Disclaimer: I don't own anything accept Eleni, Lena, and some of their
smart-ass comments. I might add some new characters at the end. (Their
parents, siblings, friends, etc.) Later there will be quotes from other
movies. I will tell you the quote, movie, character, and actor at the end
of the chapter.
Author's Note: This is my first fic ever. Please be honest with me, but not harsh. If you don't like it, don't read it. The character of Eleni is slightly based on my personality, and Lena on my younger sister. I have the main plot of this story laid out, and even a few future parts written. I'm open to suggestions and may include them in the fic if they don't contradict the plot line or others' ideas. Read, enjoy, and review.
Two Girls and a World in Confusion
Chapter 1: A Mall then a Forest
Eleni and her younger sister, Lena, were walking through the mall. Eleni was 17. She was about 5' 3", with shoulder length copper hair and dark brown eyes. Lena was a 5' 1" 14 year old, with black hair and blue eyes. Eleni wore baggy khaki pants and a tank top, her sweatshirt around her waist. Lena wore jogging pants, and a graphic tee. They'd asked their parents if they could spend the weekend at the summer cabin, but they were actually going to be staying at a resort in the mountains. Each had a backpack with a toothbrush, two sets of clothes, a bathing suit, and some assorted other items. The only thing they'd bought was one book apiece and a movie, so they decided to stop and put their stuff in the backpacks.
"All right, let's go back to your pathetic car, and get this show on the road." Lena said, emphasizing the word pathetic.
"Excuse me, pathetic. Pathetic!? Pathetic describes a little BMW or a Volkswagen bug. Pathetic does not describe the Cool Mobile."
"Oh, I'm so sorry. How could anyone possibly think a black Rav 4 with blue electricity bolts going up the sides is pathetic?" she said sarcastically.
"Hey! It took a long time to put the bolts on. It's not my fault I couldn't pay for it to be done professionally. Plus, you don't even have a car, so don't diss mine." They headed for the mall exit, but when they stepped outside they were met by a slightly unexpected sight.
"Riiight...usually when you leave a mall you see a parking lot, not a forest..."
"Oh great, just great. I can see it now. Tomorrow's headline reads: 'Girls get lost in imaginary forest while leaving mall'" "Quit your complaining." Eleni said. "We were going to the wilderness anyway. And there's absolutely nothing we can do about this now, the mall's gone. Let's explore." They started off, not quite sure which direction they were going in. ~*~*~
"Oh, this is so fun..." Lena said sarcastically. "I'm really enjoying- uh...Eleni did that tree just move."
"Of course it didn't. Trees only move in Middle Earth so unless...oh, hey, we're in Middle Earth! Yeah, this is so cool."
"We aren't in Middle Earth, Eleni. That's impossible..." She trailed off when the trees ended revealing a site that looked very much like Rivendell. "We're just in New Zealand. Middle Earth doesn't exist. That's just the set to LOTR."
"No, it's not." They walked across the bridge, and started down the steps into the main courtyard, and looked around. There was no doubt about it; they were in Middle Earth. "I told you so." Lena jumped on her back.
"Don't you ever say those four words in my presence again." She said, grabbing Eleni's neck, but Eleni dropped to her knees and sent Lena tumbling off of her, then she leapt onto her sister, and the wrestling match began.
~So what do you think? Good? Bad? Somewhere in between... I'm awaiting your reviews.
Next update: The Council of Elrond
Author's Note: This is my first fic ever. Please be honest with me, but not harsh. If you don't like it, don't read it. The character of Eleni is slightly based on my personality, and Lena on my younger sister. I have the main plot of this story laid out, and even a few future parts written. I'm open to suggestions and may include them in the fic if they don't contradict the plot line or others' ideas. Read, enjoy, and review.
Two Girls and a World in Confusion
Chapter 1: A Mall then a Forest
Eleni and her younger sister, Lena, were walking through the mall. Eleni was 17. She was about 5' 3", with shoulder length copper hair and dark brown eyes. Lena was a 5' 1" 14 year old, with black hair and blue eyes. Eleni wore baggy khaki pants and a tank top, her sweatshirt around her waist. Lena wore jogging pants, and a graphic tee. They'd asked their parents if they could spend the weekend at the summer cabin, but they were actually going to be staying at a resort in the mountains. Each had a backpack with a toothbrush, two sets of clothes, a bathing suit, and some assorted other items. The only thing they'd bought was one book apiece and a movie, so they decided to stop and put their stuff in the backpacks.
"All right, let's go back to your pathetic car, and get this show on the road." Lena said, emphasizing the word pathetic.
"Excuse me, pathetic. Pathetic!? Pathetic describes a little BMW or a Volkswagen bug. Pathetic does not describe the Cool Mobile."
"Oh, I'm so sorry. How could anyone possibly think a black Rav 4 with blue electricity bolts going up the sides is pathetic?" she said sarcastically.
"Hey! It took a long time to put the bolts on. It's not my fault I couldn't pay for it to be done professionally. Plus, you don't even have a car, so don't diss mine." They headed for the mall exit, but when they stepped outside they were met by a slightly unexpected sight.
"Riiight...usually when you leave a mall you see a parking lot, not a forest..."
"Oh great, just great. I can see it now. Tomorrow's headline reads: 'Girls get lost in imaginary forest while leaving mall'" "Quit your complaining." Eleni said. "We were going to the wilderness anyway. And there's absolutely nothing we can do about this now, the mall's gone. Let's explore." They started off, not quite sure which direction they were going in. ~*~*~
"Oh, this is so fun..." Lena said sarcastically. "I'm really enjoying- uh...Eleni did that tree just move."
"Of course it didn't. Trees only move in Middle Earth so unless...oh, hey, we're in Middle Earth! Yeah, this is so cool."
"We aren't in Middle Earth, Eleni. That's impossible..." She trailed off when the trees ended revealing a site that looked very much like Rivendell. "We're just in New Zealand. Middle Earth doesn't exist. That's just the set to LOTR."
"No, it's not." They walked across the bridge, and started down the steps into the main courtyard, and looked around. There was no doubt about it; they were in Middle Earth. "I told you so." Lena jumped on her back.
"Don't you ever say those four words in my presence again." She said, grabbing Eleni's neck, but Eleni dropped to her knees and sent Lena tumbling off of her, then she leapt onto her sister, and the wrestling match began.
~So what do you think? Good? Bad? Somewhere in between... I'm awaiting your reviews.
Next update: The Council of Elrond