Ch. 2 of Moonlight betrayal
My Questions
AN: I got two reviews I'm soo happy!!!!! Thank you my two reviewers a.k.a. ANNY() and Kirstie P. You are my first reviewers of (hopefully) many I'm not sure if this should be kag/inu or sess/kag. Review and tell me your opinion I honestly think it should make it kag/sess because inuyasha just became a two-timer in the last chapter. I'm really happy you liked this fic. I was so nervous that no one would like it at the end I'm going to add my co authoress and my friend Tallin (not real name). Tallin and me usually argue so if you're lucky you might get to see an argument! That I've heard is hilarious! These are real just so you know. Freaky I got another review from Megan Consoer. Thanks for your review
Previously: With SesshouMaru-sama
SesshouMaru was going to pay Inuyasha a little visit when a wave of salt hit his sensitive nose and the smell of Inuyasha's wench. 'Is this the smell of her tears?'. With that last thought he ran to the direction that wench's sent.
New chapter begins now
SesshouMaru stepped into the small clearing. He could smell her. She had run through here only a moment ago. The tracks were fresh. He then heard a loud noise like a splash. He ran to that direction. A lake came into view. The moon was out so he could see some shadows. He saw a shadow that looked like a woman. He dived into the water without another moment's hesitation. He took a breath and dived deep first he came up empty. The second dive he came back up with Kagome or Inuyasha's Wench. At first she was kind of blacked out. Then he carried her out of the water (bridal style, know any other way?).
-Scene to Inuyasha and gang-
In the hut Sango sighed at the twitching body on the floor. Also known as Miroku. The Hentai had groped Sango's ass and had paid for it. Sango noticed the moonlight peer on through the window when Inuyasha came in. He and down then jumped up and practically starting an earthquake with the way he was yelling and jumping around. "Where the hell is Kagome!!!!!!!!" he shouted again and again till he finally said, "She probably thought she could escape back home for some type of test. I'm going to go get her back!" with that he ran off. "Inuyasha!!!" Sango yelled at him to come back but he was to far gone for him to hear. Just then Miroku woke up and asked Sango "My dear fair lovely Sango what is amiss?" Sango sighed. She decided to answer. While Miroku's hand was inching to Sango's ass. "Inu-Hentai!!" Sango slapped and began to storm out. Miroku jumped back up and said to Sango "No! Wait for me!" Miroku began to walk after her. Just then Sango shouted "NOO!!!!" then ran out. Miroku just followed her coaxing her to stop and speak with him.
-Scene to SesshouMaru and Kagome-
Kagome coughed up water as the demon held her in his lap so she could be warm. "Why did you have to save me?! I don't want to live!" she managed to choke out between sobs. Kagome shivered because of the cold. "Inuyasha hurt me so much." The lord SesshouMaru held her tight and told her "I will not let him hurt you, Kagome". She looked up at him and wiped away tears and asked "Promise?" That answer to that question would decide if she would let herself live. The way he answered would break her or build her. The way he looked at her when he answered would decide if she would fear him or care for him. Her chocolate brown eyes were about to burst into tears if he didn't answer. He looked deep within himself and found the answer to that question. The perfect answer. Maybe this demon lord could allow someone to enter his heart. Maybe this girl could rid him of ice prison he had trapped himself in since his mother had passed away. "Yes. Yes, Kagome. I will never let Inuyasha hurt you. Never again will you be alone. As long as I live you will never even think of taking your own life. I promise to protect you, Kagome forever." He slipped a pendent around her neck and held her tightly as she slipped into a dreamless sleep.
-Scene to Sango and Miroku-
Sango stood by the yet again unconscious Miroku. Kilala growled as a familiar scent reached her nose. Sango grabbed her Hirakotsu ready to attack the upcoming demon. Just then out of the shadows SesshouMaru appeared. "I found her asleep by a lake. You should take better care of her." He put her in the arms of Sango and began to leave. "Thank you, Lord SesshouMaru. We will." Sango said that and began to leave, too. "Uhh, wait could you carry Kagome while I carry Miroku?" Sango asked expecting him to snap at her or kill her either one was equally expected. "Fine. But we should hurry or Inuyasha will sense my presence".
Cat: how was that? Tallin: You should've made it longer! Jova: I like it soo far Tallin: If it were longer you'd get more reviews. Cat: Shut up!! Tallin: calleme!!(Spanish translation in2 English= make me) Cat: Ohh, I'll make you alright (gets up) Jova: Ok! Read and review by people!!!!!
Review Responses:
ANNY()": Thanks I
Kirstie P: Thanks Hope
Megan Consoer: Thanks you
Kegs-sama: Thanks enjoyed
This chapter I will update as soon as I get more reviews and have time. I promise. I will update an at least the very lease once a week.
