A Dragon From Above (Rewrite)
Chapter 2 : Introducing Conan (Re-Write)
Disclaimer : Do I have to do this? Ok everything I use here in my fic are not mine except myself there satisfied?
:Thoughts
[ ] :Speaking in my own language
{} :Chinese
" ": Japanese (but you should know by now , ne?)
: The Alpha and Omega aka Kami-sama
# #: Panda Signs
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"Man what a day."
Ko Ko is now in a mall not far from Nerima.Since the mall at Nerima was still under construction because of 'someone' trying to kill Ranma again last two days ago.It seems that Kodachi,Kuno, and even Ukyo was there at the same time when Ranma and Akane was there buying some stuff for the up coming school holidays.They started 'claiming' him as some prize again like we ALL know when this kinda thing happens.So Max and Ranma decided to go to another Mall near the Beika district WITHOUT anyone knowing.Well except for the Tendos.This was suppose to be a boy and boy shop so no girls were allowed to go with them.Despite the protests that was given to them at the Tendos,such terms like 'Ranma you must go with my Akane' and stuff like that.
"Teitan High?"
"Yeah that's it Teitan high,so are you gonna enlist yourself there?I know the food at Furinken suck's and the crowd's like well..stupid but I kinda like having some friend around to spar with ya know...uh,Max?"
"Oh...sorry it's just that I saw that wallpaper that says Teitan High School Food Fair.It kinda reminded me of some..uh..Characters in an Anime called..."
"Hey Ran, come on hurry up or we'll miss the bus again."
"Coming Sonoko."
"Aha, I knew it Detective Conan."exclaimed Ko Ko.
"Detective who?"
"Conan Edogawa,I didn't thought of going to his school.Hahahaha."
"Oi,Ko Ko what's with the Detective?"
"Oh,he's just a character from another anime I love.I think I'm going to the Food Fair tommorow.You comin?"
"Sure, anything that's got food with it got my name on it."
"I thought it's Martial Arts or fighting tournament?"
"Yeah those too.Hey are you done yet?Let's go home and spar."
"How about the Neko Hanten for Ramen instead?" said Max.
Nekohanten
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"Hello Ryoga...uh..wait..that look tells me that you're gonna...oh crap."
"Ranma !!! Prepare to DIEEEE" shouted Ryoga as he leaped at the two boys.
"You're gonna regret saying that Ryoga!!" said Ranma as he charged at Ryoga head on.
The two eternal rivals attacked and finally Ranma landed a punch on Ryoga which sent him crashing through a wall.
Huh? How did Ranma get that strong? though Ryoga,he actually felt that punch.
"Heh I did some unespected things while you're away Pig Boy." taunted Ranma.
"Stop calling me Pig Boy !!" and Ryoga prepared for a Shi Shi Hokoudan as he glowed a sickly green.
Ranma saw this and did a horse stance to repay him back.
"Shi Shi HoKouDan !!"
"Mokou Takabisha !!"
Max jumped away because of the onslaugh and the upcoming mini explosion.
#BOOOMM#
The street was completely destroyed by the two Martial Artists.
"Damn You RANMA !!!" screamed Ryoga and charged for a Perfect Shi Shi Hokoudan.
Max saw this and appeared behind Ryoga and gave him a few stabs by his fingers on his pressure points which causes Ryoga to stay still.Then they threw water at him to turn him back into a black little piglet.
Back at the Tendo's
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"Ok Max now I'll show you the Mouko Takabisha now."
"I'll try."
"Here goes,Mokou Takabisha!!"
A blue ball emerged from Ranma's hands and straight toward Ko Ko aka Max.Max crossed his arms and summoned the nine solar stance to absorb the Ki blast.After that Ranma begins to explain the concept of the technique.
"First off, let me explain you more about ki,there are two kinds, ki from within and ki from
without. If you rely on ki from within yourself, that's fine. The problem is that you run out of steam real quickly because it takes a lot longer for your to recover if you uses it in excess,"
"That could explain why I usually get very tired after using so much inner energy,"Max said.
"Exactly," Ranma nodded, "Your body naturally draws in ki from everywhere but at a very slow pace. It draws in this ki and stores it within yourself. This is the ki you seem to access. That's only the first kind of ki. The second kind is all the ki surrounding you,"
"But I have the nine solar stance to back me up when ever I'm tired."
