A.N. OK!! I'm baack!!! Well, in all fairness, I did say that I'd have
another chappie up if even ONE person reviewed me.despite the fact that
said person was kinda not helpful ( sry Tori, I really did appreciate your
review!) So, Im gonna give it a shot.
THANK YOU!!!! Ok Tori, here is your official thank you! Your very nice to actually review me after only one day! Wow!
SKIP ME IF YOU'RE NOT TORI, OR IF YOU DON'T LIKE READING ADVICE ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A.N. Advice for Tori: Ok, well I thought I should include this also.umm Tori.your review as I mentioned earlier was kinda not helpful and I'll explain why.I've personally written and reviewed many stories/fics in my day and not once have I ever heard of and author appreciating someone trying to change the plot of their stories. And I kinda didn't get the part about Kagome being with Hiei.I think I'm seriously missing something.because I can see the whole Inu/Kikyo thing.but Kagome and Hiei aren't even form the same anime.confused x_x.and about that little suggestion of yours.that's your own personal preference of pairings, not mine.and I kinda said right in the SUMMARY that Kag is in love with Inu, and Inu with Kag.so no, I'm sorry but I can't change that. Also, one last note.there will be some pretty twisted stuff in here.so your comment about "no, not that way you sicko" is going to waste because there will be some of that material in here.
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Chapter Two(Inuyasha's morning)
"BEEP, BEEP BEEP" rang out Inuyasha's alarm clock. "urgh..it can't be time to wake up already." mumbled Inuyasha to himself.
Inuyasha rolled off his mattress onto the floor to look for some suitable clothes to wear. He ended up finding a balled up red shirt that just happened to be skin tight on him, and a pair of extremely baggy black pants with white strips down the sides. Inuyasha pulled on his clothes over his red boxers and stood to hunt for his boots. He found them discarded in a corner and pulled them on and laced them up. Inuyasha had not showered this morning because he has bathed thoroughly last night (for reasons that only he and a certain immature housemate and some pudding that was still stuck to the wall knew.)
However, he did go to the mirror to take a look at himself to make sure there didn't happen to be drool on his face or something. Inuyasha gazed in the mirror with his golden honey eyes deciding weather his silver hair needed to be pulled back or not. His hair was originally black, but on a dare from Kagome he had dyed it pure silver, and Inuyasha had to admit.it did look good that way. Inuyasha finally decided to pull it into a loose ponytail with a spare piece of leather strap. Inuyasha gave himself one more glance in the mirror before deciding he was decent looking and picking up his bag and walking towards the kitchen.
On his way to the kitchen Inuyasha shouted "HEY SHIPPOU, GET YOUR ASS UP"
"Mm-k" came a distant reply form the sleeping teen.
Shippou was a spunky little red-head who was about 13 years old. His big brothers, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, took care of him since their parents had gone missing about 7 years ago. They all lived together in a fairly nice apartment right near the high school (A.SN. still need a school name!!!!!). Sesshoumaru was the oldest at 22 and was out of school and working random jobs; Inuyasha was the middle child at 17 and worked off and on when Sess couldn't find work.
A few moments later Shippou appeared all tousle haired and drowsy. *yawn* "mornin' Yash" said Shippou through a rather large yawn.
"Hey Shippou.I have to get going.have Sess drive you or take the bus, k?" said Inuyasha as he ran out the door, stuffing a bagel into his bag.
"K, bye Yash" called Shippou as he got a bowl out for some cereal.
Inuyasha just barely made the bus even though he ran the entire way to the stop. As he boarded he looked for some good seats.'ahh..theres one right in the back' he thought as he made his way back. Inuyasha sat down and looked out the window. He was just about to sit back and tap a nap when something plopped down right in his lap.
"What the-?!?! Oh, its you Kagome.DON'T DO THAT!!!" he shouted at the girl now sitting in his lap grinning profusely at him. AS he looked at her he was entranced by her eyes..'oh how I would love to fall deep inside those eyes and never come out' thought Inuyasha.
"Well, well, well, I didn't think ANY guy would protest this much to a girl sitting down in HIS lap" teased Kagome.
"Oh...umm.well...I...uh.I didn't mean.um..." Inuyasha stuttered while adverting his stare to his hands.
