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"Hey." She heard a male voice say to her,
She was slowly drifting in and out of consciousness at the moment. But then she felt someone shove her in her side once more, just so she wouldn't fall conscious once again.
"Dude, I don't think she's waking up." She heard another voice say,
Lola was beginning to awaken, but still made no sign of it. Although her body lay still, she could hear the voices by her side as she lay on the carpet floor.
"Shut up Vince." The first voice snapped, "I'm trying my best."
"Hey, she has nice legs underneath that shirt of hers..." One of them trailed off
Finally taking notice of what these people around her were saying, Lola moaned softly in pain. She wouldn't let a person go on about how 'nice' her legs were, she didn't like being looked over that way, it made her feel like 'a piece of meat'.
"Hey! She moaned." The second voice paused, "That means she's awake!"
"Ya' think ?" The other said sarcastically,
Lola shifted herself onto her back and moved her arm slowly, and felt the slight sensation of pins and needles on her the left side of her body. She realized she must have been laying on her side for quite some time. But Lola then motioned her other arm, bringing it up close to her face and began to rub her eyes. However, all of a sudden someone placed their hand above hers, forcing her eyes to open to see the person kneeling before her.
"You all right?" He asked,
Lola noticed it was the man before who was with the other woman. He was certainly more attractive up close from where she was looking, he had the type of coffee skin Mexicans had, and his dark chocolate eyes made him appear mysterious.
"What the hell happened?"She groaned,
He smiled widely at her. Then turned to the guy next to him and then back at Lola.
"Well I heard a scream from your bedroom. So I got my friend Vince to come with me and check out to see what happened." He paused, "We first knocked on your door but no one answered, so we did the only thing we could think of, to climb up to your room. And here we found you on the floor with a curtain on top of you, so I guess it fell on you."
Lola picked the top half of her body of the floor, but only found that she was too weak to hold herself so she fell to the ground. Luckily though the two guys caught her in their arms before she did. Although she was steadily held by both of them, she felt the muscular man's neck close to the side of her face. From the scent of his musky cologne she felt weaker by the second. Here she was, merely an inch away from the man she desired, half- naked and vulnerable in front of him.
Just when this so-called 'Vince' guy thought she had fallen asleep once more, he made another observation without even knowing she was still awake.
"Dude, when I said her legs were nice, I meant NICE."
He placed his hand softly on top thigh, and stared at the lower half of her body intently.
"Hey." Lola slapped his hand away, "Would you mind the stems?"
The other man laughed at the scene close to her ear. Lola felt his body shudder against her from laughter, paying close attention to his pecs that were pressed against her. At this point she would surely have to force herself off of him, or at least wait until he distanced himself away from her.
"Don't mind him." He whispered in her ear, "He tends to act like that in front of beautiful women."
Lola' s heart stopped for a moment, she could have sworn he had called her 'beautiful'. Being called 'beautiful' by such an attractive man like this one surely was an honor. Not very many people in her life complimented her on being beautiful except for her Dad or Mom, although this point she wondered being called that by this guy made stop to think whether he was joking or being sincere.
He distanced himself away from Lola so she could give her space, but placed one hand on each side of her to keep her steady.
"But seriously, are you all right?" He looked at her, "Don't want you havin' a concussion or you might not wake up."
She had stared once more at him, not knowing what she had been doing at this moment. Lost in thought of how attractive the guy was.
"Hey, you ok?" He repeatedly asked,
Lola snapped out of her thoughts, pretending as if her staring was just an after-effect of being unconscious. And luckily he hadn't noticed.
"Yeah." Lola said softly, "Just a bit dizzy."
The guy named Vince next to him made another observation,
"That must be because of the bump on your head."
Lola's jaw dropped and in a rushed manner her hands searched for the bruised bump on her head. And also hoped it wasn't so noticeable, given that she didn't want to let her Dad know about this incident. Vince and the other man amusedly grinned, and reassured her the bump wasn't too big since they searched for it once they found her on the floor.
"The name's Dom by the way." He said,
He extended his hand towards Lola and she gladly took it. And for a second became aware of how large and rough his hand was against hers. But after he took his hand back, she could not continue with her observations.
Her head was once again beginning to get dizzy, and once her eyes closed she collapsed into the arms of Dom and fell unconscious.