"Yes but the thing is that if there's all this ki surrounding us, it's a damn shame to just let it be wasted," Ranma said, "That's why it's better to draw it in from without, because there's so much that it's basically limitless. That's probably why I never get tired using ki, because I'm always drawing it in from my surroundings rather than drawing it out from within myself."
"Hmm...that makes sense."
"Of course. Now that you understand that, it's clearly better to draw ki in from your surroundings. If you try and use ki from within your body, you'll use it all up real quickly because your body can only hold only so much. And it also doesn't make it any easier when your body naturally assimilates ki from its surroundings at and extremely slow rate,"
"So, if I learn how to breathe correctly, I can draw in all this ki from my surroundings?" Max asked, "That way, I can use Ki without much worry of tiring myself out?"
Ranma nodded, "Yep,"
"Great because all that crap makes me hungry."
"Yes me too."
They started heading out to the dinning room to eat Kasumi's home cooked meal.Max started telling them about transferring to Teitan High and moving out to Beika street.Most of them were shocked to know that,well besides Akane since she hate boys and Max is certainly 100 percent boy.
"When are you leaving?" asked Akane.
"Well I think as soon as possible but don't worry,I'll keep in touch since Ranma and me are teaching each other new techniques."
After dinner...
Ranma and Max is sitting on the roof of the dojo.
"So how come you're so eager to go to Teitan high and meet this Conan guy?"
"Well he's one of my favorite anime character and I think I can help him with his problem being small and all."
"Huh what problem?"
Max started telling Ranma about Shinichi Kudo and how he was turned into a kid and using the name Conan Edogawa for now.He also told him about the gadgets and who knew about his secret identity.
"Well there's the professor,that guy from Osaka,his parents and Ai Haibara."
"Who's Ai?"
"She's the one that created the poison which turned Shinichi into Conan.She betrayed the Black Organization because they killed her sister.Now she's living with the Prof."
"Wow,I don't know who is more unfortunate,me for having this stupid curse and multiple fiancée problems or him for being a little kid?"
"Well believe me you're of better since you know how to defend yourself from harm.Conan on the other hand needs to lookout for trouble and his life."
"At least I know something we have in common."
"What's that?You're all anime characters?" joked max.
"There you go again with that Anime stuff again.No, I mean we both live with other people and are freeloaders hahaha!!"
"Hah,that's where you're wrong Ranma,his mother dropped by one time and gave Ran's dad Ten thousand yen for Conan's fees.Plus,his girl friend Ran Mouri is a kind hearted girl,not to mention beautiful and did I tell she knows Karate and is always top in her team?"
"...Em..you got me there.But I still thinks he got it better.Heck he still won't need to get hit on the head with a mallet by a uncute tomboy like Akane,plus he's rich right?"
"Yeah...and?"
"He ain't got no stupid curse like me."
"But he got a permanent one in a body of a 6 year old."
"At least he's still a boy,people will think I'm a sicko if I'm caught wearing a dress."
"Uh...why would you want to wear a dress in the first place?"
"Well for some reasons you won't understand."
"Oh yeah,I remember now.You tried to breakup Ryoga and Akane once."
"Um...you can say that.."
"Okay man it's getting late,won't want to miss the food fair right?"
"Right,food fair here we come."
Max went to Nabiki's room and asked if he can borrow her computer for some personal usage.
"What for?"Nabiki ask.She don't like anybody to use her stuff.
"Well I really need to check up on some stuff cause I want to know about the requirements on getting enrolled."
"I'll do that for you myself,just give me you biography and I help you out."
"Um..ok."
The next Day......
"Elder Khu Lon may I ask you a favour?" asked Max as he entered The Cat cafe.
"and what may that be?"
"I need some of those mushrooms you gave Ranma to make him younger,I also need them to be fit for a 17 year old and a 18 year old,can you give me some of that?"
"Hmm.....tell me what you want them for,and I'll see if I still have any left in stock."
"It's for a friend of mine and he seems to be in a "small" problem if you know what I mean."
To be continued........
(A/N: I think this is worse than the old version but what the hey? Notice I didn't use my sword while fighting with the B.O. arch because Max kinda forgets about it.Anyway on to the next chap.)