"Oh Inu, I was only joking.you know I love you to much to be mad." oh how Inuyasha wished that was true. He had been in love with Kagome ever since they went to high school. She was the only person who had ever tried to care for him besides his family.
Kagome continued to sit on Inuyasha's lap for the entire trip, which pleased Inuyasha just fine.
As the bus rolled up to the school, Inuyasha happened to glance out the window and see that Kikyo was standing right outside the bus looking around.' oh shit' thought Inuyasha, 'She's so gonna try and start something with Kagome'.
"Hey, Kagome" said Inuyasha, but Kagome has already gotten half way down the aisle without him noticing. He jogged a bit down the aisle to catch up with her knocking a few people back into their seats. Inuyasha jumped off the bus and put his hand on Kagome's back pushing her forward to avoid Kikyo.
"Um.Inu, what are you doing?" questioned Kagome.
"Kikyo is right behind us.I don't want any trouble with her this early in the morning" replied Inuyasha
Inuyasha glance back to see if she was watching.big mistake.
Kikyo spotted his glance and ran right up to him knocking Kagome to the ground. "Hi Yashy.what's up?" she purred.
"Kikyo!! What the fuck?!?!? Go away!" shouted Inuyasha as he rushed over to help Kagome. 'Oh shit, I hope Kagome's not hurt or anything.damn me for looking back' thought Inuyasha. "Are you ok Kagome? You didn't get hurt or anything did you?" asked Inuyasha quickly.
"No, no, I'm fine.hey, are my pants full of dirt of anything?" Kagome asked sticking out her ass so that Inuyasha could see it better.
Inuyasha nearly drooled while investigating that damn fine ass of hers. "Uhh..No, no not at all" Inuyasha finally got out.
"Good" said Kagome. "Let's go"
'Man, I love how she commands me like that when she fights with Kikyo.its so hot' thought Inuyasha.
And with that Inuyasha and Kagome walked into school leaving Kikyo standing there on the sidewalk scanning around for someone else to bug.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Ok, well there's chappie two.ok, ok, I know its really short, but please give me a break.I 'm sick of typing again because of my god damn homework, so the deal is still on.if ANYBODY reviews me within the next 24 hours.I'll have another chappie up along with a thank you for that specific person tomorrow!! So hurry and R&R!!!!!! Please. Please. Please!!!
^-^ cheers.
THANK YOU!!!! Ok Tori, here is your official thank you! Your very nice to actually review me after only one day! Wow!
SKIP ME IF YOU'RE NOT TORI, OR IF YOU DON'T LIKE READING ADVICE ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A.N. Advice for Tori: Ok, well I thought I should include this also.umm Tori.your review as I mentioned earlier was kinda not helpful and I'll explain why.I've personally written and reviewed many stories/fics in my day and not once have I ever heard of and author appreciating someone trying to change the plot of their stories. And I kinda didn't get the part about Kagome being with Hiei.I think I'm seriously missing something.because I can see the whole Inu/Kikyo thing.but Kagome and Hiei aren't even form the same anime.confused x_x.and about that little suggestion of yours.that's your own personal preference of pairings, not mine.and I kinda said right in the SUMMARY that Kag is in love with Inu, and Inu with Kag.so no, I'm sorry but I can't change that. Also, one last note.there will be some pretty twisted stuff in here.so your comment about "no, not that way you sicko" is going to waste because there will be some of that material in here.
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Chapter Two(Inuyasha's morning)
"BEEP, BEEP BEEP" rang out Inuyasha's alarm clock. "urgh..it can't be time to wake up already." mumbled Inuyasha to himself.
Inuyasha rolled off his mattress onto the floor to look for some suitable clothes to wear. He ended up finding a balled up red shirt that just happened to be skin tight on him, and a pair of extremely baggy black pants with white strips down the sides. Inuyasha pulled on his clothes over his red boxers and stood to hunt for his boots. He found them discarded in a corner and pulled them on and laced them up. Inuyasha had not showered this morning because he has bathed thoroughly last night (for reasons that only he and a certain immature housemate and some pudding that was still stuck to the wall knew.)
