Padme (unedited)
Author's note: This was written a few hours' ago, and unlike most of
my poems, I prefer this one unedited. I got the idea from my friend
Michael; he's got a poem entitled "Alice" that follows almost the
exact same rhythm. His poem's slightly more dark and not easy to understand
either. Usually the characters themselves are portrayed in the songs, but this
one's an exception: I'll leave it up to you to figure out why this is Obi-Wan's
song. Thinking of repeating other characters, though the poems are still dark
and angsty. Depends on what comments I get.
Padme's got an anthem to war
in her hands chanting;
for a fearless cause as
a martyr willing.
And eyes that allure
to attempt to hide this pain;
running poison deep within
like a syringe to a vein.
Another's eyes stabbing quietly:
a Jedi whom his love protected,
and she accepts his venom as
they shed silver tears.
Padme...?
Flashes of eyes blue and
warm arms embracing;
kisses in hot warmth and
blind lovers whispering.
Gripping rage aflame and
pain so bittersweet;
sneering hoods surrounded and
pain beyond melancholy.
Three parting ways and the
devil suffocating all that's left;
halted, silver to red and
an angel fallen, in death...
Padme...?
Written by shelter, who thanks everyone for the reviews.