Chapter one of the fanfic entitled: The Mary-Sue fic/What would really
happen
Anastasia Stardust was a talented young woman with a very imaginative name. She was 5'6 and had long flowing black hair, fair skin, and beautiful crystal blue almond shaped eyes. She did not have a lot of friends at her school because most of them were jealous of her looks, athletic skills, and that she was incredibly smart for her age. Anastasia spent her nights at home on the Internet doing school report or hanging out in Transformers forums. She loved the Transformers and watched the new show Transformers: Energon every time it was on. Whenever Jetfire came on, her heart melted.
Jetfire was strong, witty and had the most dreamy voice. Anastasia sighed as she paused from looking up information of the fall of Berlin in 1945, as she reminisced on her hero. She looked at the watch she grandmother gave her before she died and noticed Engeron would be on in less than five minutes. She quickly placed the research page in her favourites and went to take a bathroom break before heading up to her room to go watch her favourite show.
Anastasia sat on the edge of her bed, her eyes fixed excitedly to the television. Just as the beginning song finished and the show went to commercial break, Anastasia's mom bursted into the room, her face was red and she wore a simple lose fitting, worn out bath robe. "You little bitch!" she screamed at Anastasia as she grabbed her daughter by the hair and threw her on the ground.
Anastasia screamed in fear and pain, she hated when her mom was like this. As if she didn't get enough abuse at school, she also got it from her mother. Anastasia's mother than began to kick her as she curled into a ball trying to protect her stomach and head. As she cried in pain, Anastasia prayed that someone would end her misery now and take her away somewhere safe. Somewhere where people would love her.
All of a sudden a bright light came from the tv. It began to swirl around creating a vortex. Anastasia's mother panicked and ran out of the room, Anastasia however was too weak to move and she soon found herself being sucked into the vortex. Anastasia felt herself hit the ground hard. She wasn't hurt and nothing was broken, but she was still too weak to open her eyes and look around at her surroundings. She simply stayed on her back waiting to die and soon fell into unconsciousness.
What would really happen
Katie McDougall was not your average young woman with an average name. She was 5'4 and had short dirty blond hair, a light tan, and Hazel eyes that couldn't make up what colour they wanted to be. She did not have a lot of friends at her school because she was anti social, hated extra circulars with a passion, and didn't show up at school half the time. Katie spent her nights at home on the Internet looking up random and pointless forms of entertaining like the cartoons at and , or hanging out with her best friend who believed she was a werewolf named Aqua Bolt, except for when Transformers was on because lets face it, Transformers are awesome and Katie had an unnatural infatuation with them. Her favourite character of all time was Starscream.
Just mentioning that name made Katie turn into some odd and slightly irritating fangirl. She was also in complete denial that Starscream was whiny and a coward. She sighed as she paused after watching a Strong Bad e- mail cartoon as she reminisced on her hero. She looked at the Shek 2 watch with a glow in the dark picture of Donkey that she got for a box of cereal and saw that Energon would be on in less than five minutes. She quickly exited from the Home Star Runner homepage and ran up the stairs to take a quick potty break then ran to her room to watch one of her many favourite shows.
Katie sat on the edge of her bed, her eyes glued to the tv as she turned into a zombie and quickly became engulfed with the fascination of bright flashy colours. Just as the beginning song finished and the show went to commercial break, Katie's mom bursted into the room, her face was red and she wore a simple lose fitting, worn out bath robe. "You little bitch!" she screamed as pulled Katie up by her arm, squeezing tightly. "Don't you ever flush the toilet when I'm in the shower again!" As she said this last statement, Katie's mother took her free hand and gripped Katie's jaw bone so that she had to face her mother directly.
Katie began to cry because she was a rather sensitive girl who didn't like seeing her mom mad. She hated when her mom was like this but she knew she would have to come to terms that when older woman reach a certian age, their bodies begin to change again and their hormonal mood swings become more overpowering making the rest of the family miss the good old days of PMS.
Katie prayed as tears of fear and discomfort rolled down her face that she could go away someplace where she would have to deal with annoying preps at school or her emotionally uncontrollable mother or people who don't understand the awesomeness that is Starscream. All of a sudden a bright light came from the television. Katie's mother jumped back in shock and the light began to swirl around creating a vortex. Katie on the other hand was frozen stiff due to the fact that she was petrified. After all, a bright glowing vortex was coming out of her tv. Before she knew it, and before her mom could grab her and pull her to safety, Katie found herself sucked into the tv and hurling down into nothingness.
Katie hit the ground with a loud thump. from what she could sense, there were no broken bones but her butt was in a great deal of pain and she thought she might have sprained her right ankle yet again. Never the less she decided that it would be a good idea if she kept her eyes shut and not peeked at her surroundings just yet, by doing so Katie found that like many other things in her life, travelling though a vortex makes her sleepy and she soon drifted off into slumber.
(A/N) My mom is not going through 'the change' nor is she evil and mean. I love her so very very much, even when she IS acting like a bitch.
