I.don't.own.XMan.!!!!
To:
Pichuva11224: About you're question: You what to now if you have to pay to register FanFiction, net? If that's it, no you don't. It's totally free, when I register I was concerned about that too. But it's free, and you don't have to pay nothing! I'm updating the story right after the moment I read you're review. I glad I good at putting the movie and the story together I wan't sure I was able to do that very well.
Crazy4horses: Yeah, some day we will se John in the movie grabbing the lighter and saying: My prrressiiiousssss!!!!!!I like the sound of it too!!!P.O.B P.O.B!!!!
I don't believe I got to chapter eight!!!!!This is THE longer story I have ever done!!!It's even bigger then "Three Sixteen Secrets" my story about Charmed. I am sorry to any reader of that story for not updating in a while as soon as the muse contacts me, I will.
Chapter Eight
Leilai was sitting in the couch watching some show about penguins.
No need to say that she was bored to death. Bobby and Rouge were playing a game with there fingers and Mina, was some were unknowed.
Then a voce said by her ear:
-Are penguins that interesting?
She smiled as John sat beside her in the coach.
-You see, we are dating, so we need to do things that people how dates do
-Like what? Walk on the beach?-She asked making innocent look
-Like this...
They started kissing, and John putted his hand on her waist as she putted her arms around his neck.
Suddenly the front door opened. Rouge got up and runed to the door. As Rouge was talking to someone, Bobby made a sing, to John and Leilai go there.
They got up, with John muttering all the way about annoying friends.
-Oh,hi guy's! This is Logan!-Rouge said presenting a big guy with a weird hair do.
-Logan, this is Leilai and John!-She said pointing at them respectable
-Call me Toxic-SaidLeilai giving a hand shake at Logan
-Toxic, hem? Why?
-Got any stile around here?
She was surprised when out of his hand pointing stuff came out.
-Right........I can't show you, unless you what to lose you're....claws....
-What can you do?
-I can melt stile, or let's say it like this I control all kaid of toxic wastes, and acid, you name it!
-Right...-He said putting away his claws-And you kid?-He asked John
John opened his lighter and grabbed the flame
-Logan this is Bobby, his...
-I'm her boyfriend!-Said Bobby shaking Logan's hand-Call me Ice Man
-Her boyfriend, so how do you guys...?
-Oh, were still working on that!
-Look who come back!-Said a voice
It was Storm.
-Hey, Storm!-Said
-We should be going now-Said John
-Bye Logan said Rouge as Bobby dragged her out of the room
(A/N:It's making this chapter longer then it was supposed to be, this will only follow what happened to Rouge,Bobby,Mina and mainly John and Leilai)
That night........
In the girl's dorm, the girls were getting ready to sleep.
-So, Toxic, I heard that toy and John are dating?-Said Jubilee
-You heard correctly-Said Leilai as she putted one grey pants, and a black T-Shirt.
It was around two o'clock when suddenly a scream was heard on the house.
-Jesus!!!!!!!!!!!!!11-Screamed Leilai
-What the hell is happening?-Screamed Mina
-Let's get out of here!-Said Rouge to the both of the girl's
They got out and saw everyone running
-Where's Bobby?-Asked Rouge desperately
The school was a mess, everyone running in every direction.
.-Rouge!-The girls heard a scream behind them
-Bobby! Let's go this way!
-Are you ok? Asked John to Leilai
-Yeah,you?
The were directing to the end of the corridor when the saw shadows of people on the window.
There was an explosion and Rouge, Leilai and Mina yelled.
They started running for the main entreced, but when they got there the door blow up.
The five teenagers where paralysed as the man camend in.
Then they heard a scream, and from the upper level Logan jumped. He stabbed the man from behind, and throw them to the air. He certainly new how to make an entrance.
-This way!
They when until a secret passage to ascape.But as they got in, Logan closed it.
-Logan!-Yelled Rouge
-Everyone looked back
-Bobby we got to go back!
-He can take care of him self!-Said John
-Bobby please!
They when all the way back to the door and open it.
They saw Logan talking to someone.
-Bobby now!
Bobby touched the wall, and made a wall of ice between Logan and the solders.
-NO!-Yelled Logan
-Logan, please!
-I'll be ok!
-But we won't-Said Rouge
Logan reconsidered and walked into the secret passage.
They reattached the garage....
-I'll drive!-Said John opening the front door.
-Maybe next time, kid!
