I got a few reviews, so my responses will be put on here--for now that is, once I write chapter 21 (and 22 depending on length) this will be altered to include the new part.
I have a beta reader for this fic now....Emerald Eyed Cutie I will be emailing you....check your reviews, I'll be leaving something there.
Anyway, here's the responses for now.
girlknight (reviewed chapter one): I'm not sure if you actually read this because I posted the first seven chapters at once, but anyway I did check out your site posted--its ok, not my fave.
lilyfan (reviewed chapter ten): glad you like the ideas--hopefully some more inspiration comes soon. I just need a bit more 'fluff' until the consciences take over...
tootrickyforyou (reviewed chapter ten): first point--about the chapters--I was trying something new, where the chapters were like 'scenes' in a movie...that's why they are short and I put two per 'chapter'...if it seriously bugs you let me know, I just figured that way there's less clicking....how do you do the ¿§¿§¿§¿§¿§ things anyway? they look cool. Going more in depth will come later--once lily's and james' consciences start to kick in. Glad to know that you like my writing and how it flows well...thank you.