OK...I've got another
update...here is the inrforamtion you should know about this story..
1. I KNOW IT HAS SPELLING MISTAKES AND IM SORRY!
2. All the characters are around 15.
3. Yes this is an S+S and E+T
ok...heres a new chapter!
Sakura Kinomoto:
The world still spun as I looked down at Syaoran..'God...what have I done...' Tears fell silently down my flushed cheeks....O.o...why? that was all i could wonder..I looked over at poor tomoyo. "Oh..Tomoyo....I'm sorry.." I ran to her...but then my father came...i felt his footsteps behind me..
He had heard the screaming..and my cries..My cries...The he came up behind me..and looked down at Syaoran.."We'll just..have his body creamated..I looked up at him horrified.."NO!! I mean..-wha-what if he's just..hrut...what if he's nto dead...oh father please.." I looked up at him horrified.."But what good is a wounded slave?" My father said angrily.."You mustn't get involved with these..these..servents..there much lower then you.." HE stuck his nose int here.."Come now Skaura.."
I couldn't bear to look at Tomoyo.."No..no..i will nto!" I screamed.."I refuse to be around soemone..someone as horrible as you!" Tears fell harder as i screamed and ran otu of the room...Syaoran...I'm sorry...DId I make you do this? Did I?
Tomoyo Li:
My brother...my only family...now he was goen too..just as our lives began to brighten..it faultered..Oh dear brother..please stay with us..please...adn that..that reched man...Fujitaka (sorry..I don't mean to have any Fujitaka bashing...just went with the story) THAT HORRIBLE KING!! I could feel the tears moving down my face..
I sat next to Syao's body..adn listened to his slow heart beat..THUMP..THUMP..there it was again..Maybe..maybe he really was alive..my dearest brother..whome i love so mush.."Syao? Syao? Are you..really there? Please.." I whispered as I wept on his chest..suddenly the beat got a little faster..I gasped and looked up to his face..
HIs eyes fluttered open..with weakness.."My sister..Tomoyo..I can see you.." A sad smile swept across his face.."I love you..Tomoyo..Please..DOn't leave me.." HIs hand reached up and touched her face.."Oh god..Syao..WHAT DID YOU DO!!??" She screamed hugging himt o herself..He looked up with a bit of shock..then he smiled softly.."I used your pin..and the knife..." His eyes began to close.."No! Don't go! Sakura will be glad to see you!" I cried.."pLease.." Syaoran looked up again.."No..Sakura hates me...so much..
I ran out of the room.."SAKURA!! SAKURA!!!" She ran.."please...syaoran.." Tears streamed down her face...then she closed her eyes and ran..until she bumped ionto a tea set.."OOMPH" SHe fell backwards to the ground..and looked up into navy eyes..
"Tomoyo? WHy..why are you crying.." Eriol wiped the tears from my face.."Syaoran..he he's...he's dying..."Oh god Eriol..you have to help..." Eriol looked at me yes wide..and a lonely tear fell down his face.."D--DYing? My best friend.." Eriol hugged Tomoyo.."I will do what I can..im so sorry miss tomoyo.."
MY face suddenly burned hot.."No...master Eriol..don't be sorry..for me.." He me closer..and i felt so warma nd aghppy....then i remembered syaoran.."OH I'm sos sorry..Eriol..I have to go.."
"I must find Sakura..." I looked uop with a sad little smile.."Oh..." Eriol said.."Shes down there.." He pointed otu the way..and i thanked him weakly.."SkAURA!!" I screamed runnign down the halll...
Syaoran Li:
"I love you Rain." I whispered..before the worl;d went black again..but this time i could her voices..moving...and sadness filled my body..
The world was a great darkness...and there was nothing i could ever do...I wish i had just died though..then my dear Rain would be happier...I smil;ed in my sleep..believing she was there...as long as she was there..i was content..I was at peace.."I love you Rain..I love you..."
O.o WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO SAKURA AND SYAORAN?? IM REALLY SORRY..ahem..if you don't leik my story and think its too mcuh..but i love tradgedies..*sniff* SNiff* *points finger int he air liek a hero* NAY WAY!! To be continued..(I know..I ahte these too..but im on writers block and my mosm calling...)
