Thanks to all you wonderful people who were kind enough to review! Thanks so much to:
Mai-Valentine
Chibi Playing with fire
remix-69er
Taka of Eygypt
Midnight Youkai
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and for today I would like to pick a random reviewer, and reply to their review. The reviewer is.... remix-69er!
remix-69er wrote:
uh oh..is Inuyasha going to find out please updaet like very fast
-much love
I wrote: Well why would I tell you the story? Just kidding. Read the chapter, and you'll see.
Something is wrong with Kagome. I can feel it. Her beautiful eyes, that sparkle like stars in the night sky, are dead. The seem haunted. Her hair lies limp, and she doesn't care! When she is spoken to, she answers as little as possible.
She is pale. Oh, so pale. And every time she goes to bathe, every day, she comes back smelling like blood. She insists there is nothing wrong, but I know better. What is she doing that is so dangerous? What is she doing that is so....
I am missing something here. There is something that I cant see, something of vital importance. This should be obvious! I can feel it! Why cant I see it? Kagome is coming back.
Kagome walked slowly back into the hut. She was as depressed as ever. Lately she hadn't even wanted to sit him much. And when she didn't want to sit him, the commands were so weak, he barely noticed.
Inuyasha decided to go for a bath as well. He walked slowly to the springs, sniffing. He didn't want to be caught by a stray demon. He didn't smell any demons. But.... I smell blood! He walked faster, as the smell was getting stronger.
Approaching the Hot spring, he sniffed again. The smell of blood was stronger. And this time he could tell it was Kagomes blood. He had reached his destination.
He stripped, and got in the water, doggy paddling, like only a doggy can do. After a brief moment of confusion, he was on his feet. It wasn't that deep after all. Just enough to confuse him. He looked to the left, for blood was over there.
It was splashed on a rock. Just a tiny little bit if blood, but enough that it had to be from a deep cut. Kagome could have just gotten a cut. He reasoned with himself.
Oh, whats this?, he thought. A tunnel. He swam through it and arrived in a huge air bubble! It was a cave really. And it was all above water. But what he noticed most was that it smelled of blood. It smell so strongly of Kagomes blood that he was dizzy.
Fighting back nausea, he bent over, and picked up a bloodstained knife. It had Kagomes scent on it. So she had used this knife to..... His eyes widened in shock. "Well see about this."
How dare she cut herself? How dare she hurt herself on purpose? That was disgusting! That was sick! Inuyashas mind was in turmoil. His heart pounded in his head. He put his cloths on, and sprang for Kaedes.