Okay! This is the fixed version of chapter one! I'm sorry that I hadn't detected them myself! - *mentally kicks self* GOMEN!! ;-;
I would have had all the "theirs" right if it hadn't been 3am when I typed it… but if I hadn't typed it then, then I would have never gotten this story typed and posted! ^^;
Well here's the edited version!
And for those of you just reading this….
Enjoy the story! ^-^
First off I'd like to say: This fanfic is gladly dedicated to my best bud Kyu!
Kyu: ;-; this story is for me?
Spirit: Yes Kyu, I made it just for you! ^-^
Kyu: …ARIGATO!! *cries uncontrollably*
Spirit: ^-^; no problem!
Okay! Here is my First Naruto fanfic! ^__^ well.. Wait…. No second… ^^X But anyways, this isn't a one shot so…. Yeah!
Review if ya wish, questions, comments, flames, they are all excepted. ^^ I just hope this story is good. I actually got this idea when waiting for my mom to pick me up from tutoring. -.- it was very cold out.. And now I have a cold… But I got this idea.. So I guess that's okay!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto… hehheh but I know someone who soon will. *glances over at kyu* XD
SUMMARY: Naruto bumped into Sasuke and accidentally kissed him, again. Sasuke now avoiding him, Naruto feels a bit lonely… What happens when he makes a special Replication of himself, and the replication ends up falling in love with him? How will everyone react? ( NaruNaru SasuNaru)
I wouldn't mind just a few reviews, at least to tell me to continue with this story if you like it…
Well now that, that is said, time to get on with my first chapter!
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Warnings: Shonen-ai Hints ^.~ (for now)
Pairings: NaruNaru, SasuNaru…. Maybe more…
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Chapter 1
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It was a warm day and the sun warmed the earth below, the rays falling upon the hidden leaf village, Konoha.
The sun shined brightly in the cloud free sky. The warm rays shown through the open windows of the classes of the young students who studied their ninja techniques, hoping one day that they will reach their dream to become a well known Jounin Ninja.
Outside of the ninja school, bared other students who had graduated from their former school and were consider Ninja's, but were still in training from their Sensei's…
Group seven, of the Konoha's genins, had just gotten back from a rough mission. They laid back in the shade, their Sensei leaving them to rest. The raven haired boy leaned himself up against a tree, shading himself from the suns rays.
The cotton candy pink haired girl fanned herself as she laid back on the soft green grass. The two rested, while the third member, the stubborn blonde was still filled with energy and was practicing some techniques hoping that he would become stronger than the arrogant raven haired boy, Sasuke.
The spiky blonde haired boy glanced over his shoulder too see if Sasuke was looking his way, watching him practice. He wanted to show his group, mostly Sasuke, that he didn't need anyone's help, that he could protect himself.
He glanced back once more, checking to see if Sasuke had his sights on the blonde. But seeing that they were preoccupied by something else that was distracting the raven haired boy, Naruto sighed and decided that it had been enough training for the day. A tiring mission, then a few hours of training, made Naruto grow very hungry.
He looked over at his other group members, his stomach starting to growl. Pink flushed over his face, when he felt a pair of eyes on his back. He turned to fully towards them and gave them a weak smile and a small chuckle.
"Hungry, Naruto?" Sakura asked, sarcastically. Naruto nodded, with a grin, and rubbed the back of his head, tangling his fingers in his spiky blonde hair.
"Naruto." Sasuke spoke, his voice piercing through Naruto's ear, making him shiver. Sasuke said his name so differently than anyone else had, or at least it seemed that way to him. His name rolled off Sasuke's tongue like silk on skin. The blonde turned his sights towards the boy.
"What is it?" Naruto asked curiously. It was very rare for the self-important boy to ever talk to Naruto.
"You should go eat, we don't want you to be hungry if another mission comes up soon." He said, avoiding eye contact with the blonde.
"…WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?!" Naruto yelled, his eyes narrowing towards Sasuke.
"It means, that you should get something to eat or you might loose your strength during a battle, and we don't want that now do we?" He said turning his gaze towards Naruto.
'He's worried about me?' Naruto thought, his eyes slightly wide. "…I guess…" Naruto agreed and turned to leave.
"Don't take everything so literally, dobe." Sasuke muttered to the blonde's back. Naruto clenched his fist when he heard Sakura's voice.
