Chapter two of the fanfic entitled: The Mary-Sue fic/What would really
happen
A/N- ckret2- that was the most awesomest review I've ever had! I'm nominating you for a humanitarian award!
Shade- you have a beautiful heart and your Haiku moved my soul! Bravo! Bravo!
Secret Key- that t'was neither a full detailed report nor a Haiku. You have bestowed shame upon yourself... shame, shame, shame..... ((jks!))
This is the story part now ....
When Anastasia woke up, she found herself in what looked to be a hospital bed. She sat up to look around her surroundings. There were regular human- sized beds as well as giant operating tables. She looked up to see two giant robots who she quickly recognized to be Red Alert who was repairing Blur.
Anastasia could hardly control her excitement as she squealed her happy little face off. "I see you're feeling better," a cheery voice said from behind her. Anastasia turned around to see a tall, middle aged woman in a doctors suit. She smiled at the young woman. "You were in rough shape, it's a good thing the Autobots found you on their way back here."
Anastasia smiled back at the doctor. "Thank you for helping me, where am I?"
"You're at Ocean City and I am Doctor Renne Marshal, I help out Red Alert and take care of minor injuries and illnesses for the human population here. Dr. Marshal stretched her arm out to greet the young girl.
Anastasia shook the doctors hand and smiled back, "I'm Anastasia... am I really at Ocean city?"
"Yes you are"
"And the Autobots are here?" Anastasia blushed at her last question. "Never mind I kinda forgot about the two autobots over there and this IS ocean city so of course they're here right?"
Dr. Marshal laughed and explained where Anastasia could go to get some close and something to eat. Anastasia thanked the doctor one more time and left just after she waved goodbye to Red Alert and Blur.
Once she was in some new clean clothes, Anastasia decided to explore her new home. She met up with many human scientist and Autobot soldiers. As she turned the corner she saw a boy who seemed to be a few years younger than her. She new right away that it was Kicker because of the space suit. He seemed to be staring at nothing so Anastasia figured he was thinking of something important like Unicron, saving the earth, or his father. She tapped him on the shoulder to get his attention. "Mind if I stare at nothing with you?" Anastasia said as she smiled.
Kicker smiled back, "Sure since there's nothing else to do here. I'm Kicker by the way."
"I'm Anastasia, pleased to meet you." Kicker told Anastasia about how they were on their way back from dessert city when they found her on the ground. When he asked how she got there, Anastasia simply said that all she remembered was that she was sitting in her room watching tv when something knocked her out. They continued to talk about the Autobots, Ocean city, Cybertron, and any other subjects that seemed to be important in this world. It wasn't long until Ironhide came running after Kicker to tell him that Optimus was having a meeting. Kicker said goodbye to Anastasia then left with Ironhide chasing after him again.
Anastasia smiled, she knew she would love this place, and the people here were so nice to her. For the first time in her life, Anastasia felt accepted.
What would really happen
When Katie woke up, apart from having a pile of drool by her cheek and sand in places she would never get out for a while, she found herself in a hospital bed. She sat up to look at her surrounding but the blood rushed to her head and she fell down on the bed again. Katie tried once more although this time, she got up slowly. There were regular human-sized beds as well as giant operating tables. She looked up to see two giant robots who she quickly recognized to be Red Alert who was repairing Blur.
It was a good thing Katie took that potty break before she watched the show, 'cause if she didn't she sure as heck would be pissin' her pants. "OH MY FUCKIN' JUMPIN' ROARY EYE'D JESUS!" Katie bellowed her Newfie curse as her blood pressure went off the charts. Her scream echoed through the room and humans as well as autobots stared at the mortified girl who stared at Red Alert as she let out a softer, more pathetic cry.
Katie screamed again as some one tapped her shoulder. She turned around to see a middle aged woman in a doctors outfite looking at her as if she was some psycho who could kill at any moment, "Don't fucking sneak up on me like that!"
The doctor looked at her eye to eye, though with a good deal of distance between them and spoke in a very calm and slow voice. "You need to relax, no one here is going to hurt you, you're over-reacting, making a rather small situation seem worse..."
Katie almost choked on the curses she was about to spit up at this woman, "Small situation my ass! Where the fuck am I? And why are there giant robots? And why isn't any one else freaked out about them? I'm about to shit my pants!"
The woman starred at Katie, as if she were an alien. How could some one NOT know about the Autobots? She went over to a communication's computer (A/N- those com. thingies where they talk to you via flat screen tv.... DON'T ACT LIKE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!) and paged one of her fellow doctors who was on a break, "Dr. Rochester, we might have a bit of a problem I'm going to need your assistance."