Anastasia Stardust was a talented young woman with a very imaginative name. She was 5'6 and had long flowing black hair, fair skin, and beautiful crystal blue almond shaped eyes. She did not have a lot of friends at her school because most of them were jealous of her looks, athletic skills, and that she was incredibly smart for her age. Anastasia spent her nights at home on the Internet doing school report or hanging out in Transformers forums. She loved the Transformers and watched the new show Transformers: Energon every time it was on. Whenever Jetfire came on, her heart melted.
Jetfire was strong, witty and had the most dreamy voice. Anastasia sighed as she paused from looking up information of the fall of Berlin in 1945, as she reminisced on her hero. She looked at the watch she grandmother gave her before she died and noticed Engeron would be on in less than five minutes. She quickly placed the research page in her favourites and went to take a bathroom break before heading up to her room to go watch her favourite show.
Anastasia sat on the edge of her bed, her eyes fixed excitedly to the television. Just as the beginning song finished and the show went to commercial break, Anastasia's mom bursted into the room, her face was red and she wore a simple lose fitting, worn out bath robe. "You little bitch!" she screamed at Anastasia as she grabbed her daughter by the hair and threw her on the ground.
Anastasia screamed in fear and pain, she hated when her mom was like this. As if she didn't get enough abuse at school, she also got it from her mother. Anastasia's mother than began to kick her as she curled into a ball trying to protect her stomach and head. As she cried in pain, Anastasia prayed that someone would end her misery now and take her away somewhere safe. Somewhere where people would love her.
All of a sudden a bright light came from the tv. It began to swirl around creating a vortex. Anastasia's mother panicked and ran out of the room, Anastasia however was too weak to move and she soon found herself being sucked into the vortex. Anastasia felt herself hit the ground hard. She wasn't hurt and nothing was broken, but she was still too weak to open her eyes and look around at her surroundings. She simply stayed on her back waiting to die and soon fell into unconsciousness.
What would really happen
Katie McDougall was not your average young woman with an average name. She was 5'4 and had short dirty blond hair, a light tan, and Hazel eyes that couldn't make up what colour they wanted to be. She did not have a lot of friends at her school because she was anti social, hated extra circulars with a passion, and didn't show up at school half the time. Katie spent her nights at home on the Internet looking up random and pointless forms of entertaining like the cartoons at and , or hanging out with her best friend who believed she was a werewolf named Aqua Bolt, except for when Transformers was on because lets face it, Transformers are awesome and Katie had an unnatural infatuation with them. Her favourite character of all time was Starscream.
Just mentioning that name made Katie turn into some odd and slightly irritating fangirl. She was also in complete denial that Starscream was whiny and a coward. She sighed as she paused after watching a Strong Bad e- mail cartoon as she reminisced on her hero. She looked at the Shek 2 watch with a glow in the dark picture of Donkey that she got for a box of cereal and saw that Energon would be on in less than five minutes. She quickly exited from the Home Star Runner homepage and ran up the stairs to take a quick potty break then ran to her room to watch one of her many favourite shows.
Katie sat on the edge of her bed, her eyes glued to the tv as she turned into a zombie and quickly became engulfed with the fascination of bright flashy colours. Just as the beginning song finished and the show went to commercial break, Katie's mom bursted into the room, her face was red and she wore a simple lose fitting, worn out bath robe. "You little bitch!" she screamed as pulled Katie up by her arm, squeezing tightly. "Don't you ever flush the toilet when I'm in the shower again!" As she said this last statement, Katie's mother took her free hand and gripped Katie's jaw bone so that she had to face her mother directly.
Katie began to cry because she was a rather sensitive girl who didn't like seeing her mom mad. She hated when her mom was like this but she knew she would have to come to terms that when older woman reach a certian age, their bodies begin to change again and their hormonal mood swings become more overpowering making the rest of the family miss the good old days of PMS.
Katie prayed as tears of fear and discomfort rolled down her face that she could go away someplace where she would have to deal with annoying preps at school or her emotionally uncontrollable mother or people who don't understand the awesomeness that is Starscream. All of a sudden a bright light came from the television. Katie's mother jumped back in shock and the light began to swirl around creating a vortex. Katie on the other hand was frozen stiff due to the fact that she was petrified. After all, a bright glowing vortex was coming out of her tv. Before she knew it, and before her mom could grab her and pull her to safety, Katie found herself sucked into the tv and hurling down into nothingness.
Katie hit the ground with a loud thump. from what she could sense, there were no broken bones but her butt was in a great deal of pain and she thought she might have sprained her right ankle yet again. Never the less she decided that it would be a good idea if she kept her eyes shut and not peeked at her surroundings just yet, by doing so Katie found that like many other things in her life, travelling though a vortex makes her sleepy and she soon drifted off into slumber.
(A/N) My mom is not going through 'the change' nor is she evil and mean. I love her so very very much, even when she IS acting like a bitch.