My Questions
AN: I got two reviews I'm soo happy!!!!! Thank you my two reviewers a.k.a. ANNY() and Kirstie P. You are my first reviewers of (hopefully) many I'm not sure if this should be kag/inu or sess/kag. Review and tell me your opinion I honestly think it should make it kag/sess because inuyasha just became a two-timer in the last chapter. I'm really happy you liked this fic. I was so nervous that no one would like it at the end I'm going to add my co authoress and my friend Tallin (not real name). Tallin and me usually argue so if you're lucky you might get to see an argument! That I've heard is hilarious! These are real just so you know. Freaky I got another review from Megan Consoer. Thanks for your review
Previously: With SesshouMaru-sama
SesshouMaru was going to pay Inuyasha a little visit when a wave of salt hit his sensitive nose and the smell of Inuyasha's wench. 'Is this the smell of her tears?'. With that last thought he ran to the direction that wench's sent.
New chapter begins now
SesshouMaru stepped into the small clearing. He could smell her. She had run through here only a moment ago. The tracks were fresh. He then heard a loud noise like a splash. He ran to that direction. A lake came into view. The moon was out so he could see some shadows. He saw a shadow that looked like a woman. He dived into the water without another moment's hesitation. He took a breath and dived deep first he came up empty. The second dive he came back up with Kagome or Inuyasha's Wench. At first she was kind of blacked out. Then he carried her out of the water (bridal style, know any other way?).
-Scene to Inuyasha and gang-
In the hut Sango sighed at the twitching body on the floor. Also known as Miroku. The Hentai had groped Sango's ass and had paid for it. Sango noticed the moonlight peer on through the window when Inuyasha came in. He and down then jumped up and practically starting an earthquake with the way he was yelling and jumping around. "Where the hell is Kagome!!!!!!!!" he shouted again and again till he finally said, "She probably thought she could escape back home for some type of test. I'm going to go get her back!" with that he ran off. "Inuyasha!!!" Sango yelled at him to come back but he was to far gone for him to hear. Just then Miroku woke up and asked Sango "My dear fair lovely Sango what is amiss?" Sango sighed. She decided to answer. While Miroku's hand was inching to Sango's ass. "Inu-Hentai!!" Sango slapped and began to storm out. Miroku jumped back up and said to Sango "No! Wait for me!" Miroku began to walk after her. Just then Sango shouted "NOO!!!!" then ran out. Miroku just followed her coaxing her to stop and speak with him.
-Scene to SesshouMaru and Kagome-
Kagome coughed up water as the demon held her in his lap so she could be warm. "Why did you have to save me?! I don't want to live!" she managed to choke out between sobs. Kagome shivered because of the cold. "Inuyasha hurt me so much." The lord SesshouMaru held her tight and told her "I will not let him hurt you, Kagome". She looked up at him and wiped away tears and asked "Promise?" That answer to that question would decide if she would let herself live. The way he answered would break her or build her. The way he looked at her when he answered would decide if she would fear him or care for him. Her chocolate brown eyes were about to burst into tears if he didn't answer. He looked deep within himself and found the answer to that question. The perfect answer. Maybe this demon lord could allow someone to enter his heart. Maybe this girl could rid him of ice prison he had trapped himself in since his mother had passed away. "Yes. Yes, Kagome. I will never let Inuyasha hurt you. Never again will you be alone. As long as I live you will never even think of taking your own life. I promise to protect you, Kagome forever." He slipped a pendent around her neck and held her tightly as she slipped into a dreamless sleep.
-Scene to Sango and Miroku-
Sango stood by the yet again unconscious Miroku. Kilala growled as a familiar scent reached her nose. Sango grabbed her Hirakotsu ready to attack the upcoming demon. Just then out of the shadows SesshouMaru appeared. "I found her asleep by a lake. You should take better care of her." He put her in the arms of Sango and began to leave. "Thank you, Lord SesshouMaru. We will." Sango said that and began to leave, too. "Uhh, wait could you carry Kagome while I carry Miroku?" Sango asked expecting him to snap at her or kill her either one was equally expected. "Fine. But we should hurry or Inuyasha will sense my presence".
Cat: how was that? Tallin: You should've made it longer! Jova: I like it soo far Tallin: If it were longer you'd get more reviews. Cat: Shut up!! Tallin: calleme!!(Spanish translation in2 English= make me) Cat: Ohh, I'll make you alright (gets up) Jova: Ok! Read and review by people!!!!!
Review Responses:
ANNY()": Thanks I
Kirstie P: Thanks Hope
Megan Consoer: Thanks you
Kegs-sama: Thanks enjoyed
This chapter I will update as soon as I get more reviews and have time. I promise. I will update an at least the very lease once a week.