Yay! My sister Reviewed!
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WOW!
Little did I know my sister had such a hidden talent! You really are a good writer! no wonder you have so many reviews!
I was originally just going to read this to see why there were so many people reviewing it but now I am putting it on my favorites!!
I think I will start working on that Touya story you want me so badly to write, as a reward for your great story!
pats yoyo on head"
After I read that I was really happy because she had been making fun of the story and said it was stupid, but she read it without me knowing and said it was good!
But then she told me "Don't let it get to your head. It's still partially hidden."
.....--I can't win can I--.....
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"I'm staying with Shishi." stated Chuu.
"Suit yourself." said Rinku already halfway up the stairs.
Rinku and Jin walked up the stairs and down the hallway towards Touya's room.
"You know....Maybe Suzuki was right...." said Rinku.
" 'Bout what?" asked Jin.
"When he said maybe Touya was embarrassed that we were staring at him and he couldn't remember the last time he laughed." said Rinku.
"....Maybe. But only one person knows for sure."
They got to Touya's door. It was the only plain door in the house. Rinku's was covered in stickers. Stickers of every sort. Smelly stickers, fuzzy stickers, glittery stickers, holographic stickers, bumper stickers, smiley stickers, and more. Shishi's is covered with magazine cutouts. Suzuki's is covered with pictures of him. Jin doesn't have a door and neither dose Chuu. But even the bathroom has a label. But Touya has nothing on his door but a knob.
(A/N Can I end the chapter here? ...Come on! I don't know what's going to happen! Ha! It's your fault for reviewing to fast!....fine. But if you don't like what happens......)
"So what should we do?" asked Rinku.
" What do you mean?" replied Jin.
"Once we knock on the door, who knows what might happen! Maybe Shishi's right! What if Touya DOSE bite off our heads! Then what do we do?"
"Put our heads back on and ask him why he bit our heads off. Really Rinku, Touya's mouth isn't that big. And when has Shishi been right about anything anyway?"
(Downstairs.)
"RAAWCHUU!" sneezed Shishi.
(A/N Ok I had to write that over 20,000,000,000 times before I said whatever! so don't comment on it.)
"Blessya." said Chuu.
"THEY better not be the ones talking about me. 'Cause if they are..." Shishi said glaring at the ceiling.
"....if they are what?" asked Chuu.
"If they are I WON'T be very pleased."
"Riiiight..."
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Ok so I cheated.
I know a lot of you said you wanted the chapters longer and this one is very short so I am REEEEEEEAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRY!!!!
I'll try harder once I figure out what's gonna happen!
If anyone has ANY IDEAS feel free and welcome and encouraged to share!
( asking for Ideas.)
