WP: Hi, guys, I know it hasn't been that long, but I wanted to update so much, and I got alot of reviews!
Kuronue: Great, she got reviews.
WP: Oh, shut up you sourpuss.
Kuronue: You shut up you damn she-wolf!
WP: Oh, now you've done it! (takes out spear and gestures Kuronue towards her) C'mon big boy!
Kuronue: (takes out scythes) Alright, here I come! (flys)
WP: Holy crap... (moves out of the way and lets Kuronue hit face first on the ground)
Kuronue: (muffled) YOu win...
WP: Not just yet. (ties Kuronue up and puts him over boiling oil) I hope that rope lasts for the whole fic.
Kuronue: You HOPE?!
WP: Yeah, oh well, start the fic.
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"Welcome to the Makai!" Botan said bubbly. "Hurry on in, it won't stay open very long. I'll come in with you since I'm the one who's carrying the portal." Everyone didn't care if Botan came, but Koenma popped up out of nowhere. "Well, are you going in or what?" He asked. "GAGH! WHEN DID YOU GET HERE?!" Yusuke yelled out. "When did you get even stupider?"
"Oh, that's mean Koenma," Keiko said. "KEIKO?! Oh, no, you are not coming with us," Yusuke said angrily. "Oh yes I am. Or do you want me to tell everyone---?" She whispered something into Yusuke's ear making him stiffen up. "Okay, Koenma, we should really let her come!" Yusuke said suddenly. "Well, as long as she doesn't get eaten," Koenma shrugged.
They all stepped into the portal and looked around. "Nice place to grow up," Yusuke said with a disguested look. "Yeah, it was a great place to grow up," Youko said seeming to come up out of nowhere. "Okay, when did YOU get here?" Kuwabara asked jumpily. "When Suichii stepped through the portal, I took over," he explained.
"Alright, well, where do we look fox boy?" Yusuke asked (A/N: Why does he have to call him that? Oh well, he is a fox!) "My father was a thief too, but he gave that up to raise me. My mother usually stayed in the den. Except for fights like that one. So, my mother might be in the den, and my father might be in the nearest town theiving," Youko said taking a big breath of the Makai air.
"You miss the smell, Youko?" Hiei said with his usual stare. "Yes, it's been so long," Youko sais with a hidden smile. "Well, come on, let's go find your mom first," Kieko and Botan said inuson. "Heh, alright, let's go," Youko said giving into the two girls.
"But, where is she?" Kuwabara asked, he hadn't listened to what Youko had just said. "He just said that his ma' was probably in the den, you nimrod!" Yusuke yelled. "Well I didn't hear him!" Kuwabara yelled back. "THAT'S BECAUSE YOU DON'T LISTEN!" Yusuke argued.
"Ladies, please," Koenma knocked them both aside and walked to the lage of the cliff they were standing on. "Well? Let's be on our way then," Botan suggested in her usual perkiness. "Yes, let's get going! The sooner we start the sooner this will be over with!" Botan exclaimed.
The all jumped down the side of the cliff. (a/n it was slanted. don't worry, Youko's pretty face wasn't hurt)
Youko started walking around the open field and started toward a forest. "Why is Youko going near a forest?" Yusuke whispered to Koenma. "Well, I've heard that some foxes dens are in the trunks of trees," Koenma explianed.
Youko started a run until he got to the edge of the forest. He stared up at it, remembering everything he used to do in the forest when he was a child. "Well? Are we going in?" Botan asked with her usual smile. "Yes," is all he said back to her. Youko slid under a little opening where some animal may have gone in the same way a while before. It was haird for everyone without long pants to keep from getting thorn pricks.
Youko started looking under hollow places under trees. Finally, he came to the one he knew as the one he grew up in. Youko looked inside, then he slipped under the trunk. He saw a silver haired woman who was in front of a picture of him when he was a child. "Mother...?"
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Kuronue: WP? What are you doing? You just made an evil cliffy.
WP: Kuronue, you know, it's REALLY hard to draw a moving target....
Kuronue: Fine, but you've been doing this through-out the WHOLE fic, aren't you done yet?
WP: Don't rush an artist... I just have to do the wing and I'm .... DONE! holds up REALLY good Kuron-kun piccy Okay, now, where was I? Oh, yes. YES, I MADE AN EVIL CLIFFY OF DOOM!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! No more chappies if no one reviews. By the way, I let Kuronue down at the middle ofthe chappy becuse the ropes were braking. Ja Ne!