DUM DUM DUM!
1. I KNOW IT HAS SPELLING MISTAKES AND IM SORRY!
2. All the characters are around 15.
3. Yes this is an S+S and E+T
ok...heres a new chapter!
Sakura Kinomoto:
The world still spun as I looked down at Syaoran..'God...what have I done...' Tears fell silently down my flushed cheeks....O.o...why? that was all i could wonder..I looked over at poor tomoyo. "Oh..Tomoyo....I'm sorry.." I ran to her...but then my father came...i felt his footsteps behind me..
He had heard the screaming..and my cries..My cries...The he came up behind me..and looked down at Syaoran.."We'll just..have his body creamated..I looked up at him horrified.."NO!! I mean..-wha-what if he's just..hrut...what if he's nto dead...oh father please.." I looked up at him horrified.."But what good is a wounded slave?" My father said angrily.."You mustn't get involved with these..these..servents..there much lower then you.." HE stuck his nose int here.."Come now Skaura.."
I couldn't bear to look at Tomoyo.."No..no..i will nto!" I screamed.."I refuse to be around soemone..someone as horrible as you!" Tears fell harder as i screamed and ran otu of the room...Syaoran...I'm sorry...DId I make you do this? Did I?
Tomoyo Li:
My brother...my only family...now he was goen too..just as our lives began to brighten..it faultered..Oh dear brother..please stay with us..please...adn that..that reched man...Fujitaka (sorry..I don't mean to have any Fujitaka bashing...just went with the story) THAT HORRIBLE KING!! I could feel the tears moving down my face..
I sat next to Syao's body..adn listened to his slow heart beat..THUMP..THUMP..there it was again..Maybe..maybe he really was alive..my dearest brother..whome i love so mush.."Syao? Syao? Are you..really there? Please.." I whispered as I wept on his chest..suddenly the beat got a little faster..I gasped and looked up to his face..
HIs eyes fluttered open..with weakness.."My sister..Tomoyo..I can see you.." A sad smile swept across his face.."I love you..Tomoyo..Please..DOn't leave me.." HIs hand reached up and touched her face.."Oh god..Syao..WHAT DID YOU DO!!??" She screamed hugging himt o herself..He looked up with a bit of shock..then he smiled softly.."I used your pin..and the knife..." His eyes began to close.."No! Don't go! Sakura will be glad to see you!" I cried.."pLease.." Syaoran looked up again.."No..Sakura hates me...so much..
I ran out of the room.."SAKURA!! SAKURA!!!" She ran.."please...syaoran.." Tears streamed down her face...then she closed her eyes and ran..until she bumped ionto a tea set.."OOMPH" SHe fell backwards to the ground..and looked up into navy eyes..
"Tomoyo? WHy..why are you crying.." Eriol wiped the tears from my face.."Syaoran..he he's...he's dying..."Oh god Eriol..you have to help..." Eriol looked at me yes wide..and a lonely tear fell down his face.."D--DYing? My best friend.." Eriol hugged Tomoyo.."I will do what I can..im so sorry miss tomoyo.."
MY face suddenly burned hot.."No...master Eriol..don't be sorry..for me.." He me closer..and i felt so warma nd aghppy....then i remembered syaoran.."OH I'm sos sorry..Eriol..I have to go.."
"I must find Sakura..." I looked uop with a sad little smile.."Oh..." Eriol said.."Shes down there.." He pointed otu the way..and i thanked him weakly.."SkAURA!!" I screamed runnign down the halll...
Syaoran Li:
"I love you Rain." I whispered..before the worl;d went black again..but this time i could her voices..moving...and sadness filled my body..
The world was a great darkness...and there was nothing i could ever do...I wish i had just died though..then my dear Rain would be happier...I smil;ed in my sleep..believing she was there...as long as she was there..i was content..I was at peace.."I love you Rain..I love you..."
O.o WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO SAKURA AND SYAORAN?? IM REALLY SORRY..ahem..if you don't leik my story and think its too mcuh..but i love tradgedies..*sniff* SNiff* *points finger int he air liek a hero* NAY WAY!! To be continued..(I know..I ahte these too..but im on writers block and my mosm calling...)
DUM DUM DUM!