Celwriter: here is the next chappie for my story. This is a short story so
the climax is very near. Here it goes...
Chapter 4
The next few days went by quickly as John had to often give up his precious keyboard to Rachel. It wasn't too much of a problem. He timed the climax to his turn so that Rachel couldn't mess it up.
The day came for the climax and he retrieved the keyboard from Rachel. Rachel didn't leave to her room as she had the other days. She just moved over on the couch and smiled. John hated that smile, it seemed that she thought she knew something that he didn't know, but it was the other way around. He knew that she would die that day and she didn't have a clue. Or did she? John shook his head and began on the climax.
As planned, Rachel was killed a few minutes later as the Rachel in the story died. He turned to smirk at her demise, but she laughed, she laughed as if she had succeeded, but she hadn't, had she? She was dying!
John turned back to the keyboard to complete his victory. He was about to let the murderer, John Shooter, escape, but the keyboard went hay- wire. Mort had retaken control.
Celwriter: short and sweet, very pithy. Can't wait for the next chapter? I hope I can get to it asap.
Chapter 4
The next few days went by quickly as John had to often give up his precious keyboard to Rachel. It wasn't too much of a problem. He timed the climax to his turn so that Rachel couldn't mess it up.
The day came for the climax and he retrieved the keyboard from Rachel. Rachel didn't leave to her room as she had the other days. She just moved over on the couch and smiled. John hated that smile, it seemed that she thought she knew something that he didn't know, but it was the other way around. He knew that she would die that day and she didn't have a clue. Or did she? John shook his head and began on the climax.
As planned, Rachel was killed a few minutes later as the Rachel in the story died. He turned to smirk at her demise, but she laughed, she laughed as if she had succeeded, but she hadn't, had she? She was dying!
John turned back to the keyboard to complete his victory. He was about to let the murderer, John Shooter, escape, but the keyboard went hay- wire. Mort had retaken control.
Celwriter: short and sweet, very pithy. Can't wait for the next chapter? I hope I can get to it asap.