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Chapter 7
"Baku! Hello! Welcome back. Shall I have your ship restocked?" Regent Cid walked out down the dock toward the ship, shaking hands with Baku and examining the two new members of his crew. "New recruits, Baku?"
"Umm... heheh... kinda. Heh..." Baku looked rather uncomfortable, glancing back at his "new recruits". One was a person with long, dirty, braided hair half-tucked under a hood and wearing a messy, old dress. The other was a malformed looking person in a large black cloak.
"Yo! Blank!" A voice shouted from behind Cid. The "woman" in the dress jumped. Zidane came running out in his usual attire with his fiancee, Queen Garnet. Captain Adelbert Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko Carol came tumbling along after them. "How ya been man!" Zidane embraced his old friend, whispering in his ear. "Did you find anything about you know what?" Blank looked a bit worried as he responded. "Uh... um... well, I'll chat with you later... Okay? It'll be a bit of a shock..."
"You found him?!" Zidane looked excited, forgetting all ideas of secrecy. Garnet walked up behind the blonde and placed her small hand on his shoulder, drawing his attention to her. "Found who, Zidane?" "Heh! umm... No one! Heh... Hahaha!" He looked very nervous. "Zidane.....?" She asked again. "NOTHING!" he said, quite worried of being discovered.
"He's been looking for his brother." Baku admitted. "KUJA!!!???!!!!" Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko yelled, Garnet was speechless. "Well..." Zidane said as he attempted to salvage the trust of his friends. And soon gave up. "now that I'm already in trouble, what did you find?" He asked Blank again. "We found your brother. He's right here in the dress."
"WHAT??!!!!!" Everyone turned to face the person in the dress. Thus Kuja took off the hood to face his brother and quite possible his demise. Everyone stared blankly at the former-villain in the dress. Zidane, in particular, seemed quite confused. "God Kuja, I knew you had a girly face, but now you've got clothes to match?" Kuja glared at his "brother", obviously not amused by his statement. "It's called a 'disguise', Zidane. Thank Cinna for his wonderful taste," He said sarcastically. Kuja appeared quite disgusted with his attire. Zidane, after a rather uncomfortable laugh, turned his gaze toward the cloaked figure beside the white-haired Terran. "Who's that? Garland?"
Baku burst out laughing at Zidane's statement. "No!!! Garland? No way!!! HAHAHAHAHA!" "Then, who is i---?" Zidane was cut off by Benero and Zenero trying to drag a large chest off of the ship. "Yue! Help!" Zenero called. Benero continued, "Take off that silly cape and help-" "Us!" Zenero finished.
"Oh, sorry!" The figure (being Yue, idiots) took off her "disguise". Her wings quickly unfolded behind her as she ran towards her two struggling friends. The three of them, then, hauled the overlarge trunk off the dock and onto solid ground. Kuja and Blank were watching, Baku was looking a bit bored, and Garnet, Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko were all staring at the girl's wings, mouths open. Zidane was simply staring.
"W-wow..." Zidane said, still staring. Garnet hit him. "Ow! What was that for?! So..." he turned around, trying to avoid any more trouble with Garnet. Looking back at his "brother", he followed Kuja's gaze to the winged girl. "Hey..." He said slyly, edging toward the white-haired man. "Nice catch, bro... Pretty girl, huh?"
Kuja looked absolutely shocked. "What did you say?" He asked, nearly furious. "Sooo," Zidane started again, smirking. "You like the 'angelic types', huh?" "What angelic types?" The question made both of them freeze. Yue had returned to the group, and had obviously missed most of the conversation. Zidane quickly recovered. "Oh, oh! Nothing! Nothing at all! Umm... Sorry, but in all this confusion I seem to have missed your name." "Oh! I am so sorry! My name is Yue Kawakami. It's a pleasure to meet you."
Garnet's eyes widened and she asked excitedly," Yue? Might you be this 'High Summoner' that I've heard of? From the village of 'Divines'?" Yue smiled at the young queen. "Yes, actually. So, then you must be Queen Garnet til Alexandros the seventeenth! I've heard so much about you, milady. Oh! And the great captain Adelbert Steiner! This is wonderful! Almost the entire heroic group! Oh! Eiko Carol, Vivi! This is excellent! It is such a pleasure to meet you all!" She exclaimed, a large smile on her pale face.
Eiko greeted her right back, "Hiya! Nice to meetcha!" Baku had to yell to get their attention. "Hey! Will ya get outta the way? This is no place for royalty, ladies, or pretty-boys such as you, Zidane. Move it!" He hurried all of them out of the way and up to the castle.
All the while, Yue thought to herself. 'perfection.... They're right where you want them.... I await your orders, Master. They're completely ignorant to the truth. The truth.... A perfect little angel. That's me, alright. A perfect new Angel....'
Author Note: Thank you for reading, but that's the only hint you get for now. The rest will be revealed gradually. Which means, as soon as I think of it, I'll update. REVIEW! Ja ne! Yuffie.