"Sasuke-kun, how about we go get something to eat ourselves?" She asked excitedly, she always was trying to find a way to get the 'Boy Wonder', Sasuke, to go out with her.. Every girl tried to win the raven haired boy's affection, but none was able to yet…
There was a pause, and Naruto's ears perked up, waiting for Sasuke's reply, though he already knew what it was going to be.
"No." Sasuke said simply and got up from his spot. That being spoken Sakura heaved a sigh, and watched Sasuke disappear into the trees. Naruto left for the ramen shop.
'Sasuke, he's different from everyone else… he's like me in some ways…' Naruto thought as he walked down the dirt path, the trees blocking the sun from his face, except for a few rays of sun that beamed down upon the boy, showing off his golden hair, and tanned skin.
He kicked a small pebble as he walked, bored to death, his stomach started to grumble again, telling Naruto that he needed some food in his empty stomach. Naruto patted his belly and mentally told himself that the ramen shop was only a few minutes away.
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A pair of coal black eyes followed Naruto as he walked along the dusty path. Following the unsuspecting blonde. A smile spread across their lips.
"Heh, ramen again, Naruto?" The voice spoke softly. The person hide them self in the trees, making sure they weren't noticed by the naïve blonde. They watched Naruto walk, with his arms folded behind him, his head staring up at the blue sky, and his feet shuffling the dirt road with his feet, causing a dust trail behind him. The fluffy blond, spiked up hair waved gently in the blowing wind.
'Naruto…" They spoke the blonde's name with lust in their voice.
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Well people, I decided to end the chapter there ^-^ Just because I love… well I donno would you call that a cliff hanger? Hmm… Oh'zy wells
Now everyone thank Kyu for being my beta once again! Perfection always helps the story! ^-^
I hope some readers tell me that they like this story in a review, and tell me to continue, cause… ya well you get my point! ^-^
Kyu: w00t! Review or my wrath shall smite thee!!
~~Sorry for having not seen those mistakes sooner!~~
{Kyu's Apology}
Kyu: OMG!! Gomen nasai!! *cries* I kick myself for missing those mistakes _ (though the day I corrected this may have been the same day where I'd only gotten 2 hours of sleep =___= Or I might just be stupid. Lets got with the latter, ok? ^^;;) Once again, I apologize to Spirit and the fic fans! *walks away grumbling something about questionable beta-ing skills*
I would have had all the "theirs" right if it hadn't been 3am when I typed it… but if I hadn't typed it then, then I would have never gotten this story typed and posted! ^^;
Well here's the edited version!
And for those of you just reading this….
Enjoy the story! ^-^
First off I'd like to say: This fanfic is gladly dedicated to my best bud Kyu!
Kyu: ;-; this story is for me?
Spirit: Yes Kyu, I made it just for you! ^-^
Kyu: …ARIGATO!! *cries uncontrollably*
Spirit: ^-^; no problem!
Okay! Here is my First Naruto fanfic! ^__^ well.. Wait…. No second… ^^X But anyways, this isn't a one shot so…. Yeah!
Review if ya wish, questions, comments, flames, they are all excepted. ^^ I just hope this story is good. I actually got this idea when waiting for my mom to pick me up from tutoring. -.- it was very cold out.. And now I have a cold… But I got this idea.. So I guess that's okay!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto… hehheh but I know someone who soon will. *glances over at kyu* XD
SUMMARY: Naruto bumped into Sasuke and accidentally kissed him, again. Sasuke now avoiding him, Naruto feels a bit lonely… What happens when he makes a special Replication of himself, and the replication ends up falling in love with him? How will everyone react? ( NaruNaru SasuNaru)
I wouldn't mind just a few reviews, at least to tell me to continue with this story if you like it…
Well now that, that is said, time to get on with my first chapter!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Warnings: Shonen-ai Hints ^.~ (for now)
Pairings: NaruNaru, SasuNaru…. Maybe more…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Chapter 1
***************
It was a warm day and the sun warmed the earth below, the rays falling upon the hidden leaf village, Konoha.
The sun shined brightly in the cloud free sky. The warm rays shown through the open windows of the classes of the young students who studied their ninja techniques, hoping one day that they will reach their dream to become a well known Jounin Ninja.
Outside of the ninja school, bared other students who had graduated from their former school and were consider Ninja's, but were still in training from their Sensei's…
Group seven, of the Konoha's genins, had just gotten back from a rough mission. They laid back in the shade, their Sensei leaving them to rest. The raven haired boy leaned himself up against a tree, shading himself from the suns rays.
