Um... I updated? Ahh! dedges thousands of rotten tomatoes being hurld her
way I can explain! I can explain .Wait...I already did... The thing is that
this year has been one of the most difficult years of my life. As for
personal problems, social problems, and school problems, all of these
problems seemed to be suddenly magnified by ten times this year.
I don't fit in any more. I never did. When this yearended, I felt as if I had been on a rollar coaster, going up and down, one Iminute oi'm happy, and suddenly my world just falls apart. I know this sounds like I'm complaining, because partially I am, it's just that writing has always ben like a break from reality for me.
I had trouble finding time for myself, and trying to fit in a group of people whom didn't seem to like me very much. I don't know. I do a better job of explaining all of this in the fifth chapter of fallen angel, but for those of you who have read it, I think it's kind of redundant.
I'm not complaining about my life. I'm lucky to be where I am, and to have a roof over my head, and good food to eat. I'm just saying that I am starting to lose the time I used to have to my self.
Ok! Now on to the story!
PS Reader credits/thankyous/responses that I have wrote have been moved to the back...
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Cellmates
By Hereiko Nakashima
Chapter 3
Kagome signed as she stared at him. "hey are you going to tell me already?" she whined as she rubbed her now-numb leg.
"Hold up bitch!" he snarled as he adjusted his position. "let me take a piss first."
She stared at him, at a loss for what. "Wha-what??" she shrieked as she shot up. Her legs buckled and she collapsed back down onto the floor.
"Just kidding, you dork,' he sighed as he tapped her forehead. He winced as he narrowly dodged a well-aimed punch. '. You think you would figger out by now...... damn.... violent and dumb .... Your poor parents... no wonder you're still single at eighteen.."
"I don't see you getting married off to anyone yet!' she spat back. "And how old are you, huh? Seventeen? Eighteen?'
"Try fifty, you fuck.' He snarled back ather. She stared at him i8n shock.
"Fi-fifty??" she stammered weakly. "But... how..."
"I'm a demon, remember,' he signed as he leaned back on the hay. "Unlike you meddlesome humans, our populations don't double every other year."
"ours don't either!' she retorted angrily. 'And are you going to tell me or not? I've been waiting all day for you to hurry up and respond.'
'Alright, alright..' he sighed as he put his hands up defensively. 'No need for a rush. ' 'So tell!' Kagome snapped.
"My father," he began, "was the demon lord of the West, Inutaisho." 'what about it?' she interrupted, exasperated. "and didn't he die years ago?'
'i'm getting there,' he snapped, 'And have some respect for the dead.'
"Please continue,," she muttered as she lowered her eyes to the ground.
"That's better,' he quipped. "Upon his death, my half-brother Ssshoumaru became the new lord. He and I... well let's just say he wanted to get rid of some.. unwanted acquaintances.... And I've bee on the run since... "
'But how was it the lord caught you?' she whispered. "I don't know, sweetheart," he growled as he glared dangerously at her though his white bangs. "I don't think carting an unconscious demon, however strong her is, into a cell has ever been much of a difficult task."
She stared back at him. "oh.." she began, her voice tinged with disappointment. "So they didn't really catch you?"
"No, you stupid little girl, that's what I just said. Hey are you listening?'
'Then why are you still here, she asked emphatically. 'I man, if your that strong, shouldn't you have busted out already?'
"That's because he can't,' came a stern voice from outside the cell. Kagome turned around, and gasped when she saw who it was.
End of chapter 3 Credits!!!!
Froggy-chan- yay! I finally did it! I finally updated1 (glomps froggy-chan)
Mermaid ninja- um...I updated?? .;.
Jagged-heart- um... I sincerely ap[ologize for the long wait..
Hedi Dragona-um... he he.... Well at least you didn't yellllama again!
Runa Warier- I'm trying1 (and...in the process of... hm...wll... kinda... sorta...hm... may be I should just shut up..)
Candace-read and find out1 oh wait... you already did if you're reading this... hm... ( . ..nice-um.... Dos a year and a half qualify as soon?
Kawaii moonangel-ok! Ok1 I will1 I will! ... as soon as I get my brain out of it's funk...
AngelicFairy-ok! You heard it! (
Ranma- ahh1i'm so sorry!!! (bows down) I really didn't mean to take this long to finish writing it!
Blaze cat- now you know...
Babykagome-I'm so glad you do!! It makes me sohappy! Ok! I wrote more1 I wrote more1
Apie-I am so happy you think it's intresting. And ifinallyadded more!
Ranma-he he...I would be too...
evil chibi kitten- now you know...
crystal twilight-
Artemis moon- I have! I have!
Sappire- I am so happy you think so! LOL I don't know anyone who would
Anonomys-um... I didn't know your name... so I just put anonymous... hmm... can't spell... now you know1 (
Jupiter's light- eeek! My most loyal fan! Glomps you have r'd all of my fics! hands ramen
Forest Karma- really? Omigod1 that's such a good idea! Thanks! I'ldo that!
Lindygirl- ok! Except... just.... A years later...