Chapter 2 : Introducing Conan (Re-Write)
Disclaimer : Do I have to do this? Ok everything I use here in my fic are not mine except myself there satisfied?
:Thoughts
[ ] :Speaking in my own language
{} :Chinese
" ": Japanese (but you should know by now , ne?)
: The Alpha and Omega aka Kami-sama
# #: Panda Signs
--------------------
"Man what a day."
Ko Ko is now in a mall not far from Nerima.Since the mall at Nerima was still under construction because of 'someone' trying to kill Ranma again last two days ago.It seems that Kodachi,Kuno, and even Ukyo was there at the same time when Ranma and Akane was there buying some stuff for the up coming school holidays.They started 'claiming' him as some prize again like we ALL know when this kinda thing happens.So Max and Ranma decided to go to another Mall near the Beika district WITHOUT anyone knowing.Well except for the Tendos.This was suppose to be a boy and boy shop so no girls were allowed to go with them.Despite the protests that was given to them at the Tendos,such terms like 'Ranma you must go with my Akane' and stuff like that.
"Teitan High?"
"Yeah that's it Teitan high,so are you gonna enlist yourself there?I know the food at Furinken suck's and the crowd's like well..stupid but I kinda like having some friend around to spar with ya know...uh,Max?"
"Oh...sorry it's just that I saw that wallpaper that says Teitan High School Food Fair.It kinda reminded me of some..uh..Characters in an Anime called..."
"Hey Ran, come on hurry up or we'll miss the bus again."
"Coming Sonoko."
"Aha, I knew it Detective Conan."exclaimed Ko Ko.
"Detective who?"
"Conan Edogawa,I didn't thought of going to his school.Hahahaha."
"Oi,Ko Ko what's with the Detective?"
"Oh,he's just a character from another anime I love.I think I'm going to the Food Fair tommorow.You comin?"
"Sure, anything that's got food with it got my name on it."
"I thought it's Martial Arts or fighting tournament?"
"Yeah those too.Hey are you done yet?Let's go home and spar."
"How about the Neko Hanten for Ramen instead?" said Max.
Nekohanten
-----------
"Hello Ryoga...uh..wait..that look tells me that you're gonna...oh crap."
"Ranma !!! Prepare to DIEEEE" shouted Ryoga as he leaped at the two boys.
"You're gonna regret saying that Ryoga!!" said Ranma as he charged at Ryoga head on.
The two eternal rivals attacked and finally Ranma landed a punch on Ryoga which sent him crashing through a wall.
Huh? How did Ranma get that strong? though Ryoga,he actually felt that punch.
"Heh I did some unespected things while you're away Pig Boy." taunted Ranma.
"Stop calling me Pig Boy !!" and Ryoga prepared for a Shi Shi Hokoudan as he glowed a sickly green.
Ranma saw this and did a horse stance to repay him back.
"Shi Shi HoKouDan !!"
"Mokou Takabisha !!"
Max jumped away because of the onslaugh and the upcoming mini explosion.
#BOOOMM#
The street was completely destroyed by the two Martial Artists.
"Damn You RANMA !!!" screamed Ryoga and charged for a Perfect Shi Shi Hokoudan.
Max saw this and appeared behind Ryoga and gave him a few stabs by his fingers on his pressure points which causes Ryoga to stay still.Then they threw water at him to turn him back into a black little piglet.
Back at the Tendo's
--------------------
"Ok Max now I'll show you the Mouko Takabisha now."
"I'll try."
"Here goes,Mokou Takabisha!!"
A blue ball emerged from Ranma's hands and straight toward Ko Ko aka Max.Max crossed his arms and summoned the nine solar stance to absorb the Ki blast.After that Ranma begins to explain the concept of the technique.
"First off, let me explain you more about ki,there are two kinds, ki from within and ki from
without. If you rely on ki from within yourself, that's fine. The problem is that you run out of steam real quickly because it takes a lot longer for your to recover if you uses it in excess,"
"That could explain why I usually get very tired after using so much inner energy,"Max said.
"Exactly," Ranma nodded, "Your body naturally draws in ki from everywhere but at a very slow pace. It draws in this ki and stores it within yourself. This is the ki you seem to access. That's only the first kind of ki. The second kind is all the ki surrounding you,"
"But I have the nine solar stance to back me up when ever I'm tired."
