A Dragon From Above
Chapter 8a : The Fall Of The B.O. part 3
(A/N :Here's another version of chapter 8. I like this one better.)
Disclaimer : I don't know why we need to do this since no one look at
this.....but here goes anyway.All the stuff here belongs to their own creaters
except me....MAX.
" ": Speech.
: Thoughts
-----------------
Max and his friends gave everything they got at the lizard monster but it
shrugged them all of like it was just some minor itch.
"Fuck, fire and lightning doesn't do much damage." said Max while dodging a ball
of accid from Gin.
"The only thing hurting him is our Ki attacks and we're running low on them."
said Ranma then he let loose with a Ki blast which knocked Gin back towards the
wall.The wall cracked from the force behing the blast.
"Haku, use accids instead of water." said Max and he threw a rock at the tubes
filled with strange liquids which Max assume it was accid and not some power
boost for the angry monster.
Haku gave him a nod and begin a series of hand seals.
"Suiton : Water Dragon No Jutsu !!" shouted Haku.The accids gathered up and
formed a gaint dragon that hovers above Haku's head.She made a gesture towards
Gin and the accid dragon charged at Gin who was momentary stunned by Ranma's ki
blast.
A loud blood curling scream filled the hall way as Gin's skin was burned by the
large amount of highly concentraited accid.His skin was starting to melt and the
faul smell of burnt rubber and rotten eggs was all the trio could smell coming
from Gin.
"My poor nose !! " scraemed Ranma because he was the nearest to the melting
monster.
"Hell it's much worse than Akane's cooking." said Max.
Haku just stood there,thanking her lucky stars that her Anbu mask was on her
face and it kinda shielded her from the smell...well...almost.
Ranma couldn't stand it anymore and he used his final attack.
"Chou Mokou Takabisha Beam !!"
The blue coloured Ki beam send Gin out of the building to the steets.
Gin's large body knocked over a water hydrant and the water from it washed away
the accids from his body.The skin on his body syarted to heal albiet slowly.
The trio come out of the lab only to find Gin headed towards the Juuban Shopping
Mall.
"Aww man....this is not what I had in mind." said Max as they chased Gin.
Sally was a good girl....well she have good grades and nice loyal friends at
school.Her parents were proud of her except they didn't know her dark little
secrete.Sally was a mall thief.Yup she tends to steal small items at the mall.At
first she only took hair clips or pens,but today she thought it would be a good
challenge to get her hands on a few blue tank tops.She hid herself at a dressing
closet and hid them inside her clothes.Suddenly there was a knocking sound on
the door.
"Alright I'll be out in just a minute." said Sally as she quickly put on her
stolen items.The banging was louder and faster this times.
"I said I'll be out in just a minute...bitch." said Sally while hurrying up,she
was tensed as the banging kept on coming.Finally she opened her door only to
come face to face before a gaint green scaly lizard monster.She did what normal
teenagers her age would do if they saw a monster that was licking it's tougue
and drooling on the floor...she screamed.
Gin took the frightened girl in his hands and ran.
"Okay,if I were a huge ugly lizard freak in a mall, were would I go?" asked
Max.They took off their disguises and was currently searching for Gin in the
Mall.Everyone was shopping happily and didn't any sign of being terrorised.
"I know, the food stall." said Ranma.
"I said the monster not you Ranma." said Max.
"I know,but I still say the food stall.He must be hungry after all that." said
Ranma.
"How about the women's department?" asked Haku.Her teamates looked at her like
she have grown another head and burst out laughing.She gave them a slight frown
but soon laughed at her own idea,why would a blood thirsty monster be there in
the first place?
Gin was upset,no he was mad.He thought he could eat this girl when he found her
alone but she kept screaming so he left her there,who ever thought that young
girls could slap that hard?
"Okay, let's say that he IS at the food center, what food does lizard freaks
eat?" asked Max.
"I don't know....anything that tasted good?"
Then a scream was heard followed by a bunch of yells coming from the women's
department.Max and Ranma turned to look at Haku."Um...it was a hunch?"
They ran towards the direction but then a shape of Gin was out lined at the
wall.The trio walked through it an found out that it was a large hall way of
small shopping complexes with a stage show.The stage was emtied and the
decorations were destroyed.
"Hmm...looks like lizard man was here alright" said Ranma.
"Well done Sherlock with the obviousness arround us." said Max,RAnma glared at
Max.