End of Chapter
More next time.......I tiered so, tell me what do you think! I would like to say thank you to Ana, for letting me use her as a model to my main character
To:
Pichuva11224: About you're question: You what to now if you have to pay to register FanFiction, net? If that's it, no you don't. It's totally free, when I register I was concerned about that too. But it's free, and you don't have to pay nothing! I'm updating the story right after the moment I read you're review. I glad I good at putting the movie and the story together I wan't sure I was able to do that very well.
Crazy4horses: Yeah, some day we will se John in the movie grabbing the lighter and saying: My prrressiiiousssss!!!!!!I like the sound of it too!!!P.O.B P.O.B!!!!
I don't believe I got to chapter eight!!!!!This is THE longer story I have ever done!!!It's even bigger then "Three Sixteen Secrets" my story about Charmed. I am sorry to any reader of that story for not updating in a while as soon as the muse contacts me, I will.
Chapter Eight
Leilai was sitting in the couch watching some show about penguins.
No need to say that she was bored to death. Bobby and Rouge were playing a game with there fingers and Mina, was some were unknowed.
Then a voce said by her ear:
-Are penguins that interesting?
She smiled as John sat beside her in the coach.
-You see, we are dating, so we need to do things that people how dates do
-Like what? Walk on the beach?-She asked making innocent look
-Like this...
They started kissing, and John putted his hand on her waist as she putted her arms around his neck.
Suddenly the front door opened. Rouge got up and runed to the door. As Rouge was talking to someone, Bobby made a sing, to John and Leilai go there.
They got up, with John muttering all the way about annoying friends.
-Oh,hi guy's! This is Logan!-Rouge said presenting a big guy with a weird hair do.
-Logan, this is Leilai and John!-She said pointing at them respectable
-Call me Toxic-SaidLeilai giving a hand shake at Logan
-Toxic, hem? Why?
-Got any stile around here?
She was surprised when out of his hand pointing stuff came out.
-Right........I can't show you, unless you what to lose you're....claws....
-What can you do?
-I can melt stile, or let's say it like this I control all kaid of toxic wastes, and acid, you name it!
-Right...-He said putting away his claws-And you kid?-He asked John
John opened his lighter and grabbed the flame
-Logan this is Bobby, his...
-I'm her boyfriend!-Said Bobby shaking Logan's hand-Call me Ice Man
-Her boyfriend, so how do you guys...?
-Oh, were still working on that!
-Look who come back!-Said a voice
It was Storm.
-Hey, Storm!-Said
-We should be going now-Said John
-Bye Logan said Rouge as Bobby dragged her out of the room
(A/N:It's making this chapter longer then it was supposed to be, this will only follow what happened to Rouge,Bobby,Mina and mainly John and Leilai)
That night........
In the girl's dorm, the girls were getting ready to sleep.
-So, Toxic, I heard that toy and John are dating?-Said Jubilee
-You heard correctly-Said Leilai as she putted one grey pants, and a black T-Shirt.
It was around two o'clock when suddenly a scream was heard on the house.
-Jesus!!!!!!!!!!!!!11-Screamed Leilai
-What the hell is happening?-Screamed Mina
-Let's get out of here!-Said Rouge to the both of the girl's
They got out and saw everyone running
-Where's Bobby?-Asked Rouge desperately
The school was a mess, everyone running in every direction.
.-Rouge!-The girls heard a scream behind them
-Bobby! Let's go this way!
-Are you ok? Asked John to Leilai
-Yeah,you?
The were directing to the end of the corridor when the saw shadows of people on the window.
There was an explosion and Rouge, Leilai and Mina yelled.
They started running for the main entreced, but when they got there the door blow up.
The five teenagers where paralysed as the man camend in.
Then they heard a scream, and from the upper level Logan jumped. He stabbed the man from behind, and throw them to the air. He certainly new how to make an entrance.
-This way!
They when until a secret passage to ascape.But as they got in, Logan closed it.
-Logan!-Yelled Rouge
-Everyone looked back
-Bobby we got to go back!
-He can take care of him self!-Said John
-Bobby please!
They when all the way back to the door and open it.
They saw Logan talking to someone.
-Bobby now!
Bobby touched the wall, and made a wall of ice between Logan and the solders.
-NO!-Yelled Logan
-Logan, please!
-I'll be ok!
-But we won't-Said Rouge
Logan reconsidered and walked into the secret passage.
They reattached the garage....
-I'll drive!-Said John opening the front door.
-Maybe next time, kid!
End of Chapter
More next time.......I tiered so, tell me what do you think! I would like to say thank you to Ana, for letting me use her as a model to my main character