However, he did go to the mirror to take a look at himself to make sure there didn't happen to be drool on his face or something. Inuyasha gazed in the mirror with his golden honey eyes deciding weather his silver hair needed to be pulled back or not. His hair was originally black, but on a dare from Kagome he had dyed it pure silver, and Inuyasha had to admit.it did look good that way. Inuyasha finally decided to pull it into a loose ponytail with a spare piece of leather strap. Inuyasha gave himself one more glance in the mirror before deciding he was decent looking and picking up his bag and walking towards the kitchen.
On his way to the kitchen Inuyasha shouted "HEY SHIPPOU, GET YOUR ASS UP"
"Mm-k" came a distant reply form the sleeping teen.
Shippou was a spunky little red-head who was about 13 years old. His big brothers, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, took care of him since their parents had gone missing about 7 years ago. They all lived together in a fairly nice apartment right near the high school (A.SN. still need a school name!!!!!). Sesshoumaru was the oldest at 22 and was out of school and working random jobs; Inuyasha was the middle child at 17 and worked off and on when Sess couldn't find work.
A few moments later Shippou appeared all tousle haired and drowsy. *yawn* "mornin' Yash" said Shippou through a rather large yawn.
"Hey Shippou.I have to get going.have Sess drive you or take the bus, k?" said Inuyasha as he ran out the door, stuffing a bagel into his bag.
"K, bye Yash" called Shippou as he got a bowl out for some cereal.
Inuyasha just barely made the bus even though he ran the entire way to the stop. As he boarded he looked for some good seats.'ahh..theres one right in the back' he thought as he made his way back. Inuyasha sat down and looked out the window. He was just about to sit back and tap a nap when something plopped down right in his lap.
"What the-?!?! Oh, its you Kagome.DON'T DO THAT!!!" he shouted at the girl now sitting in his lap grinning profusely at him. AS he looked at her he was entranced by her eyes..'oh how I would love to fall deep inside those eyes and never come out' thought Inuyasha.
"Well, well, well, I didn't think ANY guy would protest this much to a girl sitting down in HIS lap" teased Kagome.
"Oh...umm.well...I...uh.I didn't mean.um..." Inuyasha stuttered while adverting his stare to his hands.
"Oh Inu, I was only joking.you know I love you to much to be mad." oh how Inuyasha wished that was true. He had been in love with Kagome ever since they went to high school. She was the only person who had ever tried to care for him besides his family.
Kagome continued to sit on Inuyasha's lap for the entire trip, which pleased Inuyasha just fine.
As the bus rolled up to the school, Inuyasha happened to glance out the window and see that Kikyo was standing right outside the bus looking around.' oh shit' thought Inuyasha, 'She's so gonna try and start something with Kagome'.
"Hey, Kagome" said Inuyasha, but Kagome has already gotten half way down the aisle without him noticing. He jogged a bit down the aisle to catch up with her knocking a few people back into their seats. Inuyasha jumped off the bus and put his hand on Kagome's back pushing her forward to avoid Kikyo.
"Um.Inu, what are you doing?" questioned Kagome.
"Kikyo is right behind us.I don't want any trouble with her this early in the morning" replied Inuyasha
Inuyasha glance back to see if she was watching.big mistake.
Kikyo spotted his glance and ran right up to him knocking Kagome to the ground. "Hi Yashy.what's up?" she purred.
"Kikyo!! What the fuck?!?!? Go away!" shouted Inuyasha as he rushed over to help Kagome. 'Oh shit, I hope Kagome's not hurt or anything.damn me for looking back' thought Inuyasha. "Are you ok Kagome? You didn't get hurt or anything did you?" asked Inuyasha quickly.
"No, no, I'm fine.hey, are my pants full of dirt of anything?" Kagome asked sticking out her ass so that Inuyasha could see it better.
Inuyasha nearly drooled while investigating that damn fine ass of hers. "Uhh..No, no not at all" Inuyasha finally got out.
"Good" said Kagome. "Let's go"
'Man, I love how she commands me like that when she fights with Kikyo.its so hot' thought Inuyasha.
And with that Inuyasha and Kagome walked into school leaving Kikyo standing there on the sidewalk scanning around for someone else to bug.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Ok, well there's chappie two.ok, ok, I know its really short, but please give me a break.I 'm sick of typing again because of my god damn homework, so the deal is still on.if ANYBODY reviews me within the next 24 hours.I'll have another chappie up along with a thank you for that specific person tomorrow!! So hurry and R&R!!!!!! Please. Please. Please!!!
^-^ cheers.