This is my first ever fanfic. Im sorry if you don't like it but then I guess im making it for you all to read. So please R&R.
"Kagome!"
"I'll be down in a minute, mom!" Shouted a girl of about sixteen years of age. "Just need to finish packing!"
When she was done packing her very large back pack full of clothes and packaged foods, she picked it up and slipped it easily over her shoulders and started plodding down the stairs to the kitchen.
"Kagome there are some people here that I want you to meet." Said her mother. "This is Ranma Saotome, he is the son of one of my good friends Genma. And then this is Akane and her mother was a friend of my until she passed away a few years back."
"Hey, Kagome. Nice to meet you." the boy called Ranma was tall and very hansome and Kagome couldn't help but blush as he walked graceful as he walked over to shake Kagomes hand politely.
"Well, Ranma, can you tell me who these young ladies are that are behind you?" Kagomes mother asked.
"Oh this is Shampoo." he said pointing behind him to a long haired girl, "And this is Ukyo," pointing to the woman next to Shampoo.
"Your father said that they are all your fiances." said kagome's mother. "Are you going to marry all of them? I guess if I was in your position I wouldn't be able to choose-"
"Well I guess..."
"Ranma was destined to be Shampoo groom!" Shampoo, smashing Ranma into the ground, exclaimed.
"How dare you hit Ranchan like that!" Shouted Ukyo pulling a huge spatula out from behind her.
A hammer came in out of nowhere to hit poor Ranma in the head as Akane yelled at him "See what you have done?"
"What did I do?" Ranma yelled back at her.
"Your father also said that you are under a curse of some sort?" Kagome's mother said trying to change the subject.
"Huh? Oh yeah, he wanted me to tell you about that." Ranma started to tell Kagome and her mother about the curse that changed him into a girl when splashed with cold water and then reversed the efect when splashed with warm water.
"Um... I'm sorry mom, but I need to get going..." Kagome said to her mom.
"Your leaving? Then can I carry your bag for you?" Ranma asked.
"well it really isnt far just to that shrine over there, so yeah, I guess." Kagome took the pack off her shoulders and gave it to Ranma who hefted it over his back like it was nothing.
I'm sorry this story is really slow getting started but please don't don't stop now! I beg of you
Wh stopped at the shrine he handed it back to Kagome and said "That's pretty heavy are you sure I can't take it the rest of the way for you?"
"Thanx for carrying it I'm sorry I couldn't stay and I'm afraid that's as far as you can take it." Kagome Walked into the shrine, "Bye!" she said and walked into the darkness.
Ranma looked in the shrine and wondered what she could be doing and saw her jump into the well. He ran into the shrine and shouted, "Kagome? Are you ok? I... I'm coming!" He also jumped into the well and was soon followed by three angry women.
I'm not so sure I should continue this fic, it seems kinda boring... But like I said R&R.
"Kagome!"
"I'll be down in a minute, mom!" Shouted a girl of about sixteen years of age. "Just need to finish packing!"
When she was done packing her very large back pack full of clothes and packaged foods, she picked it up and slipped it easily over her shoulders and started plodding down the stairs to the kitchen.
"Kagome there are some people here that I want you to meet." Said her mother. "This is Ranma Saotome, he is the son of one of my good friends Genma. And then this is Akane and her mother was a friend of my until she passed away a few years back."
"Hey, Kagome. Nice to meet you." the boy called Ranma was tall and very hansome and Kagome couldn't help but blush as he walked graceful as he walked over to shake Kagomes hand politely.
"Well, Ranma, can you tell me who these young ladies are that are behind you?" Kagomes mother asked.
"Oh this is Shampoo." he said pointing behind him to a long haired girl, "And this is Ukyo," pointing to the woman next to Shampoo.
"Your father said that they are all your fiances." said kagome's mother. "Are you going to marry all of them? I guess if I was in your position I wouldn't be able to choose-"
"Well I guess..."
"Ranma was destined to be Shampoo groom!" Shampoo, smashing Ranma into the ground, exclaimed.
"How dare you hit Ranchan like that!" Shouted Ukyo pulling a huge spatula out from behind her.
A hammer came in out of nowhere to hit poor Ranma in the head as Akane yelled at him "See what you have done?"
"What did I do?" Ranma yelled back at her.
"Your father also said that you are under a curse of some sort?" Kagome's mother said trying to change the subject.
"Huh? Oh yeah, he wanted me to tell you about that." Ranma started to tell Kagome and her mother about the curse that changed him into a girl when splashed with cold water and then reversed the efect when splashed with warm water.
"Um... I'm sorry mom, but I need to get going..." Kagome said to her mom.
"Your leaving? Then can I carry your bag for you?" Ranma asked.
"well it really isnt far just to that shrine over there, so yeah, I guess." Kagome took the pack off her shoulders and gave it to Ranma who hefted it over his back like it was nothing.
I'm sorry this story is really slow getting started but please don't don't stop now! I beg of you
Wh stopped at the shrine he handed it back to Kagome and said "That's pretty heavy are you sure I can't take it the rest of the way for you?"
"Thanx for carrying it I'm sorry I couldn't stay and I'm afraid that's as far as you can take it." Kagome Walked into the shrine, "Bye!" she said and walked into the darkness.
Ranma looked in the shrine and wondered what she could be doing and saw her jump into the well. He ran into the shrine and shouted, "Kagome? Are you ok? I... I'm coming!" He also jumped into the well and was soon followed by three angry women.
I'm not so sure I should continue this fic, it seems kinda boring... But like I said R&R.