Kuronue: Great, she got reviews.
WP: Oh, shut up you sourpuss.
Kuronue: You shut up you damn she-wolf!
WP: Oh, now you've done it! (takes out spear and gestures Kuronue towards her) C'mon big boy!
Kuronue: (takes out scythes) Alright, here I come! (flys)
WP: Holy crap... (moves out of the way and lets Kuronue hit face first on the ground)
Kuronue: (muffled) YOu win...
WP: Not just yet. (ties Kuronue up and puts him over boiling oil) I hope that rope lasts for the whole fic.
Kuronue: You HOPE?!
WP: Yeah, oh well, start the fic.
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"Welcome to the Makai!" Botan said bubbly. "Hurry on in, it won't stay open very long. I'll come in with you since I'm the one who's carrying the portal." Everyone didn't care if Botan came, but Koenma popped up out of nowhere. "Well, are you going in or what?" He asked. "GAGH! WHEN DID YOU GET HERE?!" Yusuke yelled out. "When did you get even stupider?"
"Oh, that's mean Koenma," Keiko said. "KEIKO?! Oh, no, you are not coming with us," Yusuke said angrily. "Oh yes I am. Or do you want me to tell everyone---?" She whispered something into Yusuke's ear making him stiffen up. "Okay, Koenma, we should really let her come!" Yusuke said suddenly. "Well, as long as she doesn't get eaten," Koenma shrugged.
They all stepped into the portal and looked around. "Nice place to grow up," Yusuke said with a disguested look. "Yeah, it was a great place to grow up," Youko said seeming to come up out of nowhere. "Okay, when did YOU get here?" Kuwabara asked jumpily. "When Suichii stepped through the portal, I took over," he explained.
"Alright, well, where do we look fox boy?" Yusuke asked (A/N: Why does he have to call him that? Oh well, he is a fox!) "My father was a thief too, but he gave that up to raise me. My mother usually stayed in the den. Except for fights like that one. So, my mother might be in the den, and my father might be in the nearest town theiving," Youko said taking a big breath of the Makai air.
"You miss the smell, Youko?" Hiei said with his usual stare. "Yes, it's been so long," Youko sais with a hidden smile. "Well, come on, let's go find your mom first," Kieko and Botan said inuson. "Heh, alright, let's go," Youko said giving into the two girls.
"But, where is she?" Kuwabara asked, he hadn't listened to what Youko had just said. "He just said that his ma' was probably in the den, you nimrod!" Yusuke yelled. "Well I didn't hear him!" Kuwabara yelled back. "THAT'S BECAUSE YOU DON'T LISTEN!" Yusuke argued.
"Ladies, please," Koenma knocked them both aside and walked to the lage of the cliff they were standing on. "Well? Let's be on our way then," Botan suggested in her usual perkiness. "Yes, let's get going! The sooner we start the sooner this will be over with!" Botan exclaimed.
The all jumped down the side of the cliff. (a/n it was slanted. don't worry, Youko's pretty face wasn't hurt)
Youko started walking around the open field and started toward a forest. "Why is Youko going near a forest?" Yusuke whispered to Koenma. "Well, I've heard that some foxes dens are in the trunks of trees," Koenma explianed.
Youko started a run until he got to the edge of the forest. He stared up at it, remembering everything he used to do in the forest when he was a child. "Well? Are we going in?" Botan asked with her usual smile. "Yes," is all he said back to her. Youko slid under a little opening where some animal may have gone in the same way a while before. It was haird for everyone without long pants to keep from getting thorn pricks.
Youko started looking under hollow places under trees. Finally, he came to the one he knew as the one he grew up in. Youko looked inside, then he slipped under the trunk. He saw a silver haired woman who was in front of a picture of him when he was a child. "Mother...?"
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Kuronue: WP? What are you doing? You just made an evil cliffy.
WP: Kuronue, you know, it's REALLY hard to draw a moving target....
Kuronue: Fine, but you've been doing this through-out the WHOLE fic, aren't you done yet?
WP: Don't rush an artist... I just have to do the wing and I'm .... DONE! holds up REALLY good Kuron-kun piccy Okay, now, where was I? Oh, yes. YES, I MADE AN EVIL CLIFFY OF DOOM!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! No more chappies if no one reviews. By the way, I let Kuronue down at the middle ofthe chappy becuse the ropes were braking. Ja Ne!