AN- (READ!!)Thank you to my wonderful reviews! I love'd them! I'm not proud of this chapter at all!!! I actually hate it. For some reason this action scene is very difficult for me to write. And I have no clue as to why. As I wrote it and read over it to me I could only think that it sounds fast pace. And I don't like that at all. But this is one of the few chapters that will come in the future that seem fast paced. I'm just really having writer block. But I think I'm finally coming out of it!!!! So please review my chapter. NO FLAMERS!!! If you can't review nicly then don't review at all. It's called constuctive critisim. To my reviewer!!! :
babmidnight - I can't spoil the suprise on who gets picked up by who in the 2nd chapter lol. Actually I wanted a cliffy and that seemed perfect! But you will find out in this chapter!!! Thanx for your reveiw!
BewitchingWitch - Im glad you like it so far. Thanx for your reveiw too!
XxAnimeLover14xX - Im glad you think my Fic is good. Hopefully it will get better as I progress and put up more chapters! I love your reveiw!
Naoko Ten'ou - The chapters are short for two reasons. 1.) I kinda thought that was the best place to stop for the chapter. It leaves people wanting more. I hope. 2.) I planning on making this story some where between 20 - 30 chapters. If I did long chapters even though people love long ones I think my story would end somewhere between 10-15 chapters. Everyone likes to read a story with tons of chapters. Plus I'm building this up so I can make a sequel. Thank you for your reveiw I'm glad you like my story. Also I don't mean to come off ithcy in this review. I'm just anwsering your review to the best of my knowledge. Byez!
Angel-in-Disguise16- I'm so sry for the long update! hope fully I will get my chapters out alot quicker next time!
For all me other reviewers: I'm sooo sorry but I lost your review alerts. I thought I saved them on my computer but I guess I didnt. And I honestly don't remember who reviewed. So if you review this chapter I'll be sure to give a shout out!
Blaises P.o.v
I lifted Ginny's unconscious body out of the ocean. She was limp in my arms as Draco and I swam our way to shore. It was much harder because the sand that once was under the water was no longer there. Draco, I could see was strugglng just as much as I was even though Hermione was concious. The water around us still shook and the waves still crashed down around and on top of us. The water splashed into my eyes and in my mouth causing me to choke. Evening bringing me under but I fought, not for myself but for Ginny. Me worrying too much about Ginny did not see the on coming danger that we were approaching. But, Draco, who was at least 20 feet ahead of me and out of the crashing waves saw what lye ahead for both me and Ginny.
" Blaise, man, hurry up! The waves are coming in!" Draco screamed. I looked behind me to see a massive wave heading our way. Up ahead lye jagged rocks that stuck out from the waters surface. Ginny and I seemed to be trapped and time was running out. Every which way I turned there was no way out. It was rather face the wrath of the wave or the hardness of rocks.
" Blaise, the rocks." Draco screamed at me. What the bloody hell does he mean by rocks? I looked to where the rocks stuck out from the ocean.About 12 feet infront of the rocks was a large rock that had a small opening. Then it clicked. Draco had saw the opening and wanted him to swim to the rock so he could put himself and Ginny in there so they would be safe.
Unfortunately, Blaise had little time to get to the rocks for the wave was only a ways away. He used his every last strength to get to those rocks. He had decided either they were going to make it there or were going to die trying. Hopefully they were going to make it.
Blaise pushed with all his might, the rocks were only 10 feet away. He could her the waves crashing down around him and they were becoming louder. He knew time was almost. His hands barely had found the rock when a wave suddenly slammed down onto him knocking Ginny out of his grasps. She was carried by the current heading toward the sharp, jagged rocks. He swam with all his might to get to her. His fingers grasps her hair. The only part visible of her unconcious body.
Hermiones P.o.v
Draco had pulled me up to shore long ago and now we were both scared not only for our lives but for the ones of our two best friends that were now in the water being trampled by waves. The earth seemed to stop moving for now. That did nothing to help the waves for they were already turned into a raging death pool from the violent shaking. Blaise had just made it to the rock Draco had pointed out when he was hit with a wave and Ginny was no longer in his hands. Her body drifted away. I looked to were she would be pushed to and my eyes laid upon something that made my stomach queasy. There were sharp rocks in every direction that Ginny could possibly drift too. My knees became weak and I held onto my only support, Draco. The funny thing is he held on back.
Blaise swam and I saw him grab Ginny's hair and she came back to the surface. He wrapped his arms around her thin waist and drug her back into shore but the current was too stong. He kept flowing toward the rocks and then I saw him stick Ginny behind so his back was facing the rocks. I must have not been the only one to realize what he was going to do because Draco and I yelled at the same time...