"Hey." She heard a male voice say to her,
She was slowly drifting in and out of consciousness at the moment. But then she felt someone shove her in her side once more, just so she wouldn't fall conscious once again.
"Dude, I don't think she's waking up." She heard another voice say,
Lola was beginning to awaken, but still made no sign of it. Although her body lay still, she could hear the voices by her side as she lay on the carpet floor.
"Shut up Vince." The first voice snapped, "I'm trying my best."
"Hey, she has nice legs underneath that shirt of hers..." One of them trailed off
Finally taking notice of what these people around her were saying, Lola moaned softly in pain. She wouldn't let a person go on about how 'nice' her legs were, she didn't like being looked over that way, it made her feel like 'a piece of meat'.
"Hey! She moaned." The second voice paused, "That means she's awake!"
"Ya' think ?" The other said sarcastically,
Lola shifted herself onto her back and moved her arm slowly, and felt the slight sensation of pins and needles on her the left side of her body. She realized she must have been laying on her side for quite some time. But Lola then motioned her other arm, bringing it up close to her face and began to rub her eyes. However, all of a sudden someone placed their hand above hers, forcing her eyes to open to see the person kneeling before her.
"You all right?" He asked,
Lola noticed it was the man before who was with the other woman. He was certainly more attractive up close from where she was looking, he had the type of coffee skin Mexicans had, and his dark chocolate eyes made him appear mysterious.
"What the hell happened?"She groaned,
He smiled widely at her. Then turned to the guy next to him and then back at Lola.
"Well I heard a scream from your bedroom. So I got my friend Vince to come with me and check out to see what happened." He paused, "We first knocked on your door but no one answered, so we did the only thing we could think of, to climb up to your room. And here we found you on the floor with a curtain on top of you, so I guess it fell on you."
Lola picked the top half of her body of the floor, but only found that she was too weak to hold herself so she fell to the ground. Luckily though the two guys caught her in their arms before she did. Although she was steadily held by both of them, she felt the muscular man's neck close to the side of her face. From the scent of his musky cologne she felt weaker by the second. Here she was, merely an inch away from the man she desired, half- naked and vulnerable in front of him.
Just when this so-called 'Vince' guy thought she had fallen asleep once more, he made another observation without even knowing she was still awake.
"Dude, when I said her legs were nice, I meant NICE."
He placed his hand softly on top thigh, and stared at the lower half of her body intently.
"Hey." Lola slapped his hand away, "Would you mind the stems?"
The other man laughed at the scene close to her ear. Lola felt his body shudder against her from laughter, paying close attention to his pecs that were pressed against her. At this point she would surely have to force herself off of him, or at least wait until he distanced himself away from her.
"Don't mind him." He whispered in her ear, "He tends to act like that in front of beautiful women."
Lola' s heart stopped for a moment, she could have sworn he had called her 'beautiful'. Being called 'beautiful' by such an attractive man like this one surely was an honor. Not very many people in her life complimented her on being beautiful except for her Dad or Mom, although this point she wondered being called that by this guy made stop to think whether he was joking or being sincere.
He distanced himself away from Lola so she could give her space, but placed one hand on each side of her to keep her steady.
"But seriously, are you all right?" He looked at her, "Don't want you havin' a concussion or you might not wake up."
She had stared once more at him, not knowing what she had been doing at this moment. Lost in thought of how attractive the guy was.
"Hey, you ok?" He repeatedly asked,
Lola snapped out of her thoughts, pretending as if her staring was just an after-effect of being unconscious. And luckily he hadn't noticed.
"Yeah." Lola said softly, "Just a bit dizzy."
The guy named Vince next to him made another observation,
"That must be because of the bump on your head."
Lola's jaw dropped and in a rushed manner her hands searched for the bruised bump on her head. And also hoped it wasn't so noticeable, given that she didn't want to let her Dad know about this incident. Vince and the other man amusedly grinned, and reassured her the bump wasn't too big since they searched for it once they found her on the floor.
"The name's Dom by the way." He said,
He extended his hand towards Lola and she gladly took it. And for a second became aware of how large and rough his hand was against hers. But after he took his hand back, she could not continue with her observations.
Her head was once again beginning to get dizzy, and once her eyes closed she collapsed into the arms of Dom and fell unconscious.