"Stop it guys we need to find him before he hurts someone." said Haku.
"Okay...how bout some callings?" said Max.
"Callings?" Ranma asked.
"Here Ginnie Ginnie Ginnie !! Over Here Boy !! Come Get Your Supper !!" shouted
Max.
Ranma and Haku knocked Max over the head."Looks like your 'calling didn't work."
said Ranma.
"Don't EVER DO THAT AGAIN !! " shouted Haku.
"Sorry Haku,couldn't stand it.We need to lure him out here somehow."said Max,
then he saw the microphone at the stage and he went and held it in his hands.
"Yo what are you doing?" asked Ranma.
"I know what I'm doing,besides I saw it on TV once.Check the cables." said Max
as he tested the mics."Testing 1,2,3...okay hit it."
Loud rock music filled the hall way as Max sang his song.
"This ain't a song for the broken-hearted"
"What the fuck?" shouted Ranma above the loud music.Haku covered her ears and
jumped up the balcony,Ranma followed her.
"No silent prayer for the faith-departed" continued Max.
"Stand back Haku, I'm gonna kill him." said Ranma as he powered up his remaining
Ki intent to send Max flying via Ki blast Express.
"I ain't gonna be just a face in the crowd"
Haku hold up her hand at Ranma's face.
"You're gonna hear my voice,"
"No Ranma,I'll kill him myself." said Haku in a cold and scary voice.Ranma noded
and backed down.
"When I shout it out loud."
Then a loud screech was heard through the hall way before Max could finish his
chorus.They turned towards the voice and sweat dropped.Max grinned and
continued.
" It's my life
It's now or never"
"Oh great,he's still singing and lizard freak is coming...wait,he's coming? "
said Ranma.
"I ain't gonna live forever"
"Yup,keep singing Max,we'll hold him off." cried Haku.
Max gave them a nod and continued
"I just want to live while I'm alive (It's my life)"
The roar was getting louder by the minute as Max sang his song.Ranma was trying
his best not to kill Max with his ki blast while Haku kept a firm lookout for
any sign of Gin.
" My heart is like an open highway, Like Frankie said I did it my way"
Gin appeared and he headed towards Max on stage. "STOP THAT NOISE !! "
Max ignored him and keep on singing "I just wanna live while I'm alive"
"CHOU MOKOU TAKABISHA BEAM !!"
"Secrete Jutsu :GAINT WATERFALL EXPLOSION !!"
"IT'S .MY. LIFE !!"
The Ki blast caught Gin off guard as the water cyclone hit him from behind
knocking Gin uncouncious.Max took this opportunaty to finish his verse and make
his attack.
"CHOU HODOUKEN : SHIN RYU HOKOUDAN !!" the finall attack that sends Gin to his
grave.
After that , Max went up the stage and continued the song but he was tackled
down by Ranma and Haku from both sides.
"NO MORE !!! " screamed his two friends.
After that they went back towards the Beika District.
"Hey I just noticed something." said Ranma on the way.
"What? You mean the fact that I knew what will happen before it ever happened ?"
asked Max.
"No,but it is strange."
"Well is it the fact that we always use the same attack every time we kill a
monster?" asked Max again.
"No.But we do need to come up with something different though."
"Or is it the fact that Haku could do some of her attacks without doing
handseals but do them anyway?" said Max, Haku was thinking baout that comment.
"No.But he's right ya' know,so Haku why do you do that anyway?"
Haku shrugged " Reflex?"
"So what did you noticed? " Max finally gave up.
"I notice that we were wearing our weights when we were fighting that lizard guy
and I didn't notice it until recently. Wouldn't it be cool if we took off our
weights and found out how powerful we are? "
Sillence was all he got for the rest of the journey back.
"Conan,take these two mushroom as a go away gift." said Max while he handed the
now 16 centremeters long mushroom he got from Cologne.
"Huh? What for?"
"It's a.......secrete plus you better take it in your room." said Max as he
,Ranma and Haku left for the Hidden Villages.
"I hate it when he do that."
Later that day,news of the return teen detective filled the whole Tokyo.
Max and his gang was walking through the trees,they were only a few weeks before
they reached the entrence of the Hidden Villages.
"Max-san , Ranma-san, can I ask you two a question? " asked Haku.
"You already have." replied Max, while Ranma grinned.