" NO BLAISE!!!!!"
He was going to sacrifice himself when they hit the rocks......
AN- OK short I know but doesnt it keep you coming back to find out what happens to Blaise? Review please! Amber
babmidnight - I can't spoil the suprise on who gets picked up by who in the 2nd chapter lol. Actually I wanted a cliffy and that seemed perfect! But you will find out in this chapter!!! Thanx for your reveiw!
BewitchingWitch - Im glad you like it so far. Thanx for your reveiw too!
XxAnimeLover14xX - Im glad you think my Fic is good. Hopefully it will get better as I progress and put up more chapters! I love your reveiw!
Naoko Ten'ou - The chapters are short for two reasons. 1.) I kinda thought that was the best place to stop for the chapter. It leaves people wanting more. I hope. 2.) I planning on making this story some where between 20 - 30 chapters. If I did long chapters even though people love long ones I think my story would end somewhere between 10-15 chapters. Everyone likes to read a story with tons of chapters. Plus I'm building this up so I can make a sequel. Thank you for your reveiw I'm glad you like my story. Also I don't mean to come off ithcy in this review. I'm just anwsering your review to the best of my knowledge. Byez!
Angel-in-Disguise16- I'm so sry for the long update! hope fully I will get my chapters out alot quicker next time!
For all me other reviewers: I'm sooo sorry but I lost your review alerts. I thought I saved them on my computer but I guess I didnt. And I honestly don't remember who reviewed. So if you review this chapter I'll be sure to give a shout out!
Blaises P.o.v
I lifted Ginny's unconscious body out of the ocean. She was limp in my arms as Draco and I swam our way to shore. It was much harder because the sand that once was under the water was no longer there. Draco, I could see was strugglng just as much as I was even though Hermione was concious. The water around us still shook and the waves still crashed down around and on top of us. The water splashed into my eyes and in my mouth causing me to choke. Evening bringing me under but I fought, not for myself but for Ginny. Me worrying too much about Ginny did not see the on coming danger that we were approaching. But, Draco, who was at least 20 feet ahead of me and out of the crashing waves saw what lye ahead for both me and Ginny.
" Blaise, man, hurry up! The waves are coming in!" Draco screamed. I looked behind me to see a massive wave heading our way. Up ahead lye jagged rocks that stuck out from the waters surface. Ginny and I seemed to be trapped and time was running out. Every which way I turned there was no way out. It was rather face the wrath of the wave or the hardness of rocks.
" Blaise, the rocks." Draco screamed at me. What the bloody hell does he mean by rocks? I looked to where the rocks stuck out from the ocean.About 12 feet infront of the rocks was a large rock that had a small opening. Then it clicked. Draco had saw the opening and wanted him to swim to the rock so he could put himself and Ginny in there so they would be safe.
Unfortunately, Blaise had little time to get to the rocks for the wave was only a ways away. He used his every last strength to get to those rocks. He had decided either they were going to make it there or were going to die trying. Hopefully they were going to make it.
Blaise pushed with all his might, the rocks were only 10 feet away. He could her the waves crashing down around him and they were becoming louder. He knew time was almost. His hands barely had found the rock when a wave suddenly slammed down onto him knocking Ginny out of his grasps. She was carried by the current heading toward the sharp, jagged rocks. He swam with all his might to get to her. His fingers grasps her hair. The only part visible of her unconcious body.
Hermiones P.o.v
Draco had pulled me up to shore long ago and now we were both scared not only for our lives but for the ones of our two best friends that were now in the water being trampled by waves. The earth seemed to stop moving for now. That did nothing to help the waves for they were already turned into a raging death pool from the violent shaking. Blaise had just made it to the rock Draco had pointed out when he was hit with a wave and Ginny was no longer in his hands. Her body drifted away. I looked to were she would be pushed to and my eyes laid upon something that made my stomach queasy. There were sharp rocks in every direction that Ginny could possibly drift too. My knees became weak and I held onto my only support, Draco. The funny thing is he held on back.
Blaise swam and I saw him grab Ginny's hair and she came back to the surface. He wrapped his arms around her thin waist and drug her back into shore but the current was too stong. He kept flowing toward the rocks and then I saw him stick Ginny behind so his back was facing the rocks. I must have not been the only one to realize what he was going to do because Draco and I yelled at the same time...
" NO BLAISE!!!!!"
He was going to sacrifice himself when they hit the rocks......
AN- OK short I know but doesnt it keep you coming back to find out what happens to Blaise? Review please! Amber