Meanwhile, everyone stared at Katie as she rocked back and forth with her chin resting on her knees and her arms hugging her legs. Never in her life had Katie felt so afraid, confused, and uncomfortable, and she was beginning to have a mental break-down. The female doctor came up to her again, speaking calmly and slowly as usual, "I- am- Dr.- Marshal... You- are- at- Ocean- City. The- Autobots- found- you- and- brought- you- here- to- get- medical- attention.... Do- you- know- who- you- are- or- how- you- knocked- yourself- out?"
Katie who was somewhat hyperventilating as Dr. Mashal explained she was in a fictional robot city with robots, tried to answer the doctor's question in a way that would make more sense in her mind. "I was in my room- and my mom was having another mood swing- and a bright light came from the tv and sucked me in- I hurt my ankle and butt- became groggy and fell asleep- and woke up to see two GIANT FUCKING ROBOTS!" Katie thought long and hard on her situation again until she finally believed she came up with the right answer, "Oh my god I'm dead!"
Dr. Marshal raised her eye brow as well as everyone else excluding the autobots that were in the room because transformers don't have eyebrow... but they still looked puzzled as Katie continued on her theory. "That light must have been something caused by lightning or whatever, the tunnel was me going to the afterlife... and this- has got to be purgatory because I was a good person who didn't do anything wrong but I obviously haven't done enough!" Katie sighed and took in another deep breath. "This wouldn't have happened if I just went to church last Sunday!" Katie began to cry as everyone around her began to think she was two banana's short of a fruit basket.
The doctor felt sorry for the frightened girl, even though her story made no sense, and it was obvious that she was mentally incapable of taking care of herself at the moment. A man, who looked like he was close to retirement walked into the room. Dr. Marshal went up to him. "Dr. Rochester, the girl that came in the other day, I think she must have suffered some kind of head injury, she's highly irrational and unstable. She's going to have to go into confinement until we find out what her problem is."
Dr. Rochester looked at the crying girl and back to his co-worker, "What's the problem?"
"She's never seen or heard of the autobots and she thinks that she's in purgatory. She flipped out when she saw Red Alert and Blur and we haven't been able to calm her down."
Dr. Rochester chuckled, "Well if she's never seen or heard of the autobots before than I don't blame her for flipping out at the sight of them. I don't think she'll need confinement, just give her a sedative and put her in restrains." Dr. Marshal nodded and went to give Katie a hug, keeping her calm and still while Dr. Rochester gave her a needle in the arm full of tranquilizers. Within a few minutes, Katie was back on the hospital bed as happy as a clam as the two doctors tied her up nice and tight. So that when the drugs wore off, they would be able to explain her situation hopefully without any outburst.
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To be continued
A/N- ckret2- that was the most awesomest review I've ever had! I'm nominating you for a humanitarian award!
Shade- you have a beautiful heart and your Haiku moved my soul! Bravo! Bravo!
Secret Key- that t'was neither a full detailed report nor a Haiku. You have bestowed shame upon yourself... shame, shame, shame..... ((jks!))
This is the story part now ....
When Anastasia woke up, she found herself in what looked to be a hospital bed. She sat up to look around her surroundings. There were regular human- sized beds as well as giant operating tables. She looked up to see two giant robots who she quickly recognized to be Red Alert who was repairing Blur.
Anastasia could hardly control her excitement as she squealed her happy little face off. "I see you're feeling better," a cheery voice said from behind her. Anastasia turned around to see a tall, middle aged woman in a doctors suit. She smiled at the young woman. "You were in rough shape, it's a good thing the Autobots found you on their way back here."
Anastasia smiled back at the doctor. "Thank you for helping me, where am I?"
"You're at Ocean City and I am Doctor Renne Marshal, I help out Red Alert and take care of minor injuries and illnesses for the human population here. Dr. Marshal stretched her arm out to greet the young girl.
Anastasia shook the doctors hand and smiled back, "I'm Anastasia... am I really at Ocean city?"
"Yes you are"
"And the Autobots are here?" Anastasia blushed at her last question. "Never mind I kinda forgot about the two autobots over there and this IS ocean city so of course they're here right?"
Dr. Marshal laughed and explained where Anastasia could go to get some close and something to eat. Anastasia thanked the doctor one more time and left just after she waved goodbye to Red Alert and Blur.
Once she was in some new clean clothes, Anastasia decided to explore her new home. She met up with many human scientist and Autobot soldiers. As she turned the corner she saw a boy who seemed to be a few years younger than her. She new right away that it was Kicker because of the space suit. He seemed to be staring at nothing so Anastasia figured he was thinking of something important like Unicron, saving the earth, or his father. She tapped him on the shoulder to get his attention. "Mind if I stare at nothing with you?" Anastasia said as she smiled.
Kicker smiled back, "Sure since there's nothing else to do here. I'm Kicker by the way."