"That's not what I mean!!" shouted Haku which is rare so the two snapped and
took full attention on her.The two boys knew not to piss off a member of the
female species,especially since the current one have the strengh to kill ten men
without breaking a sweat.Not that they weren't cappable of doing that,nope,they
were scared because they would rather fight Ten Gins than feel the wrath of an
angered Haku.
"Just Joking !! SORRY !!" cried the two.
Haku gigled at their reactions and continued.
"I know,it's just fun doing that to you two." Max and Ranma facefaulted but
listened to her anyway.
"What do you two think about...me?" asked Haku in a serious tone.
"What do you mean?" asked Ranma.
"I'm a c..clone."
"It doesn't matter who you are or what yuo are.All it matters is that we are
best friends and we are together." said Max.His clear and fast reply brought a
smile to Haku's worried face.
"Yeah,everyone is different in a way.Even if you're a clone.Heck,the Haku before
was a GUY for all Max told me and you're a girl.That makes you different.Not
that you're weak or something." that last statement from Ranma earned him a
punch to the gut by Max and Haku.
"Anyway, what Ranma means is that don't worry about being a clone because you
are special to us." said Max.
"Yeah,we will do anything to help and protect you." Ranma replied after the
combined punch.
"Thank you both.That helped me alot.You two are also my precious person and I
will do my best to help and protect you two." said Haku.
A week passed and the arrived at the Village of the Mist first.Max sold his
multi purpose whatch for a change of currency.Haku introduced them to a friend
of Zabusa who was a black market ID maker.He told them that since they came from
the 'outside' they need an ID to access into other Villages.They told him that
they wanted to enter the Chuunin exams that was held in the Hidden Leaf.The guy
noded and asked them for a name of a Village they want to be originated
from.They gave him a name and he made three head protectors for them with their
symbols carved on them.
They thanked the guy and set of towards to Hidden Village of The Leaf.
TBC.
Sorry for the short fic.I need to take off some stuff for this chap.But I
prommise next Chap that Naruto will finally appear.
NEXT COMING UP : THE CHUUNIN EXAMS !!!!
Give your review pls.
Pairings for Ranma:
Temari 0
TenTen 0
Shizune 0
Haku 0
Pairings For Max
Temari 0
TenTen 0
Shizune 0
Haku 0
others
pls give your reviews
Chapter 8a : The Fall Of The B.O. part 3
(A/N :Here's another version of chapter 8. I like this one better.)
Disclaimer : I don't know why we need to do this since no one look at
this.....but here goes anyway.All the stuff here belongs to their own creaters
except me....MAX.
" ": Speech.
: Thoughts
-----------------
Max and his friends gave everything they got at the lizard monster but it
shrugged them all of like it was just some minor itch.
"Fuck, fire and lightning doesn't do much damage." said Max while dodging a ball
of accid from Gin.
"The only thing hurting him is our Ki attacks and we're running low on them."
said Ranma then he let loose with a Ki blast which knocked Gin back towards the
wall.The wall cracked from the force behing the blast.
"Haku, use accids instead of water." said Max and he threw a rock at the tubes
filled with strange liquids which Max assume it was accid and not some power
boost for the angry monster.
Haku gave him a nod and begin a series of hand seals.
"Suiton : Water Dragon No Jutsu !!" shouted Haku.The accids gathered up and
formed a gaint dragon that hovers above Haku's head.She made a gesture towards
Gin and the accid dragon charged at Gin who was momentary stunned by Ranma's ki
blast.
A loud blood curling scream filled the hall way as Gin's skin was burned by the
large amount of highly concentraited accid.His skin was starting to melt and the
faul smell of burnt rubber and rotten eggs was all the trio could smell coming
from Gin.
"My poor nose !! " scraemed Ranma because he was the nearest to the melting
monster.
"Hell it's much worse than Akane's cooking." said Max.
Haku just stood there,thanking her lucky stars that her Anbu mask was on her
face and it kinda shielded her from the smell...well...almost.
Ranma couldn't stand it anymore and he used his final attack.
"Chou Mokou Takabisha Beam !!"
The blue coloured Ki beam send Gin out of the building to the steets.
Gin's large body knocked over a water hydrant and the water from it washed away
the accids from his body.The skin on his body syarted to heal albiet slowly.
The trio come out of the lab only to find Gin headed towards the Juuban Shopping
Mall.
"Aww man....this is not what I had in mind." said Max as they chased Gin.