Chapter 7
"Baku! Hello! Welcome back. Shall I have your ship restocked?" Regent Cid walked out down the dock toward the ship, shaking hands with Baku and examining the two new members of his crew. "New recruits, Baku?"
"Umm... heheh... kinda. Heh..." Baku looked rather uncomfortable, glancing back at his "new recruits". One was a person with long, dirty, braided hair half-tucked under a hood and wearing a messy, old dress. The other was a malformed looking person in a large black cloak.
"Yo! Blank!" A voice shouted from behind Cid. The "woman" in the dress jumped. Zidane came running out in his usual attire with his fiancee, Queen Garnet. Captain Adelbert Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko Carol came tumbling along after them. "How ya been man!" Zidane embraced his old friend, whispering in his ear. "Did you find anything about you know what?" Blank looked a bit worried as he responded. "Uh... um... well, I'll chat with you later... Okay? It'll be a bit of a shock..."
"You found him?!" Zidane looked excited, forgetting all ideas of secrecy. Garnet walked up behind the blonde and placed her small hand on his shoulder, drawing his attention to her. "Found who, Zidane?" "Heh! umm... No one! Heh... Hahaha!" He looked very nervous. "Zidane.....?" She asked again. "NOTHING!" he said, quite worried of being discovered.
"He's been looking for his brother." Baku admitted. "KUJA!!!???!!!!" Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko yelled, Garnet was speechless. "Well..." Zidane said as he attempted to salvage the trust of his friends. And soon gave up. "now that I'm already in trouble, what did you find?" He asked Blank again. "We found your brother. He's right here in the dress."
"WHAT??!!!!!" Everyone turned to face the person in the dress. Thus Kuja took off the hood to face his brother and quite possible his demise. Everyone stared blankly at the former-villain in the dress. Zidane, in particular, seemed quite confused. "God Kuja, I knew you had a girly face, but now you've got clothes to match?" Kuja glared at his "brother", obviously not amused by his statement. "It's called a 'disguise', Zidane. Thank Cinna for his wonderful taste," He said sarcastically. Kuja appeared quite disgusted with his attire. Zidane, after a rather uncomfortable laugh, turned his gaze toward the cloaked figure beside the white-haired Terran. "Who's that? Garland?"
Baku burst out laughing at Zidane's statement. "No!!! Garland? No way!!! HAHAHAHAHA!" "Then, who is i---?" Zidane was cut off by Benero and Zenero trying to drag a large chest off of the ship. "Yue! Help!" Zenero called. Benero continued, "Take off that silly cape and help-" "Us!" Zenero finished.
"Oh, sorry!" The figure (being Yue, idiots) took off her "disguise". Her wings quickly unfolded behind her as she ran towards her two struggling friends. The three of them, then, hauled the overlarge trunk off the dock and onto solid ground. Kuja and Blank were watching, Baku was looking a bit bored, and Garnet, Steiner, Vivi, and Eiko were all staring at the girl's wings, mouths open. Zidane was simply staring.
"W-wow..." Zidane said, still staring. Garnet hit him. "Ow! What was that for?! So..." he turned around, trying to avoid any more trouble with Garnet. Looking back at his "brother", he followed Kuja's gaze to the winged girl. "Hey..." He said slyly, edging toward the white-haired man. "Nice catch, bro... Pretty girl, huh?"
Kuja looked absolutely shocked. "What did you say?" He asked, nearly furious. "Sooo," Zidane started again, smirking. "You like the 'angelic types', huh?" "What angelic types?" The question made both of them freeze. Yue had returned to the group, and had obviously missed most of the conversation. Zidane quickly recovered. "Oh, oh! Nothing! Nothing at all! Umm... Sorry, but in all this confusion I seem to have missed your name." "Oh! I am so sorry! My name is Yue Kawakami. It's a pleasure to meet you."
Garnet's eyes widened and she asked excitedly," Yue? Might you be this 'High Summoner' that I've heard of? From the village of 'Divines'?" Yue smiled at the young queen. "Yes, actually. So, then you must be Queen Garnet til Alexandros the seventeenth! I've heard so much about you, milady. Oh! And the great captain Adelbert Steiner! This is wonderful! Almost the entire heroic group! Oh! Eiko Carol, Vivi! This is excellent! It is such a pleasure to meet you all!" She exclaimed, a large smile on her pale face.
Eiko greeted her right back, "Hiya! Nice to meetcha!" Baku had to yell to get their attention. "Hey! Will ya get outta the way? This is no place for royalty, ladies, or pretty-boys such as you, Zidane. Move it!" He hurried all of them out of the way and up to the castle.
All the while, Yue thought to herself. 'perfection.... They're right where you want them.... I await your orders, Master. They're completely ignorant to the truth. The truth.... A perfect little angel. That's me, alright. A perfect new Angel....'
Author Note: Thank you for reading, but that's the only hint you get for now. The rest will be revealed gradually. Which means, as soon as I think of it, I'll update. REVIEW! Ja ne! Yuffie.