Sorry for not updating in so long! I've been really lazy lately. Well, I just hope I can get a lot of reviews since I'm only going to put up one more chapter after this, then the stories done. So PLEASE review! Also, I decided to try a new writing style. Makes it a little easier to read, and it looks more professional.
Chapter 5- It's Done!
"Ughh! How do you do it again?" Nami asked Ruby, frutrated. Ruby's been teaching her how to cook. Nami found out Jack liked home cooked meals, so she decided to give it a try. He's always giving her something, so she wants to repay him.
"Add a little more sugur," Ruby instructed, handing her a jar of sugar. She nodded
-ABOUT 10 MINUTES LATER-
"Aha! I'm done!" Nami exclaimed happily, pulling her cookies out of the oven. She then looked at them a little discontented. "Umm.. do these look right?" she asked, showing them to Ruby. Ruby smiled happily.
"They look perfect. Oh, I'm so proud of you!" she says, hugging her. Nami looked a little uncomfortable.
"Uh, I just baked some cookies,"
"I know! but I've neer seen you cook a meal before!" She laughed and then put the cookies on a plate and wrapped them up. Then she headed out the door, looking for Jack to give him the cookies.
=KNOCK KNOCK=
"The potion is finally done! You would never believe how I made it. First I..."
"Shut up, geek. I didn't come here to chat. Just give me the potion," she said, holding out her hand impatiently. He glared at her.
"So much thanks I get for making some guy like you that you can't get yourself," he said, annoyed, and handed her the potion.
"SHUT UP!" she yelled at him. He jumped at her outburst.
"Now, where's my money?" he asked, now holding out HIS hand. She snorted then handed him a wad of money. Then she left. He stared at the money.
"Jeeze.... what some people would do for love these days," he said, going off to do whatever it is he does.
"Welcome, Jack! What would you like today?" Muffy asked, trying to hide her happiness, which she didn't do very well of. He looked around.
"Uh... where's Griffin?"
"He decided to take today off," she said. He was actually in Mineral Town visiting his 'sick aunt'. Muffy gave him a fake note saying that he had a sick aunt in Mineral Town and he should come immediaetly.
"Ummm... ok. I'd like a Red Punch," Muff giggled.
"Coming right up!" 'Jeeze, she's up to something she isn't usually that happy.' She turned around and poured him a Red Punch, secretcly slipping in some of the potion Daryl gave her.
"Here ya go!" she said, placing it in front of him. She sat down in front of him and watched him closely. He uncomfortably stirred the drink, looking up, noticing Muffy had her eyes at nothing but him.
"Uhhh.... Muffy, why are you starring at me?" She jumped a little in shock.
"Uhhh...." she thought for a reason. "You just look so cute when you drink," He raised an eyebrow at her.
"Whatever," he muttered, then drank his drink. Muffy's eyes widened, waiting to see the result. Jack looked up at Muffy. his eyes were blank for a moment, then they went back to normal. He grabbed her hands.
"Muffy... did I ever tell you that your the most gorgeous girl I've ever seen in my life?" Muffy squeeled happily. 'It worked!' She gave him puppy eyes.
"Why, no you didn't, honey. Now, tell me... who is it you love?" Jack's eyes got big.
"Why you of course! How could I love any other?" 'Haha..... what now, Nami?' she thought then laughed evilly.
OK, that's the end of chapter 5. It was short, but the next chapter is the end. Well, please review.
Chapter 5- It's Done!
"Ughh! How do you do it again?" Nami asked Ruby, frutrated. Ruby's been teaching her how to cook. Nami found out Jack liked home cooked meals, so she decided to give it a try. He's always giving her something, so she wants to repay him.
"Add a little more sugur," Ruby instructed, handing her a jar of sugar. She nodded
-ABOUT 10 MINUTES LATER-
"Aha! I'm done!" Nami exclaimed happily, pulling her cookies out of the oven. She then looked at them a little discontented. "Umm.. do these look right?" she asked, showing them to Ruby. Ruby smiled happily.
"They look perfect. Oh, I'm so proud of you!" she says, hugging her. Nami looked a little uncomfortable.
"Uh, I just baked some cookies,"
"I know! but I've neer seen you cook a meal before!" She laughed and then put the cookies on a plate and wrapped them up. Then she headed out the door, looking for Jack to give him the cookies.
=KNOCK KNOCK=
"The potion is finally done! You would never believe how I made it. First I..."
"Shut up, geek. I didn't come here to chat. Just give me the potion," she said, holding out her hand impatiently. He glared at her.
"So much thanks I get for making some guy like you that you can't get yourself," he said, annoyed, and handed her the potion.
"SHUT UP!" she yelled at him. He jumped at her outburst.
"Now, where's my money?" he asked, now holding out HIS hand. She snorted then handed him a wad of money. Then she left. He stared at the money.
"Jeeze.... what some people would do for love these days," he said, going off to do whatever it is he does.
"Welcome, Jack! What would you like today?" Muffy asked, trying to hide her happiness, which she didn't do very well of. He looked around.
"Uh... where's Griffin?"
"He decided to take today off," she said. He was actually in Mineral Town visiting his 'sick aunt'. Muffy gave him a fake note saying that he had a sick aunt in Mineral Town and he should come immediaetly.
"Ummm... ok. I'd like a Red Punch," Muff giggled.
"Coming right up!" 'Jeeze, she's up to something she isn't usually that happy.' She turned around and poured him a Red Punch, secretcly slipping in some of the potion Daryl gave her.
"Here ya go!" she said, placing it in front of him. She sat down in front of him and watched him closely. He uncomfortably stirred the drink, looking up, noticing Muffy had her eyes at nothing but him.
"Uhhh.... Muffy, why are you starring at me?" She jumped a little in shock.
"Uhhh...." she thought for a reason. "You just look so cute when you drink," He raised an eyebrow at her.
"Whatever," he muttered, then drank his drink. Muffy's eyes widened, waiting to see the result. Jack looked up at Muffy. his eyes were blank for a moment, then they went back to normal. He grabbed her hands.
"Muffy... did I ever tell you that your the most gorgeous girl I've ever seen in my life?" Muffy squeeled happily. 'It worked!' She gave him puppy eyes.
"Why, no you didn't, honey. Now, tell me... who is it you love?" Jack's eyes got big.
"Why you of course! How could I love any other?" 'Haha..... what now, Nami?' she thought then laughed evilly.
OK, that's the end of chapter 5. It was short, but the next chapter is the end. Well, please review.