"I'm Anastasia, pleased to meet you." Kicker told Anastasia about how they were on their way back from dessert city when they found her on the ground. When he asked how she got there, Anastasia simply said that all she remembered was that she was sitting in her room watching tv when something knocked her out. They continued to talk about the Autobots, Ocean city, Cybertron, and any other subjects that seemed to be important in this world. It wasn't long until Ironhide came running after Kicker to tell him that Optimus was having a meeting. Kicker said goodbye to Anastasia then left with Ironhide chasing after him again.
Anastasia smiled, she knew she would love this place, and the people here were so nice to her. For the first time in her life, Anastasia felt accepted.
What would really happen
When Katie woke up, apart from having a pile of drool by her cheek and sand in places she would never get out for a while, she found herself in a hospital bed. She sat up to look at her surrounding but the blood rushed to her head and she fell down on the bed again. Katie tried once more although this time, she got up slowly. There were regular human-sized beds as well as giant operating tables. She looked up to see two giant robots who she quickly recognized to be Red Alert who was repairing Blur.
It was a good thing Katie took that potty break before she watched the show, 'cause if she didn't she sure as heck would be pissin' her pants. "OH MY FUCKIN' JUMPIN' ROARY EYE'D JESUS!" Katie bellowed her Newfie curse as her blood pressure went off the charts. Her scream echoed through the room and humans as well as autobots stared at the mortified girl who stared at Red Alert as she let out a softer, more pathetic cry.
Katie screamed again as some one tapped her shoulder. She turned around to see a middle aged woman in a doctors outfite looking at her as if she was some psycho who could kill at any moment, "Don't fucking sneak up on me like that!"
The doctor looked at her eye to eye, though with a good deal of distance between them and spoke in a very calm and slow voice. "You need to relax, no one here is going to hurt you, you're over-reacting, making a rather small situation seem worse..."
Katie almost choked on the curses she was about to spit up at this woman, "Small situation my ass! Where the fuck am I? And why are there giant robots? And why isn't any one else freaked out about them? I'm about to shit my pants!"
The woman starred at Katie, as if she were an alien. How could some one NOT know about the Autobots? She went over to a communication's computer (A/N- those com. thingies where they talk to you via flat screen tv.... DON'T ACT LIKE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!) and paged one of her fellow doctors who was on a break, "Dr. Rochester, we might have a bit of a problem I'm going to need your assistance."
Meanwhile, everyone stared at Katie as she rocked back and forth with her chin resting on her knees and her arms hugging her legs. Never in her life had Katie felt so afraid, confused, and uncomfortable, and she was beginning to have a mental break-down. The female doctor came up to her again, speaking calmly and slowly as usual, "I- am- Dr.- Marshal... You- are- at- Ocean- City. The- Autobots- found- you- and- brought- you- here- to- get- medical- attention.... Do- you- know- who- you- are- or- how- you- knocked- yourself- out?"
Katie who was somewhat hyperventilating as Dr. Mashal explained she was in a fictional robot city with robots, tried to answer the doctor's question in a way that would make more sense in her mind. "I was in my room- and my mom was having another mood swing- and a bright light came from the tv and sucked me in- I hurt my ankle and butt- became groggy and fell asleep- and woke up to see two GIANT FUCKING ROBOTS!" Katie thought long and hard on her situation again until she finally believed she came up with the right answer, "Oh my god I'm dead!"
Dr. Marshal raised her eye brow as well as everyone else excluding the autobots that were in the room because transformers don't have eyebrow... but they still looked puzzled as Katie continued on her theory. "That light must have been something caused by lightning or whatever, the tunnel was me going to the afterlife... and this- has got to be purgatory because I was a good person who didn't do anything wrong but I obviously haven't done enough!" Katie sighed and took in another deep breath. "This wouldn't have happened if I just went to church last Sunday!" Katie began to cry as everyone around her began to think she was two banana's short of a fruit basket.
The doctor felt sorry for the frightened girl, even though her story made no sense, and it was obvious that she was mentally incapable of taking care of herself at the moment. A man, who looked like he was close to retirement walked into the room. Dr. Marshal went up to him. "Dr. Rochester, the girl that came in the other day, I think she must have suffered some kind of head injury, she's highly irrational and unstable. She's going to have to go into confinement until we find out what her problem is."
Dr. Rochester looked at the crying girl and back to his co-worker, "What's the problem?"
"She's never seen or heard of the autobots and she thinks that she's in purgatory. She flipped out when she saw Red Alert and Blur and we haven't been able to calm her down."
Dr. Rochester chuckled, "Well if she's never seen or heard of the autobots before than I don't blame her for flipping out at the sight of them. I don't think she'll need confinement, just give her a sedative and put her in restrains." Dr. Marshal nodded and went to give Katie a hug, keeping her calm and still while Dr. Rochester gave her a needle in the arm full of tranquilizers. Within a few minutes, Katie was back on the hospital bed as happy as a clam as the two doctors tied her up nice and tight. So that when the drugs wore off, they would be able to explain her situation hopefully without any outburst.
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To be continued