Sally was a good girl....well she have good grades and nice loyal friends at
school.Her parents were proud of her except they didn't know her dark little
secrete.Sally was a mall thief.Yup she tends to steal small items at the mall.At
first she only took hair clips or pens,but today she thought it would be a good
challenge to get her hands on a few blue tank tops.She hid herself at a dressing
closet and hid them inside her clothes.Suddenly there was a knocking sound on
the door.
"Alright I'll be out in just a minute." said Sally as she quickly put on her
stolen items.The banging was louder and faster this times.
"I said I'll be out in just a minute...bitch." said Sally while hurrying up,she
was tensed as the banging kept on coming.Finally she opened her door only to
come face to face before a gaint green scaly lizard monster.She did what normal
teenagers her age would do if they saw a monster that was licking it's tougue
and drooling on the floor...she screamed.
Gin took the frightened girl in his hands and ran.
"Okay,if I were a huge ugly lizard freak in a mall, were would I go?" asked
Max.They took off their disguises and was currently searching for Gin in the
Mall.Everyone was shopping happily and didn't any sign of being terrorised.
"I know, the food stall." said Ranma.
"I said the monster not you Ranma." said Max.
"I know,but I still say the food stall.He must be hungry after all that." said
Ranma.
"How about the women's department?" asked Haku.Her teamates looked at her like
she have grown another head and burst out laughing.She gave them a slight frown
but soon laughed at her own idea,why would a blood thirsty monster be there in
the first place?
Gin was upset,no he was mad.He thought he could eat this girl when he found her
alone but she kept screaming so he left her there,who ever thought that young
girls could slap that hard?
"Okay, let's say that he IS at the food center, what food does lizard freaks
eat?" asked Max.
"I don't know....anything that tasted good?"
Then a scream was heard followed by a bunch of yells coming from the women's
department.Max and Ranma turned to look at Haku."Um...it was a hunch?"
They ran towards the direction but then a shape of Gin was out lined at the
wall.The trio walked through it an found out that it was a large hall way of
small shopping complexes with a stage show.The stage was emtied and the
decorations were destroyed.
"Hmm...looks like lizard man was here alright" said Ranma.
"Well done Sherlock with the obviousness arround us." said Max,RAnma glared at
Max.
"Stop it guys we need to find him before he hurts someone." said Haku.
"Okay...how bout some callings?" said Max.
"Callings?" Ranma asked.
"Here Ginnie Ginnie Ginnie !! Over Here Boy !! Come Get Your Supper !!" shouted
Max.
Ranma and Haku knocked Max over the head."Looks like your 'calling didn't work."
said Ranma.
"Don't EVER DO THAT AGAIN !! " shouted Haku.
"Sorry Haku,couldn't stand it.We need to lure him out here somehow."said Max,
then he saw the microphone at the stage and he went and held it in his hands.
"Yo what are you doing?" asked Ranma.
"I know what I'm doing,besides I saw it on TV once.Check the cables." said Max
as he tested the mics."Testing 1,2,3...okay hit it."
Loud rock music filled the hall way as Max sang his song.
"This ain't a song for the broken-hearted"
"What the fuck?" shouted Ranma above the loud music.Haku covered her ears and
jumped up the balcony,Ranma followed her.
"No silent prayer for the faith-departed" continued Max.
"Stand back Haku, I'm gonna kill him." said Ranma as he powered up his remaining
Ki intent to send Max flying via Ki blast Express.
"I ain't gonna be just a face in the crowd"
Haku hold up her hand at Ranma's face.
"You're gonna hear my voice,"
"No Ranma,I'll kill him myself." said Haku in a cold and scary voice.Ranma noded
and backed down.
"When I shout it out loud."
Then a loud screech was heard through the hall way before Max could finish his
chorus.They turned towards the voice and sweat dropped.Max grinned and
continued.
" It's my life
It's now or never"
"Oh great,he's still singing and lizard freak is coming...wait,he's coming? "
said Ranma.
"I ain't gonna live forever"
"Yup,keep singing Max,we'll hold him off." cried Haku.
Max gave them a nod and continued
"I just want to live while I'm alive (It's my life)"
The roar was getting louder by the minute as Max sang his song.Ranma was trying
his best not to kill Max with his ki blast while Haku kept a firm lookout for
any sign of Gin.
" My heart is like an open highway, Like Frankie said I did it my way"
Gin appeared and he headed towards Max on stage. "STOP THAT NOISE !! "
Max ignored him and keep on singing "I just wanna live while I'm alive"
"CHOU MOKOU TAKABISHA BEAM !!"