Ah... I am very sorry for ending itso quickly! Thank you , ever one who revewed1 I hope I my responses were okay....i hope you don't mind my explantion for why Inu is here... or rather... how he got here... I think why is near the end of chaopter two... bows down to all readers
I don't fit in any more. I never did. When this yearended, I felt as if I had been on a rollar coaster, going up and down, one Iminute oi'm happy, and suddenly my world just falls apart. I know this sounds like I'm complaining, because partially I am, it's just that writing has always ben like a break from reality for me.
I had trouble finding time for myself, and trying to fit in a group of people whom didn't seem to like me very much. I don't know. I do a better job of explaining all of this in the fifth chapter of fallen angel, but for those of you who have read it, I think it's kind of redundant.
I'm not complaining about my life. I'm lucky to be where I am, and to have a roof over my head, and good food to eat. I'm just saying that I am starting to lose the time I used to have to my self.
Ok! Now on to the story!
PS Reader credits/thankyous/responses that I have wrote have been moved to the back...
If yours is not there.. please e-mail me at to tell me about it. I think it's because it takes 224 hours for reviews to appear, so I think yours might not have appeared on the review page yet.
Cellmates
By Hereiko Nakashima
Chapter 3
Kagome signed as she stared at him. "hey are you going to tell me already?" she whined as she rubbed her now-numb leg.
"Hold up bitch!" he snarled as he adjusted his position. "let me take a piss first."
She stared at him, at a loss for what. "Wha-what??" she shrieked as she shot up. Her legs buckled and she collapsed back down onto the floor.
"Just kidding, you dork,' he sighed as he tapped her forehead. He winced as he narrowly dodged a well-aimed punch. '. You think you would figger out by now...... damn.... violent and dumb .... Your poor parents... no wonder you're still single at eighteen.."
"I don't see you getting married off to anyone yet!' she spat back. "And how old are you, huh? Seventeen? Eighteen?'
"Try fifty, you fuck.' He snarled back ather. She stared at him i8n shock.
"Fi-fifty??" she stammered weakly. "But... how..."
"I'm a demon, remember,' he signed as he leaned back on the hay. "Unlike you meddlesome humans, our populations don't double every other year."
"ours don't either!' she retorted angrily. 'And are you going to tell me or not? I've been waiting all day for you to hurry up and respond.'
'Alright, alright..' he sighed as he put his hands up defensively. 'No need for a rush. ' 'So tell!' Kagome snapped.
"My father," he began, "was the demon lord of the West, Inutaisho." 'what about it?' she interrupted, exasperated. "and didn't he die years ago?'
'i'm getting there,' he snapped, 'And have some respect for the dead.'
"Please continue,," she muttered as she lowered her eyes to the ground.
"That's better,' he quipped. "Upon his death, my half-brother Ssshoumaru became the new lord. He and I... well let's just say he wanted to get rid of some.. unwanted acquaintances.... And I've bee on the run since... "
'But how was it the lord caught you?' she whispered. "I don't know, sweetheart," he growled as he glared dangerously at her though his white bangs. "I don't think carting an unconscious demon, however strong her is, into a cell has ever been much of a difficult task."
She stared back at him. "oh.." she began, her voice tinged with disappointment. "So they didn't really catch you?"
"No, you stupid little girl, that's what I just said. Hey are you listening?'
'Then why are you still here, she asked emphatically. 'I man, if your that strong, shouldn't you have busted out already?'
"That's because he can't,' came a stern voice from outside the cell. Kagome turned around, and gasped when she saw who it was.
End of chapter 3 Credits!!!!
Froggy-chan- yay! I finally did it! I finally updated1 (glomps froggy-chan)
Mermaid ninja- um...I updated?? .;.
Jagged-heart- um... I sincerely ap[ologize for the long wait..
Hedi Dragona-um... he he.... Well at least you didn't yellllama again!
Runa Warier- I'm trying1 (and...in the process of... hm...wll... kinda... sorta...hm... may be I should just shut up..)
Candace-read and find out1 oh wait... you already did if you're reading this... hm... ( . ..nice-um.... Dos a year and a half qualify as soon?
Kawaii moonangel-ok! Ok1 I will1 I will! ... as soon as I get my brain out of it's funk...
AngelicFairy-ok! You heard it! (
Ranma- ahh1i'm so sorry!!! (bows down) I really didn't mean to take this long to finish writing it!
Blaze cat- now you know...
Babykagome-I'm so glad you do!! It makes me sohappy! Ok! I wrote more1 I wrote more1
Apie-I am so happy you think it's intresting. And ifinallyadded more!
Ranma-he he...I would be too...
evil chibi kitten- now you know...
crystal twilight-
Artemis moon- I have! I have!
Sappire- I am so happy you think so! LOL I don't know anyone who would
Anonomys-um... I didn't know your name... so I just put anonymous... hmm... can't spell... now you know1 (
Jupiter's light- eeek! My most loyal fan! Glomps you have r'd all of my fics! hands ramen
Forest Karma- really? Omigod1 that's such a good idea! Thanks! I'ldo that!
Lindygirl- ok! Except... just.... A years later...
Ah... I am very sorry for ending itso quickly! Thank you , ever one who revewed1 I hope I my responses were okay....i hope you don't mind my explantion for why Inu is here... or rather... how he got here... I think why is near the end of chaopter two... bows down to all readers