"Yes but the thing is that if there's all this ki surrounding us, it's a damn shame to just let it be wasted," Ranma said, "That's why it's better to draw it in from without, because there's so much that it's basically limitless. That's probably why I never get tired using ki, because I'm always drawing it in from my surroundings rather than drawing it out from within myself."
"Hmm...that makes sense."
"Of course. Now that you understand that, it's clearly better to draw ki in from your surroundings. If you try and use ki from within your body, you'll use it all up real quickly because your body can only hold only so much. And it also doesn't make it any easier when your body naturally assimilates ki from its surroundings at and extremely slow rate,"
"So, if I learn how to breathe correctly, I can draw in all this ki from my surroundings?" Max asked, "That way, I can use Ki without much worry of tiring myself out?"
Ranma nodded, "Yep,"
"Great because all that crap makes me hungry."
"Yes me too."
They started heading out to the dinning room to eat Kasumi's home cooked meal.Max started telling them about transferring to Teitan High and moving out to Beika street.Most of them were shocked to know that,well besides Akane since she hate boys and Max is certainly 100 percent boy.
"When are you leaving?" asked Akane.
"Well I think as soon as possible but don't worry,I'll keep in touch since Ranma and me are teaching each other new techniques."
After dinner...
Ranma and Max is sitting on the roof of the dojo.
"So how come you're so eager to go to Teitan high and meet this Conan guy?"
"Well he's one of my favorite anime character and I think I can help him with his problem being small and all."
"Huh what problem?"
Max started telling Ranma about Shinichi Kudo and how he was turned into a kid and using the name Conan Edogawa for now.He also told him about the gadgets and who knew about his secret identity.
"Well there's the professor,that guy from Osaka,his parents and Ai Haibara."
"Who's Ai?"
"She's the one that created the poison which turned Shinichi into Conan.She betrayed the Black Organization because they killed her sister.Now she's living with the Prof."
"Wow,I don't know who is more unfortunate,me for having this stupid curse and multiple fiancée problems or him for being a little kid?"
"Well believe me you're of better since you know how to defend yourself from harm.Conan on the other hand needs to lookout for trouble and his life."
"At least I know something we have in common."
"What's that?You're all anime characters?" joked max.
"There you go again with that Anime stuff again.No, I mean we both live with other people and are freeloaders hahaha!!"
"Hah,that's where you're wrong Ranma,his mother dropped by one time and gave Ran's dad Ten thousand yen for Conan's fees.Plus,his girl friend Ran Mouri is a kind hearted girl,not to mention beautiful and did I tell she knows Karate and is always top in her team?"
"...Em..you got me there.But I still thinks he got it better.Heck he still won't need to get hit on the head with a mallet by a uncute tomboy like Akane,plus he's rich right?"
"Yeah...and?"
"He ain't got no stupid curse like me."
"But he got a permanent one in a body of a 6 year old."
"At least he's still a boy,people will think I'm a sicko if I'm caught wearing a dress."
"Uh...why would you want to wear a dress in the first place?"
"Well for some reasons you won't understand."
"Oh yeah,I remember now.You tried to breakup Ryoga and Akane once."
"Um...you can say that.."
"Okay man it's getting late,won't want to miss the food fair right?"
"Right,food fair here we come."
Max went to Nabiki's room and asked if he can borrow her computer for some personal usage.
"What for?"Nabiki ask.She don't like anybody to use her stuff.
"Well I really need to check up on some stuff cause I want to know about the requirements on getting enrolled."
"I'll do that for you myself,just give me you biography and I help you out."
"Um..ok."
The next Day......
"Elder Khu Lon may I ask you a favour?" asked Max as he entered The Cat cafe.
"and what may that be?"
"I need some of those mushrooms you gave Ranma to make him younger,I also need them to be fit for a 17 year old and a 18 year old,can you give me some of that?"
"Hmm.....tell me what you want them for,and I'll see if I still have any left in stock."
"It's for a friend of mine and he seems to be in a "small" problem if you know what I mean."
To be continued........
(A/N: I think this is worse than the old version but what the hey? Notice I didn't use my sword while fighting with the B.O. arch because Max kinda forgets about it.Anyway on to the next chap.)