The cotton candy pink haired girl fanned herself as she laid back on the soft green grass. The two rested, while the third member, the stubborn blonde was still filled with energy and was practicing some techniques hoping that he would become stronger than the arrogant raven haired boy, Sasuke.
The spiky blonde haired boy glanced over his shoulder too see if Sasuke was looking his way, watching him practice. He wanted to show his group, mostly Sasuke, that he didn't need anyone's help, that he could protect himself.
He glanced back once more, checking to see if Sasuke had his sights on the blonde. But seeing that they were preoccupied by something else that was distracting the raven haired boy, Naruto sighed and decided that it had been enough training for the day. A tiring mission, then a few hours of training, made Naruto grow very hungry.
He looked over at his other group members, his stomach starting to growl. Pink flushed over his face, when he felt a pair of eyes on his back. He turned to fully towards them and gave them a weak smile and a small chuckle.
"Hungry, Naruto?" Sakura asked, sarcastically. Naruto nodded, with a grin, and rubbed the back of his head, tangling his fingers in his spiky blonde hair.
"Naruto." Sasuke spoke, his voice piercing through Naruto's ear, making him shiver. Sasuke said his name so differently than anyone else had, or at least it seemed that way to him. His name rolled off Sasuke's tongue like silk on skin. The blonde turned his sights towards the boy.
"What is it?" Naruto asked curiously. It was very rare for the self-important boy to ever talk to Naruto.
"You should go eat, we don't want you to be hungry if another mission comes up soon." He said, avoiding eye contact with the blonde.
"…WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?!" Naruto yelled, his eyes narrowing towards Sasuke.
"It means, that you should get something to eat or you might loose your strength during a battle, and we don't want that now do we?" He said turning his gaze towards Naruto.
'He's worried about me?' Naruto thought, his eyes slightly wide. "…I guess…" Naruto agreed and turned to leave.
"Don't take everything so literally, dobe." Sasuke muttered to the blonde's back. Naruto clenched his fist when he heard Sakura's voice.
"Sasuke-kun, how about we go get something to eat ourselves?" She asked excitedly, she always was trying to find a way to get the 'Boy Wonder', Sasuke, to go out with her.. Every girl tried to win the raven haired boy's affection, but none was able to yet…
There was a pause, and Naruto's ears perked up, waiting for Sasuke's reply, though he already knew what it was going to be.
"No." Sasuke said simply and got up from his spot. That being spoken Sakura heaved a sigh, and watched Sasuke disappear into the trees. Naruto left for the ramen shop.
'Sasuke, he's different from everyone else… he's like me in some ways…' Naruto thought as he walked down the dirt path, the trees blocking the sun from his face, except for a few rays of sun that beamed down upon the boy, showing off his golden hair, and tanned skin.
He kicked a small pebble as he walked, bored to death, his stomach started to grumble again, telling Naruto that he needed some food in his empty stomach. Naruto patted his belly and mentally told himself that the ramen shop was only a few minutes away.
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A pair of coal black eyes followed Naruto as he walked along the dusty path. Following the unsuspecting blonde. A smile spread across their lips.
"Heh, ramen again, Naruto?" The voice spoke softly. The person hide them self in the trees, making sure they weren't noticed by the naïve blonde. They watched Naruto walk, with his arms folded behind him, his head staring up at the blue sky, and his feet shuffling the dirt road with his feet, causing a dust trail behind him. The fluffy blond, spiked up hair waved gently in the blowing wind.
'Naruto…" They spoke the blonde's name with lust in their voice.
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Well people, I decided to end the chapter there ^-^ Just because I love… well I donno would you call that a cliff hanger? Hmm… Oh'zy wells
Now everyone thank Kyu for being my beta once again! Perfection always helps the story! ^-^
I hope some readers tell me that they like this story in a review, and tell me to continue, cause… ya well you get my point! ^-^
Kyu: w00t! Review or my wrath shall smite thee!!
~~Sorry for having not seen those mistakes sooner!~~
{Kyu's Apology}
Kyu: OMG!! Gomen nasai!! *cries* I kick myself for missing those mistakes _ (though the day I corrected this may have been the same day where I'd only gotten 2 hours of sleep =___= Or I might just be stupid. Lets got with the latter, ok? ^^;;) Once again, I apologize to Spirit and the fic fans! *walks away grumbling something about questionable beta-ing skills*