell, no questions asked. Err hello? Once I was reincarnated I would be immortal Duh! So of course I accepted. Hey what would do if you were me?
Hey! Where did she go? I was sure she was just h.... oh there she is. Those swords really don't make for the "approachable" look. As for the black shirt, SHEESH, could it be any more low cut? ( not that I'm complaining)... Oh well time to break the news. I really don't need some little girly girl cramping my style, but still those swords look kinda pointy...
"Hey Ryelle," Ryelle? Where did that come from? Since when do I know her name? Never mind. "thanks for saving me and stuff but I don't really need you anymore!"
She turned round to face me, "What do you mean? And what is your purpose here? What have I risked and lost everything for?"
(Oh Jesus that's a lot of questions to ask a guy who's just woken up) She's still staring at me. Come on Beni boy think of something make it good now... "Your task has been completed,"( ok keep going), "The gods and I need you no longer.." (is she actually swallowing this shite?) "You may now return to your people..." (not bad If I do say so myself)
Here we go she's off on one..."How can I return to my people now? I have broken every rule that the Mejia uphold. On my return I will surly be greeted with death!"
(Blah blah blah, yackety smacktey,)
"Look just SHUT UP!!!" (man that was annoying.) "You've done your job and I don't need you any more, just GO! I don't know and don't care where just DO IT!"
She stood up, (man what a short arse) and smiled. "How are you going to get anywhere on your own, in a new more modern world that you know nothing about?"
"Err...," DAMN IT!!!!!!!
A/N: waddya think? If you have any tips on how I can improve Beni's character please tell me, you have no idea how hard I worked on getting this right!