"Secrete Jutsu :GAINT WATERFALL EXPLOSION !!"
"IT'S .MY. LIFE !!"
The Ki blast caught Gin off guard as the water cyclone hit him from behind
knocking Gin uncouncious.Max took this opportunaty to finish his verse and make
his attack.
"CHOU HODOUKEN : SHIN RYU HOKOUDAN !!" the finall attack that sends Gin to his
grave.
After that , Max went up the stage and continued the song but he was tackled
down by Ranma and Haku from both sides.
"NO MORE !!! " screamed his two friends.
After that they went back towards the Beika District.
"Hey I just noticed something." said Ranma on the way.
"What? You mean the fact that I knew what will happen before it ever happened ?"
asked Max.
"No,but it is strange."
"Well is it the fact that we always use the same attack every time we kill a
monster?" asked Max again.
"No.But we do need to come up with something different though."
"Or is it the fact that Haku could do some of her attacks without doing
handseals but do them anyway?" said Max, Haku was thinking baout that comment.
"No.But he's right ya' know,so Haku why do you do that anyway?"
Haku shrugged " Reflex?"
"So what did you noticed? " Max finally gave up.
"I notice that we were wearing our weights when we were fighting that lizard guy
and I didn't notice it until recently. Wouldn't it be cool if we took off our
weights and found out how powerful we are? "
Sillence was all he got for the rest of the journey back.
"Conan,take these two mushroom as a go away gift." said Max while he handed the
now 16 centremeters long mushroom he got from Cologne.
"Huh? What for?"
"It's a.......secrete plus you better take it in your room." said Max as he
,Ranma and Haku left for the Hidden Villages.
"I hate it when he do that."
Later that day,news of the return teen detective filled the whole Tokyo.
Max and his gang was walking through the trees,they were only a few weeks before
they reached the entrence of the Hidden Villages.
"Max-san , Ranma-san, can I ask you two a question? " asked Haku.
"You already have." replied Max, while Ranma grinned.
"That's not what I mean!!" shouted Haku which is rare so the two snapped and
took full attention on her.The two boys knew not to piss off a member of the
female species,especially since the current one have the strengh to kill ten men
without breaking a sweat.Not that they weren't cappable of doing that,nope,they
were scared because they would rather fight Ten Gins than feel the wrath of an
angered Haku.
"Just Joking !! SORRY !!" cried the two.
Haku gigled at their reactions and continued.
"I know,it's just fun doing that to you two." Max and Ranma facefaulted but
listened to her anyway.
"What do you two think about...me?" asked Haku in a serious tone.
"What do you mean?" asked Ranma.
"I'm a c..clone."
"It doesn't matter who you are or what yuo are.All it matters is that we are
best friends and we are together." said Max.His clear and fast reply brought a
smile to Haku's worried face.
"Yeah,everyone is different in a way.Even if you're a clone.Heck,the Haku before
was a GUY for all Max told me and you're a girl.That makes you different.Not
that you're weak or something." that last statement from Ranma earned him a
punch to the gut by Max and Haku.
"Anyway, what Ranma means is that don't worry about being a clone because you
are special to us." said Max.
"Yeah,we will do anything to help and protect you." Ranma replied after the
combined punch.
"Thank you both.That helped me alot.You two are also my precious person and I
will do my best to help and protect you two." said Haku.
A week passed and the arrived at the Village of the Mist first.Max sold his
multi purpose whatch for a change of currency.Haku introduced them to a friend
of Zabusa who was a black market ID maker.He told them that since they came from
the 'outside' they need an ID to access into other Villages.They told him that
they wanted to enter the Chuunin exams that was held in the Hidden Leaf.The guy
noded and asked them for a name of a Village they want to be originated
from.They gave him a name and he made three head protectors for them with their
symbols carved on them.
They thanked the guy and set of towards to Hidden Village of The Leaf.
TBC.
Sorry for the short fic.I need to take off some stuff for this chap.But I
prommise next Chap that Naruto will finally appear.
NEXT COMING UP : THE CHUUNIN EXAMS !!!!
Give your review pls.
Pairings for Ranma:
Temari 0
TenTen 0
Shizune 0
Haku 0
Pairings For Max
Temari 0
TenTen 0
Shizune 0
Haku 0
others
pls give your reviews